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FF - WHISPERING HEARTS (NEW OS ADDED) (Page 109)

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Posted: 14 June 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by asrcraze

company for the mark !! Aww it was feeling lonely..ha ha :D LOL

Nice update :) Now its buaji's turn to laugh at them ?!?

And they're fighting again :(

hmmm ll see buajiz reaction on nxt update...
n ya i thnk khushi shud nt give up so soon right..n dtz y dey r on it again whch dey r best at - FIGHTING

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Posted: 14 June 2012 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aks555

superb update buddy...luved it simply...!!
thnxxx fr d PM...
n plzzz update soon..Big smile


THNX HUN Big smile

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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
oh wow loved it dear...it was awsuuum n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Posted: 16 June 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Ur ff is hvng nice story!
Waitng 4 nxt prt. Plz update soon

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Posted: 16 June 2012 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
awesome update.
hope khushi does not do anything reckless like her short-tempered pati.
loved the update. thanks for the pm


Edited by rashgirl000 - 16 June 2012 at 1:39pm

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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
ya i knw itz been over a week...
somethng kept me busy...
sorry...
i m a lil down lately n dis update reflects dt...kindly bare wid it...
so here it goes...
njy...Big smile

CHAP 27

HALL

everyone ws attending buaji...dey were al busy conversing wid her whn
shyam walked in
anjali "agaye ap?kaha chale gaye the ap itni subah?"
"wo hum kaam se gaye the rani saheba.."

he looked over buaji n greeted her..
she wanted to look away bt cud nt do so...as everyone ele ws waiting for to her to respond
she gave a fake smile n nodded...
whch dint went unnoticed by mamiji...

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anjali took shyam for breakfast n filled in bou d current activity of arnav n khushi n how dey al njyd teasing dem...

hearing bou khushi n arnav growing so close...make him wana kill arnav n take khushi away wid him...

how n y did khushiji fall for a guy like arnav...who had in turn only hurted her...cud nt she make out wat he felt for??
his chain of thoughts were broken by anjali...
"arey ap kuch kha kyu nahi rahe hai??"
"humein nahi lagta arnav ko aisa karna chahiye tha...sab log k samne...lagta hai kuch sharam haya rahi hi nahi bakhi is ghar mein.."

anjali ws confused "ap aisa kyu bol rahe hai..aur waise bhi wat can v say...specially in such matters??"

"bt rani saheba...itz nt js bou me or u...ghar mein aur bhi to log hai...naniji, mamiji, mamaji...wat ll dey thnk??acha dikhta hai kya ye sab??
humein lagta hai apko unse baat chahiye is baare mein..."
wid dis he gt up n left her...before she cud say anythng...
"may b he is right...may b i shud talk to khushiji bou dis..."

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A N K'S BEDROOM

arnav - "how dare u?" his anger reaching heights...
he walked towards her n gripped her shoulders tight
"how dare u even thnk bou somethng like dat??
even if i did wat U thnk i did...so WHAT???
U R MY WIFE...n i can do watever i want...DO U UNDERSTAND???" he screamed

KNOCK KNOCK

arnav snaps open d door...
WHAT??
" wo...wo..." hp stammers...
"I VE NT GOT WHOLE DAY!"
hp gulps..."wo nani ji ..ap dono ko...niche bula rahi hai " n runs off 

arnav ws closing d door...whn khushi held d door...flung it open n got out of d room...

"khushi wait " - arnav
she turned arnd...gave him a stern look "naniji ve asked me to come down n i m nt in a mood of disobeying her.." n walks towards d stair n heard anrav slam d door

THUD 

everyone in d hall looked up towards d noise n saw khushi climbing down d stairs...
it ws nt difficult for anyone to make out from her face dt thngs r nt very pleasant between her n her husband...

she ws stil on d staris when she saw her buaji
"BUAAJIII " she squealed n dt very instant an idea popped up in her mind 

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BUAJI'S HOUSE

"ammaaa..." khushi screamed when she entered 
"arey bitiya tum..." khushi hugged garima 
it felt so nice...js right...
..she realised she had missed her mum so much...
"kaisi ho amma?" - khushi asked while her eyes welled up...
"hum theek hai bitiya..." wiping her own tears...
"haye re nand kishore...milne par bhi koi rota hai titaliya??"
dey both smiled n hugged each other again...
"bas bhi karo garima...sanka devi ayi hi hai do char din k liye ab kya wo bhi rone mein guzaar dogi?" - buaji
"nahi buaji...hum to bas nahi jayenge...yehi rahenge ...hamare amma ka pas..." khushi said n left to meet babuji
"ha kyu nahi..." - garima said..den she saw buajiz reaction "jiji...apto jaanti hai khushi ko...kuch bhi bolti hai..."
"hmm...sanka devi aur uski sanak wahi jaane..."

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arnav slammed d door...
y is she making so hard...she knows it very well i dint meant to do somethng like dt...
he closed his eyes n replayed wt happened between dem
oh no... wat ve i done  he sighed
as if he had nt done enough for her to hate him n now dis...
arnav ws waiting for her to come back to their room...
bt it looked like she ve completely forgotten bou him
he closed his eyes to calm himslf...
clock struck 2 n he opened his eyes...
it ws lunch time...
y ve nt she come to call him for lunch...
he got an intution dt der is somethng wrng...
he ran downstairs...n saw anjali coming up ...
"chotte hum tumhi bulane aa rahe the..chalo ajao...lunch ready hai..."
he looked arnd...bt dint find her anywhere...
"di ek min...khushi kaha hai?"
"chotte...tumhara dhyaan kaha hai...tum se hi to pochkar gayi thi wo..."
"kaha?"
"apne ghar"
"WHAT??"

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BUAJI'S HOUSE

after catching up wid buaji n amma khushi excused herslf n went to her bedroom

she closed d door n leaned on it...she ws tired of pretending to b happy infront of her family...
she wanted to scream...she wanted to run away from everyone...
where she cud b herslf...where she dint ve to make everyone thnk dt she is leading a happy married life...
she slowly sat on d floor..n started crying...letting al her sorrows out...whch were hidden deep inside her for god knows how long...

she thought of arnav...
arnav ws angry wid her...again...
to make it worse she dint inform him dt she ws going over to her house...
she pretended to call him infront of evryone n asked for permission...
she knew if she did go n ask for it he wud nt ve let her go...nt in d middle of their fight...
but she had to get out of der...
she js cud nt take it anymore...

THE END

hmmm...as i alwayz say...hpe u guyz njyd it...
do leave ur comments
n 4 pmz...u knw d drill..

NEXT 




Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 02 July 2012 at 7:15am

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