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SS: Anjali-Imad (Arhi. Part7 p81 TECH PROBS pg 88) (Page 28)

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 2:06am | IP Logged
love the way the story is going...abhinav n anjali were utterly unexpected...keep going!

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged
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Loved it. Love Arhi and the cat scene.
And then Arnav coming down the hall with the cat following him. So cute. You have kept ASR's character in tact. Fabulous. His reaction to the cat following him around is just so ASR.
Excellent work. I am just loving Anjali/Imad story.
Now Abhi is in the picture as the blast from Anjali's past. Imad is just burning in jealousy and pain.
Can't wait to read more.
Continue soon.
Thanks.Big smile

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Marybarton

Originally posted by Rita.C

Mary, its coming along nicely~ 
love it.
btw, i particularly loved reading about our ArHi... more such scenes please? btw, if you can, please write about their interaction and day to day issues in dealing iwth their difference in cultures  - there is going to be fireworks on a daily basis for sure.



Hi Rita,
        I like your idea. It is very normal that their differences need to be worked on just like in any other marriage. But do you mean differences in religions or status? I am thinking 6 months together made them more tolerant of each other's differences. So I am guessing you mean their religions?

Sorry Mary, I meant Arnav and Khushi's differences. I don't believe differences in religion cause issues as much as cultural differences do and when people call them religious differences they really mean how people interpret and practice their religion. As you would know, the way religions are practiced in different places completely depends on local practices and interpretations. 

But the differences in culture, values, upbringing and attitude in Arnav and Khushi will be interesting for me. they are just so different in their approach to life.. though they also have an intrinsic similarity that draws them together.

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Nice update . Its very emotional n sensible potrait of al character . Poor imab n his bad luck . Hope the misunderstanding get cleared asap .

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
I miss hearing from some of my loyal readers and friends. 

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 This is for you, Mary:

"Only from the Heart, can you touch the Sky."  

~Rumi

I cannot tell you how humbled I feel at having this OS dedicated to me!  I have no words...I can only say that it is one of the best GIFTS I have ever received!  "Thank you" doesn't even begin to cover it!  You write from the heart, and it won't be long before you touch far more than you do here!Smile

Ah, you started with MY LOVE!!!LOL  My heart fluttered when I read the clickety clack of his Italian made shoes!!!  Absolutely adored Khushi's innocent greeting!  I can relate because even after all these years, I greet my own father in the same way!!!Smile  The Nawab puts his plan into action right away--who better than his Darya to carry it out!


I must say your very first scene of ArHi together has to be my most favorite thus far!  I could ttly imagine the two of them sitting together like that--what a beautiful tableau!  I really liked how open ArHi were with each other...she asks for permission to bring di to the meeting, he retaliates...She continues to make her case!  He can't help but get on the defensive re. Imad's past!  Yet, in the end, he has enough faith in his wife to let her carry out her matchmaking!  I just loved the dialogues in this scene!

So not surprised Khushi "tricked" Anjali into attending the Shareholder's meeting!LOL  I was just amazed at how you kept each of the characters in this scene so distinct.  Khushi surprised Imad as well...Well, she's just one girl with a whole bag of tricks, eh!  Ah, what she won't do for love!  The awkward conversation between Anjali and Imad was so poignant...their uneasiness suggests how much they do care for each other...He couldn't get past the thought that it was an obligation to her, she thought she offended him...We finally saw how exactly Anjali viewed him...heiwas "powerful" and "protective" in her view...and she, the "vulnerable woman...throwing herself at him."

I loved the part with Imad and Evelina.  In light of last week's "mirrored revelations" on the show, I couldn't help but chuckle how Evelina allowed him to reflect back on his past, on all his wrong-doings...to allow him to say he was sorry!  Yet, she reminded him that though she was hurt in the moment, she learned to move on...giving him insight that things do and can change for the better!
Well done in showcasing the angst...now Imad knows what it felt like to be in Evve's shoes!

Oh, my heart tore  while reading the last few paragraphs!  He did not want her to feel guilty for all that had happened.  He was so forlorn at seeing her feel sad!  Her concern for his friendship with the Nawab--which only highlighted how much he meant to her & the Awadh family--so on display!  His apology, her concern...suggesting his feelings were misguided!  And then, in the end, he couldn't contain it!  He told her unequivocally that "this is not some passing fancy."  He'd spoken what's in his heart!  

Wow, it was a bit of an emotional rollercoaster riding with these two, Mary!  But I thoroughly enjoyed it!Big smile  I have read part 2 as well, and will give detailed comments on it within a day or two! Thanks for being patient with me...Well done, my friend!  Just always a pleasure for me to wind down reading your treasured pieces!!

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
If part 1 was awesome then part 2 is fabulous, deliciously tasteful like a chocolate cake

Poor Imad I want to hug him and say break Abihnav's arms and legs if you need help you have my support


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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 12:21am | IP Logged
Part 3 preview:

Imad and Anisha

Imad and Anjali have the big talk

Arnav and Anjali

Arnav and Khushi intimacy

Darya's rain dance party

O Re Piya - please listen to song for hints, listen to lyrics but don't want the video of the original song. I am thinking of doing scenes with each lyric, it is kind of hard to write scenes. It is much better with VMs but Imad is not actually a character in the show, so show scenes can't be used. You will see what I mean soon. Please listen to the song...If you don't know Hindi/Urdu, there are translations on youtube and anywhere on the net. I will post if I find a good one.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5awZ9sOTA54

Ziyad's peace


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