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FF: Destination Called Love *Chapter 7 on Page 69 (Page 66)

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Aww possessive arnav is always a treat to watch! Embarrassed
Awesome update! :) Just loved it!

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 10:18am | IP Logged
The tension was there alright. 
Arnav's possessiveness and pride about having Khushi as his life partner and Khushi's nervousness and trying to understand Arnav as she spent more time with him. 
I think you did it extremely subtly and moved the storyline as well which is extremely commendable.
Poor Arnav was left speechless by Khushi! I think Khushi surprises Arnav a lot!
I want a chapter from Arnav's POV now. He is such an interesting character!

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by peppygeek

The tension was there alright. 
Arnav's possessiveness and pride about having Khushi as his life partner and Khushi's nervousness and trying to understand Arnav as she spent more time with him. 
I think you did it extremely subtly and moved the storyline as well which is extremely commendable.
Poor Arnav was left speechless by Khushi! I think Khushi surprises Arnav a lot!
I want a chapter from Arnav's POV now. He is such an interesting character!


Thank you so much for the lovely comment.
To write a chapter from Arnav's POV is very difficult...he is a ver complex character!!!!LOL

But I will try in the next chapter!!!Embarrassed

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ss374

Originally posted by peppygeek

The tension was there alright. 
Arnav's possessiveness and pride about having Khushi as his life partner and Khushi's nervousness and trying to understand Arnav as she spent more time with him. 
I think you did it extremely subtly and moved the storyline as well which is extremely commendable.
Poor Arnav was left speechless by Khushi! I think Khushi surprises Arnav a lot!
I want a chapter from Arnav's POV now. He is such an interesting character!


Thank you so much for the lovely comment.
To write a chapter from Arnav's POV is very difficult...he is a ver complex character!!!
LOL

But I will try in the next chapter!!!Embarrassed


Because he's so complex that's why he's so interesting!
I've have a strong feeling that you will surprise me in the next chapter Big smile

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Superb...he s so protective

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by peppygeek

Originally posted by ss374

Originally posted by peppygeek

The tension was there alright. 
Arnav's possessiveness and pride about having Khushi as his life partner and Khushi's nervousness and trying to understand Arnav as she spent more time with him. 
I think you did it extremely subtly and moved the storyline as well which is extremely commendable.
Poor Arnav was left speechless by Khushi! I think Khushi surprises Arnav a lot!
I want a chapter from Arnav's POV now. He is such an interesting character!


Thank you so much for the lovely comment.
To write a chapter from Arnav's POV is very difficult...he is a ver complex character!!!
LOL

But I will try in the next chapter!!!Embarrassed


Because he's so complex that's why he's so interesting!
I've have a strong feeling that you will surprise me in the next chapter Big smile


next chapter will be very romantic!!
Thats all I can say!!Blushing

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
just read the last 2 chapters!! Very nice!! Like how they are slowly falling for each other!!

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Posted: 14 June 2012 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Res!
 
Edited ****
Outstanding and amazing update...
With every chapter I love the story more and more...
You are brilliant. thanks for the update.Smile 


Edited by bridgeofdreams - 17 June 2012 at 11:42am

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