Channel V Dil Dosti Dance

   

Happy birthday D3:do lafzoon main OS

Post Reply New Post

Page 1 of 4

Page 1
Page   of 4
Page 2 Page 4

tinatartari

IF-Rockerz

tinatartari

Joined: 25 August 2010

Posts: 7713

Posted: 11 April 2012 at 7:12am | IP Logged
guys this is an OS i ve written just 4 the birthday of d3!!
em so much in love wid D3 tat i wanna wish ma fav kriyaansh on this...
kriya on the footloose eliminations performed n aftr the preformance rey ws worried y she z nt talkng 2 him?so he asked
r:tell me BC!wots bothering u??
k:nthng!y u keep following me??
r:cx i love u BC!
k:bt i dnt love u..i nvr loved u..i used u 2 get name n fame n nw i dnt need u anymore(tryng 2 avoid eyecontact)
r:BC u cnt do this 2 me.i knw u r lying...
k:no em nt
r:if nt then look into ma eyes n say u dnt love me?
k:leave me alone
r:no u cnt escape wid this lie tat easily..stop teasing me BC!!(cupped her face)i love u!!!
k:tried 2 go bt rey blocked her way.a tear escaped her eyes n rey s grip on her loosened n she left 4m thr...
rey ws confused so he followed her 2 her home n overheard the convo between kriya n smriti
s:pack ur bag kriya!!u ve choosed dosti over dance n dil..nw we need 2 go bck 2 dehradhun n u hav 2 forget dance n rey..
kriya had tears in her eyes..
rey got the rzn...
he came 4m the door n knocked
smriti opened the door
s:y r u here rey??
r:aunty i wanna ask u y u dng this 2 kriya??dance z her lyf n she wont b happy widout it ever
s:i knw wots better 4 ma daughtr.i care 4 her happiness more than u
r:if u did u d hav understood..btw y u hate her dance???
s:cx she z passionate abt it n passion kills smtymes
r:cmon aunty!i cn assure u tat it wont kill her..plx dnt take her away 4m me n her dance..i love her n i cn giv her every happiness ov life..plx dnt take ma love away 4m me..i beg ov u!!
n he bent down in her feet
s:stand up rey!dnt try 2 emotionally blackmail me!em just nt cnvnced
r:i cn die 4 ur daughter
s:u r just betrayng her..
r:wot if i just giv u a proof tat i love her truly??
s:hw??
r:come wid me
n he takes them 2 a mandir,swears b4 god n then fills her maang wid sindhoor...kriya n smriti both had tears in ther eyes...n both take her blessings
 s:nw ma daughtr ll b away 4m me
r:no we ll stay wid u cx i ve no parents..cn i call u mummy
s:4 sure betey!!!
n they lived happily ever aftr!!!Smile
sorry guys if it ws boring n nonsense bt i just wnted a bday gift 2 kriyaansh wot i call were d3 4 me n em nt xprnced at writing OS..this is probably ma 1st or 2nd OSCry
link 2 ma ff:dil se rey
kriyaansh n swaron ss:dazzling dream
swaron ss:phir muhabbat karney chala


Edited by tinatartari - 17 April 2012 at 9:20am

The following 37 member(s) liked the above post:

srujanahpvrshonustargrungta11kria1996-FrozenRain-Arsha1994kriapatelJahnavi_KRASGayatriJethanipreeti_kreyaNirju99NikiBh8anniemathiaskrMirageSwaronAnjori_ArShaShrvz_PoPpYTyler_DurdenDewdrops.ShaKunsweetydiyafriennj_SRKholicsapnaarsha---Shailu---kritzzz_ArShaHR-DMG4lifeshaffy_arshayogini64The007Shivani-Blind.Dance-luv_arshakuhu_Arsha..KR..crazyskylovely7010snigdha_arshaCookieliciousBorn2Dance-reine-

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "Happy birthday D3:do lafzoon main OS" in Channel V Dil Dosti Dance forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

kritzzz_ArSha

IF-Rockerz

kritzzz_ArSha

Joined: 29 November 2011

Posts: 5287

Posted: 11 April 2012 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Nice one!!

tinatartari

IF-Rockerz

tinatartari

Joined: 25 August 2010

Posts: 7713

Posted: 11 April 2012 at 8:45am | IP Logged
thnks at least 1 person liked ma ff..i knw its horrible bt phr b!!

..KR..

IF-Sizzlerz

..KR..

Joined: 14 December 2011

Posts: 12838

Posted: 11 April 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged
tina thoda filmy tha but cute tha

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

tinatartari

Arsha1994

Goldie

Arsha1994

Joined: 17 March 2012

Posts: 1700

Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:06am | IP Logged
It ws a bit filmy...but nice one...it ws cute...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

tinatartari

tinatartari

IF-Rockerz

tinatartari

Joined: 25 August 2010

Posts: 7713

Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
ek epi main filmy e o skta tha..abhi em nt into writing OS na!!
ll do better nxt tym

Jahnavi_KRAS

Goldie

Jahnavi_KRAS

Joined: 04 February 2012

Posts: 1888

Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:40am | IP Logged
ur os was nyce...nd ya  as all said it was a bit  filmy

-FrozenRain-

Coolbie

-FrozenRain-

Joined: 19 January 2012

Posts: 14786

Posted: 11 April 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Nice OS tina.
hmmm nice way to manofy sasuma.

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
Teri Picture ka main Hero...ViHa-oneshot

2 3 4 5

HPmaniac 36 2421 01 May 2012 at 8:23am
By -Insight-
D3 in ek hazaron main star plus show

2

luvtannu 12 870 22 November 2011 at 10:09am
By SugarCubes
SwaRon Appreciation Thread # 1:Har Ada Main Sadgi

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 149 150

*Shruti* 1195 26367 06 November 2011 at 11:54am
By -Aicha-
VM-Swayam and Kriya...Main Hoon Na

2 3 4

HPmaniac 24 957 25 October 2011 at 5:30am
By HPmaniac
kriyansh vm main hoon romeo crazysky 4 332 09 September 2011 at 4:32am
By bajanty

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.