END OF HER SUFFERING...MG SS Pt 12 pg 124//aug 18

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DOCTOR!!!!...he shouted as he carried her lifeless and conscious form in his arms''

She was covered with blood'..there was a deep  cut on her forhead'..

She was bleeding very badly and his own hands and clothes  were smudged with her blood'..

 

DOCTOR !!!!! '''''.he shouted again on the top of his lungs''.he can't see her loosing her life because of him''.

 

Yes it was true she was injured this much , was in this condition because of him''but it was completely not his fault''..she had came infront of his car''.

 

Suddenly due his loud screaming in the hospital the doctors came rushing to them'.

Seeing the most affluent business magnate in front of him carrying an almost dull soul the doctor came to him''.

 

Doctor: ohh'.my god maan who is she and how did this happened????

Maan: doctor armaan you can't see her state ''she first needed an immediate attention '..maan shouted on doctor????

Doc armaan: yes'.please nurse take her to the operation theatre immediately'.and get all the things ready for her operation''..

 

While the nurse took an unconscious geet from maan's hands to the operation theatre'..

Doctor armaan left from there to inform his team and to diagnose the unconscious girl'..

 

Maan: silently sat outside the operation theatre''as he remembered the horrible accident that took place nearly an hour ago''

 

AN HOUR BEFORE:

 

Maan was in the office finalizing the blue prints for the tomorrow's meeting as the clients had suddenly prepone the meeting due to their personal reasons'..

 

He was giving the last glance to the blueprints'..suddenly his phone rang and the moment he saw the name flashing he knew he was so dead today''.

 

Although he was the most youngest and successful business man'..and had been recently made the world's third most successful business man '..although he is the second name of terror in his office for his employees'..but when it came to home he is simply maan'..

 

Maan came out of his reverie as he picked up the phone to be greeted by his angry daadimaa and mom''.the two most important women in his life'..

 

Maan picking up the call'..

 

Maan: hello'..

 

Mom: maan where are you ???? have you seen the time its already 11 son and you are still in office ''..and I know you didn't even have your dinner yet'..

 

Maan: mom take a breath'.i m just coming we'll be there in half an hour'.you don't worry please '.and please tell this to daadima also I know she is beside you '..

 

Mom: maan this time I will not save you'..you are becoming like a robot itself  at this young age'.

 

Maan: ok mom I'll see to it '..and I know daadima cannot remain angry with me for a long time'.

 

With that he cut the call packed up his things and made his way to the parking lot''while he was on his way suddenly a girl came in front  he tried to stop the car but all went in vain , it hit the girl and she was the minute on the ground in the pool of blood''

 

Maan immediately rushed to her and took her to the hospital''

 

BACK IN THE HOSPITAL

 

Maan came back to senses when doctor armaan came to maan'..

 

Maan: armaan how is she????...

 

Doctor armaan:  maan she is in a very condition she has lost too much of blood and there is also an internal bleeding'.

 

Maan: internal bleeding'''

 

Armaan: yes maan internal bleeding'.she is three months pregnant''and maybe I think she doesn't know about it'..she seems too be too weak for this pregnancy'..

And it will be better if you inform her family''..

 

Maan: (closed his eyes in regret as he is deeply within a remorse as he had killed a child , even before it was born)''asking with little hope'..is the baby fine armaan????

 

Armaan: maan she had a miscarriage'.it'll be better if you inform her family'.

 

Maan: I don't know about her''she came infront of my car'.

 

Then maan narrated the whole incident to armaan'..

 

Maan: please armaan give her the best treatment'..and don't worry for anything'.

Armaan: maan we have to operate her at the earliest since there is no one from her family you will have to sign the papers on her behalf'as per hospital rules we can't operate till then'..

 

Maan: give me the papers I'll sign them''and operate her at the earliest''.

 

With that maan signed the hospital papers and waited till the operation was going'..

 

It was early morning when the doctors came''.

 

Maan: doctor how is she????????

 

Doctor sapna: we can't say anything Mr. Khurana till she gains her conciousness''

With that doctor sapna left from there '''

 

After some time armaan came to maan and took him to the canteen for some coffee'as he know how was his friend since last night'

 

Maan: armaan '.i think I should inform the police''

 

Armaan: maan you are right this is a police case'..but the police also needed to record her statement''and if she blamed you then what will happen'.and media'..

 

Maan: armaan'..you know she has lost her child and it was completely my fault''.

And she is in this condition because of me'..

 

Armaan: first you will go to KM and take some rest for sometime I will inform you when she will gain her conciousness''

 

Maan reluctantly went to mansion'..when he entered the mansion''

 

His parents and daadima were in the hall and as soon as they saw maan with blood stains on his clothes they became conscious and asked him  about his wherabouts whole night and the blood and maan told them everything not even skipiing a single piece of detail''

 

While maan went to his room to freshen up but his thoughts were filled with that innocent angel who was in his arms'she was seeming so calm but distured like she is escaping from something.''

 

Meanwhile his mother brought his breakfast in his room and advised to take some rest '..

Later in the evening geet gained conscious and maan was informed  and as soon as he get the information he rushed to hospital and his parents accomnied him he barred daadima from coming seeing her heart problem'..



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