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Barsaat-Angad,Garv,Kripa,Kumud (Page 5)

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Posted: 31 May 2006 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
GREAT PART YAAR! u have to cont soon! its so cute how garv likes kumud!

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 May 2006 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Prithvi & kripa in the car.P is driving.K's eyes r on P.
P:why r u looking at me like this?
K is shy:how cum u no that?u were driving
P:ya,I'm driving.but my eyes r also on u
Both laugh.
K:I missed u very much wen there was rain.all the lovers of college were dancing 2gether
P smiles & holds her arm:tho there is no rain now,we can dance as rain is not needed 4 lovers 2 dance
P stops the car.P-K cum out
P takes her in his arms
K:prithvi,u r naughty
P:how can't I b naughty with my naughty gf
Both laugh.They sing & dance with a sweet romantic jo dil hai..{barsaat}
Then they get inside the car.P:how was it?
K:it was cool.i realy enjoyed it
P smiles.    K:2morrow is our prom nite
P:wow!   K:but I don't want 2 go
P:why?how can u miss such a thrilling nite?
K:u r not there,then why shud I?I'l b chosen 2 hav another stupid partner
P:cum on kripa.don't b silly.partner 4 1 day is ok.he's not going 2 b ur partner 4ever.I'l b ur life partner
K smiles.

Angad thinks lying on the bed:kripa,2morrow I'l b ur partner.i'l b ur partner 4 the whole life

Next day,Angad wears white shirt,black ant & overcoat.
A looks at the mirror:u luk hot gorgeous.kripa wil b impressed
HE hears a voice from behind:I'm already impressed
He turns back & is surprised 2 see K there with a smile.She has worn a tight glittering white frock.K cums closer 2 him & her fingers go thru his face.A is excited.A closes his eyes.then opens.K is vanished.
A:where is kripa?she has gone.oh!it was only my illusion
A feels embarrassed.

then he goes 2 garv's house.G is not ready yet
A:u did'nt get ready?
G:actually I'm confused what 2 wear
A:but I'm not confused.i no what suits u

G is dressing inside the room.A is waiting outside.G cums out.
A:wow!I just cant believe this.u r much hotter than we students
G smiles:Angad,ur complement is too much
A:no sir.i'm absolutely right.otherwise also,girls r crazy abt u.u cant count the no:of the female students who r mad abt many luv letters u've got from u.u r really hot.that's why,girls r not missing ur class.i wish I get ur glamour.then my luv wil also b fulfilled
G:ur luv?kripa?
A is speechless. G:I no that.during class,u never listen,but always observe kripa
A smiles:why shud I hide from a friendly sir like u?u r right.anyways,2day all the girls wil fall 4 u again neglecting young hotties like us
G smiles: but the girl whom I luv …
A:so finally u admitted that u r in luv
G is shy. A:ur luv wil b fulfilled soon.i've felt that kumud likes u very much.but it'l take sum time 4 her 2 admit it as she is always dreaming abt her studies
G smiles
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Fantastic! Big smile
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 June 2006 at 3:06am | IP Logged
Great part! Big smile Tongue
muqualp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 June 2006 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
great part jasmine! cont soon!
~aashka~rocks~ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 June 2006 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
awesome parts!
i wonder if kumud will actually start to like garv!
i dont mind her with angad but she also looks nice with garv!
cant wait for the next part!
cont soon!

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