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FF - WHISPERING HEARTS (NEW OS ADDED) (Page 104)

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Posted: 09 June 2012 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by devishree

Smilewow dear u r fascinating it was so cute and very romantic 
i loved the last night previews of ur style 
really good writing perfect stop and stand at every place i loved the hickey and mami's comment 
loveliest update 
Clapcutie romantic scene award to u dearBig smile
 
REALY???GIRL..U MADE MY DAY Hug
THNX A BILLION...

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Posted: 09 June 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged
    Smileits really awsome...n mamiji dialouge...continue it...Thumbs Up

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Posted: 09 June 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
awesome...

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Posted: 09 June 2012 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
Gr8 part .contnu soon

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
CHAP 26

khushi relived last night a million times in her mind...
she wondered wt wud ve happened if she had nt stopped him...
she smiled at her thought...

arnav came into his room...
saw her sitting infront of d mirror...

she saw his reflection...
her face fell...

she ran towards him n started hitting him wid her fists...which of course dint make any much of difference on his hard chest...

he got hold of her wrists...
she ws struggling to beat him up js one more time..
"how cud u do dis to me...arrgghh...it ws so embarrassing...i ws sitting right der infront of everyone...wid...dis...do u even know wt i going thru down der???everybody js laughing at me like dt??"
she tried hitting him again...
"khushi...stop!" arnav said
"no...i m nt gona stop..."
so dis time he twisted her hands n placed dem on her back...
"khushi i said stop it...u thnk it ws easy for me..i ws hell lot embarrassed myslf"
"oh ya right...n y were u embarrassed??
dey dint tel u anythng...dey ll nt dare to tell u anythng...i ll b der target ...i ll ve to face dem every day...uff...let go off me "
"and wt makes u thnk dey r gona spare me??"
"obvsly...dey al r scared of u..."
"n U r nt!? "
"NO!!"

he tightened his grip...she flinched..n closed her eyes..
"n dtz xctly wt makes me fall for u sweetheart"

her eyes snapped open to see him smiling...his eyes wid a glint of mischief

"let me go.."
"no"

arnav- "i thnk..umm..." he draws her closer "dis...umm...mark...i mean d LOVE BITE...is feeling a bit of lonely...mind if i give it a lil company..??"
her eyes widened ...she gt scared..everybody ws teasing her already...n nw wid one more...she tried to get herslf out of his grip...bt his strong hold dint let her move an inch...

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TING TONG

HP opened d door "NAMASTE"
"namaste..." smiling buaji entered ...
she ws greeted by d rest of d raizada clan...

buaji - "hum maafi chahte hai...itni subah bina bataye hum yu hi chale aye...darasal hum yaha pas wale nandkishore k mandir aye the...to socha bitiya log se milkar jaeye"

"arey koi baat nahi...acha kiya ap chali ayi...bitiya aplog ko bahut yaad karat hai " - nani

payal came n sat beside buaji...
"kaisan ho payaleya?"
before payal cud reply..."yaha rich house mein kaisi rahegi khoon bhari tanng..aaa matbal...apki daughterwa...healthies n fines only...u donnot worries " - mamiji said n earned a death stare from her saas
"hum theek hai buaji...ap kaisi hai???aur amma babuji..."
"hai re nandkishore...tumko fikar karne ki ki kauno zarurat nahi hai...hum sab theek hai "
"anjali bitiya sab theek hai na?apna khayal rakho karo bitiya...khane peene ka bhi..."
anjali wid her countagious smile "ji buaji hum theek hai...humein to kuch karne hi nahi deti hai payal n khushiji...hamara bahut khayal rakhti hai dono..."
buaji keeps her hand on payal feeling proud on her brought up...
"arey...ye sanka devi apne darshan kab degi...kaha hai wo??"

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arnav went closer to her
"chodiye humein..."
now js inches away from her neck...
she cud feel his warm breath on her...

arnav ws njying every bit of dis...
oh dnt i jst love teasing her..
njying her misery...
he smiled at her n loosened his grip...

she immediately stepped back...n stared at his cunning smile...
hw cud he do dis to her...
dt ws a narrow escape...no wait...his smile...he ws nt gona do anythng ..he ws only teasing her...her blood boiled up...

when ppl start living together...dey tend to adapt each others nature or habit n here it ws ANGER...
khushi ve unknowingly adapted her hubbyz anger streak..
ANGER...whch wud took over all her senses
nt thnking straight..she blabbed wtver came to her mind...
"DIS IS HOW U R PLANNING TO WIN ME BACK???" screamed khushi
"BY DOING DIS...DIS STUFF??"
"U THNK BY DOING ALL DIS I LL FORGET WAT HAPPENED BETWEEN US??WAT ALL U DID TO ME??"
 arnav clenched..."khushi...dt is nt wat i m trying to do..." n took a step forward...
"NO...STAY RIGHT DER...N DNT LIE...I KNW WT U R TRYING TO DO"


THE END 

my regular ques - how ws it?????????
i knw it is short...dnt kill me 4 dt...LOL
do leave ur comments 
n add me 4 pmz...

NEXT



Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 20 June 2012 at 12:28pm

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
wow...loved it...

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 1:07pm | IP Logged

its awesome.!!!SmileClapClapClapClapSmile

one more mark...!!! was finely written...!!!!
its lovely..!!!
n update soon pls..!!!Smile
cant wait..!!!Embarrassed


Edited by krishu3393 - 13 June 2012 at 1:14pm

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
Awesome update...special kudos to you for mastering the style of talking of mainly mamiji, that was hilarious...
Now what's with the transformation,we all know Arnav to ASR , now we have to deal Khushi to KKGSR...


Edited by Soloperson - 13 June 2012 at 1:14pm

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