Hello guys, thank you for liking my work.. I'm updating Part 2.. I will be away for a few days.. So won't be able to post the next part until the weekend.. Hope you guys like this part.. It will have a few new characters.. and a surprise character as well.. Do remember, this is Virman's story and the rest are only supporting characters..
Mansion, Chandigarh. Present!
ji, aap please baat karke dekhiye na.. Main jaanti hoon ki Buaji ab tak Maanvi
se naraaz hain.. Aur main apni Mannu ko bhi achhi tarah se jaanti hoon, who dobara
ab yahaan kabhi nahi aayegi.. Lekin main kya karun, mera bohot mann kar raha
hai use milne ka.. Kal woh char mahinon baad wapas ghar aa rahi hai.. Kal
humari shaadi ki anniversary hai.. Lekin meri bebasi toh dekhiye, ki meri
khushi baantne ke liye meri Mannu, meri apni sagi behen hi yahaan nahi hogi..",
Jeevika said and sat down on the bed sobbing uncontrollably. Viren put his arms
around her and tried consoling her. Viren:
"Jeevika main jaanta hoon ki Maanvi ke kya maaine hai tumhari zindagi
mein, lekin main bhi majboor hoon.. Pichle dinon iss ghar mein jo kuch bhi hua
hai, uske baad mujhe lagta hai ki yeh Maanvi aur hum sab ke liye achha hi hoga
ki who yahaan na aaye.. Lekin tum chinta mat karo. Humari anniversary party ke agle
hi din main tumhe Hrishikesh le jaunga.. Phir tum Maanvi se mil lena aur usse
jee bharke pyaar bhi kar lena.. Please Jeevika, samajhneki koshish karo.. Issi
mein sabki bhalai hai..",Viren hugged his wife dearly and let her cry her heart
out.. A pair of eyes watched their interaction from the door and ran to another
bedroom in the huge Vadhera Mansion..
ran into Virat's room, who was in the shower.. "Virat Bhaiya..Virat Bhaiya..
jaldi bahar aao.. "Hello Mummy, main Virat Bhaiya ke kamre mein hoon..Aap jaldi
se upar aa jaiye". Kadambari excused herself from the dining table and slowly
made her way into Virat's room.. "Kya hai, Shloku? Chilla kyun raha hai?"..
Just then, Virat emerged from the bathroom with a towel around his neck,"Haan
Champ, chilla kyu rahe ho? Ghar mein aag-vaag lag gayi hai kya?".. Arre nahi
Bhaiya, aapko humara secret mission toh yaad hai na.. Ussi ke baare mein kuch
khabar leke aaya hoon.. Both Kadambari and Virat looked at each other and Virat
spoke first, "Kya hai, jaldi bolo." And he recited all of Viren-Jeevika's
conversation.. It was Kadambari who spoke now, "Dekha Virat, tumara shak sahi
nikla.. Mujhe bhi pehle se hi doubt tha ki jaroor Swamini Didi aur Maanvi ke
beech koi baat hai.. Arre warna bhala Maanvi Jeevika se, hum sab se itne din
miley bina thodi rehti.." But he seemed to be in his own world.. He had felt it
for a while now.. 'Mujhe toh pehle se hi shak tha.. Lekin itni badi baat
Maanvi ne mujhse kyun chupa ke rakhi? Aur phir usne mere calls aur messages ka
bhi reply karna band kar diya.. Yahaan tak ki jab main Hrishikesh usse milne
gaya, tab mujhse kaha gaya ki woh apne Mamaji ke ghar gayi hui hai.. Aakhir chakkar
kya hai?? Ho na ho Bhai ko iss ke baare mein jaroor pata hota.. Lekin kya who meri
help karenge??'.. "Haan Chachi, ab waqt aa gaya hai ki hum sachhai ka pata
lagaye.. Lekin kaise? Aisa kaun hai jo humari madat kar sakta hai.. Iss ghar
mein toh jaise Maanvi ka naam lena bhi gunaah ban gaya hai.. Bhai bhi Maanvi ke
topic ko lekar thode jyada hi sensitive ho gaye hai.. Ab humari help karega
kaun??".. "Oye fikar not Virat, mujhe tujhpe poora bharosa hai.. Tussi to tope
ho..Iss parivaar ki hope ho.. Hum milke koi na koi raasta nikal hi lenge.. Aur
waise, tum bhi toh Maanvi ko kitna miss kar rahe honge na.. Humesha mere
Shahrukh-Kajol ke tarah ladte-jhagadte rehte thei na tum.. Chal oye, ab isse pehle
ghar mein kisi ko humpe shaq ho, humein chalna chahiye", saying so Kadambari
and Shlok tiptoed out of his room unaware of the fact that Virat hadn't paid
attention to her at all.. He was engrossed in his own thoughts..Kahaan ho
yaar Partner.. Aisa bhi kya ho gaya ki tumne in char mahinon mein ek baar bhi
mujhse baat karne ki koshish ki.. Ab main tumhe dhoondhu toh dhoondhu kahaan?
Kisi se kuch keh bhi toh nahi sakta.. Kahaan ho Partner??"
"Maanvi Didi utho..Chai peelo..bohot achhi hai..maine toh 5
cup peeli.. and chata cup hai.. Utho na Maanvi Di!!", Dabbu finally yelled into
her ears to wake her up. He'd been trying for the last one hour but Maanvi
seemed to be dreaming about something and she had a sweet smile on her face.
She jerked and sat up, "Kaun..Kaun hai??" "Maanvi Di, aapki
chai..kabse utha raha hoon aapko.. Beeji ka teen baar phone bhi aake gaya..", Dabbu
said while gulping down the 6th cup of tea. "Oye Dabbe, kya hai,
kyun bina vibration ki ringtone ki tarah baj raha hai.. haan? Uth rahi hoon
na..main koi Kumbhakaran ki aulad toh hoon nahi.. aur yeh kya, tune saare
biscuits aur chips kha liye.. Ab main kya khau, tera sar.. Kitni baar bola
hai.. thoda kam khaya kar..dharti pe bojh badh gaya hai..", Maanvi said while
rubbing her eyes.. She shut her eyes, folded her hands, looked upwards and
muttered a prayer, 'Bhagwanji, aaj ke din ki shuruat to maine is Dabbe pe
chillake kar di.. Maaf kar dena.. Ab bass aaj ke din mein aur koi gadbad mat
hone dena.. Waise mujhe badi ajeeb si feeling ho rahi hai.. ki aap ne meri band
bajane ki planning kar rahe ho.. Koi baat nahi, dekh lenge.. Aakhir main bhi
Maanvi hoon, kissi se nahi darti..'
They spent the entire morning chatting, playing cards and
annoying the hell out of each other. Suddenly there was some commotion and the
train came to a halt. "Arre Maanvi Di, yeh train kyu ruk gayi? Kahin kisi ne
hijack toh nahi karli na?", Dabbu said while biting his nails.. "Oye chup oye Dabbu,
aisa kuch nahi hai.. tu ruk main abhi dekhkar aati hoon. Iss mui train ko ab
kya hua?", and walked into the next compartment to check what was wrong with
the train. She came across an elderly lady who was trying to get up from her
seat unaware of the seat-belt that was dangerously hanging above her head..
Maanvi ran towards the lady, "Arre Auntyji rukiye.. upar dekhiye.. Sambhalke,
abhi aapko lag jaati na.." The lady was shocked at first to be pulled by an
unknown girl..Finally, after seating herself on her seat, "Arre thank you soo
much beta, mera toh dhyaan hi nahi tha.. darasal who main apne bte ko dekh
rahi thi.. Bass abhi station par paani lene ke liye utra hai.. Thank you soo
much.." Maanvi seemed to like the lady.."Arre nahi nahi Auntyji, aap thank you
kyun bol rahi hain..Its okay.. woh toh maine dekha ki aapko lag jaati isliye
bhagkar aa gayi.. Waise kya aapko pata hai yeh train yahaan achanak kyun ruki
hai.. Matlab yeh toh koi bada station bhi nahi hai..Phir bhi??"..
talking when a man in his fifties came up walking to them, placed a hand on the
lady's shoulder and said, "Arre Gayatriji, aap kyun fikar karti hain, aapka
beta bass paani lene ke liye utra hai.. Kho nahi jayega.." The lady turned
around and said, "Arre aap aa gaye.. Prem kahaan hai? Bhagwan bhala kare iss
ladki ka jisne sahi samay pe aake meri madat kar di aur mujhe chot lagne se
bacha liya.." Turning towards Maanvi, she asked, "Waise beta, tumhara naam kya
hai? Aur tum akeli travel kar rahi ho? Kahaan jaa rahi ho?".. Maanvi really
liked the sweet lady.. She smiled and said, "Auntyji mera naam Maanvi Chaudhry
hai.. Main apne chote bhai ke saath Hrishikesh jaa rahi hoon, apne ghar.." The
lady's husband interrupted and said, "Arre waah bte, hum bhi Hrishikesh jaa
rahein hai..Mera naam Lalit Singhania hai..".. "Namaste Uncleji..waise yeh
bahar shor kyun ho raha hai?".. And she was accidently pushed by Dabbu who was
panting, "Arre Maanvi Di, main aapko kabse dhoondh raha hoon.. Mujhe laga kahin
aap station par utar gayi aur train chal di to main kya karunga.. Beeji ko kya
muh dikhaunga?".. She got irritated and forgot that she was in the company of 2
strangers.. She turned towards Dabbu, held his collar and said, "Oye tujhe kya
main DDLJ ki Kajol lagti hoon, jo station par utar jaungi aur phir train ke
peeche bhagungi.. Bada aaya Beeji ko muh dikhanewala.. bodyguard hai tu mera??"..
The couple were staring at this weird girl in front of them.. And finally when
they thought that Maanvi might get violent, the lady interrupted and said, "Arre
arre beta, koi baat nahi, tumhari Didi humare saath baat kar rahi thi..yahaan
aao humare saath baith jao.."
Mr. Singhania moved away and answered his
phone.., "Kya, yeh toh bohot bura hua.. Ab humein yahiin se taxi leni hogi..
Theek hai, tum wahiin ruko aur taxi ka intezaam karo, main tumhari Ma ko lekar
abhi aata hoon..".. He turned his wife and said, "Gayatriji, woh aage kuch
problem ho gayi hai.. Kuch logon ne train rok di hai aur pata nahi ab kab chal
padegi.. Issliye accha hoga ki hum by road hi Hrishikesh ke liye nikal
jaayein.. Yahiin kuch 4-5 ghanton ka safar hoga".. Before his wife could even
express her consent, he heard a dramatic voice.. "Oh terri, ab kya hoga.. Hum
ghar kaise jayenge Dabbe..In vahiyaat logon ko bhi abhi train rokni thi.. Koi
kaam-dhaam toh hoga nahi na inko.. Socha hoga chalo aaj Maanvi ka jeena thoda
haraam kar diya jaaye!! Uff..".. She was interrupted by the lady who offered
her a lift upto Hrishikesh, "Arre beta, tum dono bhi humare saath chalo na..
Hum bhi toh Hrishikesh hi jaa rahein hai.. Tumhe tumhare ghar tak chod denge.."
"Haan ye theek hai Auntyji, kyun Maanvi Di chaliye na.. aap soch kya rahi hai?".
A few minutes later, Maanvi and Dabbu were seen walking out
of the station with their luggage along with Mr. and Mrs. Singhania..
Maanvi was as usual busy fighting and bickering with Dabbu and tripped over a stone.. She was just about to fall and land on the ground, when she felt herself supported by someone's arms.. Her Dupatta went flying on the person's face.. And then she saw him..
Surprise.. Surprise.. Time to introduce new characters..
Mr. and Mrs. Singhania
And now the parallel lead of my story, Tada..tada...
Mr. Prem Singhania
There goes part 2. Hope you guys like it.. This part has got less of Virman as well.. But trust me, the story has taken a huge leap.. More revealations on the past in the next part.. Pakka..
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Edited by mohabbatgirl - 16 May 2012 at 5:04am