Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

TOOTE HUVE DIL... MG FF ...PT 15/45 updtd 15/8

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 PROLOUGE

MAN : KAASH TUM MUJHE SAMAJH PAATI ...
WOMAN : KYA KABHI TUMNE MUJHE SAMJHANE KI KOSHISH KI...NA SAMJHAYA NA SAMJHANE KI KOSHISH...
MAN : AISA KUCH HAI HI NAHI THO KYA SAMJHAVU... AB TU HI BATA... MERA KYA GALTI THA ...


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Posted: 12 years ago
CHARACTER SKETCH 

MAAN SINGH KHURANA :A MAN IN HIS LATE 20'S
 RUDE , PERSONIFIED , DIGNIFIED , HANDSOME , RICH , ARROGANT ...
MOST ELIGIBLE BACHELOR , A MULTI BILLIONAIRE AND THE OWNER OF KHURANA GROUP OF INDUSTRIES...
   
Gurmeet in Punar Vivaah



GEET HANDA : A LADY IN HER MID 20'S
ONCE UPON  A TIME WAS A BUBBLY, CHEERFUL AND A NAIVE GIRL...THOUGH NAIVE AND INNOCENT EVEN NOW HAS LOST HER CHARM IN HERSELF BUT PRETENDS TO BE THE SAME ONE BEFORE OTHERS ...  MORE TO BE REVEALED

Drashti Dhami


SIA: A CUTE 2 YR OLD

 MEERA  AND YASH :


ARJUN :
                 : 

ADI / ADITYA SHARMA :  



 PINKY MANCHANDA : 
 
         
 

SASHA  TASHA :
 

SAMEERA RATHODE :


KARAN SINGHANIA


NANDINI SINGHANIA \ MALHOTRA : 

SID / SIDDHANT CHOPRA:
    

ANVI KHURANA : DARLING SISTER OF MAAN IN HER EARLY 20'S LOVES PAMPERING HER...CARES THE MOST FOR HER THAN ANY ONE ELSE...
 
other characters will be updated later on 



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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting prologue 
great character sketch
looking forward for the update

continue soon

plz pm me 
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Posted: 12 years ago
sounds good !! :-)
cont soon :)
plzz pm me =]
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting prologue
nice cs
continue soon
add me in ur pm list

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PART 1 


OXFORD UNIVERSITY , LONDON

BOY 1 : WHERE HAVE U BEEN WE HAVE SEARCHED THE WHOLE PLACE LIKE ABOUT TWO TIMES 😡.

GIRL 1 :  EXACTLY COULD U PLEASE TAKE THE DIFFICULTY IN EXPLAINING US WHERE U DISAPPEARED ALL OF A SUDDEN😡..

BOY 2 : CHILL ! I THINK WE ARE OVER REACTING😆

GIRL 1 : FIRST OF ALL U SHUT UP😡

 ( TO THE OTHER GIRL ) SPEAK UP😡

GIRL 2 : I WAS AT THE YARD BEHIND THE BUILDING🥱

BOY 1 & GIRL 1 :  GEET OH REALLY  MAY I KNOW WAT U WERE DOING THERE AT THIS TIME WHEN U ARE EXPECTED TO BE IN THE LECTURE HALL GIVING OUR PRESENTATION😡😡

BOY 2 : OH MY GOD ! FIRSE PRESENTATION KA MARKS KAM MILEGA😭 ..

BOY 1 & GIRL 1: SHUT UP YASH😕..

YASH : ABA MAINE KYA KIYA MEERA 🥱..

BOY 1 : TUNE KUCH NAHI KIYA😆

GEET : ARJUN AB THO USKA PEECHA CHOD THO😛.

MEERA : TU THO BOL HI MAT AISA KYA HOTA HAI KI TU JAB DEKHO GAYAB HOJATHI HO HAR MONDAY PE... KAHA JAATHI HO ...😡.

GEET : AISA KUCH NAHI HAIN MEERA ... JUST WENT TO THE YARD ...PATHA NAHI KYU MUJHE WO JAGHA BOHUT ACHA LAGTHA HAI ... AUR WAHI BAATH MONDAY KA THO I THINK ITS PURELY CO INCIDENTAL (LOST IN HER THOUGHTS)...

ARJUN : TEEKH HAI ABI KE LIYE HUM YE BAATHE YEHI CHODTHE HAI AUR LECTURE HALL CHALTHE HAI... PRESENTATION DENI HAI YA NAHI...😆

YASH : CHALNA HAI NA😃.. GEET JALDI KARO😕..

GEET : (COMING OUT FROM HER THOUGHTS ) CHILL YASH I THINK ABI BHI WAQT HAI TU ITNA GABRAO MAT TERE MARKS KAHI NAHI JAANE WAALA HAI...😕AB CHALE...😊

MEERA : HA CHALO 😊

UPDATING CHARACTER SKETCH :)

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awesome update


loved their friend ship
waiting for maan's entry
continue soon

thnx for the pm
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nice.
love it,
do continue plz.

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PART 2


KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS , DELHI , INDIA

A LADY IN HER MID 20'S DESCENDING THE STAIRS WITH HER ASSISTANT AT HER BACK HOLDING HER COFFEE AND FILES'..

LADY : TASHA '. COFFEE'.

TASHA (ASSISSTANT) : YES SASHA ! (SASHA GLARES AT HER ) SILLY ME ''.

THEN THE SIREN RINGS'..  AND EVERY ONE STANDS AS IF ELECTROCUTED ON THE SPOT'''''..AND STARTS  RUNNING HERE THERE SEARCHING THINGS AND FILES REQUIRED ''. 

AND THEN A MAN ENTERS WITH STYLE AND ATTITUDE OOZING OUT OF HIM ( OF COURSE OUR ONE AND ONLY MAAN SINGH KHURANA) '''..

STAFF STAND UP TO GREET HIM ''..

SASHA : HELLO MK'

HE JUST NODS HIS HEAD ..

MAAN : WHERE IS ADI''..

A MAN COME S RUNNING AND SKIDS AND FORTUNATELY (AAHAAA ) UNFORTUNATELY  BUMPS INTO HIM ''.(AYOOO ) ONLY TO RECEIVE GLARES FROM HIM AND STARTS TO SPEAK ..

ADI : GU' GU '. GUD'. MO.. GUD MORNING SI ' SIR''.

MAAN : ADI '.. WHERE WERE U?

ADI : SI'SIR '. ME 'ME ACC..ACCOUNTS FI.LES CH..CHECK KAR RAHA THA LONDON PROJECT KA''..

MAAN : ADI , SASHA COME TO MY CABIN '' SAARE LONDON PROJECT KE FILES LEKE''. JALDI'''.

ADI : YES'SIR

SASHA : YES MK


IN MAAN'S CABIN:

MAAN SITTING IN HIS REVOLVING CHAIR AND LOST INTO SOME DEEP THOUGHTS UNTIL THERE WAS A KNOCK ON THE DOOR

MAAN : COME IN

SASHA & ADI TAKE THEIR SEATS AND START DISCUSSING ABOUT THE LONDON PROJECT  

MAAN : (CHECKING ACCOUNT FILES ) SASHA GET INTO THE DETAILED PLANS OF THE HOTEL

SASHA :  SURE MK, THE HOTEL HAS BEEN DIVIDED SYMMETRICALLY INTO 3 DIVISIONS SUCH THAT THE EVEN THE ELEVATION LOOK THE SAME AS PLAN . AND THE FAADE IS BEING DESIGNED USING GLASS AS WELL WITH A TINT OF MIXTURE WITH THE GREEK ARCHITECTURE OF HUGE PILLARS AT THE FACADE. AN SO ON.

MAAN : I'M SURE THE CLIENTS ARE GOING TO  HAPPY WITH OUR WORK …. BUT MAKE SURE U DON'T USE EITHER TOO MUCH OF GREEK ARCHITECTURE OR GLASS AND ALSO I WANT TO CHECK THE DETAILED SERVICE DRAWINGS BY EVENING.

AND ADI I HAVE CHECKED THE FILES THEY ARE FINE

SASHA : SURE MK

ADI AND SASHA LEAVE THE CABIN

 

AT THE SAME TIME IN OXFORD UNIVERSITY, LONDON

 

A PERSON ON THE DIAS : NOW WE HAVE THE PRESENTATION ON  GREEN ARCHITECTURE AND LANDSCAPE ARCHITECTURE BY GEET , ARJUN , YASH AND MEERA …

YASH : BACH GAYA TIME PE THO AGAYA .

MEERA : SHUT UP YASH .. MUJHE BOHUT TENSION HARAHI HAI

PRECAP : PRESENTATION

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