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Part-7

 

Koki paced up and down the hall. She did that whenever she was in a tricky situation…and today she was confronting a far worse situation… She had thought about the Rashi-Urmi-Kinjal's involvement in smuggling drugs to MM but it seemed improbable. Urmi certainly didn't know what cocaine was..Rashi hadn't gone out and a discreet search through her finances revealed that she hadn't withdrawn any money recently…plus after the kidnapping incident she was mortally scared of hoodlums. Kinjal hadn't visited MM for a long time and since she couldn't possibly have an accomplice inside MM even she could be excluded for the time being….So who is left?...Was Anita a drug addict? She did behave strangely..but could she be an addict?  

Koki asked Ahem whether Anita behaved strangely at times. Ahem gave an affirmative reply but attributed her behavior to difficulties in adapting to the new family … Koki had her own doubts about Ahem's explanation.

Meethi was summoned into Koki's darbar. It appeared as if she was quaking with fear..She stammered and told Koki that she did find Anita 'lost in another world' at times….Koki sent her away- she got what she wanted to know…Meethi's constant refrain was "Nani Bhabhi I am innocent"..this got on Koki's nerves but she suppressed her anger and decided to gather more information about Anita's drug habit and cocaine peddlers in town.

 She tried telling her theory to the inspector but his lackadaisical approach inflamed her…She remarked "kuch log Khakhi pehanke poore police department ki izzat khaak mein milate hai"…

A private detective agency was hired to gather information from rehabilitation centres…

The next day proved to be luckier for Koki… a small report tucked away among advertisements held a ray of hope…….and the detective agency gave her the news she wanted- Anita was addicted to cocaine – her former roommate could vouch for it….and two years ago she was admitted to a rehab for cocaine addiction.

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So she was an addict?? Twist!! Cant wait for more,:-)

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waiting waiting waiting for more!!!!! also for Nazdeekiyaaannn!!!!!

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Part- 8

Part-8

The newspaper reported that a small-time drug peddler Piloo Shah has been murdered near his shack in Remington chowk…Koki found the information worth pursuing. The police labeled him as a victim of gang rivalry but Koki was skeptical and obtained the address of the dead man's family. She took Dhawal along with her to meet Piloo's family. Dhawal couldn't understand why Koki wanted to go to such a seedy area inhabited by crooks.

Piloo's brother Kallu was a dirty man clad in rags. His eyes were red and menacing..the scar on his right cheek gave him a menacing look. The scar was certainly made by knife.

His speech betrayed signs of his inebriated state. He kept repeating that his brother wasn't killed by a gangster… some rich son of a bitch was the killer…even though he was far away when bullets were being pumped in piloo's body he could swear that the man didn't appear to be from their ilk. "He had the swagger of an arrogant and rich swine. Koki shook her head and decided to return home.

Two kids stopped them and told that they have some information which they will tell her in exchange for Rs.50. Koki muttered some banality about kids and handed over the money. The younger of the two kids tugged at Dhawal's trousers and said that the assailant went away in a "biggg car of the same colour as Dhawal's pants". The elder of the two showed off his literacy by rattling out the registration number. Koki didn't trust his memory fully but decided to find out more about the car's owners.

                                             

A few thousand rupees exchanged hands and it was revealed that Mrs.Vaishali Pandya was the owner of the car…Koki handed over the address to Dhawal and asked him to hide near her house and click photographs of everyone who visited the house and their cars. The hapless man had to do what Koki had asked him to do. He silently cursed his luck for having an eccentric saas. He spent the day clicking photographs..his camouflage was perfect and no one spotted him. He returned to MM at 9 P.M and showed Koki the photos he had clicked on his "best and best" mobile….He was pleased to notice that Koki was scrutinizing the pictures.

 //one or two more updates more//

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arey waah!!!! seems like vidisha today is in a very good and giving mood!!!! fulfilling all our wishes!!!!!!! loved it!!!!! waiting for next (I know I am very nagging and there is no hope for me)

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Dhaval is koki s assistant! Fab gal!! Hope you update more :-)

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loved all the updates vidisha...loved the phrase kokis darbar...anitha was a drug addict and nobody knew...what is koki going to find in the photographs...cant wait for the next update...thanks for the pm...

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Superb updates.

Thoroughly enjoyed Detective Koki's style and her apprentice 'best and best'.

Update soon.

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