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Swaron SS: it's about time (Page 13)

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
wow..wow n just wow!!dis was an amazing end!!wich cudnt be more perfect dan dis!!keep writing more!!thankx fr D PM!

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Wow !!! Wonderful description of the kiss. One of the most awesome short story on SwaRon. I just wish you would have continued it. I would have loved to see the gang's reaction to this new scenario.
And btw do PM me if you write another FF .

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Damn man, that was awesome...and this is by far one of the most beautiful SwaRon kiss scene I have read !!! I loved the way you ended it so cutely with Sharon kissing Swayam's dimples...I totally loved your SS and hope you write more on SwaRon soon !!!

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
Girl do u seriously have to end this??? are you coming up with another one ?? please do write another ff a bigger one this time :)

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
BWAHHH! HAPPY ENDINGS :D 

Loved it :) It was so simply put. Although I feel that a SwaRon confession isn't going to end up like this. It'll probably tears and more tears! :P


Brilliant :)

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
OMG-That was AMAZING!!!Totally worth the wait1
 
My favourite part's gotta be this-
 

She considered denying it, lying to him yet again, pretending it wasn't true. She could leave, breaking his heart once again. But the thought of breaking his heart numbed her. She knew that this time her heart would break along with his.

I can't run away from his love forever she thought. And I most certainly can't run away from my love for him.

The fact that breaking Swayam's heart would hurt her all the more-how beautifully you portrayed it.
 
Oh,and her kissing his dimple.That was SO cute,Nidhi!!
 
AMAZING SS-Enjoyed every bit of it.
 
Can you continue this,btw?Make this an FF?Please?I'd LOVE to read more!:DDo PM me whenever you write anything!


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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 2:21am | IP Logged
wow! this part was super cute!
this kiss was passionate..d way you expressed their feelings, their desires..its worth appreciation!
this was the best part till now..and i feel so happy that SwaRon are together and finally Sharon has accepted her feelings for him..!
and lastly, the kiss on his dimples..!
truly adorable!!
thnx fr d pm
update asap!

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Amazing!!!

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