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After
her break-up with Sid, I was having my friend back to myself and I
tried my best to not to arise any questions about that jerk infront of
her...she was down for some days, though she will try to look as normal
as she was, but sometimes I really saw her pulling herself from
everyone.
During
a conversation, she would get quiet after sometime or would excuse
herself from others...In home, she would prefer to stay as much as in
her room...making an excuse of her studies as she could...No one
noticed that changed behavior of her as much as I did but I knew that
she is a strong girl...and she will cop up with that with time.
Leaving
a relation behind is not easy seriously and we shouldn't expect her to
be all chirpy and jumpy the next day...but it felt bad that my best
friend was going through this phase...bearing the pain of a broken
relationship when she had not played a part to its end...Relationships
are not a JOKE for her...
Time
was passing by and it was almost a year now...It was last day of my
final exam when we all students came out and throw the plain sheet up
in the air as an indication of celebration but later our eyes get moist
too realizing that this was the last day of our student life. After
this there will be no more roaming around in the college...no more fun
in bunking the class or fights with the rivals...no more games to play
in which we would feel proud in representing our college...a new team
will form replacing ours...but all that's is a part of life I guess.
We
all final year friends made a plan to go out tonight just to celebrate
this day and get back to our home. Suhana was all quiet during the
ride but thinking that its just one of her mood swings, I didn't bother
her much...
After
freshen up, we both get into the lounge and took seats on the couch
and started watching TV when after a while, my phone buzzed. My
heart-beat faster as i know its the time and pick up the call.
"Congrats Ishaan" My mother's chirpy voice ring in my ears.
"Thanks Mom" I said half-heartedly...
"I
can't wait to see you beta...Its been four years that you shifted to
Delhi to complete your education in your desired institute...But now
its enough, I want you back home as soon as possible" My mom said with
a warning and I felt my heart feeling low...
"Yeah
mom...I will be back home after two weeks" I replied and then my gaze
turned to Suhana who was looking at me with wide open eyes...surly
thats an expected reaction as I have not told her about this
before...as I was too busy with the studies...
"Two weeks Ishaan??? Why don't you come back in 2 days?" Now she was giving me an anxious attack.
"I
can't Mom...I have to fulfill some of the formalities in the
college...and also have to found a house-mate for Suhana as she still
has a year before she will be done with her studies...and here i can't
leave her alone just like this" I was explaining my condition to Mom
and Suhana at the same time...and Both were tongue-tide with this
"Oh...yeah
you should find someone realiable that can stay with Suhana...anyways,
as soon as you are done with all this...I want you back home the very
next day...Ok??" Mom asked for a promise and I have to give her
"OK mom...you take care...Say hi to Dad, Romit and Rashi..." My young siblings...
"Yeah...You
too take care and say Hi to Suhana and tell her that she should also
visit us with you...Its been ages She came over to stay with us..." And
i really like this idea...Suhana and Rashi are of same age and were
friends right from the start...but I barely used to talk to her at that
time...I used to feel awkward...Suhana is the daughter of my father's
best friend and Suhana and Rashi went to the same schools and college
till she too decided to do her bachelors and masters here from
Delhi...and her father asked me if she could stay with me as she don't
know anyone here and its not safe for a girl to be in a different city
on her own. I used to stay in a single bedroom apartment at that time,
but for her, I got this two-bed apartment and from then...This was our
apartment...and she became my house-mate before she become my friend.
As i lean back on the sofa with a sigh...Suhana's soft whisper reach my ears...
"You
are leaving in two weeks???" sadness was evident from her tone as her
gaze were still fixed on the TV infront and her fingers popped a
popcorn in her mouth. I felt a lump in my throat. Being with her,
staying with her, liking her...then loving her...I am so full of her
now that I never give this idea a thought that i would eventually have
to leave before her.
"Haan..." I replied with a heavy heart.
Her
hands stopped there moment. Her lashes lifts up and she turn her face
to look at me. Her gaze was piercing my heart, making me feel bleeding
inside. OH this is gonna be hard...more hard than i can take.
She
keep looking at me for sometimes and then turn her face and started
looking away...In a way so that she could hide her silent tears from
me...but she should know...That I am as close to her heart, as anything
else...I don't need to look at her face to say that she was
crying...That's how much I love her...
We
stayed that way for sometime before she left to the kitchen making an
excuse that she need a coffee...holding my head in one hand, I was
feeling crushed. I know she is getting hurt but I couldn't make out
anything from her actions. She is just sad that she is gonna miss her
friend...that's all i can thought of...but what about my heart...that
heart which from the last one and a half years was just beating while
seeing her innocent face, hearing her lively voice, touching her soft
skin, even feeling her fragrance and aroma in the air around me was
enough to put my heart at peace...But now, as i have to go back to my
world...I don't know how am i ever gonna manage that.
Till evening, She keep avoiding me, staying and talking to me as less as possible and then rushed in to get ready.
I
too took a shower and wore my black jeans with a black coat above and
a blue shirt underneath. Slightly giving a shape to my hairs, I applied
a little perfume...CH...that was gifted by the last on recent
friendship day...Till the time, I came out in the living room, she was
too standing there totally dresses in a beautiful wrap around
sleeveless turquoise knee length dress that left her smooth legs bare.
The minimum amount of make-up was as always making her more beautiful
and matching accessories were gracefully dangling in her hands and ears
leaving her neck bare. She is an epitome of beauty.
But
the thing that surprised me the most was that she was ready in a
record time as like typical girls, she too had a habit to say 5 MIN
MORE Ishaan from behind the door while I would beat it so hard that it
would literally shook. But seeing her face i know what's going on here.
A smile was placed on her lips but her eyes truly show the reality of
her condition. Sad, depressed, alone.
"Acchi
lag rahi hoo..." I said tucking my hands in the pockets of my jeans
with a small smile just to lighten up the mood...And as expected, she
gave me a side-looped smile and grin.
"Ishaan Kashyap, Kissi larki ki tareef kare...now how does this happen? Its surly a news" And chuckling, I moved forward and took her in a side bear hug.
"Ishaan Kashyap kabhi apne dostoon ki tareef karne se peeche nahin hat-ta...because they are my friends, and they are priceless" She looked up at me with s smile.
"Aur best friend ke bare main kia?" She asked being cheeky again
"Hmmm"
I started looking around with a thoughtful expression and seeing me
taking too much time with the answer, her mouth wide opened and next
instant, she hit my chest and pushed me away...
"Ishaan Kashyap...You are a looser" She said and rushed to the door in quick steps and laughing, I followed her behind.
The
whole party was fun...It was nicely arranged in a bar but me and
Suhana avoided the drinks. Hard Drinks are just not for us...but
someone had put a prank and added a lil alcohol in Suhana's cola. She
was OK till sometime but later started feeling dizzy.
Her hand gripped my arm for support that caught my attention and seeing her uneven body, I was shocked...
"Suhana"
Quickly getting hold of her, I provided some support with my one arm
around her waist...while other came up to pat her now sweaty face.
"Tum theek hoo...Suhana..." I again pat her face as she hold her head in her hands
"Ishaan...Mujhe...Mujhe chakar se aa
rahay hain" feeling sweaty out from my wits, I helped her get to a
corner and made her sit on a couch. My gang was there in few moments
and later they got that it was Sid who planned all this
"Aik kali ankh kafi nahin thi
kia k jo abh apna chehra bigarwana chahta hai..." Anger took a toll on
me but right now, the most important thing for me was to take Suhana
back home...
With the help of my friends I made her sit in the car and took her home...
After
carefully helping her lay on her bed, I put covers on her still dizzy
body...she was mummbling and blabbering something and everything the
whole way and now too...She is a hand full... sighing, i rushed my
fingers through my hairs and turned around to go when a hand grab mine
and pulled me in...It was the greatest shock of my life...
I barely got time to react when I felt Suhana snuggling up to me while putting her head on my chest...
"Ishaan"
She took my name in her slurred voice...my hands were still in the air
as my brain was still deciding how to make them react at this moment
when my heart beat them all and pushed me to put my hands around her...
May
be I will never get a chance to hold her that close ever...was a
statement that my heart thought off but right then, my slow brain
jerked me up saying...Don't take advantage of her situation...
But was that Me who started all this Cozy Cozy moment...
Feeling
her presence beside me fill my heart with contentment...If that's the
only moment , i will ever cherish of me with her then i want that to be
stretched out as much as it could.
Her fingers were drawing circles on my shirt. Her eyes were closed. Her breath was ragged.
"Ishaan" she again took my name and I should admit that now...I love the way she take my name...
"Ishaan" this time she actually shook me with her hands, taking my name a lil loudly
"Hmmm..." I made a sound of acknowledgment
"Tum ja rahay hoo..." the pain behind those words were hearable
"Jana hoga Suhana..." I said after a moment...
"Par tum mujhe aise
akele chor k kaise ja chahte hoo...Am I that bad to live with?" Her
voice was teary. Her eyes look up at my face with a pout on her
lips...She is adorable...
"You
are not bad Suhana...Not at all" I softly moved my fingers to cup her
face... Of i could...just if i could be that blessed man you wanna live
with...I would never have left you for a single day...I thought and
shook my head feeling her gaze still fixed on mine...
"Mom Dad mera intezar kar rahay hain Suhana...Mujhe abh Dad k business main unh ki help karni hogi" I explained but that pout was still there...
"Will you miss me??" Tears were now visible in her eyes
"Too much...mujhe apni best friend k saath rehne ki adaat jo ho gaye hai...abh jab koi mujhe subah jaganay wala nahin hoga...mujhse larne wala nahin hoga...mujhe sunanane wala nahin hoga...tau main kaise rahoon ga? haan???"
I said trying to hide my smile...she looked at me with a sad face and
then frown as i think, my words got registered in her mind in a slow
pace
"kia...main
bus tumhain dant-ti or tumse larti hoon...iss liye tum mujhe miss karo
gay" I giggled as she tried to push me away..."Go away Kashyap" but i kept my grip tight around her and pulled her more closer...
"Suhana...us daant or laraiye k peeche chupi care ko miss karoon ga na main yaar..." And she just hold my shirt tightly, again putting her head on my chest
"I
will miss you Ishaan..." She said once in a slow voice...and then
again and again...My heart was feeling jumpy just thinking that she
will miss me...and soon I heard a small snoring voice and God...she was
sleeping on my chest...
I didn't have the heart to push her away right now...but I have to do that
"In
sometime" I told myself and my eyes fixed on her angelic face which
was just few inches away from mine and i caressed her hairs with my
fingers...Not remembering exactly when I went to sleep
My eyes flutter and I tried to adjust them to the beams of the sun peeping in the room through the window.
Rubbing
my eyes, I tried to move up still droopy only to felt a little weight
on my chest that stopped me to move. I look down quite observant now
and saw her sleeping on my chest, just like the way just went to sleep
hugging me last night...A small smile played on my lips
Well
If I have to leave, I will surly gonna cherish this night...I keep
looking at her for sometime, absorbing her serene beauty, imprinting
that into my mind...when a thought stroke my brain
"What will she think if she wake up just now...Wo hoosh main nahin thi likin main tau tha na...kia wo iss ka kuch galat matlab nikalay gi??? Or kia iss baat se hamari dosti pe farak par sakta
hain..." These thoughts make me feel vomited...I don't wanna bring any
other awkward moment in our friendship...so carefully, I lift her face
up and moved my body away from under her and making her lay...I got up
from the bed, and giving her a last look...left her room...
Thankfully she didn't ask about that when she came out from the room after freshnen
up and saying me good morning, went to kitchen to make
breakfast...Seriously, I was seated with a batted heart flipping
through the channels till she was in the room...but feeling no change
in her tone, I felt relaxed...But my mind was now working in another
direction...
The
way she break-down last night...was that NORMAL...like a friend
reaction who is about to loose her friend...but then she isn't...its
just the matter of a year and then would be back to Dehradun, Our hometown. I will be there and we will be friends once again.
But
If it was a reaction that was for someone other than a friend...and
IF, she is confused, I am gonna give it a try...I am gonna push her for
once...For once to think about me in the way I think about her...and
even if she is not confused...I have to do that just in a way that I
willn't loose my friendship or her...And I had a plan...
She found me with a grin face when she came out to call me for breakfast...I looked up at her...and thought...
Surly, Loosing her isn't even a option here...
Two
days later...we all friends went to college to get some of our
documents...Sid was now having two black eyes instead of one and all
thanx to my superb mates...I didn't even have to touch a finger to
him...God!!! Life is gonna be boring without my friends...We planned to
go out to beach for the last time as a group...And this was the chance
for me to give it a last chance...
I
pulled Pooja out from the group and tell her my plan...after a few
bribes, she finally agreed but we both barely got a chance to implement
it when we get to beach...But seems like, luck was on my side...
On
our way back, we all stopped on a fast food resturant to have some
snacks...We guys placed the orders while girls went inside the ladies
room to fresh up there ruined faces from the beach. I placed my order
and just got to a side when my phone buzzed...Seeing Pooja's name...I
quickly excused myself from my group and get out to a quiet corner
taking fast steps without saying a word...
"Its so sad na Suhana...hamara group abh khatam ho jaye ga" Pooja was saying to Suhana on the otherside of the line...I think she had hide her mobile somewhere
"Yup...I am gonna miss this fun" Suhana replied...
"Me too" Pooja answered... "Patah nahin sub kahan kahan chalay jayein gay...apnay careers k chakar main...But tum or Ishaan tau saath hogay na agay bhi...tum donon best friends tau agay bhi best friends he raho gay na"
My heart was beating furiously hearing this conversation...
"Patah nahin
Pooja...We were hardly friends before I came to delhi..." Suhana
replied. My heart melted with her tone...If only i had known how
blissful this friendship was back then...we would have been friends
from the start...
"Really...That's a news...tum donon ko saath dekh k tau lagta hai k patah nahin kab se aik doosre k saath hoo" Pooja said in a wondering voice...
Suhana kept quiet in answer...well Pooja again started
"Waise Suhana...aik baat poochon...mind tau nahi karo ge na??"
"Nahi..."
"Ummm...Kia
tumne kabhi Ishaan k bare main romantically feel kia hai??..." Pooja
stopped...I think, must be Suhana's shocked face stopped her...
"Matlab kia hai iska??" Suhana's uncertain voice boomed in my ears
"I meant k Ishaan good looking hai, college ka sab se famous larka hai, sincere or helpful hai...or tau aur tumhara best friend hai...You both know eachother much better than anyone else...Tau kia tumhain kabhi ye nahin laga
k you both can get together...I mean as a couple" Oh someone need to
pump my heart as it was refusing to beat naturally...tooo anxious, tooo
excited...
"Mujhe...I mean hum sab ko lagta tha k one day you would be the star couple of our group...Tum dono aik doosre ko compliment karte hoo...Acche lagte hoo...and if I am right, I think Ishaan bhi tumhain pasand karta hai" Oh my God!!! this girl...I am gonna kill her...
I just asked her to plant a nagging thought in Suhana's mind but here, she is opening my secrets...
"He just like me as a friend Pooja...You are seeing more into the things..." Suhana replied confidently...
"May
be...May be it was just my eyes who saw and witnessed his puppy dog
face whenever you will go out with Sid...may be it was just my
imagination when I see his hurt eyes whenever you will turn around from
him and went up to greet Sid..." Pooja said that in a strong voice...
"I am too in love Suhana or mujhe yeh feeling pehchanany main dhoka nahin howa..." that was the last line I heard before the call was cut...
Back
home, she was seemed to be in deep thoughts...She gave me a look that
get me goosebumps on my body that day...Something seriously was going
on in her mind...and I was getting crazy day by day thinking of
it...hopefully Pooja words had left a mark...instead of leaving a doubt
in her mind regarding our friendship
I asked Smita to put an ad on college notice board for a female paying guest who could accompany Suhana but next day, Smita told me that that ad was torn into pieces by Suhana
When I asked her, she replied in a stern tone
"No, I don't wanna share this apartment with anyone...Yeh
hamara apartment hai and I willn't let anyone take your place till I
am here" and she rushed into her room...and that give me a lil
hope...of me and her...and our future...
One
week passed and only 4 more days were left for me to be in the same
city as her...We were having good time...She was taking her classes in
the morning and in home, to look normal, she would spend either
cooking, or watching movies with me...We would stay up till late night
and play cards or a board game while sharing some snacks...it was
fun... but still she didn't made a move...
Disappointingly, I put the thought and my feelings aside and enjoyed this flavour of my friendship...
Finally, the day came when I had to go...Half-heartedly,
I packed my bag, putting all my essentials with me...there are many
things that i couldn't take with me right now...but will come later and
collect that...It was still early in the morning as i have a train to
catch at 8 and I still have a little packing left to do...Mom asked me
last night to be prepared and put alarm so i don't miss that
train...but it was so much fun when my friends surprised me last night
and stay till late...
"Suhana...meri tickets rakh di hain na?" I asked as i put few of my books and packed my laptop in the bag...
"Ha,,,haan...wo tumahre ...bag ki front pocket main hai" her stammering voice came from my beind...My
face fell hearing her and I turned around to look at her...she was
standing in her yellow night suit...playing with her fingers
"Suhana..." I took her name and went ahead to hug her
"Kia howa??" I asked still hugging her...her arms too come around me as her nose dig into my shoulder
"How will I stay alone Ishaan...I will miss you" She said in a teary tone
"Owww...I will miss you too...or maine kaha tha k paying guest rakh letay hain" I rubbed her back to comfort her...
"Hum paying huest rakh tau letay but wo meri best friend tau na hoti na..." She replied...and she sounded too cute...
"Don't worry best friend" I break the hug but still kept her in my arms and looked at her face...
"Main beech veech main ata rahoon ga tumhain satanay..." I tried to crack a joke when a tear roll down her eyes and I again have to hug her...
"Tum mujhe station choorne nahin aa rahi" I asked but her head shook...
"Kyun??" I wanted to see her there...waving me good bye...
"Main tumhain jatay howay nahi dekh sakoon gi" She replied and my heart was swell with her words...
I bid her bye half-heartedly and left for Station with Amit...We took my luggage to the entrace when a guard ask me for my ticket and to my surprise, it was missing
"Suhana nay bola tha k us nay rakhi hai" I said checking the pockets while Amit
checked in the other bag but no use...Confused we went to ticket
counter to get another, but the whole train was already full...No
chance today...
We
come back home...The train was gone...But i need some answers
now...Suhana must be in college so I thought to get in the apartment to
wait for her...We use to hide the key under the welcome matt but it didn't work...
I turn the knob and found that open...
"Suhana is so careless...pagal..."
I mumbled and get inside only to found her curled up in the corner of a
sofa, hiding her face in between her legs, sniffing...Scared I reached
to her with quick steps and got down on my knees while putting my
hands on her...
"Suhana...Kia howa"
hearing my voice, her head jerked up and tears were rolling
down...This scene seems to familiar...just like the time I found her
when Sid broke her heart...But this time...
"Ishaan" She looked at my face and next instant hugged me tightly...
I was taken back by her reaction but hold her as she started crying badly...
"Ishaan...Please...do.o..n...don't...le...a ...ve me" She said crying...
"Suhana...Howa kia hai..." I was super confused...
"Please mujhe kabhi choor k na jana...I can't live without you" And the way she said that, I quickly withdraw her from me and cupped her face
"Kyun..." she looked at me with hollow eyes..."kyun tum mere bina nahin reh sakti??" I asked, hoping to get the reply, I so wanna wish...
"Kyun ke...Kyunki"
she started looking away from my face but this was it...Either this
moment or never...My grip around her face tightened and i made her look
at me...
"Kyunki kia???" I said in a soft lovable whisper
"I love you Ishaan" and that was IT...the moment i was waiting from so long...
"I
love you Ishaan...i love you so much" she repeated again and again...
And i smiled and moved forward to kiss her cheek...keeping my lips
lingered a lil more than needed and nuzzled her...
"I
love you too Suhana..." I replied with all the love that was stored in
my heart for her...She literally trembled feeling my breath striking
her neck and pulled away...putting a facade of anger
"Then how could you do that...how could you plan to leave me all alone here...kia yehi tumhara pyar hai...agar maine gusse main tumhari ticket phar na deen hoti tau..."
"Kia?" my shocked expression tell her than she said more than necessary as she bit her lower lip...
"Tumne meri ticket phar di??" And after a moment, she nod...
"But phir mujhe laga...k ticket pharne se kia hota hai...tum nayee ticket ley lo gay..."
"Lucky for you madam..." I replied with a naughty expression... "Poori train already fill thi"
"Lucky
for me kyun...It was your good luck...Pooja told me how you use to
roam around with a puppy look before" she avoided taking Sid
name...her hands grabbed my shirt
"I
really need to get Pooja for that..." I replied...unaware of the fact
that how close we were...her whole body was brushing against mine...her
face just a few inches away...her eyes fixed on my jaw or cheek, I
can't say but her trembling lips, surly give an indication that she was
as much aware of this situation as me...A desire burned up in my body
to feel her...to taste her...I have been practicing control from a long
time, but after her confession, Resistance is a word hard to think
The
hand which was cupping her face first, softly moved around her neck
and I pulled her a lil forward...Not knowing how she will feel about my
action, I called her name in a way of a question...
Her
eyes look up in mine momentarily before she moved forward and placed a
light peck on my lips and move back with blushed face...and that was
all the indication I needed to crush my mouth against her...I sucked
her lower lips, and Oh sweet!!! How sweet and honey coated that
tasted...My innerself
was shook with a pool of emotions as we taste each other...her lips
were as aggressive running on mine, as mine were working on her...We
tasted, nibbled and explored eachother to the extent our breath allowed
and was about to draw apart when my cell phone buzzed...
Without caring to see, who is the caller, i picked it up...allowing Suhana to get sometime to compose herself...
"Ishaan...Tum train main beth gaye?" My mom asked in a worried tone...NOW WHAT SHOULD I SAY...
"Nahin mom...I missed the train" I said, passing a look to Suhana who turn her face away blushing...
"I knew it...mujhe patah tha k aise he hoga...raat ko late soye hogay aur..."
Ok
let my mom talk and take out her anger...I missed the train but how
can I tell her that now, My life's train is back on the track of a
happy journey...
Haan, Karoon Kya Mujhe Tum Bataati Nahin Ho
Chupati Ho Mujhse Ye Tumhari Khataa Hai
Haan, Mujhe Raat Din Bas Mujhe Chahati Ho
Haan, Mujhe Raat Din Bas Mujhe Chahati Ho
Mmm Hmm Hmm
Hey Hey La La La...
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i know it was damn boring but still...I need comments even criticized ones will work...
Suhana
looked around standing in the middle of the living room, to see the
emptiness that filled her house. Just few minutes back, this house was
filled with chatters, giggles, laughs and now, just in a matter of few
seconds, this silence take place. She sigh as she sit on the sofa with
a thump. Just few days back, she was in her village, surrounded by her
friends who wouldn't leave a chance to tease her, to make her blush
with the name of her to-be spouse who was now her very own husband. She
was a girl who was looking up to her coming life with those dreams
which were extremely especial for her. That day came, when she had to
get married to the man, which was choose for her by her parents and
destiny. Her father's words still ring in her mind. "Aj kal tau accha larka milna hi itna mushkil hai...uspe itna accha parivar...Meri betiya bohut bhagoon wali hai" And she smiled. For sure, her father was so right.
She was the only daughter of Mr & Mrs Siddharth Bajpai
who were well respected in the Village. But when the villagers still
follow the old tradition to think of a girl just as a machine who was
born to give babies, nothing else and Education is strictly a No-No for
them and boys were the only one's who were preferred, she can't thank
God enough to bless her with such nice parents who love and support her
all there life. Going against the wishes of the villagers and even
there family members which also include her chachu,
they allow her to study and complete her bachelors in fine arts as per
her wish but her mother also trained her in house-hold stuff. And now,
they choosed this amazing man for whom her wishes, her dreams, her self-respect, her decision matter the most.
They have been married for a week now and was settled in Delhi city. Ishaan's
small family stayed with her for a week, making her comfortable with
the environment around while completing all the traditions. His sisters
Sanjana and Ishika accepted her as a sister and adored her as a
sister-in-law. They both took her out into the malls, cafe's, hotels to
get her accustomed with the life of a city and no matter how much she
has already read about these things in novels, magazines &
books,reading this and seeing this was completely a different
experience.
Ishaan
was driving back towards his small house after biding bye to his
family who just left back for America. He himself was a USA return and
now settled himself in Delhi as he started his own business of printing
in here. His parents themselves were back from the same village as
Suhana but later moved out from there in search of a better future and
was on a visit to the village to refresh some of old memories when they
saw her and asked her for him from her parents. He still remember how
much excited Sanjana and Ishika sounded when both of them get back from
the tour of village and filled him with her description who perticularly played the role of a guide for these NRI girls being the only girl who can speak english in the whole village. "Bhai, she was so beautiful...Awww...Mummye
and Dad too liked her" Sanjana squealed. "And Unlike other village
girls, she is well-educated and so well-mannered...am so excited just
with the thought that she can be our bhabhi" Ishika chimed in as the
both girls hug and showed Ishaan some of the pics, they took. Ishaan
felt his breath caught for a moment seeing that village beauty and
silently cursed his luck while sitting in that small room of the mud
house as why the hell he preferred to miss the tour of the village that
day. His parents came later and asked his permission that if they
could arrange his marriage and he happily agreed and till now, that was
the best decision of his life.
Ishaan
while playing with his keys, get inside the house and closing the door
turn around only to be left spell bounded. There was sitting the most
angelic face lady who's charms has work there magic on him and his
heart. She was sitting on the sofa, leaning her head at the back and
her eyes were closed. She was wearing the beautiful purple sari having
gold work on that. The light jewellery which include a pendent, he gave to her on there wedding night plus her magalsutra
were gracefully placed against her neck and light dangling gold
ear-rings were adding a finality to it. Two gold bangles in one hand
and a nice bracelet, in another. The henna print on her hand was still
visible enough to approve her as newly wedded girl. Ishaan was in daze
of her looks. "She is beautiful" he said taking a deep breath. He
hardly got any time to spend with her in last week as all the time
Sanjana and Ishika would be glued to her saying we need to show bhabhi
this, we need to take our bhabhi out for shopping. No matter how
irritating her sisters were, he loved that they accepted Suhana from
there heart.
Still Admiring her, Ishaan moved towards her when Suhana open her eyes, hearing the foot steps and get up. "App aa gaye" She said with a little nervousness. "Sub kam theek se ho gaya?"She asked as Ishaan sit on the sofa, shooing naughty thoughts from his mind.😆. "Haan sub sahi se ho gaya..." Ishaan replied in his american accent. "Main aj khanay main kia banaoon??" She asked further, still standing beside him. "Ummm"
He wasn't in mood to eat at home. Damn from a week he was planning to
take her out on dinner but someone or other would have to fulfill a
ritual or would have to need Suhana for one thing or another. But right
now, this EMPTY HOUSE, seems like heaven. "Kuch bhi...jo tumhara dil chahay"
Ishaan replied with a smile and she left for the kitchen as if just
waiting for his answer to run away. Getting into the kitchen, she took a
deep breath. "Hey baba g...janay kyun inh k saath ghar pe akele honay main kuch irsha mehsoos ho rahi hai...plz plz meri madad kariye
ga" She kissed her entwined fingers and tucking her sari's pallu in
her waist, she get on to make a meal, that will take a huge amount of
time so that can keep her occupied.😆(bechari...anticipation dekho🤣)
Ishaan
went into his room and looked around. There was placed the merciless
stupid couch that he was using in the night to sleep on from the last
one week. He knew Suhana was scared and he didn't wanna take a step
ahead till she wasn't comfortable with him. And no matter how fast he
want that awkwardness to leave the house, he wasn't given time to get
close to her. But now, its all his territory. He was just happy even
with the thought that now Suhana's
full attention will be on him. He switch on the small LCD that was
stick to the wall in his room to pass on the time till Suhana will be
done with the food.
An
hour passed on and no news from Suhana. Not a single voice. He was now
getting irritated and flipped through channels again and again, but
when that doesn't seem to satisfy him, he closed it and get up to have a
look on what's going on in the kitchen.
Suhana
was busy. Too much busy to notice Ishaan around. Two pots with closed
lids were placed on the fire and Suhana was busy in making batter for
cake, she planned to serve as dessert later on. She washed her hands
and turn towards the stove, checking in the pots. One of the two things
were done so she turn off a burner and turn the second one low and was
back to her batter, mixing it with the help of the spoon. Ishaan was
looking at her with desire. Her bare waist was now more visible the way
she tucked it. She dipped her finger in to taste the sugar and licked
it. "mmmhhh"
she moaned in pleasure and that was the last straw of patience for
Ishaan. He moved towards her with quick steps as she again dipped her
finger in batter and grab her hand just before it can reach her mouth.
Suhana looked up at him with shocked eyes. "App..." She was just able
to say that when Ishaan moved forward his face towards her finger
filled with batter and licked it, making Suhana tremble.
(OK
now jaya...your idea partner and this part is for you :P) Suhana take
a deep breath as her body tremble feeling his seductive tongue movement
on her finger. Just a touch, and she felt her legs giving away there
support. Ishaan felt the passion arising in himself and also noticed
her body shuddered with his touch. He felt her moving back taking a
slow step when his hand slowly came around her slender waist. His
fingers moved around it in there own rhythm as if playing an instrument
and settling themselves at her back pulled her to himself as her body
hit his. With the sudden moment, her silky hairs fall on his face, He
closed his eyes as he inhaled the intoxicant smell of the shampoo mixed
with the smell of her, making it more divine. Suhana's heart was beating too furiously in her throat with there closeness. Ishaan nuzzled her neck still with his closed eyes. Suhana's
eyelids too started to drop feeling his nose tracing pattern on her
long neck. His one hand was still holding her while, the other one came
around to untuck her pallu from around her waist. One soft pull and it
was out from her waist grip. She felt the soft movement of her pallu
run around her. Ishaan hand caught hold of her hand which was now
strongly tied into a fist, trying to hold back. His fingers now started
there torture out there as he softly traced her milky hand upwards
with the help of them. Suhana felt her world turn around with his
heart-touching movements. His fingers tracing her arm, his nose tracing
her neck, his body close to hers. She was feeling short of breath.
Ishaan smiled slowly as his hand came up and dropped the pallu of her
sari from her shoulder that exposed her a little. She was feeling
extremely shy and wanted to hide herself somewhere when Ishaan moved
her head up, looking straight into her eyes. His thumb traced her
shaking lips as she bit them. "Shhh" he said softly trying to stop her bitting them and as she look up at him, he close the distance between there faces.
"Ishaan..."
Ishaan felt a soft touch on his shoulder. Someone was poking him but
leaving the thought beside he didn't dare move his face aside and keep
on moving forward to capture her luscious lips in the hold of him.
Suhana looked at him with weird expression. It seems like he was having
the time of his life in his sleep. "Ishaan...Please uth
jayeie...Khana tayar hai" Suhana again said but when he didn't get up
she look at him with a confuse look and her eyes got a look of the
glass half-filled with water beside the bed. She again look back at hi,
giving a last try but when he didn't get up, she caught hold of the
glass and sprinkle few water drops on his face which wake him up. He
look around with dazed eyes and found Suhana standing infront of his
with a frowing look. "Tum wahan kia kar rahi
hoo..." He asked slowly as still he was lost in his dream. That dream
was too real to feel for him. "Matlab?" Suhana asked raising her brows.
But now he realized that it was all a dream. "Damn" he cursed under
his breath as he came to reality and shake his head. How he wished that
its all would have been real. "Khana
laga doon..." Suhana asked once gain. "haan laga doo..." Ishaan said
shooing her away and raising her shoulders, she left. Ishaan get up and
went straight to ashroom to splash some water on his face so he can
control himself. Surly the cold water provide him enough strength to
bare the torture he is having now-ad-days by seeing his sexy wife
infront of him 24/7 but still he couldn't touch her. He know she need
time and that's all can happen if she trust him enough to share herself
with him. Trust is the base of each relationship and to start this
relationship, Ishaan decided that he would start slowly.
He
took hold of the chair as Suhana served him the dinner. He said a
small thank you and tore a bite of roti and dipped it in tasty butter
chicken. "Mmm" He made a sound that truly indicated how mouth-watering
the taste was. Suddenly his own moan made him remember the dream and a
flash of Suhana moaning while licking her fingers run in his mind. He
looked up straightly at her who was chewing her food, but feeling his
gaze, look up with a tensed face. She gulped down her saliva as she
asked. "Accha nahin bana??" Her eyes
showing dismay when Ishaan got that his action give her a wrong signal.
He smiled and noded in NO.. "Bohut accha bana hai..." A sweet smile
played on her lips as she heard that and get back to chew her food with
a slight blush on her cheeks. Ishaan adored her. Simple things and
simplest gestures of LOVE. That's what she want, and that's what he is
gonna give her. After finishing up with the food, Ishaan helped her in
cleaning the table and as she washed the dishes, he helped in wiping
them. Though Suhana argue, but Ishaan was adamant. When they finished
off with the kitchen chores, Suhana was drying her hands with a towel.
"Suhana...Mere saath bahir walk pe chalo
gi..." He asked out from the blue. Suhana looked at him and seeing his
raising brows and blinking eyes, she can't help but smile. "Zaroor" and they made there way to the door.
They walk slowly, side by side. Ishaan's
hand were tuck in his pant pockets while Suhana was rubbing her hands.
The days were awfully hot in this month of April, but the nights, were
still a lil
chilly. The silence between them seems like a permanent thing hanging
and more than anything, Ishaan was not liking it at all. Her voice was
so sweet that it felt like honey dripping from her soft lips. Ishaan
don't mind hearing them each second of his coming life, If just it
means, that this awkwardness and this silence is not gonna take a place
in there life. Quite opposite to those men who complain that there
wives talk too much, rarely giving them a chance to talk, he was ready
to hear her out as more than words, he will let his actions speak his
desires. As on cue, A stone came in between her way and her heel fitted
foot turned a bit. "Owww" she stumbled and took hold of his hand for support. He looked at her quickly and supported her. "Tum theek
hoo..." his consent made her smile as she nod. Getting out from there
lane, they saw a small park filled with plants and tress. Few distant
bulb were On providing enough light for them. Few couples were out for
stride just like them. They too join them inside and take two rounds of
the park. Now a small mud hump caught her heel and she again loosed
her balance. "I think, agay se main raat ko kabhi heels pehen k na nikloon..."
Suhana mumbled feeling bad as this was the first time she was out on a
walk with her husband. She was newly wed so according to her village
rules, Girls should keep on dressing up till few days of there marriage
as a sign to show themselves newly wedded and wearing heels were a
part of it. With her constant tumbling with it, he must be thinking
what a clumsy wife he got. Ishaan smile seeing her babbling and took
hold of her hand. Suhana looked up at him as his hand entwined his
fingers with her's. "I promise, main girne
nahin doon ga" His eyes spoke the truth and she trusted him instantly.
Still holding her hand, he lead themselves back to there home.
It was the first step Ishaan took to get her comfortable with eachother. That night, though Suhana regretted when Ishaan turn to the couch with his pillow and comfortor. "App bed pe sou jayein...Main doosre room main chali
jati hoon" Suhana asked sensibly. That couch wasn't suitable enough to
sleep on and she knew, he wasn't comfortable with it. Everyone left so
they have a spare room in there home. "nahin...Tum bed pe sou...main theek
hoon" Ishaan replied. He can't bare the thought to not be even able to
stay this close to her. She was in this room, his room, their room.
This thought was enough to put him to sleep. "nahin main chali jati hoon" She took hold of her pillow when Ishaan replied in a strong voice. "Nahin, tum nahin ja rahi...Main couch pe theek hoon...or waise bhi, subah maid aye gi cleaning k liye...Humain alag alag rooms main dekhay gi tau ye sahi
nahin hai" Ishaan made up an excuse. Suhana thought over it for a
minute and nodded. Ishaan went to the couch and lay down after putting
the pillow and covered himself up, looking her way as she closed the
lights of the room and lay down. Her presence in these few days have
made a huge difference on him. Even they aren't sharing a bed, but just
the feeling that she is nearby, he can smell her in the air around
was providing calm to his jumpy heart.
Ishaan
was going to his printing press as machines were getting installed and
paint was going on. He was going to start this business on a small
level and already he had got an assignment to print pamphlets to
promote a school of one of his friend. He was happy with that and knew
that more work is gonna come his way. He has hired two-three workers
for the chores and would be back home in the evening till 5. He would
help Suhana in cooking, cleaning, maintaining the house. "Tum ghar main
reh k bore nahin ho jati?" He asked few days later. "Ho jati hoon...likin phir main yahan zyada kuch janti bhi tau nahin" She replied honestly. "Ok...Tau phir kal hum shopping pe chalain gay...Tum iss ghar ko decorate karne k liye kuch cheezain layna or saath he saath main tumhain yahan kareeb ki market bhi dikha doon ga...so agar tumhain kuch chahiye ho, or main available na hoon, tau tum ja sakti
hoo" He wanted to make her independent. She was a strong girl, he knew
that. That's why she was the only girl in her village that hold a bechelor's
degree but he don't want to let her be depending on someone, even if
its him. "OK" Suhana agreed. They just settled themselves on the sofa
when Ishaan cell rings and seeing the caller, he got a smile and pick
it up. "Hey little sis...How are you?" "Great bhai...you tell me how
are you and your married life..." Sanjana voice was naughty that made
Ishaan smirk. Before he can answer, he heard Ishika shouting in the
back. "How is bhabhi...Ask him na" He look up at Suhana who sipped the
tea and was looking at him. "Sanjana...We are fine and so our married
life...and Ishika...your bhabhi too" He said the last part a little
louder that made the girls laugh on the other side. "Great...OK, Hold
on...let me get this call on speaker" Sanjana said and for few seconds,
Ishaan just heard his sister chattering and finally Sanjana spoke.
"Yeah...Its done...So bhai, howz your work going on...settled well in delhi?"
Ishika asked this time. "Yeah Ishika...Everything going on perfect"
Ishaan replied. "But bhai, it is not like that you are giving all the
time to your work, making bhabhi get bored in the house all
alone...right?" Sanjana consent for her bhabhi really made Ishaan
happy. Just few days they spend together, and all right now they are
thinking about is that there brother is not ignoring there bhabhi.
"Yeah yeah Sanjana...it is not like that...Come on, you can confirm
this from your bhabhi" He said sweetly as bhabhi word sounds so sweet
to him hearing it from his sisters. Ishaan handover the phone to
Suhana, who take it with a warm smile and get on. "Hello" She said and
them for a moment, she felt like a bomb explode in her ear as she
pulled the phone a little away from her ear as the girls squeal "Hey
bhabhi...How are you? howz your life...You feeling OK...you settled
well in the city?" They both started on with these question that made
Suhana laugh and that was the first time, Ishaan saw her laughing from
her heart. What a beautiful sight. He thought sipping his tea and
looking at her from above the rim of his cup. "Hold on...1st, I am
fine...2nd life is great...3rd...??" Shethought
what the 3rd question was but leave it. "Never mind, I loved this city
and we are well settled now..." Ishika and Sanjana felt relieved. "Ummm...Bhabhi
can you please get away from bhai?" Sanjana asked a moment later.
Suhana twitched her lips and look p and with an excusing look get up,
and went up to her room. "OK, I am alone now..." Suhana said as she
slightly close the door behind heself. Ishaan didn't like the way she left but he knew, it must be his sister's plan. "Ishika...You ask na..." Sanjana murmered.
"No, You should...You are equal to her age...I am younger, it feels
awkward to ask this" Ishika said back in a serious tone. Suhana frown
on the other side and not taking it anymore, she said. "Girls, please
spill the beans...?" She asked. "Hmmm...Bhabhi, did you guys plan to go
on your honeymoon...Its just we are asking out of curiosity" Sanjana
asked with an apologizing tone. Suhana felt loose of words. From all
the things after her marriage, the one thing she herself was looking
for was there honeymoon but Ishaan didn't mention it yet. In the past
few days, they have created a very nice relationship. Ishaan was
supportive and nice man and somewhere or another, she started having
feeling for this man, who was unknown to her just before there wedding.
Unlike most guys, she had heard from her friends, he didn't try to
make a move towards her, making it clear that he wasn't after there
physical relationship. He was working on the emotional one first and
she respected him alot
for this. "Bhabhi...????" Ishika voice boomed in her ears as she was
lost in her thoughts. "Yeah...NO ... Nothing decided yet...Your bhai is
a little busy with his work..." Suhana said as of informing herself
too. "Its not done..." Sanjana said with a stern tone. "Totally not..."
Ishika agreed. "We will talk to him...No actually Mom is gonna talk to
him" Sanjana said but when Suhana tried to stop them, they didn't
listen. Defeatingly,
Suhana came out from the room and after giving the phone back to
Ishaan, she left to the kitchen. GOD!! its so embarrassing that her
sister-in-laws and mother-in-law are planning her honeymoon with her
husband.
Next
day Ishaan and Suhana went on to shopping together. Ishaan keep
holding her hand as they move from one shop to another inside the mall
and didn't leave it until necessary. He made Suhana buy a sari of his
choice and allow her to choose two of her's. In between Ishaan excused
himself for a couple of minutes while she was sitting in the sari shop
and came back with a sweet smile on his lips but didn't say anything.
He pay the money as they get out from the shop and made there way out,
but he stopped in between, looking at something that caught his eye.
Suhana looked up to see him looking on the displayed lingerie's of a innerwear
store. It was a beautiful white silk one which was covering the body
of the statue till its mid-thighs. Suhana looked away in embarrassment
as her cheeks flushed with the view but then she found many men,
accompanying there women inside that shop. Ishaan felt her face
shifting away and too look away. No matter what he wish, he don't want
to make her feel conscious. So giving a tight smile, he lead themselves
out from the mall. And getting back home, he took a long cold shower
that can put his hormones on peace.
Ishaan
planned to go on a 5 day honeymoon trip to Manali. He make
reservations with a help of a traveling agency which provide convince
to look around in the city and give a detail tour. He was sure Suhana
will love to move around and weather out there would be perfect for
their honeymoon. He wrap up his work quickly and get ready to go after 4
days. Suhana was excited as well anxious about there honeymoon. She
herself was loving his company but knew, they can't stay like this
forever. He was waiting for her cue and now, she trust him enough to
get on with there lives as ONE.
The
trip to Manali was a beautiful journey. In the bus trip, they met many
newly wedded couples and instantly create a sweet bond with them.
Ishaan loved it when Suhana fall asleep on his shoulder and was holding
his hand throughout as if she fear to loose him. and that give him
enough hope that this trip is gonna be one of the best trips of his
life.
They
reached Manali late in the night. The couples took out there bags and
went to reception and getting there room keys, make there way towards
there rooms. Ishaan Suhana open there room door only to be left spell
bound. They didn't knew that the honeymoon package includes these
benefits too like burning candled room and on bed, rose petals were
spread. A wine bottle was chilling on a side table and two glasses were
placed beside. Dim lights of the room were on and that flowered air-freshner was making it more romantic. Ishaan's first concern was that Suhana willn't mis-trust
him on this as it wasn't his plan but hearing the loud gasps of the
other couples who just opened there room door, made it clear that it
was a gift from there travelling agency. Suhana looked up at him in acknowledgment as if saying DONT-WORRY-I-GOT-IT...and Ishaan was not more than thankful to her.
They get inside and Ishaan went to take a quick shower as Suhana took out there nightwears.
She handed Ishaan his towel and night suit that include a trouser and a
vest like usual. Ishaan came out with his wet hairs, but before he can
look at Suhana, she rushed inside, not giving him a chance. He felt
strange at her behavior but shook the thought away and look around the
room. There was no couch or sofa in the room so tonight, he planned
that he would settle himself on the room. May be that's why Suhana was
feeling awkward. He thought and then decide that he will relieve her
from her uncertainty as soon as she will be out. He throw the towel on
the bed and look at the wine bottle. "A light wine willn't hurt
much...now can it" He smiled and open the bottle to pour some in a
glass. he glass just touch his lips, when the washroom door open with a
click and his gaze turn towards it and the scene infront made him
forget all about his surroundings. Suhana was standing there in a
navy-blue silk lingerie that was barely able to cover her long milky
legs which whom she just waxed yesterday. The glass moved away from his
lips as his wife was looking more intoxicated than anything he ever
experienced. Her hairs were lightly tied in a pony. Her cheeks were
flushed. Her lips trembling with anticipation. Her fingers playing with
themselves. Her legs giving away there support after she just see a
glimpse of his facial reaction as she was feeling too shy to look at
him later on. Ishaan was too lost in processing the view infront of him
to say a word or make a move and that made Suhana pretty anxious.
"Maine Sanjana ko kaha tha k ye mujhpe suit nahin kare gi...Main change kar
k..." But before she can run back into the washroom, Ishaan gripped
her hand and pin her to the wall, making her shocked. Her dressing up
like this do indicate that she is ready to take the next step of there
married life. She looked up to find his smouldering eyes digging deep into her skin and making her shuddered. "You are looking beautiful..." He said in a whisper barely hearable
but she heard that. Her heart was pumping blood in a double speed as
his hand came around her waist, and traced up to here half bare back.
The feeling was sensational as she bit her lip, trying to hold her
emotion. Ishaan move forward and placed his lips on her rose cheeks.
Suhana try to move her face away but Ishaan didn't let her as his lips
travel down her jaw towards her throat. His hand that was caressing her
back came up to remove the band catching her hairs, and make them
easy. He nuzzled her neck as she gasp in pleasure and smiling gave a
sweet love-bite on her shoulder. His fingers traced her hands and came
up to remove the strap that was creating a barrier between his lips and
her skin. Suhana's nails digged in his shoulder feeling the silk running down her skin and not baing
it anymore, turn around. Ishaan was high on passion. All his inner
desires were coming out from the box now. He removed her hairs from the
back and placed soft kisses out there as his hands landed on her
abdominal. Suhana's
breath was getting ragged with these seductive movements of her
husband. His lips were exploring her own there own will, not leaving a
place and with each kis, she shuddered. She hissed as Ishaan bit her ear-lobe. "Tumhain kuch chupanay ki zaroorat nahin...kyunke tum mere liye...duniya main sub se khubsurat
hoo" He whispered against her ears. He made her turned around and not
able to look up, she hugged him tightly. Ishaan hugged her back and
holding her up a little from her waist, lead her to the bed that was
ready to hear another love story. He made her lay on the bed and get up
to pull his vest off. Suhana turned on the bed in shyness waiting for
him when she felt his fingers on her feet and later felt a cold metal
against her skin. She moved her legs just to hear the musical sound of
the anklets Ishaan just put around them. "I want to hear this music,
the whole night" and with that, he took her too the heaven of there
relationship. He cherished this divine beauty and made her feel totally
loved with his kisses and soft and gentle movements. In the end,
BEAUTIFUL was the only word, Suhana can call it before she fall asleep
in the security of his arms.
The
Honeymoon was as beautiful as they wished of it to be. Ishaan and
Suhana went as TWO different souls, but came back as one. There
shinning eyes, there never-ending smiles were enough to guarantee a
beautiful beginning and to ensure a superb future. Ishaan Suhana were
back from there blissful tour and dropped there bags in there room.
Ishaan look around and took a deep breath. From tomorrow, its going to
be same as before. He will be off to work but this time, he will miss
his wife like hell. These 5 days together made them so close that even
he don't see her for a second, he felt restless. But he knew, they
can't lead there life like this. He need to earn to fulfill each of
there dream. But we will see when tomorrow comes. His eyes fall on the
merciless couch that hold the memories of his restlessness. He look at
it with a side-looped smile and grinned. Suhana noticed that and look
at the couch for a moment and then back at him. "Ishaan, kia howa?"
She asked with a confused look. "Hmmm...kuch nahin...Was just
thinking...that before this bed stores most of our happy moments, we
should better teach a lesson to this devil of the couch" and his
raising brow and teasy
grin was enough to make her know, what kind of lesson, he wanna teach
that couch. She was tired enough from all the traveling but before she
can argue, Ishaan hold her from her waist and give a soulful kiss that
shook her inside out. And she know, that he know, that when he kissed
her like this, she don't have the power to say NO "You love me na..."
He voice sound of a cute kid looking for his candy...she smiled and
give in to his demands as he lead her to the couch to teach that couch a
lesson and to show her, how much he love and desire her.
la la la la... hmm hmm hmm... la la la la...
la la la la...
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