OS: So Cold *IMPORTANT NOTE/Blog link -page 19. - Page 6

Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it! Especially since you closed the carrying into the house loop. Side comment: Am I the only one in the world who liked Katniss better with Gale? I thought Peeta was so annoying! I had to rewrite the ending of the 3rd book in my head.
Posted: 11 years ago
The funny thing is I think this is exactly how they would both react if the truth ever comes out in the TV show😊 Edited by nazibah - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
I loved the whole os
Loved how arnav told her he would not let her go!
Thanks for the pm!
I Think you should continue if you get time :)
Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful! Just like their love!
Posted: 11 years ago
Fantabulous!! Loved it. Thnks 4 d pm dear
Posted: 11 years ago
I loved how khushi went along wit him witout a fight. Usually she fights nd counteracts him on evry single thing. But here she knows tht thrs no point, coz thy r meant to be.
Posted: 11 years ago
Ooh!!!! He's never going to lose his habit of challenging her is he? "Go and get it." Loved the line!!!!! πŸ‘


You've written an OS after sooo long Shreya and the wait was definitely worth it!!!!


So when are you going to be updating The Bet? πŸ˜³ Anytime soon??? πŸ˜ƒ I'm dying to read what happens next! πŸ˜
Posted: 11 years ago
Shrey.. That was very nice!

Uff.. better and best when compared to what is going on the show!

I loved the ending though the way you got it from start seemed that it is gonna have a sad ending!

Thanks for the PM!
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow..your writing is very impressive, flawless. Could visualize everything while reading, which I think is the best quality of a story.😊 Can't wait for those six months to end.
Posted: 11 years ago
that is what is the main difference between these two. he always sees the negative side thinks negatively but khushi is all abt being positive.. i sometimes think that is why these both get drawn together like two poles in a magnetic field lol..
 
good one shreya!

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