Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

Love at First Sight #4 Epilogue pg49

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Posted: 12 years ago



 

i met u two years back...
Didn't knw lyf wl change track!
Was so unsure,bt u steadied me,
was at a loss for faith,bt u taught me...
I fell for u,evn b4 i knew...
Weaving dreams of a life anew...
But,the demons of my past raised their head,
i bared my heart to u instead!
Aftr initial flutter,u were there...
The demons of my past,u fought with flair.
Life with u was a bful dream,
in happiness n joy i wantd to scream...
When i was alone,u stood by,
against ur luvd ones,u were by my side!
Life was bliss bt lonliness was near,
you lft me stranded n in tears...
I knw it was hard fr u,as it was fr me,
for my own gud,here u left me!
Two yrs of separatn,2 yrs of pain
bt i knew u luv me,so they weren't in vain!
U had seen dreams fr me,askd me to make them true...
For u my luv,all that i went thru...
Now u r here,there is no fear,
free of pain,full of love,our life is clear!
Was unsure in the beginning,bt nw i cn say with pride...
YES,IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!

Poem by Swati( princess163 )

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QbglM_cvqj4[/YOUTUBE]

Vm credit goes to roopali(
rsroopali)
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Posted: 12 years ago


Summary of the story till now

 

i met u two years back...
Didn't knw lyf wl change track!
Was so unsure,bt u steadied me,
was at a loss for faith,bt u taught me...
I fell for u,evn b4 i knew...
Weaving dreams of a life anew...
But,the demons of my past raised their head,
i bared my heart to u instead!
Aftr initial flutter,u were there...
The demons of my past,u fought with flair.
Life with u was a bful dream,
in happiness n joy i wantd to scream...
When i was alone,u stood by,
against ur luvd ones,u were by my side!
Life was bliss bt lonliness was near,
you lft me stranded n in tears...
I knw it was hard fr u,as it was fr me,
for my own gud,here u left me!
Two yrs of separatn,2 yrs of pain
bt i knew u luv me,so they weren't in vain!
U had seen dreams fr me,askd me to make them true...
For u my luv,all that i went thru...
Now u r here,there is no fear,
free of pain,full of love,our life is clear!
Was unsure in the beginning,bt nw i cn say with pride...
YES,IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!

Poem by Swati( princess163 )
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QbglM_cvqj4[/YOUTUBE]

Vm credit goes to roopali(
rsroopali)

 

Maan Singh Khurana most bachelor man in delhi, but didn't want to marry but his family want to see him settle.

Geet Handa most beautiful woman, but ambitious yes so innocent her family want to see her marry with a good, decent guy but she wants to makes her career .

But destiny thinks differently for them and then they met'..

 

 

This is a story of  love, trust, care, respect, understanding, friendship.

it's a story  about maan and geet who met due to their parents and have to marry each other but don't want to marry. Both are very strong headed but nice person.

Both meet with each other first time, both feels some thing for  each other.

 Geet told maan about her career and ambitions and her wish for higher study.Maan agree with that.

But suddnely some one came and some misunderstanding happen between maaneet.this some one is none other than maan's cousin bro, rahul.Geet sad and hurt .But , maan's cousin brothers , dev, vicky, yash cleared it and maan told sorry to geet.

Maan tried his best to regain her trust again.Slowly slowly maan gain it and both share many things to each other .Maaneet engagement then sagai,mehendi ,haldi, then finally marriage.

Both leave hp and stay in the hotel for and then next day they shared some moments with each other and explore the market, side scene.

They accompanied by yash, meera and dev.

But after their return rahul and her wife sameera create mis understanding between geet and whole khurana family.

due to this maan argue with his dad and dadi.

But maan's cousin sisters and brothers r take side of maaneet.

Sameera try to create more mis understanding.

Soon maaneet cleared everything and dadi and dad say sorry to maaneet.

Maaneer reception happen and geet know  sameera is behind maan and his money.

Later they went for their mini honeymoon and they want to know each other more, they become friends of each other, want to understand each other, their love blossoming and finally they become one in every sense.

Later for some business reason , family reason and sameera , rahul, maaneet have to go away from Delhi. Though maan's family always with maaneet.

But maan's father and maan have some misunderstanding.

Later geet continue her study in Pune where maan help her to complete the study.

Both r living there happily some time, their life is full of love, care.

 

But some how geet's mind is not in study, her mind is full on maan and she loosing her concentration and her dream to become successful,her dream about brilliant career'

Maan feel guilty but he try to make her understand and give her time but  still same thing when he took tough and strong decision and for geet's dream, her career, he left from there, he separated himself from his geet. He went from there for two yrs.

Geet shattered, feel sad, lonely,  hurt, she feel all finish but after some time for her maan she continue her study, finish her master ,and make her maan proud, complete his dream to see her successful, complete her dream of study more.

But this time, geet changed lots, some how the bubbly geet lost some where, she forget to smiles, she want to be with her maan but.

She was missing her maan.

Here in abroad maan also missing her, want to go there and with her but he make him self strong for his jaan, his geet. He stay there bear the separation for his jaan.

After two years of long separation, maan come back and shocked to see his geet . she is completely changed now , more matured, independent but forget to smile,

Maan feel sad and hurt, feel guilty and want to undo his deed. He did all cause of her dream but his process went wrong , he make her sad,

He want to bring back his old, bubbly  geet, her smiles  on her face, her musical laughter .

Geet  feel the love again in her life, maan give her full, love, care, respect, warmth,

 Slowly slowly, geet is back to her old self but some how she feels insecure , she confront maan,

Later maan make honest confession about his wish, dream for her, and y he did that, y he left her, and he confessed  he done wrong, but only he wants her dream to be fulfilled , Geet understand maan's wish is honest and y he done it,

He said sorry but geet stopped him and said both r fault on their past. They want to  start it fresh , from the beginning .

she want to understand him later both give each other more time, want to share with each other, each other problem they become friend ,they spend time with each other, maan this time make her believe again, win her trust slowly, slowly, fill her life again with love, trust, care .

geet's life again with full of love, care,of maan. Maan give her everything, want to make her happy,. but there is lot of insecurity and fear about losing maan.

Geet still fears.


Maan's love again break her all fears and maan's love gain her trust , Geet came to know y maan did all this and she again newly falls for her maan, worship, for her dream her maan sacrifice .

their little world fill with their love, care,trust for each other .

 in their little paradise they have Soham , biological son of sameera and Rahul  but both left him

Here Maaneet feels love for soham ,cute little boy make his place on maaneet's life like their own son.may be maaneet r not their biological parents but more than it maaneet is every for soham,

Sameera is died in an accident planted by rahul who is now behind the bar waiting for his punishment 

Dev, meera, yash , vicky helped maaneet to win the battle again rahul and sameera who once try to destroy khurana family and their business

Maaneet adopt soham legally before sameera's family strike any problem regarding this .

Love , romance is in air for maaneet  , as geet is pregnant and maan is double happy

Both of them r spending little holiday with their son soham and their unborn baby
Here later maan had to go to LONDON for some emergency and geet was in HP
Geet is missing maan and cribbing to their son soham about his dad maan.
Maan is coming back to INDIA but GEET is angry
now  let's see how maan manao her and y maan had to go London

 

Pledge of Love

I've made a vow, to no one but you
I pledge my love to forever be true
I'll take care of you and treat you right
I'll lay beside you all through the night
I'll feed you and clothe you and keep you warm
I'll hug you and kiss you and give shelter in the storm
I'll help you and guide you and clear a path
I'll protect you and shield you from an angry man's wrath
I'll listen to your problems help you solve them too
I'll make you a rainbow and let the sun shine through
I'll take your side even if you're wrong
Just to prove our love is strong
I'll plant you flowers and make them grow
They'll be a symbol of love that only we'll know
I'll whisper your name when no one is near
So low that only you can hear
You'll feel my love even if we're apart
You'll know that we are one in heart

 

maaneet love

By Kate(simi91)



Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Character sketches of love at first sight:-

 

Maan Singh Khurana:- 27 yrs old , hand some , hot, dashing man. he is every girl's dream. Maan Singh Khurana most bachelor man in delhi, but didn't want to marry but his family want to see him settle.

 

 

Geet (handa) Singh Khurana:-21 yrs old beautiful, innocent girl, very ambitious of her career.down to the earth. Geet Handa most beautiful woman, but ambitious yes so innocent her family want to see her marry with a good, decent guy but she wants to makes her career .

Soham Sing Khurana:- now 11months old very naughty apple of his mom , heart of his dad.and his nani ma pamper him whenever she gets him , his mamu try to make him learn now discipline , here his dada jee always tell him story,his par dadi ma loves him and always help him to get away from his mother scolding or always giving him chocolate his fav. his uncles,they r his best buddy,whenever they get time they take him with them for a ride . their aunties try to give him new new foods and want to feed him but he loves to feed by his mom only,


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


index:-
Thread one:- Love at First Sight thread1
concept :-   Page1
Part 1:-   Page 1
Part 2:-   Page20
Part 3:- Page 35
Part 4:-  Page48
Part 5:-  Page61
Promo of Part 6:- Page73
Part 6:-Page81
Part 7:-page 96
Part 8:-Page109
character sketches:-Page109
Promo of Part 9:-Page116
Part 9:-Page130
Promo of Part 10:-Page 138
Part 10:-Page 1




Thread two:- Love at First Sight Thread 2

Part 10:-Page 1
Part 11:-Page 11
Part 12:-Page 26
Part 13:-Page26
Part 14:-Page43
Part 15:-Page52
Part 16:-Page59
Spoiler of next few parts:-Page69
Part 17:-Page 68
Part 18:-Page 80
Promo of Part 19:-Page 90
Part 19:-Page 96
Part 20:-Page 105
Promo of Part 21:-Page 115
Part 21:-Page 120
Promo of Part 22:-Page 131
Part 22:-Page135
Part 23:-Page 145

thread 3:-
Love at First Sight Thread 3
Part24:-Page3
Part 25:-Page 16
Part 26:-Page 30
Part 27:-Page45
Part28:-Page56
Part29:-Page67
Part30:-Page88
Part31:-Page101
Part32:-Page111
Part33:-Page120
Part34:-Page130
Part35:-Page139


Thread 4:-

~~~ Love at First Sight Thread 4~~~

Part36-Page 3


Part37:-Page15

Final Part:-Page35

Epilogue of Love At First Sight:-Page49

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi all
How r u all
Posted here all my fan fiction list and links of those fan fiction  for easy to find out .







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Posted here all my fan fiction list and links of those fan fiction  for easy to find out .

Complete FF:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1512474

 

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FF Pyaar ,dosti aur Duriyan thread2:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1567133

 

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1543601

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On Going FF:-

Love at First Sight :-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1555324

 

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1614552


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Love at First Sight Thread 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1779176

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~~~ Love at First Sight Thread 4~~~

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2942565

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1608306

 

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1654956

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Angel and Her Savior 3rd Thread

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1927817

On Going FF:-

Start a new FF

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1756910


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On Going FF:-
New FF:-

Road To Love & Beyond MG FF

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2941054

 Complete FF:-


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1668640

 

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New SS by mine:-
On Going SS:-
Memory Loss MG SS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1728144

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2nd Thread

Memory Loss MG SS

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Falling for an unknown Feeling

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1767353

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new two part os  Hidden Truth & Unconditional Love & Trust MG OS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1799051



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One Shot(OS):-
Prem and Shakti maaneet os :-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1564763

 

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Maaneet's Happy Family (OS):-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1609751

 

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1613772

 

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1615911

 

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1654228

 

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 New Os

Ek Salam Unn Veer Seenanio Ke Naam (MG OS)


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New Beginning MG OS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1848334

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love
rakhi🤗


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats for new thread dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats for the new thread

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago



 

 

Next Part:-

5months after ,HP:-

Rano shouting are jaldi kar puja ka time ho raha hain oh lgo aate hi honge,

(Geet come soon, time for Puja,prayer ,every one will come soon)

Iye geet kaha gayi , geet puttar jaldi kar beta when geet is crying as maan is left for London for 2weeks for some emergency .

(Geet where r u, come soon beta ,when geet is crying as maan is left for London for 2weeks for some emergency .

Rano came and placed her hand on her head and said beta,oh araha hain na.

Rano came and placed her hand on her head and said Beta, he is coming na

         Geet:-par oh gaye kyuon  aur gaye bhi toh mujhe leke ja nehi sakte the.

(Geet:- but y he went there, and if he had to go then y he can't took me with him )

Rano is about to ans when some one called her and geet jaise na aap bhi jaiye sab jaiye chal soham mein aur tu baat karenge, iye then patted her rising belly and said iye bhi toh aapne papa ki baat sunti hain huh twist her lips little.

(Geet said kk go go, just like maan, every one will, only me and my soham will be here and then she patted her belly and said and u also take side of ur dada , huh and twist her lips little)

Rano shook her head and murmur iye kab bari hogi kaun jane.

(rano shook her head & murmur when she will grown up)

 Geet came down stairs and sitting besides Meera who is playing with soham ,

When said aapke bare veerji kab aayenge kuch kaha aur aapke patidev?

(thinking about veer jee , when ur hubby will come ha)

Meera chuckled and said waise I can or sensed that some one is looking so impatience for her darling hubby when geet hold meera's ear  & twist it slightly  and said kya kaha.

(Btw I can or sensed that some one is looking so impatience for her darling hubby )

Meera cried ouch bhabi kya aap bhi.

(ouch bhabi u r too )

Geet smiles then patted her and then take her cute son who is jumping almost for his mama.

Geet take him in her arms and kissed his cute nose & said missing papa  , ha when like soham understand her word and cutely pouted  , when geet laughed and hugged him dearly.

 

At evening , Geet's room:

Geet ,make wear soham a new dress for the party.

Geet:- mere rajkumar baas thori aur iye lo aap  apak jacket, baas mere raja beta ready ho gaya , kissed his cute nose and then make him seat properly after covering him with pillow and said now sit here , m just coming after getting read and went behind the partitions where soham is busy with his toys , geet give her one glance then start to continue her work, she placed her dress in the racked then turns and try to open the knot of her salwar when she feels some one hold her both wrist and she knows who is it, she try to wriggled when she felt, his teeth r working on her dori, she closed her eyes in pleasure .she titled his head towards him when she titled his head towards him when he bend his head to buried in her neck and his one hand hold her from stomach slightly then another hand moved the salwar little more ,and rubbed his palm on her shoulder sensually, geet moaned in pleasure maannn,ummm .

(my prince , my son is ready almost baas this jacket and now my prince is ready completely ,

Maan smiles wickedly and once looked at their son who is very busy with his toy and playing there when maan lowered his head towards her shoulder and kisses there , geet's moaning increasing gradually, when maan left one side and went to another side for this sweet torture..

Geet :-maannn,pls

Here maan is no where near to stop, he just removed her salwar and then moved towards her rising cute bump and said baby dada missing u lots, come soon .

Geet smiles then said aur baby ka mama ko.

Maan smiles then bit her ear lobe will show u  the trailer  when geet moaned ummm and maan nuzzled his cheek by his nose and said miss me ha.

Geet just moaned when she feels his hands went towards her B** hook and in a moments it's snapped out.

Geet moaned maannn ,when maan only smiles and kissed her cheek to ear to her shoulder, he just softly rubbing her delicate curves . He moved towards the hard buds and rubbed it between his two fingers, Geet's moaning gradually increased and geet voiced stucked in her throat.

Their sweet, passaionate moments disturb by a loud knock on their door.

Maan groaned but still continue to kissed her neck to shoulder when geet said maan , pls dekhiye na koi aya hain ,

(maan pls see the door , some one is there)

Maan:hmmm

Geet plead again when maan irriatatingly said mere pyaar ke Dushman har taraf.

(every one is my enemy )

Geet giggled when she went to cover her by a robe maan said no jaan, not today, wait here , I'm coming and will dress u up.

Geet blushed and just nodded after holding the bathrobe .

Maan opened the door and see his mother in law standing there.

Rano:- maan bete iye aapke saman sab bahar the, aap itni jaldi mein chale aaye.chaliye aap rest leke fresh hoke chalie aayiye hum tab tak soham ko le ja rehe hain.

(son, u r luggage is here, now come soon beta, and before that take rest and I'm taking soham with me)

Maan smiles and went to take soham with him when soham giggled to see his father and throw his hands in excitement , maan take him and kissed his cheek and said so how is my beta doing , Soham giggled and placed a wet kisses on his rough cheek then make face at it's hurt his soft and cute lips.

Here Geet giggled to see this from the behind of the partitions .

Rano also laughed at her grandson' s cute expression.

Maan smiles and said sorry and kissed his both cheeks and said sorry, beta. Then try to give him but soham holding maan's neck tightly and hiding his face in his neck.

Maan look at rano helplessly when rano said rehene dijiye isse, abhi , abhi aapne papa ko dekhke nani ma ko bhul gaye hain.

( it's ok beta, it's like he didn't want to go or left u , like he forget me )

Maan smiles and said dekho mere bete ko kya bol rehe hain nani ma, but soham more hide himself when rano just patted  his back and said come soon beta.

( see son, what ur grand mom saying,)

Maan smiles and then turn at geet and said dekha aapne bete ko.

Geet just giggled when maan rubbed his nose lovingly with soham who just looks more than happy.

Maan make him sit and said let me help ur mama then m coming here but soham is  not ready to leave his dada .

Maan shook his head and said geet come here , will help u here.

Geet look at maan in horror and said kya aap pagal ho gaye ho, mein waise koi jarurat nehi hain bahut dekh lya , chaliye mein aapna kaam khud karlungi and waise bhi aap toh mujhe aur aapke bete chor ke shanti se abord mein baithe the toh aab kyuon ?

( R u crazy , no thanks , I seen it enough and I can do my work by myself and btw u left me our son then y now )

Maan looked at soham and said aapke mama naraj hain humse.kuch karna hoga, aap denge na humara sath mama ko manane.

( ur mama is angry on me now me have to do something, u will give my sath na)

Soham just giggled and give maan a peck on his nose.

Maan laughed and tickled him.

Here geet is trying to peep from the partition to hear maan but  soon feels pair of eyes intensely looking at her and she is only wearing her bathrobe.

Maan smirks and enter behind her partitions where geet was taking step back .

Maan said huskily kya hua jaan, abhi tak change nehi kya , ha.when geet looked here and there first then come close to maan and held his neck and said no my darling , and then open her robe and maan's surprise that she is fully wear a saree . He smiles and said u making me fool.

( what happen jaan, till now no change, waiting for me,

Geet rubbed her nose with his and said how could I mr khurana. & this is ur punishment mr khurana and more in ur way darling hubby and wink at her.

Maan is baffled to see her like this and said oh oh so playing game with me.ha mrs khurana .

Geet who is sitting in front of bed after ruffling soham's hair little , try to put bangles on her hand .

Geet said :- well know this is not game, this is ur punishment for leaving ur family here alone.

Maan came and said in front of geet and take her hand to help her and said well then I have to remind u something , like it's u who told me to go there to help them.

Geet bit her lips and said oh oh well so, u should stay I mean u should say once ke chalo humare sath but no, apa kyuon kahenge so, it's mistake and u have to face punishment. Ha.

( y u will say us to come with u huh)

Maan looked at her face which is now glowing but he knew , she wa sad when he was not here with her.

Maan take her hand then placed a kiss on her palm and said mehendi lagyi hin bahut sundar lag raha hain ek dam humare shaadi ke time ,asie hi ghere rang tha na.

ur mehendi color is so dark,like our marraige time it's beautiful ,and dark )

Geet shied and said app app bhi na.

( u r too much )

Maan kissed her palm again and said kk , I'm accepting ur every punishment jaan, aapke haar saza mujhe manjur .

(I'm accepting ur each and every punishment)

Geet looked at him in awe then said hmmmthen said aap jaldi se ready ho jaiye waise bhoolna mat mein aapse naraj hoon iye jo baat hain na baas aiven kar rehi hoon ha, iye mat sochna maan liya sab baat aap mujhe le ja sakte the, ha mana uha problem ki liye matlab problem solve karne ke liye I send u but still u should ask us kyuon soham hain na, aur aapke beti bhi toh aapko miss karti hain.

(pls dress up fast, and don't forget I'm still angry on u, and I was talking and am talking to u just like that, don't think maan,u will get by this and I know that there is problm and u went there to solve it but still u should ask us ,, what say soham, and ur daughter also missed u )

Maan is taking his dress from the cupboard when geet handled him the towel and said aap ready ho jaiye when maan only leaning towards the bathroom door and said jaan ,I guess u accepted my point .

(get ready fast maan)

When geet looked at him with confusing expression just.

Maan :- oh oh, samajh mein nehi aaya , well I told u na we will have girl this time so, u fought with me but now I guess u accepted, accha hain but don't worry I will fulfill ur dream next time by bringing  our son and indicate her womb then wink at her and enter the bathroom.

(oh oh I got it and well I told u na we will gave girl this time so, u fought with me but now I guess u accepted it but don't worry , I will fulfill ur dream next time by bringing our son and indicate her womb then wink at her and enter the bathroom.)

Geet at first shocked then surprised then blushed heavily to hear it,

She shied like newly wed dulhan.

Later they attened the puja for brij's new company's success .

Maan is keep stealing glances of his darling wife , who is just blushing terribly .

Later at night time , maan said papa jee, we will moved day after tomorrow .

Rano heard it and said but beta , iye toh geet ke peheli baccha when geet said mama.

(but son, this is our geet's first child )

Maan understand it , he know they have the rights but what can he do , his work is need him and he need geet and soham vice versa .

Maan's chain of thought break by geet's word, aap iye kya kehe rehe hain , mere , humara pehela baccha soham hain, aap aise kaise bol sakte hain mama.

(what r u saying mama, our and my first child is soham ,how could u say like that)

Maan noticed the tear on rano's eyes and said geet, mama ka iye kehena ka matlab nehi tha,

(mama  don't want to say like that )

Geet just said par un hone kaha na, kal kuch aur reason pe koi aur kehega , humara soham jab abra hoga tab usse kaise lagega, mana humne janam nehi dia soham ko but he is my son , he is our son only and then she left the place.

(but she said it na, whatever the reason could be , when our soham will grow up, then what he will think,,I know that we didn't give birth to soham but he is my son he is our son only)

Maan shook his head and said sorry mama.

Rano smiles sadly and went from there. When brij said tu jake geet ko samjha hum iha dekhte hain.

( u go and take care of geet ,We will here na)

Maan nodded and went to his room and found geet is wiping and hugging soham closely.

Maan sat besides her and said jaan.

Geet just said maan, I know I was fault but kya karu ,I can't do anything when it's come to my soham.I know mama just said but I fear if any but maan hugged her and said jaan I can understand  jaan, even mama also know it , but maan just said as she is missing her daughter and u know it's also like they want to spend more time with u, they want to see their grandchild first , jaan, maan never intend to hurt or never deny the fact is soham is our son, see , mama never did or say anything like, that in fact u know more how mama shower her all love to soham , then geet.I know u feared, u just scared but geet, she is ur mama, don't say like that.think how much she loves u and us , how much she wants ur happiness only.


Geet nodded and said I'm sorry maan ,I was just instantly reacted .

Maan kissed her forehead and said go geet, and say sorry and manao mama.

Geet nodded then said but I'll not stay here ha.

Maan smiles and kiss her lips gently and said of course jaan.

Geet smiles little more then said mein chalti hoon,.

Geet entered the Rano's room with soham and see her mama is crying .

Geet feel guilty and called mama.

Rano quickly wipes her tears & said aao beta.

Geet come slowly and take a seat besides her and said mama.I'm sorry. Mama I don't want to hurt mama, pls don't cry and starts crying.

Rano looks at her then noticed Soham who is frowning to see her mama is crying.Rano smiles and said beta, It's ok, I can understand it. It's mother instinct , when geet said mama I know u never want to say that like I thought it's just but mama actually I feared to loose soham, after many things happen in our life, I fear, I can fought for myself but.when rano said beta, mein samjh sakti hoon sab but y u r thinking negative , y ur thinking u will nto fight for ur maan or soham if anything, first beta try to be positive ,sply this time ,

Geet nodded but soon they heard soham break into loud cry,

Geet shocked at his out burst and said kya hua mere bete ko,

(what happen to u son)

Rano smiles little then said usse bura lag raha hain  aapne ma ko rote huye dekhke .

(he is feeling sad and upsate as his mom is crying )

Geet shied and patted soham's back lovinly after some time he stop but hold his mama tightly .

 

Rano kissed her daughter and grand son when both give her angelic smiles.

 

Next day morning

Maan is reading news paper and soham is playing on his chest after lying there.

Maan:- jaan, get up it's 7.30 now when Geet tossing here and there , later , get up and starching her arms and said good morning maan and give him angelic smiles and looking at him intently. When maan smiles and replied good morning jaan but noticed geet is frowning .

She look at soham and said good morning beta when she gives him a kiss and soham giggled and smiles at her but when geet try to take him he deny and clinged to maan more

Geet face changed and said soham.

Maan noticed it and smiles then pat soham who is happily playing with maan's vest.

Geet said beta, mama ke paas nehi aaoge,

( don't u come to ur mama)

Soham just giggled when maan said lagta hain aaj humara beta ko dada ke paas rehena hain.

(I guess , today our son want to stay with me only)

Kyuon beta and pinch his cute lips when soham's giggled .

Maan:- geet, chalo fresh ho lo aaj toh hum baap bete morning walk mein challenge .

(geet get up and fresh up soon, today me and my son will go to morning walk)

Geet looked at them and said soham beta aapne mama ke paas nehi aaoge.

(soham beta will u not come here )

But soham giving his full concentration on maan's stubble.

Geet murmur dal badlu , mat aa mere paas, jab tere dada bahar gaye the tab toh mama , mama huh thik hain then went to shower room .

(Dal badlu, u don't have to come here, when ur dada was not here, u were every time mama, mama)

Maan and soham r looking at geet then soham bubble and hide his face in maan's neck but maan said chalo mama ko humara surprise hain.

(let's go and give some surprise to ur mama)

After geet coming out from the washroom, she noticed something in the bed.then she looked it's her saree a beautiful aqua color saree with matching blouse and skirt and accesaories .

Then a note

Dear mama

Good morning ,this is a beautiful gift by ur son , hope u like it

Muhhhaaa

& this muhaaa from my dada with wink

Soham

Geet look stunned and smiles in happiness and then shied to see maan's Naughtinss.

When she felt  a soft pair of arms holding her neck and see soham holding by maan both looking at her with baby face.

She smiles at them then kissed soham's cheeks and hugged him but ignore maan completely.

Maan:- hey what is this?

Geet tickling soham and said this is ur punishment for going away to abord.

Maan:-but when geet said aapka saza kal humne baat kithi na.

(ur punishment , we talked about it yesterday na)

Fullday later geet is avoiding maan intentionally, here maan is going crazy. At evening , he came to kitchen when every one was there room, he just pinned geet to the wall and said y ur avoiding me.

Geet gapsed at this kind of attack then said maan, leave me when maan said full day u avoid me and now.

Geet turns her head and said maan leave me , and don't forget this is ur punishment.

Maan smirked and said ok my sweet wifey.

Geet sensed some danger is coming but she shurugged it

In geet's room  , geet is placing sohom's dress on suitcase when some one watching her from the door and said geet, see ur fav ice cream with fruit chart

                       Geet looks at the plate and said yummy , give me those

When maan said in one condition if u forgive me.

Geet:- maannn, u  want forgiveness now instead of feeding me this delicious food, how could u maan, geet looked at maan in corner of her eyes then think in he is thinking for the forgiveness , he he I never get angry on him, it's just my mood, but this is the time I can pull his leg, let's do it.

Maan noticed she is thinking something and smirked when geet said maan, do u want to know ur daughter is hungry and want to eat those fruits and ice cream,don't u feed ur daughter ,

Maan:- she is one step ahead, I thought she will say maan I forgive u , ok jaan, let's play it and said well ofcourse honey, I would love to love u errmm loved to feed our daughter . but kya hain u give me a punishment that I can't feed errm I can't touch u so, u know na and u r doing work .

Geet in a hurry said maan pls feed me those ,Ice cream is melthing now .

Maan smirked more and said ofcourse jaan but u know I don't want to dis obey u more, once I done by going away to aborad , yes u send me I know , u send me for there some work for our business still it's not good na , no geet, I can't touch u .

Geet shouts maan either u will feed me or I will ,  arrh geet u r so , kk I forgive u and withdraw the condition that u can't touch me kk now feed me.

Maan happily smiles and said let me bring fresh ice cream and fruit chart just 2mins.

Geet looke at him with open mouth .

Geet:-I will take my revenge see , maan u did it intentionally , I know u will do and she shied to think further , she remember how maan smirked at kitchen when they talked.

 

Maan come with new tray and there is one cup orange ice cream, vanilla ,butter scotch , chocolate, double chocolate and there is fruit chart and golgappa

Geet noticed maan's face it's glowing but his eyes it's like now molten, dark and intense .

 

Precap:-

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Mere Jeevan Sathi(My Life partner , My soul mate)



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Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi all
how r u all
updated my FF~~~~~~~ Love at First Sight ~~~~~~~~
Part36-Page 3
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love
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Lovely update dear and Maaneet part was awsome:D