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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 4:09am | IP Logged
hmmm!!!! supercool!!!! interesting!! plzz update soon! Is Ahem the killer?? sorry dnt throw chappals at me!!!!!!! hehehe!!! just my hyperactive thinking!!!!!!!lolzzz

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Part-4

----Dedicated to Drac's memory- RIP---------


Jigar was quizzed on Anita's death but he failed to provide the investigators with any substantial info. All he said was that the brutal murder shocked him. He confessed that his heart was never ready to accept that Anita has replaced Gopi in his bhai's life.

Chirag couldn't provide any valuable information. Hetal, who had meanwhile calmed down kept repeating- "Hey bhagwaan why did a murder take place in our house". One word with Hetal and the investigator had no doubts about her mental capacity. He decided to quiz Rashi next.

Rashi was terror stricken. She looked so pale that the inspector felt that she could faint any moment. Rashi's elegant yellow sari had some stains on them which immediately caught the cop's attention. Rashi became conscious and tried covering it with her pallu...her actions made the inspector more suspicious and he asked a female constable to come to MM. 

Rashi was aghast--she knew that something is up...she asked " Aapne lady constable ko kyun bhulaya".

The inspector didn't bother to reply. Instead he asked her about the brown stain on her sari...Rashi quickly replied that she got it while working in the kitchen.

"I..I..I..didn't kill her...please believe me..I felt insecure about my position in the house and fought with her because of that...but I never thought about killing her"

The investigator said- "Oh! so you killed her without thinking? So it wasn't a premeditated murder?  The lady constable will take you into the room and you have to change your sari and handover the one you are wearing now...it will be sent for forensic analysis.

The inspector extracted further information on Gopi-Ahem-Anita relationship from her and made a mental note about meeting Gopi to listen to her version of things at MM. He noted down Gopi's address in his pad.

Rashi started crying as the lady constable arrived.

It was Ahem's turn next-

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Longer and quicker updates pl. This has me hooked. Love the line about hetal s mind ROFL pl update soon and yes pv rocks!

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Superb update... waiting for more more and more!!!!!!!!!! 

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vibz88

Longer and quicker updates pl. This has me hooked. Love the line about hetal s mind ROFL pl update soon and yes pv rocks!

Sure ..will update soon.

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Loved this Vidisha. Can't wait for the next update.

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w8ing for next update soon!!!
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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 6:27am | IP Logged
interesting

what if AHem is revealed to be a wife man-handler: wife beater . . .

it seems marriage gets the worst out of him and he has a tendency to take over a year to realise the nature of who he is married to. .

IT WAS AHEM :: fingers pointing now lOL

(I can just imaginve the look on his face in sucha situationj:::: Look: Up, Down, Left Right, Roll eyes, and say "Wooo" ...  Eyes now crossed OUT: DUmbfounded yet again

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