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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
EmbarrassedTHE FIRST RAIN

Suddenly it started raining...she was sitting in her car...strange kind of sadness n lonliness was surrounding her...she was in deep pain...no, nothing wrong n her love life...name,fame,money,friends,loveable family and a supportive bf...she had all...but...yes,there's a big but..!!! ...inspite of all this she was lonely...there was a hollowness inside her...like something precious was missing...she loved rain..and today it was the first rain of the monsoon...n rain droplets kissing the ground..looked divine as always...but...she left a deep sigh...it wsn't reaching her heart...the ethereal smell..the droplets..the entire beauty gave her immence pain instead of pleasure...it reminded her of something...perhaps someone...dear to her...and suddenly her eyes caught the sight of a tall handsome figure standing afar..nd  her heart overcame with agony..she looked away nd drove away...leaving the blue-eyed figure standing...getting drenched in the first rain...

Guys this is going to b a joint ss written by me and abhiora aka tora and my first ss as well...this is my very first attempt on writng sumthng abut our most sweetest couple abhiya..so guys plzz tell us wether we should continue this ss or nt..and plzz press the like button if u lyk...awaitng ur responce...Smile
and special thanks to ayesha,tanzie..they have been a great inspiration to meEmbarrassed

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 For chapter Index please scroll down. Smile


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res!!
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finally u strtd:-)congo shongo..great start:-)nd u 4gt 2 mention da the whole idea is urs:-)i applied no brains!!
nd yay'!!!me first!!ugh'!!i want 2 write mre bt handicappd by my cell!!

Edited by abhiora - 13 April 2012 at 1:22pm

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Chapter INDEX-

An Abhiya Joint SS- The First Rain
(written by Tora & Indu)

Link to Book 2-


BOOK 1-
Prologue- Pg 1

Character Sketch-

Chapter 1- Remembering The Past 

Chapter 2- Echoes Of Joy And Tears

Chapter 3- Hidden Emotions

Chapter 4- So Near Yet So Far

Chapter 5- Good Old Memories

Chapter 6- Rekindling Relations

Chapter 7- A Night To Remember(part-1) 

Chapter 7- A Night To Remember(part-2)

Chapter 8- Closer Together 

Chapter 9- Moving Towards Light (part-1)

Chapter 9-Moving Towards Light(part-2)

Chapter 10-Unknown feelings-Unspoken words

Chapter 11-Phone calls and Sweet talks

Chapter 12- Just You & Me-(part-1)

Chapter 12- Just You & Me-(part-2)

Chapter-13-The Aftermath

Chapter-14- Facades and Masquerades

My Other Works -

Abhiya FF's -

My First FF : The First Rain
[written  jointly with tora aka tora.tangled] Ongoing

My Second FF : When Both Worlds Collide
[written jointly with tora aka tora.tangled] Ongoing
 


My Fourth FF : Tell Me your Dreams
[Jointly written with Mansa Aka Mandy] Currently on hold


Fifth FF : Where Your Road Leads
[Writer tora-Concept by Me] Currently on hold


~~My Solo Works~~

Abhiya One Shots

First OS-The journey of a lifetime

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3246163

Second OS-I am with you forever

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3258523

Third OS- Show me the Light

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3486664&PID=78262806&#78262806

Fourth OS - And i feel scared

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3534613

Fifth OS -"Was it raindrops or i just heard my heart beating ?"

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3595079

Sequel to the Fifth OS- 'I Accept i do Love You!'

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3626503






Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 23 February 2014 at 10:25am

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yes of course u shud continue nd plz add me to ur pm list...

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wow nice start pls add me pm list and continue soon!!Big smile

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 its  awesome  continue it soon
loved it
please pm me  when you update.

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Gr8 start Indu Clap Loved it Smile Good to know u n Tora r coming up with an SS. Title sounds good too. Waiting for character sketch n 1st chap n plz no sad track for Abhiya plz Cry

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Originally posted by abhiora

res!!
'edited'
finally u strtd:-)congo shongo..great start:-)nd u 4gt 2 mention da the whole idea is urs:-)i applied no brains!!
nd yay'!!!me first!!ugh'!!i want 2 write mre bt handicappd by my cell!!
it dsnt matter whz idea is it dear..coz u hav equal contribution in it...nd.i wud hav never been able to do this alone!!!Embarrassed 

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