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Maaneet OS Hothe Hothe Pyar Ho Gaya Lastpart pg 14

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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 11:08am | IP Logged
 
 
Hey friends this is again your crazy friend Piya and today I am here with a small OS on Maaneet. This OS  has 2 parts I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it

 

HOTHE HOTHE PYAR HO GAYA

 

Rano: Geet bete ye toh saalo se chali aa rahi parampara hai hum isse badal nahi sakthe [Geet this is a tradition that is been followed from generations we can't change it]

Geet: Main aisi parampara ko maanne se inkaar karti hoon [ I disagree to follow this ritual]

Rano: Par bete aapko kis baat se dikat hai? [But dear what is the problem?]

Geet: Main koi saaman nahi hoon mom jo koi bhi aira gaira ladka mujhe dekhne aayega main ek jeethi jaagthi ladki hoon jiske khud k armaan hai feelings hai aap meri shaadi aisi hi kisi bhi ajnabee k saath kaise kar sakthe  ho? [I am not a nonliving entity mom that any useless fellow will come to choose me I am a girl who is full of live and who desires to fulfill her dreams how can u marry me of with someone who is a complete stranger to me?]

Rano: Geet humne aapki shadi kaha pakki ki hai wo ladka toh kal aapko sirf dekhne aa raha hai aur humara yakeen maniye aapki razamandi k bagair hum baat ko aage nahi badayenge [Geet we have not finalized your wedding till now the boy is just coming to meet us tomorrow and trust me we won't go ahead with the marriage until and unless u give an approval]

Geet: Mom mera faisla aaj bhi yahi hai aur kal bhi yahi rahega main kisi bhi ajnabee k saath shadi nahi karnewali [Mom my decision would remain the same I am not going to marry any stranger]

Rano: Ek baar unse mil toh lijiye Geet kya pata aapko wo ajnabee apna sa lagne lage [Atleast meet him once Geet u never know he may no longer be a stranger to u after u meet him]

Geet: Mom logo ko samajne mein kayi saal lag jate hai aur aap keh rahe ho k ek mulakat mein hi wo ajnabee mera apna bun jaayega no way Mom aisa kuch nahi honewala [Mom it takes years to understand a person properly and u think that the boy who is coming to see me may no longer be a stranger for me in my first meeting itself; no way Mom it's impossible]

Rano: Are Geet tu kaha jaa rahi hai? Meri baat sun toh sahi [Geet where r u going child listen to me dear]

Geet: Mom main apni friend k yaha jaa rahi hoon ghar der se lautungi aap khana kha lijiyega aur Dad ko bhi batadijiyega [Mom I am going at my friend's place. I may not come back soon u have your food and inform Dad as well]

Geet takes the key of her car and walks out of the house

Rano: Ab isse kaise samjhayo dilo k rishte ko bandne mein zyada waqt nahi lagta kabhi kabhi ek lamha hi kafi hotha kisi ko apne zindagi mein shaamil karne k liye [How should I convince her that the relationship of the heart is special sometimes a small moment is enough for making someone an integral part of your life]

Meanwhile,

Geet: Mom se jhooth kehkar uss topic se dur toh chali aayi par ye toh sirf ek temporary solution hai kal toh uss situation ko mujhe face karna hi hoga tab main kya karungi? [I got a temporary relief from the problem by lying to Mom but tomorrow I have to face that situation how am I supposed to get rid of it?]

Geet stopped her car near a local disco

Geet: Iska ek solution hai khud ko uss ladke k saamne itna bura pesh karo k wo ladka khud mujhse shaadi karne k liye inkaar kar de aur aisa agar mujhe karna hai toh aaj ache se practice karni hogi [There is one solution to this problem I can portray myself as a bad girl infront of that boy so that he himself will reject my proposal but I need to practice properly to execute my plan with perfection]

Geet entered the disco

She straightaway headed towards the bar and demanded a strong glass of alcohol

Bar tender: Mam aapko exactly kya chahiye Rum, Whisky ya Brandy? [Mam what do u want exactly Rum, Whisky or Brandy?]

Geet: (thinking) Aaj tak sharab ko chua tak nahi toh mujhe kya pata mujhe kya order karna chahiye [I have not even touched alcohol in my entire life how am I supposed to answer his question?]

Geet: Ye sab strong hai? Kya ye peekar insaan talli ho saktha hai? [Are these  strong enough to make a person intoxicated?]

Bar tender: Yes Mam

Geet: Toh ek kaam karo inn sabko ek saath mix karo aur mujhe ek bade glass mein de doh [Do one thing mix all of them together and give it to me in one big glass]

Bar tender: R u sure Mam?

Geet: Yes I am

The bar tender starts making her drink. Geet was nervous but she wanted to set a bad girl image to avoid the marriage proposal so she decided to take this risk

As Geet was waiting for her drink she noticed a guy who was dancing with some girls. He had killer looks his dance moves were also great but it was quite evident that he was not at all comfortable in the company of the girls

Geet's drink was ready by that time

Bar tender: Mam here is your drink

Geet: Thanks

Geet: (thinking) Chal Geet u can do this [Common Geet u can do this]

Geet takes a sip of her drink; the drink was too strong for Geet she splashed the drink from her mouth and started coughing

A guy offered a glass of water to Geet

Guy: Jab aap sharab peethe hi nahi hai toh aap khamkha dhikawa kyun kar rahi hai? [When u r not a drinker then why r u trying to act in front of everyone?]

Geet took the water and looked at the guy he was the same guy who was feeling uncomfortable while dancing with the girls

Geet: Tum bhi toh unn ladkiyon k saath dance karte hue comfortable nahi lag rahe the tab tum kyun dhikawa kar rahe the? [Even u were not comfortable while dancing with those girls what was the need for u to pretend?]

The guy was none other than Maan Singh Khurana

Maan: Kabhi kabhi insaan ko majboori mein aisi harkate karni padthi hai [Sometimes a person has to do stupid  as per his needs]

Geet: Sahi kaha mujhe bhi ye ghatiya drink peene ka koi shaukh nahi hai par filhaal mujhe apni good girl image ko bad girl image mein convert karna hai [I agree. Iam least interested to taste this stupid drink but I am adamant to convert my good girl image into a bad one]

Maan: Kya baat hai main bhi toh yahi chahta hoon [Oh really this is exactly what I want to do]

Geet: Main toh talli hokar shayad apne maksad mein kamiyaab ho bhi jaathi par tum apne mission mein kaise kamiyaab hothe? [I might have succeeded in my mission but how would have u accomplished ur mission?]

Maan: Maine socha k inn saari ladkiyon k saath dance karte hue main kisi se kehkar apni photos khichwaunga aur phir kal sabke saamne inn photos ko kisi k through expose kar dunga toh automatically main badnaam ho jaayunga [I thought I would dance with these girls and would request someone to click my snaps and tomorrow by some means or the other I would have exposed these photos and would have managed to crown myself as a bad boy]

Geet: Haha par unn ladkiyon k paas aane se tumhare toh paseene chut rahe the lagta nahi hai tumhe dekhkar k tum itne sharmile type k honge after all shakal toh achhi di hai babajine aur sach kehthi hoon k tummein wo kashish hai jisse k ladkiyaan tumhari taraf kheechi chali aaye par tum toh ek number k darpok lagte ho [Haha u were sweating badly when those girls were trying to be close to u but I never thought that u would be such a shy guy I mean u look dashing and u do have the charm to attract any girl but it seems u r scared of girls]

Maan: Mujhe darr nahi lagta kisise par haan ye baat sach hai k main ek one Wowen Man hoon [I am not scared of anyone but yes this is true I am a one women Man]

Geet: That's good wo ladki kafi lucky hogi jisse tum pyar karte ho [That girl must be really lucky to have found u]

Maan: Yahi toh problem hai k abhi tak mujhe who ladki mili nahi aur sach kahu toh ab umeed bhi nahi k wo mujhe milegi [Alas there is no girl in my life and to be frank enough I think I will never be able to find her]

Geet: Kyun? [Why?]

Maan: Mere Mom Dad chahte hai k main unke dost ki beti se shadi kar lu par wo ladki mere li bilkul anjaan hai woe k ajnabee hai aur main ek ajnabee k saath puri zindagi kaise bita saktha hoon? [My Parents want to get me married to their friend's daughter but that girl is a complete stranger to me how can I lead my entire life with a stranger?]

Geet: Exactly mera bhi yahi manna hai aur hum dono ki problem bilkul ek jaisi hai issi problem ki wajah se main yaha aaj apna image change karne ki koshish kar rhai hoon [This is exactly what I feel and both of us share the same problem and it's because of this problem that I am trying to change my image today]

Maan: Kya tumhare parents bhi tumhari shadi kisi ajaan shaks se karwa rahe hai? [U parents r also trying to fix ur marriage with a stranger?]

Geet: Yes

Maan: Toh kya solution dhunda hai tumne apne problem ka? [So did u get any solution for your problem?]

Geet: Nahi jo karne ki koshish kar rahi thi who toh mujhse nahi honewala [No infact I won't be able to do what I wanted to do]

Maan: Mera bhi yahi haal hai toh kyun na kuch der milkar ek dusre k problem ko batne ki koshish kare kyunki kal toh hume ye mauka nahi milega [Same is the case with me so why don't both of us share our problems for some time as we won't get a chance tomorrow]

Geet: Thik hai par tumhara naam kya hai? Humne itni baatein ki par ekdusre ka naam nahi pucha abhi tak [Okay but what is good name we shared so many things but we never bothered to introduce ourselves]

Maan: Naam jaankar fayda kya hai hum ajnabee hai aur aaj k baad shayad dubara milenge bhi nahi par agar ek dusre ko naam se bulana hi hai toh main tumhe Beauty kehkar pukarunga kyunki tumhari aakhein wakayi mein behet khoobsurat hai [What's the use of introducing each other as there r very less chances that we might meet again but if we need to know our names to talk to each other I would love to address u as "Beauty"  since your eyes are really beautiful]

Geet: Toh thik hai main tumhe "Beast" kehkar pukarungi tumpar ye naam jachega [I would address u as "Beast" I have a feeling that this name would suit u]

Maan: Toh chale [So shall we leave?]

Geet nodded her head in approval

Both of them left their car and started walking on the road

They found a comfortable place to sit where both of them could talk to each other easily

Maan: Tumne apne ajnabee ki tasveer dekhi hai? [Have u seen the face of your stranger?]

Geet: Nahi [No]

Maan: Kyun? [Why?]

Geet: Kisi k chehre ko dekhkar uss insaan k seerat ki pehchaan toh nahi ho sakthi na? [U can't understand the nature of the person by looking at his photo right?]

Maan: Haan mera bhi yahi maannna hai issi liye maine bhi tasveer dekhne se inkaar kar diya[Yes I too feel the same hence I also did not look at her photograph]

Geet: Beast ye toh batau tumhari wo one women kaisi honi chahiye? I mean kuch qualities toh tumne sochi hi hongina jo usse mein ho [Beast tell me one thing what qualities do u want to see in your lady u must have surely thought of something]

Maan: Beauty main bus yahi chahtha hoon k main jaisa hoon wo mujhe waise accept kare humare rishte mein inti gehrayi ho k humare beech galatfaimi ki deewar kabhi bhi thik na  paaye humara rishta pyar se shuru ho aur pyar par khatm [Beauty I just want her to accept me as I am; our relationship should have so much depth in it that the walls of misunderstandings can never form between us. Our relationship should start with love and end with love]

Geet: Aur rishte ki ye gehrayi kisi ajnabee k saath ho hi nahi sakthi bhala aisa ho saktha hai kya k ek hi mulakat mein aap ek insaan ko itne ache tareeke se jaan lo samaj lo k aap uske saath apni puri zindagi bitane k liye raazi ho jau? [This type of depth in a relationship cannot be accomplished with a stranger. How can u understand someone so well in just one meeting that u would agree to lead your entire life with him?]

Maan: Waise Beauty tumhe kaisa life partner chahiye? [By the way Beauty what type of life partner do u want?]

Geet: Wo jobhi ho sachha ho aur meri aur mere pyar ki izzat karna jaanta ho mujhe isse zyada aur kuch nahi chahiye [He should be a honest man and he should give respect not only to me but also to my love that's all what I want to see in my man]

Maan: Kaash hum dono ko humara sachha pyar mil jaata [I so wished that both of us could meet our true love]

Geet was going to give him an answer when all of a sudden it started raining

 

To be continued'.Embarrassed

 

The next update would be the last part of this OS do tell me your opinion regarding the first part 

 

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Last Part: Page 14
 


Edited by piya- - 06 May 2012 at 9:44am

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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 11:14am | IP Logged

Congratz Piya on d new OS
it was a superb one...totally rocking
Beauty and the Beast LOL
looking forward 2 seeing their reaction whn they fill out tht their stranger is none other than each other Wink


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PiYaaa!!!!!!!! Can you imagine????? It's like after approximately 3 months am reading something from you...hihi...To be frank I wasn't gonna read it...but then I saw it's only 2 parts...that's why me thought that I'm gonna read it this time...


Ummm...Geet's mom...I mean her parents have fixed her wedding with their friend's son...From now it self am presuming it to be the one and only MSK because ek toh it's a maaneet OS and then Piya ko toh MSK ke ilaawaa koyi aur pasand hi nahi hain... :P


But haan...I really liked Geet's convo with her mom...I mean how she told her that she isn't any kind of entity or whatsoever that she gonna agree to spend her life with a "stranger" based on one meeting only...But main hoti na...toh I would have looked at the pic at least and then would have agreed on the spot...haha...


Geet and alcohol...hey Babaji...buri baat hain Geet...thank goosness she didn't drink it though...and the best part is that MSK is the one to have offered her the water and asked her why was she drinking when she cannot...and I liked Geet's reply to this...like even he was dancing when he really didn't seem to have wanted to... :P Good one Geet...


Well...both trying to create a bad image...they even told each other...but couldnt; they have at least shared their names...tab toh woh jaan jaaate na ke their rishta has actually been fixed with each other only...but on 2nd thoughts...is it true...I mean have their parents thought about these two only because with you kuch bhi ho sakta hain... :P


Btw Geet ka toh I can understand...I mean sachi mein Beauty hain...but Maan...Oye Geet...from which angle does he appear to be a Beast...Mujhe to sirf Prince lagta hainDay DreamingEmbarrassedBlushing...hihi...Both spending their time with each other and sharing their problem...ummm...but still they haven't figured anything out...But I think ke if thir parents have really chosen these both for each other...then it will come as a big big big surprise for them...am waiting to know their reaction...hihi...


Continue soon...pleaseee...because am really eager to read this...pleaaaseee...thanksss...and love you loads Sexy... :)))



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absolutely awesome...

looking forward to the next one piya...


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Congrats nice partSmile
w8ng 4 the next partSmile
thanx 4 the  PM

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Awesome os.loved it.
eagerly waiting for next part.
thanks for the pm.

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Congrats on the new OS...

lovely start...

both have an image of their would'be..

waiting for the next part/..

thnx for PM,...

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