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TOOTE HUVE DIL... MG FF ...PT 15/45 updtd 15/8 (Page 14)

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
my dearest dear readers...
 give me a banner  or a song...for my fiction ...Smile
ill give u an update ...Wink




Edited by crazy_125 - 23 April 2012 at 6:57am

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Hmm short update!!!Cry

But really liked it!!!Embarrassed

Very confused about Geet's state of mind and Sid???…Confused

Awesome job so far…Clap

Eagerly waiting to know what happens next...Embarrassed

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 8:08pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loked it
but confuse about geet i guess geet lost her memory 
do continue soon

thnx for the pm

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 8:11am | IP Logged
sorry for the delay in update guys...
currently too busy ...
but ull be getting ur regular updates from this weekend...
also thinking to start an other fiction with completely diff concept from this fiction... which i  probably may start in next week...
sooo sorryy  dearies...

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 8:23am | IP Logged


sorry I can't help u with banner because I don't know how to make it...

but I will wait for update and ur new FF...

please update soon...

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
LOLkya note that it remembered me of someone hmmm song
yaad teri aati nahiii
kyaa karoonnn memory  jho nahii
yaad teri aati nahi
par yeh dil phir bhi dharkta hai teri liye
yaad teri aati nahi
kya karoon memory jho nhai
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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mel420

LOLkya note that it remembered me of someone hmmm song
yaad teri aati nahiii
kyaa karoonnn memory  jho nahii
yaad teri aati nahi
par yeh dil phir bhi dharkta hai teri liye
yaad teri aati nahi
kya karoon memory jho nhai
LOL

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 6:23am | IP Logged
PART -7

LONDON AIRPORT

SID – GEET CONVERSATION :

SID: Hmmm… so Geet ghar chalne ka iraada hai ki nai…..

(geet was going on and on and on till nw with her chatter pater………feeling sad for sid that he had to listen to the whole chatter patter that too standing in the airport.. )

GEET : hawww! (makes a gol gappa face :O)

SID : Ab chale …

Suddenly geet's phone rings …….

NANDINI : GEET KAHA HAI TU ….. ITNE DER KARADI…..GHAR AANE KA IRAADE HAI KI NAI……

GEET : DI BAS GHAR HI ARAHI HU

Then geet checks the time and she realizes that she and sid have been standing in the airport since 1 and hour……..

GEET : ITNA WAQT HOGAYA….. AUR MUJHE PATA HI NAHI CHALA….

SID : TUJHE KAISE PATA CHALEGI… JAB SE AAYI TAB SE TUM CHATTER PATTER JO KAR RAHI THI……

GEET :  :O and gets angry at sid

SID st : ab mujhe isse manana tho padegahi……

SID : WO GEET …..

GEET : GHAR CHALE……

AT THE SAME TIME , KHURANA VILLA , LONDON

MAAN ENTERS THE VILLA AND CALLS FOR MAHESH  (SERVANT )

MAAN : MAHESH TU KAHA HAI……

JALDI AAO AUR LUGGAGE ANDAR RAKHKE KAANA BANALO…. MEIN TODI DER MEIN AATHA HOON…….

MAHESH : JI SIR

[ADI AND SASHA HAVE BEEN GIVEN THEIR ROOMS IN THE OUT HOUSE AS MAAN IS VERY PARTICULAR ABOUT WHO COMES INTO THE VILLA]

MAAN THEN GOES OUT TO THE NEARBY PARK .. (HYDE PARK ) … HE IS VERY ATTATCHED TO THIS PLACE…

He sits there for some time lost in some memories….. then comes out of them with the sounds of thunder ….. and he goes back to the villa….

GEET'S PALCE ,LONDON

Geet and sid have just reached the place … and with sudden sounds of thunder … geet gets hyper and hugs sid tightly…….

After a minute she composes her self and goes in only to find her sister in full on angry mood……

Geet : st : baabaji aaj mujhe bachaalena……..

GEET : DI

NANDINI : GEET TUJHE PATA BHI HAI TIME KYA HORAHA HAI…….EH TIME HAI KYA GHAR AANE KI….. (she goes on blabbering even without noticing that there is an other person standing right beside her )

Hearing all the commotion in house karan comes down with sia in his hands…..

GEET : DI AB HOGAYI KYA…..  KOI AUR BHI HAI YAHA KADE KADE…..

That is when she notices sid …… nandini and karan are very happy to see sid…. Even sia as she her another partner in crime has also returned…..

NANDINI & KARAN  : SIDDHANT!...

SID: BHAIYYA , BHABI …

Sid hugs them……

GEET : TO KAISA LAGA SID KA SURPRISE……

SIA : CHAAACHUUU J

SID : HI SWEETHEART …..  TERE LIYE MAINE NA BOHUT SAARI TOYS LE AYI HU …………..

SIA : :D

GEET : AUR MERE LIYE (ASKS EXCITEDLY )

SID : MEI AAYA HOON NA……..

GEET : OH REALLY …!!! :/

NANDINI : AB CHALO BHAI KHANA TAIYAR HAI…. JAAKE HAATH MUH DOKHE AAJA ….TAB TAK MEIN KHANA LAGATI HOON…..

ALL LEAVE LEAVING KARAN AND NANDINI…..(SIA IS WID SID )

KARAN AND NANDINI ARE HAVING THEIR OWN OWN SWEET ROMANCE…….

AFTER EATING ALL LEAVE TO THEIR RESPECTED ROOMS…..

NEXT MORNING

SID : GEEET ….. YE KYA TARIKA HAI UTANE KA………

GEET : OLE MELA BABY KO BURA LAGA and smirks at him while giving a toothy grin……

SID giving his famous glare shouts back

SID : GEEET… PEHLE MEIN BABY NAHI…..AUR  YE KOI TARIKA HOTHA HAI APNI IS PYAARA BOY FRIEND KO UTAANE……..

GEET : giggles and is about to leave

Sid catches her and locks the door and traps her in btw him and the wall

GEET :  CHODO NA SID……

SID :  AAAHAAA ….PEHLE IS BOYFRIEND  KO KISSI TO DO…….

GEET : NAHI DOONGI THO…….

SID : THO…and he smirks….

Thanks to god nandini comes calling for geet and geet takes it as a chance and escapes biting his hand……he shouts in pain……..

Geet  : :P

SID : MEI TUJHE CHODUNGI NAI GEETAngry

GEET : PEHLE PAKKAD THO LO….and runs away from there

SID comes out of the room only to find nandini  beside….

NANDINI :  SID KYA HUA CHILLA KYU RAHE HO…….

SIA : KUCH NAI BHABHI ….

NANDINI : TEEKH HAI JALDI JAAKE FRESH HOKE NEECHE AAJA BREAKFAST TAIYAAR HAI ……

SID : TEEKH HAI BHABHI…..

AFTER HAVING BREAKFAST EVERYONE LEAVES FOR THEIR RESPECTIVE WORK PLACES

[KARAN : OFFICE

SID , GEET : COLLEGE]

(sid is geets classmate )

KHURANA VILLA :

HERE MAAN WOKE UP AND DROVE TO THE HYDE PARK …. SPENT SOME TIME THERE AND CAME BACK ONLY TO FIND ADI WAITING FOR HIM…..

ADI : MAAN AAP HYDE PARK GAYE THE NA…….(adi from being his most trusted employee is the only friend maan had during his life time..)

MAAN : HAAN THO……giving him his famous glare

ADI : KAB TAKK MAAN … KAB TAK AISA CHALTHA RAHEGA….

MAAN : MATLAB……

ADI : KAB TAK UNHI YAADON MEIN JEETE RAHOGI……..

 

PRECAP :  MORE OF ADI – MAAN CONVERSATION

                 SID AND GEET IN COLLEGE

               MAAN- GEET MEET

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