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FF - WHISPERING HEARTS (NEW OS ADDED) (Page 70)

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
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very nice story 


Edited by Mishti13 - 03 May 2012 at 4:50pm

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Wow wat a nyc chapter simply romantic 
any hu can u pls pm me ur nxt chapter? ?? :)

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 12:31pm | IP Logged

CHAP 20 

POOL SIDE
"KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA...I LOVE YOU"
khushiz heart skipped a beat...

RABBA VEEE...

time has stopped for khushi...
she cud nt react to wat js happened...
she cud nt blve dis ws happening..
somewhere down d line...she alwayz knew he had feelings for her...
bt it ws alwayz confusing...
bt nw...arnav said it himslf...
is dis for real??
she kept staring at him blankly...

arnav on d other hand ws relieved...
it ws as if some burden came off his chest...
so dis how it feels ..
whn u let ur heart out... 
when u listen to ur heart...

she looked so perfect standing infront of him..

(here starts d common story for both d parts)

he got up...
took her face in his hands
leaving no space btw dem...

"khushi...
i ve alwayz loved u..pata nahi kab se..."

he kisses her forehead...
khushi shuts her eyes...
she wants every one of dis beautiful moment to sink in deep...

"...i ve alwayz wanted to tel u dis..."
he sees dt khushi ve closed her eyes...n tears r flowing down her cheeks...
he understood dt dose r happy tears..he need not worry...
"khushi..." he whispers...
she opens her eyes...n holds on to his hands...
RABBA VEEE
she wants to say so many thngs to him...
bt she cant thnk of anythng ..
shez speechless
khushi kumari gupta is speechless!
dtz d effect arnav ve it on her...


he wipes her tears wid his thumb...
n takes her inside d room

it is now dt khushi sees d room clearly...it even more beautifully decorated dan d pool side...

tons of candles..through out d room
n entire floor ws covered wid rose petals
n millions of stars hanging thru d ceiling...
js d way she likes it...

she sees dt der is somthng on d bed...before she cud get d clear picture of it...arnav said "khushi.."
n gestures towards d bed...
he makes her sit on d bed end...

THE END 

no precap...haha...sowie Tongue
hope u al njyd it...as much as i did writin it...
god i got so xcited writing dis hehe
chalo plz tel me whch reaction did u al like...
n plz ask 4 pmz 
thnx

NEXT


Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 10 July 2012 at 12:54pm

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Reaction 2 was nice!!
Loved it, But it was too short!!!
Continue soon!!!!Smile
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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
HEY LOVED IT SO MUCH..NEXT TIME GIVE A LONG UPDATE PLZ..ITS TOO GOOD...

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
ooo wow. nice update. thanks for the pm. loved the confession.

Edited by rashgirl000 - 04 May 2012 at 12:45pm

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
reason 1 was truly kkgsr
loved both reasons...
hmmm wats on the bed????
thanx for the pm

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Awww Neel that was beautiful, ok now the reaction part, don't hit me but I was thinking both the reactions depicts Khushi so why not combine them, like I loved when she said silently said Singh Raizada and also felt  happy that he had finally confessed his love to her...bcos that's typical Khushi who is still the Sanka Devi and Khushi combination...that's my two cents on the reaction, sorry if I confused u some more...glad to know you get excited writing this OS bcos we get super excited reading it...

Oops sorry for the long reply...great job as usual,looking forward for the bedroom scene..Embarrassed


Edited by Soloperson - 04 May 2012 at 12:52pm

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