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OS: So Cold *IMPORTANT NOTE/Blog link -page 19. (Page 24)

umamashahid Goldie
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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
wow amazing. good work dearSmile

jazmeen IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
awwwn i alsmot felt lik crying pooor baby
realy nice one
uniquebluerose IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 12:58am | IP Logged
That was really very sad!!!!!

Shreya dear you are such wonderful writer i love your works...how can some one be so creepy as to copy other work

Well anyway hope such things do no happen again dearie!!!!

 and yes without doubt loved your OS


Sree


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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 3:32am | IP Logged
very well written. i don't know how this scene where he comes know of her innocence will be shown in the show, but u have protrayed Arnav's emotions, pain very well... awesome.
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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 3:57am | IP Logged
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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 3:58am | IP Logged
First of all...Im really getting angry about this whole stupid stuff of people copying up work and posting it elsewhere !!Its irritating cause I guess at this rate I'll soon lose out on all the amazing writers I've befriended...And I dont wanna ever lose the touch of your writing and Im so sorry about this...But I can just request you too keep me in the buddy list when you send me updates plll...
So coming to this update !!
I am seriously gonna write a new dictionary with words to describe how amazingly some of you write...Till then bear with my words...It was fantubulous baby...Just loved every bit of it...
And the beginning...I guess for a change I love the beginning of an OS more than the ending...No offence meant...Somehow the way Arnav finds it out is such a great pleasure for me...I mean Im always pissed at the way he stands and never gets to look at the right thingErmm...And for once you fulfilled the my wish !!Approve
And I loved the two lines...I dont know why but somehow the simplest of the two lines had the best impact on me...
Every step he took took him closer to her....and her feet felt like lead and every step she took , took her away from him
Somehow for some reason these sentences felt like the crux-oint of your OS...Just dont ask why.,..Its a wierd and I think confusing thing tooo...But I loved your OS...and the ending was as good as it could be...the last line was sooo perfect for Khushi...Whatever she does she'd always have to be with him...No choice on this has she ??

Loved the update ShreyaHug


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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Thumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up loved da OS Smile! Yes Khushi knowing that her & Arnie r meant 2 b does float my boat Wink After all there is always that one thing in life that you have absolute assurity about that is meant be or yours no matter what may come...in Arhi's case it's their love (camouflaged behind misunderstandings, hatred, jealousy, anger, hurt, pain, misery, anguish...but it's still there...)
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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Beautifully written shreya!!!!!It was awesomeSmile

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