Posted: 12 April 2012 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sks18
Another awesome post by you, Purvi!
(Though, I'm really confused as which one was the best??
You call yourself an amateur as far as poetry is concerned, but let me tell you that this is definitely not the case... (As far as I can understand them...
Your writings have actually compelled me to stop noticing errors & comedy in Parichay & that's the reason I haven't posted any such posts in-spite of being so many in recent episodes!!!
Writing poetry was never my passion or something that I enjoyed doing in my leisure time but your writings have sort of awaken my inner poet...
Now, I'll stop being melodramatic & would like to share something related to Kunal's present state in your style... though it may not be good...
Arz kiya hai...
"Har Mulaqt par waqt ka takaza hua,
Har yaad pe dil ka dard taza hua,
Suni thi sirf Gazalo me judai ki bate,
Ab khud pe beti to haqiqt ka andaza hua.."
The above lines are in Urdu, so guess they won't be apt for Kunal's character but these are what came to my mind considering Kunal's present situation & your post!
Wah wah wah...andaaz aapka subhan allah...a big round of applause for the above jotted lines by you...regarding poetry, I would like to just repeat what Mr. W.B Yeats always says..."out of the quarrel with others, we make rhetoric, and out of the quarrel with ourselves, we make poetries". So now you know where I get my talent from. 9 times out of 10 it comes up just because of my struggle with myself..forget the world..
Thank you so much though because all your appreciation goes towards my encouragement to write more and more..
I am haapy to know that I have introduced someone to their long lost talent!! you should start writing this very minute. I am sure you will do well. your command over the hindi language is awsome anyway..I will be looking forward to reading more and more posts from you
Edited by purvimehta - 12 April 2012 at 4:49am