Sushaan OS#13:Kaise Unhe Main Pukaron(Pg/15 - Page 5

Posted: 11 years ago
Hey! Cool_sk...
As I wanna say dat I REALLY liked d SELECTION of d song of ur dis FF... Itwas SOOO... Sweet!!
U know! I don't kno but I always felt dat dis SONG suit MORE 2 a arrange marriage LUV STORY... & dis SONG is MY FAVORITE... :-)
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by -MadRaginiFan-


You are too good Ana๐Ÿ‘
I envy u now...I m also writing a FF lately...even though there hasnt been any romantic scene in my FF..but I have to admit that i m poor in writing romantic scenes!
You excell in that part dear...ur OSes are making all of us crazy!

SuShaan rocked in SGP but they are even more good in ur OS๐Ÿ˜

Keep Rocking yaar..
& Thank you for writing it๐Ÿค—


Hey Vipu dear
Oye dear, you don't need to envy me...the way you are writing is fab...i just read 1st two parts and am so caught up right now that i couldn't read it further and comment...but surly will give you a lamba wala comment as soon as i read that to the full๐Ÿ˜ณ
i m naive too in writing such scenes...just addicted to read romance novels, so may be that is doing the tricks๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
I am so glad you are liking Sushaan in my OS's dear๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by shilu999_balani


beautiful ana... the story had a mismerizing effect... really very good.. but i was expecting a continuation of the last os... but this came as a surprise... it was equally good,/... very nice visulization...and keeps you spell bound... good job...please keep it up... looking forward for more from you...


thanku once again shailu for wonderful comments...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
As i am writing OS's so each One shot story need to be different from other and m glad, you accepted n liked the change...๐Ÿ˜Š
so happy to know you enjoyed it๐Ÿ˜ณ
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Ctnr6


Hey! Cool_sk...
As I wanna say dat I REALLY liked d SELECTION of d song of ur dis FF... Itwas SOOO... Sweet!!
U know! I don't kno but I always felt dat dis SONG suit MORE 2 a arrange marriage LUV STORY... & dis SONG is MY FAVORITE... :-)


hey dear
thanku so much for liking the song...and yeah...i too felt the same that it fits an arrange marriage than a love one...๐Ÿ˜‰...
so glad you liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 11 years ago
jst finished to read it di...actually wasn't check IF ..jst cumin & finished it in one go...OMG!!!frm luv marriage to arrange marriage...i mean ur writing thoughts...superb...addict to ur OS nw..hope u will write new 1 soon...
Posted: 11 years ago
Dil-Ibadat
OS | 4

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun,
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun



The flight is taking too much time. He can't bear till the time the flight land and he get to see the love of his life, his best friend, his only female friend, his girl friend, his Suhana. He was eleven, when he came to live with Mr.Kamal Kishore Bajpai. His fathers best friend who happily welcomed him in his family with open arms. He lost his mother when he was four and that cause a big flinch in his life. His father Mr. Alok Kashyap was lost. He didn't care of his well-established Import & Export business and that went into huge loss but he managed to get out from the loss seeing his son, his only hope. He worked day and night, soon getting back to the position he was once on but totally neglecting his health and didn't realize it till the time; he suffered the major Heart-Attack that caused him his life. May be he realized about his death as he wrote a will and asked his friend, Mr.Kamal Kishore Bajpai and Mrs. Shailaja Bajpai to take care of his son. Mr. Alok Kashyap died and Ishaan collected all his things to move to his new destination.


He used to stay away from people, not talking, not making friends even before his father death but she was different. Suhana Bajpai, the elder daughter of Mr & Mrs. Bajpai who was just a year younger to him. Totally opposite, she was fun-loving, full of life, bright, bubbly girl who was adored by everyone and loved by all. | Friends??| She asked putting forward her hand. He looked at her for sometime before shaking hand |Friends| he replied and she smiled brightly. She was the one with whom he felt comfortable in his new house and later also developed a protective, brotherly bond with her younger sister, Sanjana Bajpai who was 4 years younger to him. Being a bright child, Suhana was in the same class as Ishaan and seeing the friendly bond, Mr.Bajpai admitted Ishaan in the same school as Suhana and Sanjana. He still remember how she make him walk into there class while she was holding his hand and she dragged him to her bench and made him sit with herself. |We are best friends...so only you can share my bench with me| she explained. |Are you my girl-friend??| He asked innocently. She looked at him as a smile took place on her innocent 10 year old face |Since I am a girl and we are friends, so I guess I am...| and The faces of shocked boys and girls of the girls still is a fresh memory in his mind as he remembered her and a smile take place on his lips. He later got to know that she never let anyone sit beside her ever. The one boy who dared got beat by her badly and none of her classmate ever dared trying that again. She saved him every time anyone from the seniors tries to bully him seeing his geek look. She wont miss a day he was at school to go just with the thought that he would be alone. That's what there friendship was so strong, so beautiful, so electrifying.

Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu
Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Tera Use Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu


? He rubbed his heart with his palm as he remembered how he shared his first kiss with her when he was 18. He was a teenager and so was she. Both knew each other from a long time and felt that magnetic bond. It was her 17th birthday and like last 6 years, he saved his pocket money and buys her a dress, she was drooling over a week back. She was so happy that she hugged him tightly. The intensity of the moment was felt by both. He had seen her growing up into a beautiful intelligent woman and was attracted to her but he felt so overwhelmed when she broke the hug and slowly said | Jaan | it was only she who would call him that and that too in private |I want another gift from you| her blushed red cheeks make him move up his hand and rubbed her cheek lightly |What??| he said willing to give her anything she would demand and slowly, looking into his eyes, her hands moved into his hairs as she brought him closer and lightly give him a soft kiss on his lips. He was ecstatic and thrilled with her moment |I love you Ishaan..| She said trying to control her breath as her eyes were full of nothing but love for him. Not bearing to control himself, he pulled her from her waist with a jerk and kissed her mindlessly. He was fierce a moment but soft another second. She felt nothing but loved by his kiss as her hands pull his hairs and make him moan. The sound was sexy, she thought as she kissed him back with equal passion. It was now her turn to moan when he licked her lower lip with his tongue, demanding her to open her mouth and she felt hot lava running down his throat as he deepened the kiss. Nothing till now in there life was as magnificent and as pure happened than this moment. She broke the kiss first unable to breathe as he holds her burning face in his hands. There foreheads stuck with each other. They still can feel each other breath. When he opened his eyes to find her closed ones, he replied |I love you too Suhana...| her eyes open with a jerk and she look at him intensely. And all she could see was a pure, clear and non-materialistic love in his eyes and she hugged him tightly. They were teenagers then but they did understand that meaning of there words...They were mature to understand what it actually means and till now as he turned 27, all famous and successful as he re-opened his fathers company and made it get into the top three Import & Export Companies, all he wanted was to ask his uncle for what that belong to him. Just Him. His Suhana..

As flight land, he quickly make his way to the out-house which he acquired on rent from Mr.Bajpai as he wanted to stand on his own from the time he was 19 and started his father s closed down business. Mr.Bajpai already had his own textile Mill to run, and as per his fathers will, if not Mr.Bajpai then no one is going to carry on the business. Till now, Ishaan was more than content that all his expenses, his education was paid by the life insurance money and prize bonds.


Putting his luggage away, he quickly took a shower and wearing a white shirt with maroon strips on the chest with denim jeans, rushed to the home. Everyone was in a hurry, when he reached the door. There were many people around, people to some he knew as they were Mr.Bajpai s relative and some, he don't know were gathered, having drinks. Soon after looking through the crowd, he found his uncle, standing with a group of old men


|Ishaan..|He was delighted to see him as Ishaan touched his feet and took his blessings and he introduced him to his friends |This boy make me so proud...I still cant believe he grew up so fast and now is one of the eligible bachelors of the town| Kamal Kishore said patting his back as Ishaan smiled |It just seemed like yesterday that you came into this house and full-filled the place of my that son, which I never got before| Ishaan looked at his uncle s happy face...He was like his own father for him...He hugged him and back away as he heard a sound at the back |Uncle, if Ishaan is your son, then who am I??| a teasing voice make Ishaan turn as Kamal Kishore chuckled at the young boy standing infront of him |You are going to be my son, Samar| and then he introduced them |Samar, meet Ishaan...my best friend s son but he is never less than one for me| Ishaan smiled and shook hands with the handsome boy. He can't say Samar was not attractive. Any girl will drool over him |and Ishaan, Meet samar...He is going to be Suhana s fiance| Ishaan hand loose its grip on Samar s and he looked at his uncle shocked | I think.? Ishaan didnt like the news| Samar said in the same teasing tone...Kamal Kishore smiled and looked at Ishaan |He and Suhana are best friends...So definitely it's a little shocking news for him|

Edited by cool_SK - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
|And here she  is...| Everyone eyes turned towards the stairs as Suhana accompanied by Shailaja and Sanjana slowly coming downstairs. Ishaan felt his heart skip a beat and feeling immense pain as he saw the beauty of his Suhana who was looking an angel in the Royal Blue lehenga having silver pattern on it and who is now going to belong to someone else. He was late. He cursed himself in his mind. He took a step backward as Samar proceeds towards the stairs to hold her hand and escort her to the middle of the room for the ceremony. |They look great...| He heard someone saying beside him but he didnt dare tore his eyes from Suhana who's eyes looked up and he cant ignore the pain, the agony, the frustration in her brown chocolate eyes as Samar hold her hand. Ishaan kicked himself in mind asking why he took so much time to ask his uncle for Suhana. Suhana was asking him from last two years to go and ask her father about there marriage but he was reluctant. Not because he doubted his love or her love but he wanted to wait for a perfect moment. Moment for which he will not left a stone unturned and leaving a reason for Kamal Kishore to reject the proposal. But he was so wrong. His heart started to cry as he didn't let his eyes performing this task. He doesn't want his uncle to have an embarrassing moment because of him. Suhana took her position as her eyes moved up to look around, trying to get his one glimpse. She missed him badly this whole day. Right now, she just wanted to end this poor joke that destiny played with her and run into his arms, tell him how much she love him, asking him to stop waiting for anything and make her his. She can't and doesn't want to imagine her life without him. But he was nowhere in sight. Sanjana told her that she saw him getting out from his car and going into the out house a while back. He must have been here till now, she thought. He is here and he will help her break this stupid engagement which is being forced on her by her parents. Just this morning, they told her that she needs to get ready by the evening as she is getting engaged today with the son of one of his father s associates. She tried calling him, but his phone was switched off. She knew he is coming back today and that provide her a little strength. A little hope. But on not finding him in her sight, she felt disappointed. Soon the moment arrived. Shailaja brought the rings in a thaal. |Suhana, apna haath agay barhao beta | Shailaja said politely making Suhana break her trance. Suhana put forward her hand, reluctantly only to hear Samar say |Whats this?? She is already having a ring|. Everyone stared at the simple gold ring that was shinning in her ring finger. Ishaan gifted her when he got his first big contract. Informally, it was an engagement ring for her as she always looked at it as one. Bewildered Kamal Kishore smiled trying to hide the embarrassment |Oh that one she had from a long time. She never took it off for a day. Suhana loves this ring so much. Dont worry just put the ring in her other hand'.| not satisfied with the explanation, Samar looked at Suhana, who was avoiding making an eye contact with him and holding her other hand, put the ring. Two hearts break in a moment as that ring slipped in Suhana's slim long finger. Unwontedly, with a little help from Shailaja, Suhana also put ring in Samar hand as everyone clapped and gathered around to congratulate the engaged couple. Getting the moment, where she can just put her heart out and cry, she hugged her mother who hold her back tightly, lightly patting her back and caressing her hairs. She looked up to find a teary Ishaan, standing on the corner, devastated. Seeing him like that, she lost herself more. Sanjana, the only person who knew about Suhana and Ishaan, understand the need of the moment and pulled Ishaan out from the house and dragged him to the out-house. Ishaan, who was still in shock, felt a soft hand on his shoulder and seeing Sanjana, his soul sister, he break down and cry till the time he didn't hold himself back. Tears were unstoppable today but Sanjana pacified him |Why is this happening to us Sanjana?| He complained. Sanjana went to get a glass of water and after making him sip a little, she told him how un-expected this engagement comes as for Suhana, how she tried calling him so many times this whole day and how robotic she was when she slipped the ring in Samar finger. Suhana was all doing this for her parents who practically had fix her wedding without her knowledge and call this function to tell her what they have decided for her. She left her wedding stuff with her parents as she knew that they love Ishaan and she also thought that he is going to ask them for her. Sanjana remembered just how yesterday, she jumped up in her bed, laughing, telling her that Ishaan is going to talk to her parents and Sanjana was as excited for it as Suhana was. Seeing her sister and the man whom she always considered her brother and always wanted and ?looked up at him as her jeeju as she would occasionally teased him in private, both were hurt by just this decision of her parents.

The party ended. Everyone left. What left behind was a crying Suhana. She looked at the ring in her finger that just few hours ago declared her as a FIANCE of someone. Someone other than Ishaan. How life could play like this with her? How it could be so cruel? Why didn't her parents noticed the sweet moments and bond between her and Ishaan? Why didn't they considered him the best for their daughter even after knowing that No one else know them both better than they know each other. Hearing the opening sound of the door, Suhana turned to find a teary Ishaan making appearance and looking at him, she just loose her control as she rushed into his arms. The feeling of protectiveness and caring surrounded her. She cried and cried. There seemed no way to stop her and neither he could hold himself |I am outside, if someone will come...i will tell you| Sanjana said as she closed the door behind.

Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane
Ab Khudse Dil Mil Jaane
Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla...
Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aane
Inko Tu Naa Le Jaane
Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota...
Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo Kahi Khudse Jod Loo
Mere Jism O Jaan Main Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo


|Suhana...| he slowly rubbed her back and made her move back, to sit on the bed as he hold her in his arms and said |Everything will be alright Suhana...we will talk to Uncle and Aunty...i know they will understand us| he said trying to build up her moral. He doesn't want her to leave all hopes of them being together. He can't bear even thinking that she will belong to someone else when they are just made for each other. |They have to...they need to understand us Ishaan...| she said between her sobs |They will...| he said pulling away the hairs which were coming back on her tear stained face. Some actually got wet from her tears as he felt the wetness as he tucked them behind her ear and wiping her cheek with his thumb he made her look up at himself. They kept staring for sometime before Suhana said |If they didn't agree Ishaan, i promised you. I will do something to myself| Ishaan eyes grew wide and knowing how aggressive and hot-headed Suhana is, she is capable to doing anything she want to and that scared him |Don't you dare say or do anything...| he hugged her tightly as the fear seeped through his body. |How dare you think like this Suhana when from life, all I ever wanted and pray is for you... | Suhana was now hugging him tightly, her head stayed on his chest as she heard his un-even heartbeat...She scared him, she knew that but she cant help it. Just like him, she too just wanted to belong to him. |I know...| she said as she placed a kiss on his chest. He sighs. |Promise me, you will never ever think of even something such stupid|...|I promise...| and he felt at peace. They stay like this for sometime before he drew apart and cleaned her face with his hand softly... |I didn't knew that behind this Wild Suhana, who is ready to attack anyone even for keeping the possession of a bench all to herself and ready to teach seniors a lesson without caring about the outcome...is such a baby inside| Ishaan said trying to see the smile, he imagined and missed this whole day and she did a little.. |That Suhana is not afraid of anything, knowing that his best friend is with her always to fight with any situation, but this Suhana, is just so afraid of loosing him and his love| she said as the love clearly expressed from her eyes. He almost felt himself at lost of words.. He caressed her face with a feather like touch and kissed her softly on her lips |You will always find me beside you Suhana, Forever| and as she believed his words, she smiled.

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
? Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun


|This is impossible now Suhana...I have given my word to Samar s father..And I am not going to back out now| Kamal Kishore said angrily as Ishaan and Suhana confessed there love infront of him |But Dad, its my life. I know I have given you and mom all the rights of my marriage but don't you think I should have been asked before finalizing it. I at least could have been given a chance to give my opinion'| Kamal Kishore knew he did the mistake there. He should have atleast warned Suhana before about his intentions and this proposal. Atleast then, she must have told him about her and Ishaan. He loved Ishaan and he also knew that Ishaan is a great person, human being and any girl who would marry him will be lucky. Its not like he never thought of getting Suhana and Ishaan married. Even Shailaja many times asked and discussed about it. But at the time Ishaan was busy with his business. He wanted to prove himself and always rejected the thought of marriage. But as this Rishta came in, Kamal Kishore wasn't able to say NO. He couldn't wait forever to get her daughter married and knowing Samar and his family before, he was just as convinced that Suhana would be happy there. But this all proving wrong now as it's all going in a backward direction. |Suhana, I don't want anymore arguments...You are engaged to Samar and that's final| Ishaan felt heart-broken. He never thought one day he would go against his Uncle decision...the father figure in his life |But Dad...| before Suhana could say anything, Kamal Kishore left the place.


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Edited by cool_SK - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Next few days, Ishaan noticed Suhana ignoring his father. No eye contact, not talking to him properly. Her smile vanished from her face. She will talk to Ishaan on phone but that charisma of Suhana, her full of life and chirpy voice was missing. Ishaan felt terrible at times seeing the sadness in Kamal Kishore and Shailaja eyes. They felt themselves culprit, killer of her happiness, her smile and it wasn't true. If it would have been someone else, Kamal Kishore would have ended the engagement at the first moment when Suhana told about her and Ishaan, but Samar father was a great friend of him and also helped him and his family many times when he was about to have a great loss in his business. He can't disappoint him now as he think he owes him. But nothing was bigger and more important than her daughter for him.


|Uncle, I am sorry for all the distress that occurred because of me..| Ishaan said as he entered Kamal Kishore office to find him deep in thoughts. He was worried, Ishaan knew but slowly as days passing by, his frown had become a major part of his face. And last thing Ishaan wanted was making his uncle getting tensed because of him. |Ishaan...| Kamal Kishore started but Ishaan cut him in between.. |No uncle, let me finish...| He took a deep breath as fidgeting with his fingers he started looking down on the floor |I am thinking to move to Calcutta... My board of directors suggests we need to expand now more and I personally want to take care of this project. I will move and get away from Suhana life...she would forget me in some time|. With whom he was joking as if he doesn't know her. Her warning still ring in his head but he knew, she will keep her promise |I am sorry that because of me, your daughter is getting away from you...You who provided me a family who loved me and support me at every step, has to face the ignorance and left out by your own daughter. and I swear Uncle, I never wanted this'.. I never wanted to keep Suhana away from you or the worse hate you...but its happening and I think if I go away? from her, she will be back to you...I came here to tell you this that I am leaving tomorrow...I just need your blessings| He looked up to find a teary Kamal Kishore who get up and came to engulf in a hug |I am sorry Ishaan| He said as a tear escaped from Ishaan eyes...

He is going to miss his family, a warmth of a father hug...the love of a mother...the teasing of a sister and the most important, the love and support of his best friend and life. He didn't talk to her and didn't dare informed anyone else about his departure. All the flights were booked for today and he didn't wanted to wait another day seeing Suhana ignoring her father so he took the train ticket. Every step away from the home feels like a bullet going through his body, leaving it marked and bruised. But he had to. His ideal, his father was getting hurt and somewhere he found himself the reason.


|Damn it...| he cursed under his breath as the announcement of the train to Calcutta getting late about 2 hours buzzed through the station. Taking a place on the bench, he looked around. Another train was about to depart and many loved ones were waving bye to other, wishing them safe journey, telling them that they will miss each other and soon to visit again. He too has loved ones but he was here, leaving, for them. All the moments he has spent with Suhana over the years went through his mind as he sighs. His heart was in pain and so was his mind, not relaxing a minute and anxious to leave. |Can I sit here??| He heard a young girl asking him and not even being any considerate about how beautiful that stranger is, he nodded and went back to his thoughts, closing his eyes. Moments later he felt a moment beside him and then a head resting on his shoulder, |WHAT THE HELL????| he shocked suddenly stand up thinking that the stranger girl make a move towards him but his eyes open widely as he saw Suhana sitting there grinning. Not believing at first, he blinked and when she was still sitting there, while the stranger girl passed a confused look to them both...he rushed to Suhana and pinches her |Owww...!!!| She cried before she hit him on his hand |Stupid!! Its really me...| She said rubbing her hand...In excitement, he actually had pinched her hard. He smiled first hearing STUPID from her mouth but as realization seep in, he frowned |What are you doing here??|...Suhana felt irritated |I think people come here for two reasons, One to go to some other place and 2nd, to bid farewell or to receive there loved one s| Ishaan was still standing there, crossing his hands...his eyes having a look SO FOR WHAT REASON YOU ARE HERE FOR and she knew it...she can read him like an open book so without him asking anything directly she said |And since you will not take me with you and will argue and push me away. Seriously that will hurt me| She said pouting her lips |and I am not good to bid bye to my loved ones and no one is coming to whom I have to receive so definitely I am not here for both reasons...I am here for my THIRD UNIQUE Suhana s REASON| She said as matter of fact...|And what is that THIRD UNIQUE Suhana REASON...| He asked completely irritated my her smug look...She slowly moved closer to him and found her holding his hard hands in her soft ones |To take you back with me...to take you to the place you belong| She said softly as in her eyes, the only thing he saw was love but he need to control.. She is someone else fianc now. He reminded himself as he pulled his hands away from hers and said |Go home Suhana, I am not coming back| Ishaan said as he moved towards his luggage and get a hold on it. I NEED TO FIND ANOTHER PLACE TO SIT. He thought as he moved away before he heard |The hell you are not coming back...| and he stopped in the mid way and turn around to found a smiling Kamal Kishore, Shailaja and Sanjana now standing beside Suhana. Ishaan felt overwhelmed as he realized what there presence here meant. He stayed standing glued to his position when Shailaja came and pat his cheek lightly |Do you think we could stay happy seeing our children in pain| Ishaan shook, smiled as he held her hand in his and lightly kiss it |Ishaan, You were always my first choice for Suhana and I am so happy that you both choose each other as life partners...| Kamal Kishore said as he come and stand beside his wife |And now, even we are more proud of her choice, seeing how much you care for us. We know that its only you who could keep our Suhana happy| There was a profoundness in Kamal Kishore voice as Ishaan felt loved and hugged him. How he even dare think that he can stay without his family. He look up to found a teary Suhana who was being hugged by an excited Sanjana

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They get into the cars as Kamal Kishore and Shailaja went to Samar house, excusing about the engagement and Ishaan took the driver seat of Suhana car as she sit beside on passenger seat and Sanjana at the back.. |So now, i can officially call you my JEEJU...GOD i am so loving the sound of it..| Sanjana almost shouted from the back, she was hell thrilled with the news that his Ishaan Bhai will now be his JEEJU |Yes, you can call him that...| Suhana said with a shy smile, AND I CAN THINK OF DOZENS OF ROMANTIC NAMES I WILL CALL HIM AS, JAAN, JAANU, SWEET-HEART, LOVE, DARLING, JAAN-E-JAAN, HUBBY she blushed as the last one crossed her mind.. Ishaan noticed her blushed face and raise his brows.. Shooing her head, she looked out from the window as she felt butterflies dancing in her stomach and avoiding his intense gaze which she could feel just now and were sending shivers down her body

Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane
Sine Main De Chhup Jaane
Tujh Bin Main Jaaunga Kaha????
Tujhse He Mujhe Ko Paane Yaado K Woh Nazrane
Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera


As they reach home, Sanjana was caught up with a phone call and she rushed inside as one of her friends need some notes. Finding the moment, Ishaan hold Suhana from her hand and took her to the out-house. Suhana feeling all shy tried to rush out as Ishaan closed the door just then, his one hand resting on the door as other took place around her waist...and now Suhana was standing facing towards door. Her body shivering with anticipation as she felt his breath slowly caressing her neck and then the breath was replace by his lips as he kissed her softly. Moving her hairs to one side, he kissed against her shoulder as her back hit his chest, her breathing getting heavy and she arched her neck to give his better access. Getting the hint, he rubbed her lips against her soft velvet skin as it move up and after giving a slight kiss to her ear, he bit her earlobe, making her whimper |Ishaan..| He turned her towards himself as he kiss near her lips and then moving down kissed her throat and collar bone, taking his time, making her moan. He loved that sound. Not bearing it anymore, she put her hand which were rubbing his back now upto his hairs and pulled him for a hungry kiss |You are death to me...| He said as he kissed her back, exploring her lips...once done, he again pulled her to himself from her hips and kissed her till the time she could remember nothing but him |I love you Suhana...I so deeply, madly love you..|He said as he kissed her nose making her smile... |I love you too...too much to say| as the words escaped her swollen lips, he rubbed his thumb gently against them and sighs as she sucked his thumb a minute later |Its so hard to leave you...| He said, backing away a little not trusting himself with her. This girl can drive him nuts with passion and he himself was shocked and thrilled with the force |Then why you even tried...| She asked softly. He could see the tears building up in her eyes. God last thing he ever want to do is make her cry |I willnt, I promise I willnt do that ever again...I owe you| he said as he hugged her

 Teri Yaado Main Rahoo
Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo
Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi
Teri Aankho Main Milu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo
Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Joho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu


Moments later, as the were snuggled on the couch, Suhana asked |Ishaan..|...She was drawing little circles on his shirt with her finger |Yes, My LOVE...| he asked moving his fingers through he?r silk smooth hair |Can I ask you something??| |Anything...| he replied. She straightened up making him open his eyes and look at her |What were you thinking as you decided to leave all by yourself? Didn't you think about me once?...| she asked as the feeling again get to her that she might have lost him today. she might have just lost her love today...Ishaan cupped her face and said |Suhana, your smile is my world. It makes my day perfect. You don't know how priceless it is for me.. Seeing you ignoring uncle, killed me. I know you were in pain too as much as he was...but I thought that all because of me that you are going through this|...|I wasnt.. I was angry with Dad but that wasn't because of you...You complete my life, you fulfill the reason of my existence, how could I could be I pain because of you|...Ishaan smiled and pulled her back to his chest. |so are you, you know on the station, as I closed my eyes, the only person I could see was you before you made me snapped out from it...you scared me you know| Ishaan said chuckling as he remembered what he actually thought and as guessing she said in a stern tone |You thought it was the girl beside you making the MOVE, doesn't you??| and as he nod in agreement, she hit him lightly and tried to get away from him saying |I should have known that every man is same...thinking about other girls|...Ishaan laughed as he grabbed her wrists in his hands and said. |I wasn't thinking about any girl, I was just thinking about MY GIRL...I am a one woman man you know..| he said as matter of fact and she looked deep in his black smoldering eyes just to find herself and desire for herself as she leaned forward and kissed his cheek. There prayers were answered with this happiness of being together after being in pain for weeks and that truly make there love, more immense, more passionate and stronger.

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun


THE END



Edited by cool_SK - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by tajkea


jst finished to read it di...actually wasn't check IF ..jst cumin & finished it in one go...OMG!!!frm luv marriage to arrange marriage...i mean ur writing thoughts...superb...addict to ur OS nw..hope u will write new 1 soon...


don't worry dear
i m glad you liked it so much๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
and hope you had a good time

this one is gonna be the last one for sometime now... so enjoy๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
ohhh i couldnt believe myself that i hve been out frm world of ur OS 4 a while๐Ÿ˜ฒ...i ws so engrossed,,,in it,,,๐Ÿ˜d feeling of separation each went through ws superbly portrayed ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

nd i ws so brken wen i read she gt her engagement fixed wid sumodr guy though i knw it will b happily ended๐Ÿ˜›...

i cnt tell u...hw much i m gonna miss u ,ur creation..OS nd everythin ana๐Ÿ˜” Love u โค๏ธ 4 making my day pleasant ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


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