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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Soloperson

Neel, Hug

Dude you are coming out of ur Shell and writing romance...nice...Embarrassed...Loved ur update, missed it big time..
Dil maange more ...waiting for u next update...

hehe ...i m trying man..i m trying...i dnt knw if i m gud at dt...cuz i ve read some amazing ffs...nt sure if mine ll b gud enough...nw dtz 4 u al to decide...right??

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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 6:24am | IP Logged
great

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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 7:51am | IP Logged
nice !!!!!

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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 9:41am | IP Logged
amazin part

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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
really a sweet update dear 
loved it
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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
CHAP 25

what a day to begin wid...
dis ws nt d only shock she got...
her day ws gona b eventful...

firstly she ws sleeping on his chest...n den she gt another JHATKA whn she saw d clock...
it ws hell late n she missed d aarti...
she jumped out of d bed n ran 2 d bathroom ...dis cud nt get worse...she thought 
little did she knew...dis ws js d beginning...Wink

she took a shower n changed her clothes hastily...
saw js in time dt arnav ws on bou 2 wake up...
she dint wanted to face her after last night...nt yet
neither did she ve any time ...
she rushed out of d room widout giving herslf a look in d mirror...

KITCHEN 
she reached d kitchen panting for breath ...
payal ws already der...
she saw payal racing up thngs...
"thnx to u khushi ...v r running late for d breakfast...where were u???u dint even show up for arti...now be prepared to face naniji..."
"ha jiji...m so sorry..wo.."
"acha rehne do...now help me wid d breakfast..."
"OP ji...ye...sab ap chod do...hum dekhlenge...ap ye sabzi dekhlo..."

PHEW
khushi breathed deeply...
finally ...her morning task ws over..
payal had gone out to arrange d table...
khushi ws winding up d mess...
she relaxed for few secs...
whn she remembered somethng...somethng dt made her go red...
she ran her fingers on her lips...n smiled shyly...
she ws going thru d memories of d night before..."OH MY GOD KHUSHI...WAT HAPPENED TO U??" payal pointed towards her neck,,,
js den OP came n informed them dt naniji is waiting for dem for breakfast...
khushi ws already scared cuz of d missed aarti n so rushed out of d kitchen...

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arnav looked up when he heard d familiar tinkling sound of her payal..

khushi came out n saw arnav sitting der busy talking to akash when he stopped n looked towards her...

der eyes met for a moment...n khushi lowered her gaze nt daring to look at him...bt her face had turned pink...

arnav understood dt she ws avoiding him...for d obvious reason...
it is good dis way...he dint want anyone to catch them blushing like dis..he dint wanted to b d centre of der joke...his sis wont leave a chance...wont spare him...n so he looked away too...

khushi passed by him n sat next to him...
she wanted to b seated anywhere bt beside him...
her mind kept going back to d memory of last night...
it wud b wrong to say arnav ws nt going thru d same difficulty...
both of dem made it pretty obvious of der awkward moment...n so everyone else at d table noticed dt...

anjali- "aj itni khamoshi kyu dikh rahi hai..." she said teasing arnav n khushi 
arnav shot her a stern look...asking her to STOP RIGHT THERE!
n she did...bt den it ws nani now...he cant say anythng 2 her... 
"ha chote...khushi bitiya...kya baat hai??"
both of dem dint say anythng...instead started playing wid d food...
after a while dey noticed sudden silence...
arnav ws first to look up...
he saw anjali n nani exchanging glances...n smiling quitely...
payal looked terrified...n akash...he ws trying to hide his face n his smile...last one to react ws mami..."hello hi bye bye...ee kya hogawa...PUBLIC DISPLAYS OF LOVES???"
dtz when khushi looked up...n saw everybody smiling n when dey saw her dey al burried themselves in der plates...she ws confused...
arnav then looked up to khushi...to ask her if she knew wt ws going on...n instantly his eyes widened...threatening to pop out...his gaze fixed at a point on khushi...on her neck...
khushi followed his gaze...she touched herslf to check if anythng ws wrng wid her...she checked for her mangalsutra it ws der...she roughly scanned herslf n winced at one point...y ws dt spot so sensitive...

she jumped out of d chair n ran whn she realized wt it ws leaving everyone behind bursting into laughter...

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arnav ws stil in shock...while everyone else ws stil laughing..."dis cud nt be more embarrasing"
his appetite died n he rushed out of there...before anyone starts passing comments...

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khushi ran to her room...got infront of d mirror...looked up to her reflection n gasped...
"no no no...nooo...oh devi mayya...dis day cud nt ve gotten worse..."
she sat on d stool...she ws trembling all over...she had to calm herslf...
"firstly i ws sleeping like dt...n den i gt up late...missed arti thnnfully nani ji dint say anythng bt stil...n now DIS...life is unreasonbly cruel to me..."

LAST NIGHT
after many failed attempts of trying to get some sleep...khushi finally gave up...
she thought it ws only cuz arnav ws right beside her sleeping nicely while she ws struggling here...i blame him..
i m nt able to sleep cuz my plans r nt working...she has to gt back at him...
"aisa kya kare jisse..."
she felt him...his fingertips caressing her arm...

arnav felt her twisting in d bed...every few mins...
he knew she ws nt able to sleep jst like him...
n of course for d very same reason...

she had stopped twisting...
he turned and to see if she ve fallen asleep...
he smiled...he saw her talking to herself in her mind...

he moved his hand towards her...
she ws startled at his touch...
he pulled her towards him...

his face was barely inches away from hers...she cud feel his warm breath on her face...
he placed a kiss on her forehead...
kissed her nose...
lowered himslf...ready to claim her lips...
he looked into her eyes...as if asking for permission...
her eyes told hhim she ws ready...
he captured her lips wid his...
she stared at him for a while...n den she ws lost...

arnav wanted dis moment to last for eternity...
he deepened d kiss...

khushi could feel d heat rapidly rising up her face ...
she dint knw wt she ws feeling...
her heart suddenly started to beat faster...
she pulled away...n pushed him to his side

she looked away blushing red at wat had just happened...
she knew where dis ws leading...
she ws jst nt ready yet...

she felt him pulling towards him again..
n dis time she dint ve d courage to protest...
he ws her husband afteral...
he had al d right to do anythng to her even if it is in d middle of night...

arnav on d other hand sensed her hesitation...
bt he cud nt keep his hands off her...
bt he had to stop...he cant take dis further...
he gently placed feather light kisses on her jaw line...
moving along d path of her neck...
she gasped...
he stopped der...softly bit her on dt area...kissed it...
MARKED n SEALED...
KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA-SINGH RAIZADA BELONGED TO HIM!!!

THE END

PHEW...
i bet dis is d longest i ve ever written...
my pathetic attmpt on writing somethng romantic...tel me how it ws??
i suck i knw...i may get d "worst ever romantic scene written award"Cry
do leave ur comments...god or bad...js lemme knw if i shud ever try writing such thngs again...
thnx

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Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 13 June 2012 at 1:05pm

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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Amazing
Public display of love 
poor arnav n kushi

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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Hahahaha...mamiji's PDL...;)
luvd d embarsin moment...:D

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