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FF - WHISPERING HEARTS (NEW OS ADDED) (Page 73)

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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 10:10am | IP Logged
heeyy!! awesoomee ! PM me when you post a new chapter!!!! :DDD Wink
and brilliant jobb!! Clap

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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 5:37am | IP Logged
nyc update buddy...SmileSmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
CHAP 18 

ARNAVZ BEDROOM
he turns arnd so dt he does nt ve to face khushi... shuts his eyes...
wat ve i done...hw can i b so stupid

khushi ws stil recollecting al dt he had js said...did she hear it right??
"kya...kya kehne wale the ap??"

arnav does nt respond
"bataeye humein...ap...dil ki baat...kya kehna tha apko...boliye..."

arnavs opens his eyes...
"kuch nahi..." n storms out of d room
khushi stands der...
clueless...
she recollects d day of her wedding...whn arnav tels her dt he he wants to talk 2 her bou somethng...n den d bhindi scene...
she feels so good remembering dose magical moments...
where ve dt beautiful time gone
"kya arnav ji usi k baarein mein baat kar rahe the??"

arnav comes out of d room...
hez so mad at himslf...
hez angry wid himlf
he ve never lost control before..so y nw...whn he does nt want khushi to knw anythng bou his feeling...nt yet atlst...

ANAJALI'S ROOM
anjali ws arranging clothes in her wardrobe
she sees her wedding album...
she smiles...n takes it out...goes thru some of d pics...
her smiles vanishes whn she sees shyamz pic...

n den she remembers hw she lost her mom on d dt dreadful day...
n hw shyam came in2 picture...
n hw she gt married to shyam...

she presses d album against her chest
closes her eyes...tears roll down...
"hum fir bhi bahut khush hai..."

shyam enters...

anjali immediately wipes her tears n welcomes him smilingly..
"ye kya dekh rahi hai ap raanisaheba?" n takes d album from her hand...
"arey ye to hamari shadi ki album hai..."- shyam
"ji ha...haath lagi to aisi hi dekh rahe the...waise ap jab se kaha the??" - anjali
shyam gets lil tensed..."wo hum...yehi...aisi ghar par hi the bas..." n changes d topic "waise hum apko bataye raani saheba...ye din (pointing at d album) hamari zindagi ka sab se haseen aur acha din hai..."

anjali smiles...bt her smile is nt touching her eyes...whch shyam ll n can never make out...she accepts his lie knwing xctly where n wat he ws upto...
bt ignores it compltly...
he has every right to hide or share or do anythng he wants- she thnks...

ARNAV'S BEDROOM
khushi returns to her bedroom after chit-chatting wid nani payal n others...
she notices somethng at d door
she sees dt d room is unusually dark...
she rushes to open it 
"HAAA..."
she covers her mouth wid both her hands in astonishment...

THE END

y did khushi react like dt??
is arnav fine??

hw ws it???
ok 1stly XTRMLY SORRY 4 d late update...
ws lil bzy some work...
chalo nw jaldi se comment n tel me kaisa laga
n ask pmz if u wnt darlings...
thnx 

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Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 10 July 2012 at 12:51pm

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
pls cont

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
nyc part

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
grl you are very very late fr update :/
And above that it was short! :/
Kaheen shayam ne iss baar snake tou nahee chor dia khushi k rooom k bahar??? :O
Well nicely written =P
Keep it up and plz update soon! :-)
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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
is arnav okayConfused
what's up with anji
nice update
continue soon
thanks for pm

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