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FF: Destination Called Love *Chapter 7 on Page 69 (Page 50)

--Sobi-- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 June 2012 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bridgeofdreams

Originally posted by ss374

Originally posted by bridgeofdreams

I wanted to comment at the same page, but this power cut is...No problems.
Anyways, Thanks for updating quickly. No need to say thanks. I forgot friend
There's an Arabic proverb, "The key to a man's heart is his stomach." Your father is right. Yeah...he is!!Embarrassed Just envy him for having a daughter like you. He is so luckySmile
She cooked that Pasta for the first time. A pasta she never heard it's name before. She learned that for him. When he came and she did his work, it still felt discomfort for him (Like me. I don't like this. Another one do my work), but then he woke her up and asked her himself to get his breakfast.
She starts to change and affect him. This is not just a habit of living together.
He tasted it and raised his brows, but he decided to act well. He didn't want to make her upset with herself, but she decided to taste it. It wasn't good at all. She asked him why he lied?! but he said he didn't. He calmed her down and his tone was calm. (The same one whom she heard shouting at his cousin before and scared her when he is angry.) He said in generally that people has likes and dislikes and hold her hand (the best way to pacify someone)
They hold each other, but each one thought that may be the other wouldn't accept this.

I just love you analysis. Makes me believe you have understood the chapter.
Thank you so much for it!! You are thanking me now and you are welcome!!!

She was pretending to be asleep and he woked her up by kissesEmbarrassed so romantic!!!!
He called her 'sweetheart'
I think this is enough, can't say more.
I'm so glad that you turned this SS to FF.
Thanks a lot!!!Smile

I want to thank you for such a wonderful comment!!!Hug
It means a lot when it comes from your side.

And your reply means a lot to me!!! I appreciate your writing. I read the prolongue and two chapters from 'In Disguise' I didn't like sth . Khushi's best class is mathmaticsLOL I hate it because of some teacher though I was in the scintific stream!!!! Will comment their soon when I read some more!!!
Love you SobiHug

At first I thought u didnt like In Disguise at all!!Embarrassed
Thank u so much for liking it.

Actually I love Mathematics, that is why I put it in the FF!!LOL
No problems. Take you time.
Love u too!!Hug

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--Sobi-- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 June 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by peppygeek

Originally posted by ss374

Originally posted by peppygeek

Originally posted by ss374

Originally posted by peppygeek



Such a quick update! I'm very happy I decided to break my promise to myself and log on to I-F.
It was obviously an amazing chapter! What I liked the most is the transition of their relationship. It was extremely visual and gradual. The use of endearment,which is btw my favourite gave me butterflies in my stomach. I think I fall a little more in love with this FF with each passing chapter!

I love u too Priyanka!!!Hug
You always break your promise. I dont know whether I should be happy or sad about it!!!ConfusedLOL
Thank you so much for the lovely comment!!!

P.S.: As half of the chapter was copied from an OS, that is why you got an early update.LOLEmbarrassed

Did I make any promise to yo and break it? Shocked

Not me.
I was talking about the same promise you are talking about...coming to IF.
You always break it...b/c I am always seeing you over here...when u should actually be studyingEmbarrassed

Here I am again Embarrassed
I can't help it if this forum is as addictive as the serial.Ermm
You won't see from Monday! Pakka Pakka!Stern Smile

I dont mind you!!Embarrassed
Do well in your exams. All my best wishes are with you!!Smile

The serial is addictive!!!

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--Sobi-- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 June 2012 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rennie

loved the it possible for you to give a short update about they slowly became comfortable with each other...

Thank you so much.
What do u mean by comfortable?Embarrassed

sarunlicious.. IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 33131

Posted: 03 June 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Adorable Bonding Between These Too :) They Are Getting Comfortable . Haha, Khushi Made Horrible Pasta ROFL

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blurey Goldie

Joined: 10 December 2011
Posts: 1843

Posted: 03 June 2012 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
nyc update
lvd der swt relationshp

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jblueday Senior Member

Joined: 08 February 2012
Posts: 385

Posted: 03 June 2012 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
i totally loved this story! arhi stuck in loveless aranged marriage, that was a different conceptSmile i loved how they treated each other, how awkward they feel in intimate situationsEmbarrassed it is really interesting to see their realtionship develop  as you switch from one time to another.
continue sooon...and thanks for the pmBig smile

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dancedanceRR Senior Member

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Posts: 427

Posted: 03 June 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
The Progression of their relationship seems so natural!! Great job!

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iamtopper Senior Member

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Posts: 384

Posted: 03 June 2012 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
awesome update... plz now show how their relationship grew in the past...

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