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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 8:17pm | IP Logged

I don't want to be the daughter who missed her parents' anniversary because she signed up for AP Calculus

I don't want to be the sister who couldn't go to her brother's basketball game because she had to prepare for MCATS

I don't want to be the wife who couldn't have dinner with her husband because she was putting overtime in the research paper

I don't want to be the mother who wasn't there for her child's first day of school because she was busy on her business trips

I don't want to be the one left alone for the crowd who never cared

I don't want to cut the ties with those whom I loved

I don't want to lose my today for an imaginary tomorrow

I don't want to cry everyday for the luxuries of the fantasy world

I don't want to yet again, lose another day in the hopes of the short lived success



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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
OMG. Iqra this is BEAUTIFUL.
And every line speaks so much truth.
Perfect!!
I'm so proud of you Hug

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fairy17

OMG. Iqra this is BEAUTIFUL.
And every line speaks so much truth.
Perfect!!
I'm so proud of you Hug
THANK YOU SO MUCHHH Farii!Hug
i can only expect such a response from you ! and only u can be the first one to comment anywhere and everywhereLOL
remember how we were talking? so it just popped in my mind so i thought i'd writeEmbarrassed

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
That is exactly why I LOVED it.
It goes so perfectly with what we were talking about Embarrassed

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
wow!!
This is so beautiful!!
I loved it!!

I especially liked how the whole concept!!

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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ss374

wow!!
This is so beautiful!!
I loved it!!

I especially liked how the whole concept!!

Thank you so much sobi!EmbarrassedLOL

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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 5:56am | IP Logged
very well written - its true sometimes we dont know how to prioriitize life and we end up messing up the very relations that mean life and death to us..

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Nice

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