Happy birthday D3:do lafzoon main OS

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tinatartari

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 7:12am | IP Logged

guys this is an OS i ve written just 4 the birthday of d3!!

em so much in love wid D3 tat i wanna wish ma fav kriyaansh on this...

kriya on the footloose eliminations performed n aftr the preformance rey ws worried y she z nt talkng 2 him?so he asked

r:tell me BC!wots bothering u??

k:nthng!y u keep following me??

r:cx i love u BC!

k:bt i dnt love u..i nvr loved u..i used u 2 get name n fame n nw i dnt need u anymore(tryng 2 avoid eyecontact)

r:BC u cnt do this 2 me.i knw u r lying...

k:no em nt

r:if nt then look into ma eyes n say u dnt love me?

k:leave me alone

r:no u cnt escape wid this lie tat easily..stop teasing me BC!!(cupped her face)i love u!!!

k:tried 2 go bt rey blocked her way.a tear escaped her eyes n rey s grip on her loosened n she left 4m thr...

rey ws confused so he followed her 2 her home n overheard the convo between kriya n smriti

s:pack ur bag kriya!!u ve choosed dosti over dance n dil..nw we need 2 go bck 2 dehradhun n u hav 2 forget dance n rey..

kriya had tears in her eyes..

rey got the rzn...

he came 4m the door n knocked

smriti opened the door

s:y r u here rey??

r:aunty i wanna ask u y u dng this 2 kriya??dance z her lyf n she wont b happy widout it ever

s:i knw wots better 4 ma daughtr.i care 4 her happiness more than u

r:if u did u d hav understood..btw y u hate her dance???

s:cx she z passionate abt it n passion kills smtymes

r:cmon aunty!i cn assure u tat it wont kill her..plx dnt take her away 4m me n her dance..i love her n i cn giv her every happiness ov life..plx dnt take ma love away 4m me..i beg ov u!!

n he bent down in her feet

s:stand up rey!dnt try 2 emotionally blackmail me!em just nt cnvnced

r:i cn die 4 ur daughter

s:u r just betrayng her..

r:wot if i just giv u a proof tat i love her truly??

s:hw??

r:come wid me

n he takes them 2 a mandir,swears b4 god n then fills her maang wid sindhoor...kriya n smriti both had tears in ther eyes...n both take her blessings

s:nw ma daughtr ll b away 4m me

r:no we ll stay wid u cx i ve no parents..cn i call u mummy

s:4 sure betey!!!

n they lived happily ever aftr!!!

sorry guys if it ws boring n nonsense bt i just wnted a bday gift 2 kriyaansh wot i call were d3 4 me n em nt xprnced at writing OS..this is probably ma 1st or 2nd OS

link 2 ma ff:dil se rey

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2921856&PID=55482779&#55482779

kriyaansh n swaron ss:dazzling dream

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912590&PID=55203495&#55203495

swaron ss:phir muhabbat karney chala

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2928038&PID=55682574&#55682574

Edited by tinatartari - 17 April 2012 at 9:20am

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 8:39am | IP Logged

Nice one!!

tinatartari

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 8:45am | IP Logged

thnks at least 1 person liked ma ff..i knw its horrible bt phr b!!

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged

tina thoda filmy tha but cute tha

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:06am | IP Logged

It ws a bit filmy...but nice one...it ws cute...

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tinatartari

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged

ek epi main filmy e o skta tha..abhi em nt into writing OS na!!

ll do better nxt tym

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:40am | IP Logged

ur os was nyce...nd ya as all said it was a bit filmy

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged

Nice OS tina.

hmmm nice way to manofy sasuma.

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