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velangini IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 May 2012 at 3:00am | IP Logged
reaction 1 is true kkgsrLOL
aww he laughed
continue soon
thanks for pm

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kriti_atharv IF-Rockerz

Joined: 23 November 2011
Posts: 7552

Posted: 05 May 2012 at 8:08am | IP Logged
i liked the 2 part but i guess the first one matches khushi but it was amazing n thnx 4da pm dear...

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nishi_I-fian IF-Rockerz

Joined: 24 October 2008
Posts: 5339

Posted: 05 May 2012 at 9:19am | IP Logged
fst one was funny n suits KKGSR...ROFL

But 2nd one was so romentic Embarrassed

Luv both reaction of khushi yar...

N tht bed's suspense...uff wanna knw...wats there.!!!!
Upd soon
priasweet IF-Rockerz

Joined: 11 September 2011
Posts: 6012

Posted: 05 May 2012 at 10:10am | IP Logged
nice update
i loved reaction 1

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arshisangel Senior Member

Joined: 26 August 2006
Posts: 757

Posted: 05 May 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Loved both reasons as 1st reason is more like khusi and second she cn be so if it makes sense lol nywayz arnav finally said it so cnt wait to read d next part :)
BARUN-myladdu Goldie

Joined: 18 September 2011
Posts: 1685

Posted: 05 May 2012 at 11:06am | IP Logged


arnav makes khushi sit on d bed end
n goes on d other side of d bed...
arnav ve kept somethng special on d bed...decorated it between flowers...
he gets it...
n he den sits on d foot of d bed..infront of khushi...
khushi stil cant see wtz in arnavz hands..

he does nt say anythng...
he den takes somethng out..
itz a box...
a beutiful ring box...
he opens it...
itz a RING...
he takes it out of d box... 
den takes her hand..


he softly places d ring on her finger...
she blushes...
she getz a clear look of d ring now

itz a beautiful giant size heart shaped sparkling diamond ring..

she smiles thnking dtz arnav...he surely is d best at everythng...
arnav is satisfied whn he saw khushiz reaction...she loves it
he takes her hand...he does nt take his eyes off her...n kisses her hand...
khushi turnz red...
her life ve taken a 360 degree turn...
she ve never been dis happy her entire life...

"how is d ring?? pasand ayi tumhe??"
"ji...bahut khoosurat hai..."
"par tumse kam..."
she turnz even more red...
arnav touches her cheeks wid his finger
"tumhare gaal laal hogaye hai.."
she blushes...she cant take any more of dis...
she goes away from him...
for some reason...she is shivering...she does nt knw y..
she is lil scared at d same time she dying to knw wt comes nxt...wt has her husband planned now...

arnav comes near her...
he hold her behind...
slowly traces her waist upto her stomach
she holds her breath...
he places both his hands on her stomach n holds on to it softly...
she keeps her hand on his...
she can feel his breath
he smells her hair... 
"khushi.." he whispers...
"i love you u so much..." he holds her tightly...
khushi melts around his strong grip...

he kisses on her neck...
she immediately turns arnd n hugs him...


she wants to tell him dt she loves him too...
bt shez too shy to say dt out loud...

arnavs fone starts ringing...
he ignores it...
he does nt want to let her go
it keeps ringing...
"khushi tum kuch keh rahi thi..."
"wo...umm...apka fone aa raha hai..."
"ha...theek hai...tum kya keh rahi thi..."
"hum dekhte hai fone"
n tries to leave him bt he does nt let her go...
"chodiye humein..." she says shyly...
n arnav catches her hand...
pulls her toward him...
"tum kya keh chahti ho khushi..."
itz as if arnav  knew wt she wanted to say..n is forcing her to say it now...right now...

ok guyz hw ws it???
did u al gt xcited???
since it ws treat on other kachra ws included hehe
chalo den leave ur comments...


Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 10 July 2012 at 12:54pm

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barunslakku IF-Rockerz

Joined: 08 June 2009
Posts: 5042

Posted: 05 May 2012 at 11:18am | IP Logged
cute..loved it...romantic...loved all the rabba ves
jahnvi.luvs.ASR IF-Rockerz

Joined: 08 March 2012
Posts: 6350

Posted: 05 May 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged
finally he gve her a ring...Smile
ohh lots of rabba vesEmbarrassed...
huh bt dis damn fone y it rangAngry
loved the updateSmile

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