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FF- His Innocent Wife's Moment(Pt11 pg83) *Now Up! (Page 82)

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Posted: 30 March 2013 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
You know I normally never pick sides because that's what Authors do. 

However, I can't believe in this situation knowing his old flings were going to be there with bikinis and what not, why was Arnav going there without his wife? And then not telling her about it? 

Then he feels like he is the victim here, because his wife can't see past his lie of the most important night of her life. If he didn't know it was that special then he would have done this before the marriage. He knew how important it was for all involved.

I wonder if this was the emotion you wanted to generate from your readers. Perhaps that is intended from the title itself.

Love the story. Clearly its got me thinking on the audacity of the characters.

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Posted: 30 March 2013 at 5:18pm | IP Logged
Arnav should not have lied to her, but Khushi has no right to use the word rape in such a loose manner

But Khushi also has to be a little more rational, I mean his past sexual history should not dictate his future. Maybe if Arnav had told her the truth she wouldn't be acting this way.

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Posted: 02 April 2013 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Please update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter..Smile

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Posted: 02 April 2013 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Really looking forward to the next chapter.

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Posted: 02 April 2013 at 10:59am | IP Logged
what the..!!! what happend with khushi!! really she done very stuiped show. really she heart arnav very much Angry

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
I really need to start stalking this thread! I apologize for missing out those updates...

Whoa.. whoa... whoa... the story completely changed, didn't it??? I was not expecting that! 

They had such a healthy relationship, and such a loving intimacy... whatever happened to that?

Oh gosh, she found out. I can't blame her for betrayed by Arnav, but I wish she took this information maturely. She lashed out on Arnav, claiming 'rape' and tried to hurt him back. She could have easily talked about this, and told him what she felt. 

And I can't let go of Arnav that easily either. Yes, he wanted to get intimate with his wife on their wedding night, but he could have told her the truth. That's a big lie, is you ask me. And yet, in his defense, he says that he wanted to feel her and love her, and he was willing to lie to get there. And that guys him, don't wait for woman's approval. That's a selfish answer, and a poor excuse.


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Posted: 04 April 2013 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
pls update soon... eagerly waiting to see wht khushi wud do nw to ensure tht arnav doesnt shut her out...

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U have to update its been too long..

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