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FF- His Innocent Wife's Moment(Pt11 pg83) *Now Up! (Page 67)

Amiarisme Goldie

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Posted: 28 March 2013 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
omg things have gotten worse now.
it feels so good that arnav being the mature partner in this relationship is taking up his responsibility and exhibiting his maturity to deal with this delicate matter.

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saarah96 Goldie

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Posted: 28 March 2013 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
brilliant and intense episodee
khushi cant cope with the fact that he has slept with others before
cant wait for next onee

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opsyellow IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 March 2013 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
I do understand khushi feeling and it wont be easy for a girl like khushi to just forget and forgive and move on. Because she believed him when he told her that she was his first, but this behavior from Khushi was little to much. Of course he lied but again he have never been in love with any of those women so like he told in a way she was his first. Khushi have hurt him a lot and dont know how she is going fix it. Looking forward for next chapter. Amazing chapter this one!

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DMGFan-2b-not2b IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 March 2013 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Wonderfully written update...

Yes Khushi said something in frustration that she should not have, something that hurt Arnav immeasurably. But she has been hurt and disillusioned and she lashed out in that anger but she needs to realise that words said in anger cannot always be taken back. 

However I think Arnav being the older and maturer of the two should have used his brains instead of his libido to resolve the issue which obviously hung between them. A big thing like trust being broken and he believed that one conversation resolved it all? Or walking away with his ex sex partner while his wife tried to digest her disillusioment was the best way to deal with it?

Arnav should have known better than to initiate intimacy when he knew his wife had just had her perfect illusion shattered - your wife has just found out that you lied to her, that what she believed (naively yes) to be the truth didn't exist at all, and that her husband was physically intimate with another/ many women as he was with her - quite a bit for anyone to stomach esp when they are as young as Khushi is! 

Under such circumstances to initiate intimacy was playing with fire! And if anything, he should have been super sensitive to her every movement and gesture, the love making gentle, unhurried and focussed entirely on making her feel cherished and special instead of self gratification!

The more I read the updates , the more self centred I find Arnav.

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 28 March 2013 at 2:39pm

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dennisdmenace IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 March 2013 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
This is the best chapter so far.
This Arnav demonstrates more his physical need but of course he loves khushi.
At the same time it's not so easy for khushi to forget n forgive.
 I loved the matured way Arnav behaved. Looking forward to their sorted married life.

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sruthiif Goldie

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Posted: 28 March 2013 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
They are facing a hiccup in their marital life...
hope they get over it soon...
Khushi is young...may be she needs time t get over  it...
Glad that at least understood where her words came least he didn't lash at her...
but he is creating a shell between them...
nice update update soon...

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mssj Senior Member

Joined: 30 January 2012
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Posted: 28 March 2013 at 6:00pm | IP Logged
oh wow.. they're still fighting/

but what i liked most is that arnav didnt just walk out on her when he got angry...he stopped and made sure he talked to her before leaving..

that was very considerate. 

nice job :)

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PhoenixTears IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 March 2013 at 6:03pm | IP Logged
Great update! Arnav did something which he was not supposed to do and Khushi said something which was not right thing to say but good to see that rather than shouting at khushi, he explained the issue. A very well written chapter, good going Smile

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