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Posted: 23 June 2012 at 12:39am | IP Logged
really nice update...Wink
thankyou for the pm...(:
continue soon...<3

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Posted: 23 June 2012 at 2:02am | IP Logged
nice dear...uh oh khushi is in trouble...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Posted: 29 June 2012 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Nice update!!

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nice part
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Posted: 02 July 2012 at 6:43am | IP Logged

m sorry m late again..ws horribly busy...

so skipped clg today to write down few chaps...

so here it is...ENJOYBig smile


Chap 28


Mornings'they r so beautiful when u ve a good nights peaceful sleep'.otherwise they r awful...

Sometimes mornings bring good news n sometimes bad..

For khushi it ll bring loads of surprises..from her beloved husband

 

Little did she know her life is js nt in a mood of settling down'

It stil had loads to offer..

She never noticed before bt she had quite an adventurous life'.

 

Khushi ws dragging her sleep'she wanted to sleep more'.5 more mins'she ws disturbed again'by some irritating sounds'

She heard d door open n close few times'

"aarrgghh'" she took d other pillow n covered her face'

stil she cud hear someone walking by'

"arnavji'.plzz'"

noises dint stop'

"ARNAVJI!!!"

she got up screaming his name'

she looked arnd'

trying to register d view held infront of her'

her room'

she ws nt in shantivan'

she was in her own room'

 

she thought of him instantly..

hope he had a peaceful sleep unlike me'

hope he ve gotten up early'

hope he is nt missing her..as I m missing him'

wait'wat??i m missing him??

Stop it!

 

She got out of d bed

Stretched herslf

She ws gona walk out of her room bt  instead went near d window n opened it'stood infront of it'

She took a deep breath'

It is going to be a good day she thought

 

Not to far from her window'almost not visible'someone was watching her'he relaxed n leaned against d tree'smiling broadly whn he took in d beautiful view'HIS WIFE'

Dtz all he needed to start his day'

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OFFICE

Arnav cud ve arranged someone for this work'

He dnt ve to go personally for dt'he felt like doing it on his own'for his own pleasure to do something to please his wife'he smiled 'how much has KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA-SINGH RAIZADA ve changed d man i ws '

If someone told me few months back dt I ll sending'no personally taking somethng for a girl'he wud ve laughed his head off'or simply screamed at him

This girl'this girl is d only reason of my existence now'she ve changed me upside down..for good'

 

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BUAJI'S HOUSE

Khushi "ha buuaaajii'.i ll gt dt too'dnt worry I ve written down everything u need from d market 'I wont forget anything'n I ll b back in no time'" she screamed back while arranging her purse'

 

She opened d door n stepped on something..

She looked down to see a beautiful bunch of red roses'

 

"oh wow'I almost spoiled these lovely flowers'" n picked dem up'

she searched right n left..no sign of anyone who wud ve possibly left it at their doorstop by mistake..YES ..dtz wt she thought '

no birthdays..

no anniversaries'

it surely is a mistake..

who n y wud anyone send it to her house ???

 

she smelled them deeply'enjoying its beautiful fragrance'"jisne bhi ghalti ki ho'dey ll come back n take it'bt til den it can stay wid me.."

 

she happily took it inside n placed it in d vase in her room..

"my room ll b filled wid itz fragrance when I return"

 

this day ve already started getting better'she thought

 

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MARKET

 

"aloo..check

bhindi..check

tomatoes..check

gobi..check

hmm'now left wid kirana store n I ll b done'"

she walked past shops of dresses n accessories'she ws busy stuffing back her list in her purse when her eyes fell on this immensely gorgeous clutch..

a typical traditional clutch'

jst right for d parties'oh how she wished shud cud buy it den n der only if she ws nt carrying so many thngs wid her'

"its ok'I can always come back n buy it'" n den she saw d price tag'n almost dropped her bags'trying to save d bags from falling d handle of her purse got pulled n broke "aargghh'kyu devi mayya'"

 

she looked back at d clutch n price tag "loot machi hai laxminagar mein'" n walked away'

she reached d kirana store only to find dt her list is missing'"arrgh n I thought dt dis ws getting better'"

"umm..now wt al ws der on d list'umm'now buaji is gona call me wid all d names she ve named wid "

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TING TONG

buaji opened d door to find a horrible view infront of her..

khushiz petite figure holding tons of bags

her purse clutched under her arm 'handle of whch she ws holding on d other hand'

completely drenched in water 'thnks to d sudden heavy rains..

"aaacchooo.."  khushi greeted her'

"hare nandkishore'sanka devi ka pura bazaar khareed lae ho??"

"aacchooo'"
"bhitar aao '.garimaa'" she took bags from khushi n made her sit n started scolding her for being so careless'while garima started drying her hair'

"buaji'"

"chup karo sankadevi'humein kuch nahi sunna hai'aisa koi karat hai ka??"

"buaji'"
"tum hamari baat sunti ho kya jo hum tumahri sunenge??"

"buaji '.hum kapde badal le??"
"ha ha jao'.jaldi jao'.sardi pakad legi warna'"
while walking towards her room she cud stil hear buaji mumbling "ka zarurat thi ek hi din mein sab kaam kane ki??sanka devi to humein pagal hi kardegi.."

she went inside her room'placed her dupatta on d bed 'her room smelled amazing'n den she noticed a bag on her bed'

"aaahhh" buaji n garima heard khushi scream in her room

THE END

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Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 04 July 2012 at 3:05pm

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Posted: 02 July 2012 at 7:05am | IP Logged
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Posted: 02 July 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Whats in that bag?? Great update :)

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Posted: 02 July 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged
nice one do pm me the nxt part...:)

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