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arhi ss (d haunted villa)last part (part 6) pg 16

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 6:58am | IP Logged
heyy i decided to write a horror and suspense ss soo here it goesss

part 1
arnav sleeping in his room...

suddenly his phone rang...

it said aaliya calling...

arnav:hey sis wht happened how u remembered me????

aaaliya:bhai help me bhai...he will kill me nhai it will kill meee.


arnav:wht happend aaliya wht happened...

aaliya: bhai everyone is dead...

arnav:where are u i am comming to pick u up...

aaliya:the royal villa near the forest dehradhun...

arnav:i amcomming aaliya...

aaliya:everyone is dead bhai evryone...

arnav:aaliya

aaliya: bhai...hello???????????/

aaliya s ph battery dead...

aaliya turns around...

aaliya:aaa


arnav: dont worry aaliya..i will get u ...dont worry...

anji: bhai wht happened???

arnav:aaliya is in troble.

anji:aaliya??? wht happened bhai?????

arnav:dont worry i will bring her back...

anji:where are u going.?????

arnav:dehadhun...

anji:i am comming with u...

arnav:noo u are not...

anji:u cant stop me...

arnav:anji nooo...

...
okok u can come...

and they pack their bags and head towards the dehradhun./...

in car...

arnav:anji dont worry aaliya wud be f9

anji:i know she alright i can feel she alright...

arnav:how???

anji:i am her sis that too twin...

arnav:dont worry i dont let my lil sisters to happen anything...

and then they enterd dehradhun...

it was 5 pm and it stated to darken

it was chilling winter...

and arnav saw a girl asking for lift...

arnav:stopped..

la:can u give us lift till the near by hotel plzzz.

anji:yaa sure sit...

la:i have frnd...

arnav:no prob...

la :come on guysss  nk ,khushi , payal,aakash.,aman ..comeee

nk:thank u dude u were of real help...

la:come on khushi this trip is for u to cheer up...

arnav saw a beautifull girl in a pink suit...she was like an anjel...

khushi:i am fine la...

shyam:on lets go its getting dark...

evryone were sitting in the jeep...

anji felt sleeping...

in her dreams she was in a palace...
anji:aaliya aaliya...

aaliya:di help me di...

anji:aaliya:
aaliya dii help he will kill me di he will kill me dii...

anji:aaliyaaa
and suddenly she shouts and arnav looses the car balance and the car stops with a jerk...

arnav:anji are u f9

anji:bad dream..
khushi:have water...
 

anji:thnxxx


arnav:oohh shittt..


aaksh :wht happened :the car it has broken down...

payal:oooh shit we wont reach theri in time its now 9 opm and soo dark...

shyam:i think we shud stay here for night...see their is a hotel their...

la:yaa u are right...

anji:rembers she saw something like this only in her dream...

anji cud hear a low boice:dont go inside...

arnav:come anji lets walk...

anji:yaa bhai...
and evryone stars taking out hteir bags khushi was having a prob...

arnav:let me help...

khushi:thnxxx



all stats going toward the hotel...






hope you all like it...
for part 2 pm wud be given to those who like this post...

part 2 pg 4

part 3 

part 4

part 5


last part (part 6)



Edited by ambishika - 25 April 2012 at 5:26am

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 7:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dazzling_arhi

wow! awesome!

thnxx for the like
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 7:41am | IP Logged
ABSOLUTELY WONDERFULL SS
DO CONTINUE
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 7:45am | IP Logged
WONDERFUL...UPDATE SOON
THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 8:38am | IP Logged
thxx fr ur pm...opening is really nyc...keep continue...
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 8:41am | IP Logged
beautiful update continue soon.
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 9:04am | IP Logged
it's interesting,
thanks for pm.
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 10:20am | IP Logged
hey its good...entirely new..loved it

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