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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged
NICE but short. This is the problem, he can't express his feelings easily. Hope sth happen soon
Is it a surprise from Arrnav (Candles and so on...Wink)
Thanks 4 d PM.

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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 3:53am | IP Logged
nice..but do continue soon n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged
eh? 
suspenswaa.. ??
hmm..
nice update!
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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 4:39am | IP Logged
loved it!!!!
pls cntinue soon!!!!
wat happened in their room!!!!

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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 7:17am | IP Logged
wow brilliant continue soon and pm me

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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 10:29am | IP Logged
CHAP 19 

ARNAV'S BEDROOM-

khushi enters her room...n screams...
she saw fire..oh no wait...itz a candle...
she immediately turns arnd n looks at d rest of d house "bakhi k ghar mein light to hai.."
her vision adjusts to d dim light of d room...
she walks in...n surprised is 2 c dt d room is changed entirely...
while walking she feels somethng is on d floor..somethng realy soft...she looks down...ROSE PETALS...
surprised she tries to look up...somebody places hand on her eyes...
"SHHH"
ITZ ARNAV

RABBAAA VEEE...

"ap ye kya kar rahe hai...hamari ankhein kyu band kar rahe hai aur ye kamre ko kya kardiya hai...aur "
"shhh...khushi...main jaisa kehta hu waisa karo..." he whispers
she feels his breath against her ear...she stiffens...hez so close to her...her heart beat raises...
"ji...magar..."
"maine kaha na khushi...bilkul chup"- arnav

he slowly removes his hand...n puts up a blind fold...
"arnavji humein kuch dikhayi nahi de raha..."
"MAIN HOON NA..." n holds her hand softly
he makes her walk towards d pool side...
he treats her like a princess...
though khushi is unable to understand wat is happening...bt she is loving dis...she cant wait for d rest of night to unfold infront of her...

arnav makes her stop n removes d fold
khushi opens up her eyes
n is shocked to see what is infront of her...

d pool is filled wid floating candles...
d entire floor is covered by rose petals...
rest of d area ve tons of bouquets...
she feels arnavz hand on hers...
he comes infront to face her...
EYELOCK
RABBAA VEEE

khushi ve never ever seen dis side of arnav...
der ws a complete diff man nw..
his chocolate brown eyes had a spark...
n were filled wid love...
love for khushi...
khushi cud nt blve wt she ws witnessing...
is dis realy happening..
or is it a dream..
even if it is a dream...she does nt want dis to break off...

FEW HOURS AGO
arnav is super duper tensed...
he is as usual pacing up n down his room
"he ve never done anythng of dis sort before
so i m bound to b nervous..
hold on...ASR??N NERVOUS??
dtz so nt me...
bt no ... I M FREAKING NERVOUS BOU DIS 
ok...whn i can handle d biggest fashion house of india...i can dfntly handle dis...
no big deal..
no no no...IT IS A BIG DEAL..
ok wait...calm urslf...
i ve alwayz been inxpressive bou such thngs...
may b i shud take dt route for my further plans
no wait...if i do so...hw on earth is she gona knw bou my feelings den.???
so nw wat??
ok ok...i need a plan...hmm...a plan...
yes...i got it...
y dint i thnk of dis before
ok i can do dis...
YES I CAN!!!"

POOL SIDE
i ws being so stupid bou d whole thng..
i m nt nervous at al...
she is d most beutiful thng ever happened to me...
i can do ANYTHNG for her...

he takes khushiz hand...

RABBAA VEEE...

"main tumse kuch kehna chahta hu"
...goes on one knee
khushi looks confused...bt of course loving every moment

"KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA...I LOVE YOU"

khushiz heart skipped a beat...

THE END 
hw ws it guyzzz???
i ws so xcited to write dis down...
hehe
lemme knw if u al njyd it or nt

NEXT


Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 10 July 2012 at 12:52pm

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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
And Arnav confessed his love in a very dhamakadar way ...woo hoo...aww

I loved the way you depicted the proposal scene , rose petals, floating candles...hmmm ...NICE...

Loved the ending...Clap

P.S. I loved the Main Hoon Na touch to it...Embarrassed


Edited by Soloperson - 02 May 2012 at 10:46am

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Posted: 02 May 2012 at 10:42am | IP Logged
yeah i am the first to comment
i just loved it you should have continued 
it was a superb post

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