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Four people had been snapped while either entering or leaving the house- and one among them was a recognisable face- Umang.


"Maaji do you know these people"

"One of them...now I know something about the tragedy"

"What do you know? Please tell me"

Koki pointed to a photo and said"He is Umang - Anita's elder brother"

"Dhawall jumped with joy...his work had provided Koki with a lead!!!

Koki looked at Dhawal disapprovingly and poor Dhawal became serious again.


Koki called the police and told them that she knows Anita's brother Umang's whereabouts.."Please come along with me  and make enquiry. I have reasons to believe that he is involved in Anita's murder"

"Maaji how can you be so sure about his involvement?"

Koki hit her head and said "Hey Krishna Bhagwan..this man's brain is 20 years behind his body in terms of growth...eat these walnuts, anecdotal evidence suggests that these help in brain's development"


One hour later-


The police jeep stops in front of the house indicated by Kokila...Dhawal and Kokila got down from the car...they were startled when a ragged man jumped out of the window- Koki immediately recognised him and shouted "Please catch him".

Dhawal tried his best to remember who that man was but his memory failed him. He started munching walnut kernels in the hope of improving his recollection speed.

The man was caught by the constables and brought to them. Koki identified him as Kallu, the brother of Piloo Shah, the drug peddler who was murdered a few days ago... His blood stained clothes were a telltale sign that all was not well inside the house. 


Kallu confessed that he had killed Umang to avenge his brother's death...Police broke open the main door and took Umang's corpse to hospital. The inspector thanked Koki and asked her for more information so that they can interrogate Kallu. 

Koki smiled and said- 


Umang doesn't have very cordial relations with our family. He was outraged when his sister married Ahem, ostensibly for love. The real reason was money- she was addicted to cocaine - and cocaine isn't cheap. I believe that the call from landline was made by Piloo Shah and the mobile num was Umang's. 


Anita was running out of drugs and requested Piloo to supply them at night. They discussed the time and price over a phone call. Umang incidentally chose the same day and time to break into MM and murder his sis and make it look like a violent burglary. He chose to break open the terrace door as it was not as strong as the rest and would give away easily...and moreover a lot of people forget to lock the terrace door before going to sleep. This is common knowledge among thieves. Umang was lucky to find his victim waiting on the terrace- he made her unconscious using a towel dabbed with chloroform...the injury on her body are most likely due to the resistance she put. He stabbed her many times .Piloo saw him on his way back...


Piloo started blackmailing him and demanded huge sums as hush money. Umang was not a man to be messed with, he knew when to lie low and when to attack. Piloo paid the ultimate price for his audacity...


Kallu sang like a canary in the police station and the evidence he gave corroborated Detective Koki's theory.



---------------------------------------------The end...




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loved it vidisha.

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loved it vidishaa!!!!!! but awww ahem ended being alone!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 09 May 2012 at 2:48am | IP Logged
wow ::: Umang dead LOL . ..  a relief. . .  

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Originally posted by abbay

loved it vidishaa!!!!!! but awww ahem ended being alone!!!!!!!!!!

Not exactly..he still has his cellphone and lappy with him...they are his jeevan saathiLOL

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Nice ending. Loved the detective koki.

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Hey you ended it:-( i actually wanted it to go on some more but it was fab:-)

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Vidisha.  That was truly a great piece of writing.  Read all parts together in one go.  Fantastic.

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