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FF: Destination Called Love *Chapter 7 on Page 69 (Page 23)

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 6:00am | IP Logged


aah!! sister!! read chapter 1 and 2 in one go!!

I loved it!
Loved how chapter 1 started, with them in the plane and khushi observing arnav, but him silently observing her too!!

And omg! Manorma seems nice in this ss, I like it , i like it!

aah what an uncomfortable silence man!!! arnav! talk to her dude!

and chapter 2!

aaah you introduced the family to us! how sweet! and they live in london!? Cool!!

and arnav lives alone? aahh poor khushi!! the appartement seems like e very nice palce! you discribed it after all so well!!

Sister... i love your writing style! it's so calm and serene!!

i wodner when arnav will open up to her! btw, nice flashback!

aahh what will happen next!???

Love you!

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 6:04am | IP Logged
I think dis part was quite gud and I agree wth u d fact tht it is gonna take sme time to hve romantic scenes as dey are not even comfortable wth each other yet so dnt worry u are doing a very good job and d storyline z going really well :) thx for d pm :)

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by curiousbookworm

awesome ch! i love this initial awkwardness it makes arnav verrry endearing ; haha he got red at the mention of chote! is this the same asr from the show?!


Thank you so much!!
Yes...he will be the serious types...but not exactly that gray!!

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 6:49am | IP Logged
lovely update...can just picturise the whole scene...

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by farfar319

loving the concept.. excited to see how you go from this to what we read in chapter 1.. (that is the future right and chapter 2 starts the flashback? lol)


Thank you so much!!
The prologues which is on the first page...is something which will happen in the future...and the real story starts from chapter 1!!

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shruti_P

Great update sobi as u said a kind of filler update but it was awesome
Btw the family doesn't stay in same apartment but they stay in same building na??
Update soonish m waiting


Thank you Shruti!!
No they dont even live in the same building!!LOL

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by TwilightHorizon

wow sobi nice update
and plz yar update ur other SS also



Thank u so much Shafaq!!!
But the other SS is on hold...but In Disguise I am going to update very soon!!!

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:17am | IP Logged
now arhi is left alone...atleast they proper conversation...love the fact everybody other than arnav is pondering over khushi so that she feels comfortable!!

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