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MG OS : TUJHE YAAD NA MERI AAYEE

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 10:37am | IP Logged


~TUJHE YAAD NA MERI AAYEE~

 

A girl clad in White Gaghra Choli dripping wet due to continuously pouring rain climbed the temple steps slowly. It's hard to believe her tears are pouring out like rain or the sky is mourning on her situation. She had lost her last hope today. She is getting hard to digest the truth that her First love, her Jaan have been snatched from her. Girl 's attention shifted to a group of ladies were sitting in circle started to sing.

 

Rabba mere ishq kisi ko '

Aise na tadpaye... hoy

Dil ki baat rahe is dil mein,

Hothon tak na aaye,

Na aaye...

 

A sob escape from her throat. Her heart is heavy due all the emotions. What's her fault? Where she fits in all this? Why this is happing to her? There are lots of questions right now eating her. She was orphaned at the age of 6. Had been put into a orphanage. Never got motherly love nor the fatherly affection. Never got any chance to experience how it feels like fighting with siblings. She looked at the direction of statue in the temple. She need her answer today.

Why she has to go through all these odds. "Why? Why me?..." covered her face with her both palms. "Why I always have to lose them whom I love? " .."Why ? Why? Q Q..main hi Q..Babajee.." aakhir meri kya galthi hain issmain'babajee"..sat down "Main tho sirf pyaar kiya hain'.unnse jinse main bagwaan maanthi hoon'Q nahi wo meri pyaar ko samjpahey..q nahi dekhpahey meri ankhon main sirf aur sirf MAAN bassehuwe hain..Q"  "Isse tho accha tha ki mujhe maa-baujee ki saath hi lejathey "..

 

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

She started to cry loudly. A mid aged women came running to her and pulled into a bear hug, Trying to sooth the pain brushing her hair. "Na Puttar..aisa nahi kehtehy'" Na..Shush'Chup hojaho GEET "'Geet clutched that elder women's shoulders tightly and cried bitterly. " Mera Pehala Pyaar adoora rehgaya Bebo..Mera pehal pyaar adoora rehgaya".."Q Maan mere pyaar ko nahi pehchan payee bebo.."

Bebo " Chalo Puttar hum iss shehar ko chodkar chalet hain'inn sab se door'sab uss cheez aur logon se door jo tujhe ittna dard sehni parti hain.."'Bebo wiped her tears and made her to stand up. Geet "Kaha bebo kaha jayenge'mere apne kehney wale tho kohi bhi nahi hain'jisse main apna banana chaha ussko tho hey pata bhi nahi ke main unnse kitna pyaar karthi hun" .. "Wo kissi aur se shaad'". She couldn't complete her sentence and passed out in bebo's arms.

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna...

 

After 6 Years'

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Present : 6 years Later'

 

 

A 5 year Toddler boy came running into a study shouting with cute pout on face tugging a man's pant who stood near window engrossed in a file "Dadshi ..Dadshi' chi BD(Bid daadi) not letting me to talk with mishty mamma"'Maan's Daadi came with a bowl of fruits sighing. "Uff.. Maan abb tumhi sabalo innko'meri ek bhi baath nahi sunta hain'bahut hi ziddi hogaya hain bilkul appky taraha'"

 

Maan Smiled widely, kept his file aside and scooped that little boy up in his arms. "Hmm Showrya'Abb kya kiya aapne jo mujhe Daadi se sunni paddrahi hain'" asked him pinching tip of his nose. Showrya pinched Maan's nose in return and said in his cute ascent "Dadshi..Plomish I didn't do anything'hey shad tho BD ka galchi hain..she didn't let me talk with Mishty mamma" . A ting of sadness crossed over his face and immediately  he covered up and said. "Okay abb mele bte ko Mishty mamma se baath karni hain..hmm..Challo hum bhi chalthey hain'" Daadi din't miss the sadness in his eyes and pressed his shoulder to comfort him. "I'm alright daadi'" Daadi knew he is strong man and very good at covering up his feelings. "Maan bte'Kabtak aap aise rahengey'ek baar jee barkey roolijeye 'dil halkha hojaheyga'"'Maan didn't say anything ' "Dadshi daldi talo..mamma meri wait karrahi hain'.aaj mamma ka birley hain na" . Maan stared at the cute boy's face and remembered the day, Today is the day when he lost his most precious gift from god. His only Best Friend and believed she was his Real soul mate.

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At night he saw showray sleeping in his bed peacefully clutching a photo frame to his heart with one hand and thumb finger in his mouth. His trails of thoughts drag him 6 years back, to the same dread full day. It's been a 6 years since..

 

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Past : 6 1/2 years Back

 

"Geet'! Geet'Open the door 'Geet! Open the door dammit." Maan roared from outside her room. He warned her again "Geet!! If you don't open this damn door within 5 seconds I'will break this door'you got it"..Geet hid herself under the bed fear of facing maan for her foolishness. "Ma.. Ma'Maan Main nahi kholungi..aap mujhe dararahey ho'" she laughed like a maniac. "I know you will take revenge for spoiling your shirt"'"I'm not that dumb you know"..Geet amused why maan is not answering nor banging door. She peeked out from her hide out to see..in front a pair of shoes with one tapping. Terror covered her face. She thought "Oh! No I'm so dead now"..she tried to run but maan caught her wrist and twisted her hands back trapping between his legs. "Oh! Oh! Yeah you are so dead now Mishty'" pointing with the another free hand  "Now you are going to clean this mess "pointing towards his shirt'Geet left a chuckle "huh! In your dreams Mr. Maan Singh Khurana"..Saying this she stumped his leg and ran away. Maan "Ow! Geet ki bacchi 'I'wll get back to you"..winched with pain. "Abhi mujhe kisise millney jaana hain'"

 

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Present : After 6 years Later'

 

Automatically a smile crept on his gloomy face. "Geet! Where are you'Please come back I need you..I miss you" ..

 

Tujhe har khushi de di

Labon ki hansi de di

Zulfon ki ghata lehraayee

Paigaam wafa ke laayee

Tune acchhi preet nibhayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

 

"Q mujhe chodkey gahi Geet..Why? Kuch aur pal mera intezar karti.." He let out a sob which he suppressed all these years. Daadi saw him breaking down like a child, couldn't see the sight infront her grandson who always steeled his emotions to outer world is breaking. She pulled him into a bear hug and patted his back. "Shush!! ..Chup..Bilkul chup"'Maan cried his heart out "Why daadi ? Why ? Geet ko main kaha kaha nahi dunda'ussne aisa q kiya mere saath'" Daadi made him to sit on bed and brushed his hair. "Maan agar aap aise haar manjaengey tho Showrya ka kya hoga..Usse koun sabalega.." "Geet ko wapas aana hi parega beta..wo aayegi..zaroor ayegi" "Usse iss ghar ki aangan ko hara-bara banana hi hoga.."'Daadi made him to sleep on bed, she stayed beside him until he slipped into sleep

 

Wo chand mere ghar-aangan

Ab to aayeega

Tere soone is aanchal ko

Wo bhar jaayega

Teri kar di god bharaayee,

Teri kar di god bharaayee,

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

 

 

Somewhere in Darjeeling

 

"MAAN'!".. Geet screamed waking up from her dream. And started to cry keeping her chin on knees rocking to and fro. Bebo came to her room running "Geet..Puttar'" Switched on the bed lamp'Gave her a glass of water to drink, Geet refused to drink. Bebo hugged her "geet bura sapna tha puttar.." rubbed her back. "Maan bilkul teek hain beta..Unne kuch nahi hoga'Shush"'Geet Whispered "Mujhe ek baar maan ko dekhna hain bebo'sirf ek baar mujhe delhi jaanedo..please"

 

O mahinyaa, O mahinyaa

 

"Main door se ussnko dekhungi..unnkey shaadi shuda zindagi main kabhi zehar nahi kolungi'Sirf ek baar usnne dekhna hain please bebo"

Begged folding her both hands. In between hiccups "Please ek baar"'Bebo felt miserable to see Geet's condition. She thought its better to let her go delhi, atleast she can do this to her to ease her pain.

O mahinyaa, O mahinyaa

 

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Next Day

Bebo asked Geet "Puttar..Main bhi chalthi hun tumhare saath"'Geet "Bebo, Nahi Aapki tabiyat teek nahi hain'iss halath main aapko travel karna accha nahi hoga'aapki Asthma ke dawahiyan main drawer main rakkha hian'bhoolega matt.." Bebo tried to say something, get cut her in mid. "No bebo..Please Don't stop me..Please " her dovey glassy eyes begging bebo. "One last time, Please"'Bebo "Geet agar meri zaroort padi tho ..mujhe call kardena ..main dowdy chali aahungi" Bebo is still apprehensive about geet going all alone. Geet assured her that she will be back soon once she get a glimpse of Maan. Bebo sighed and said "Take care puttar jee" Geet waved her hand when bus started.

 

Khata ho gayi mujhse

Kaha kuch nahin tumse

Ikrar jo tum kar paate

To door kabhi na jaate

Koi samjhe na peer parayee

Koi samjhe na peer parayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

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At Dinner

 

Showrya was throwing tantrums since morning for not agreeing him to go picnic with his friends. Daadi got tired of his stubbornness. "Showrya agar aap aise hi zidd karengey tho hum Mishty mumma se baat nahi karney dengey'soochliziye"..Showrya's face fell, without saying anything he ran into his room. Daadi " Showrya bte'Rukkhiye"..Maan came from office saw showrya running into his room crying. Maan asked what had happened to daadi. Daadi told him about his demand. Maan assured daadi that he will talk with him. Daadi "Ussney Khana bhi nahi khaaya maan.." daadi started to cry. Maan side hugged daadi and said "I'll feed him" Maan took his Plate walked towards Showrya's room. When maan heard showrya talking on phone his heart squeezed hearing his talks and sobs. Showrya in other end "Mishty mumma'*Hiccup* aap jaldi aajoho. Mujhe daali kahi nahi jaane deti'*Hiccup*.mujhe aapki ghoodi main'*Hiccup*  kelni hain mujhe aapke saath sooni '*Hiccup* hain aapse khahani sunni'*Hiccup*  hain..Main gool boy baunga..kabli aapko tang nahi kalunga please aap aajoho"..He started to kiss the phone'Maan couldn't stand for long, he rushed to him and hugged him keeping his head on his chest.

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

"Shh!! Showrya acche bacche nahi rootehy..beta..Mumma ko waha bahut kaam hain  ..wo jaldi hi aayegi ..main laahunga aapki mumma ko wapas.." he rocked him back and forth to comfort him. Showrya "Plomish.. '*Hiccup*  Dadshi"  Maan "Mishty wala plomish" ..pinched the tip of his. Maan "common bte ..khaana khaalo..warna main mumma ko batadunga ki showrya mera ek bhi nahi suntha hain'" Immediately Shorwya said "Nali..Dadshi Showlya kailega'" And he started to eat. Maan got an idea and said " Okay showrya tomorrow we are going for a day out only dadshi and you, done"..Showrya's face lit up "Leally..Dadshi" Maan brushed his hair and said "Yes Sonshi" Kissed him on forehead.

In Pinky's flat Geet stood at the Balcony holding a coffee mug staring at the far building. Pinky and Geet become good friends at Darjeeling when they meet up in some xyz event. Pinky don't know much about Maan, she only knew that her friend Geet is in love with this man.

Pinky "Geet Tum Maan se millney kabb jaarahi ho.." Geet "Shaayad Kal, pata nahi.."..Pinky"Usse ek call q nahi karti..ek baar unnse baat karlo" Geet engrossed in something and said "I'll tonight"..

 

 

After bedding Showrya, maan came into his study to finish off his work and sat on his chair. For a moment his eyes fell on the photo frame which was decorated his study table. He took the frame and lingered his fingers on the person's cheeks followed by lips. A smile crept on his lips, he remembered when he took that pic. In hushing tone "Geet!! .." and pressed a kiss on her lips. Don't know when he slept on chair keeping Geet's photo frame on his chest. A phone ring woke him up from a sweet dream. He fished his pockets to receive the call. He amused who might me calling at this late night that too unknown number. He straightened himself from chair and received the call. "Hello!! " A deep manly tone made her to gasp.

Geet covered the mouth piece with a her hand, her heart beat raised like mad horse. A tear escaped from her eyes. Maan thought that signal is not clear inside, "One second hold up! "..He came near balcony "Hello can you hear me now?"..still there is no response from other side. Geet controlled her sob . Maan heard the meek sob and his eyebrows raised "Hello..Who is this? Please speak up?"..he softened his voice ..Somewhere his six sense was warning him that its geet, his geet but his brain ignored it. Before he say something geet cut the call. And sat down holding the mouth piece near to heart. Maan Felt strange. His heart continuously telling him to call back. He redialed that number back but in vain no one picked that call. He shrugged it off and saw Geet pic one more time, left to his bedroom to get some sleep before the long day with his sonsi.

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Next day at park

Maan ran behind showrya to catch him "Showrya ..stop..Dadshi can't run like you'.Showrya stop beta.."maan acted like he is tired and sat on nearby bench. When showrya stopped to turn around he saw his dadshi sitting on bench. He came back and said "Whalt dadsi ..you spoiled the fun" made a cute pout. Maan immediately grabbed him and said "Main pakadliya '"..Showrya "this is chelting chelting.."turned his face. Maan "Aww Shorlya ko gussa aaya 'okay dadshi aapko ice cream kelade tho gussa nahi hongey naa"..Showrya grinned and said " I want tolo (two)ilce celim"..Maan shook his head "Okay challo"..both went near ice cream stall and ordered three ice cream. Maan felt that someone is watching him, he turned his head to check the surroundings. He saw showrya enjoying his ice cream with fulltosh. After sometime again the feeling came back. He checked the surroundings again but he couldn't findout anything.

He turned to showrya to say him to finish the ice cream soon, then he noticed that showrya is running behind some lady calling mishty mumma..that lady crossed the road without turning back. Maan ran behind showrya to stop him, showrya continuously calling "mishty mumma ..misty mumma luko'" ..while trying to cross the road' suddenly a car made a screeching sound when driver pulled a immediate break. Maan shouted " Showryaaa.!!! "'Shocked Showrya started to cry when maan scooped him up in his arms and patted him "Shhh!! Bachha!! 'kuch nah huwa hain'shh'chup hojaho"'Showrya tried to say something, due to shock. He just pointed towards a lady who is covered her almost face with her dupatta just leaving the only eyes. For a moment maan caught those dovey eyes and his heart started to  cream she is his geet. He can sense her, her natural scent, her deep oceanic eyes. He called her name "GEET'! " raising his hand. That lady fumbled few steps and started to run. That lady saw a moving taxi "Taxi'" waved her hands sat in that taxi and told some xyz   address to drop. Maan ran behind that taxi few distance calling her name "GEET'!!!"..."Mishty..!!"..

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Maan called Aditya, his best friend com partner and told him to find out whose that taxi and where did the driver dropped that lady within half an hour. And then he called home to inform his daadi. Daadi first surprised hearing the news and told him that she got call from a girl this morning asking about him where she can meet him. Daadi got curious about a girl calling home to ask about maan and enquired about her, then that girl said she is some ABC institute manager and wants to discuss business deal with maan, that she tried to reach maan since morning and couldn't locate him. Also she called office and didn't got any satiable answer. Daadi got convinced and  told her that Maan is out with his son to a nearby park. Maan asked daadi to check the no. from caller id in received contact list. Daadi immediately gave the number  and said "Maan jab waapas ayenge main aapkey saat Apni Geet ko dekhna chahungi'" Maan nodded "Jee..It's a promise Daadi".. Showrya touching maan's cheek said "Dadshi mene mishty mumma ko dekha "..Maan kissed his forehead and said.."Challo beta hum aapki mummy ko ghar lekar ayengey "..Maan called someone and instructed them to find out whose phone no. it is. After 15 minutes drive to office he got a call from aditya, Maan took that call "Address" "Okay adi I'll call you later" . Again he got call from the guy whom he asked abut he phone number " Sir this phone no. is registered Under Pinky Manchanda. She lives all alone. Sector no. 18, flat no.34" Maan saw the showrya who was sleeping next to his seat. He promised himself that he won't let her go far from him this time at any cost.

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

 

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In taxi

Geet wiped tears from her dupatta. For one last time she has seen him that's enough for her entire life. She saw him playing with his son. What a feast to watch? Then She saw cute little one who was playing with him. She so much wanted to hug that little one. She hid behind the tree suddenly when maan started to look over here and there. Again she peeked behind the tree to see them, then she caught by showrya who was looking at her with his surprised rounded eyes. He ran to her calling mishty mumma. She started to run towards exit of the park before maan sees her. She is confused now, why that boy called her mishty mumma. Why maan and his son came park without his mother? Where is his mother? Why maan looked so distressed?. "Madamjee'" Geet "huh"'.."Madamjee aapki address aagaya".."Oh! Thanks bayya kittna huwa"..After paying fare to taxi, geet came to pinky's flat with so many questions running in her mind.  "Mujhe aisa q lagraha ki maan kush nahi hain". Pinky opened the door and asked how went her meeting with Maan. Geet just nodded her head "Teek tha, pinky maine aaj sham ki ticket nikalwaya hian'bebo waha akeli hain mujhe jana hoga" . Pinky observed her gloomy face and asked again "Geet tu such such bata tumhare aur unnkey beech main kya chall raha hain.." "Tum q hittni udaas hoo'" Geet tried to change the topic saying that she so hungry. Pinky knew that geet is hiding something. After the lunch geet told pinky that she is going take shower, her bus is at 6pm. In shower Geet cried her heart out recalling showrya calling her mishty mumma. A land line started to ring, pinky picked that call "Hello Ms.Manchanda speaking"..Maan cleared his throat "Geet..!!" Pinky "Sorry, Per Aap Kaun?"..Before maan tell her who is he, Pinky answered "Oh! Sorry sorry sorry tho aap hain jo hamari Geet ki maan". Maan was surprised to this girl's audacity to address him as "Geet ki Maan" Maan "Geet kaha hian" Pinky "Geet apne room hain packing karrahi hain "..Maan "Pinkyjee meri baath dyaan se suniye..Geet ko ye pata nahi hona chahiye ki maine aapko call kiya tha. Kisi bhi taraha usse kuch dharey keliye rookhey rakkiye,,I'm on the way to your home".. Pinky "Per'" Maan "Please " confused Pinky "Okay, aap jaldi aajahiyega"..

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Half an Hour Later

Geet came out from bathroom wearing Cotton saari, Dragged her legs to dressing table wiping her hair from a towel. Stared at her reflection, she saw maan'starting at her'At that moment she thought she is hallucinating, Maan stood across the Door. She shrugged off her head and picked up the comb. Maan "Geet.."'Geet halted her hands in  mid whatever she is doing. She turned her whole body to see maan who stood behind her now. Geet left a gasp and covered her mouth with towel. Geet "Maan'!!" Tears welled in her eyes. Maan started to move towards Geet, With every step maan moved forward Geet took her steps backward until she hit the wall behind her. Now maan locked her between him and wall. His hand slowly raised to her cheeks to touch those wet tendrils which is blocking him her milky skin. Geet felt a tremor ran through her body. She left a sigh breath out when maan touched her cheeks. Maan slowly closed the gap between them capturing her rosy lips kissing them tenderly. Slowly his other hand locked her head in a position so that he can get access into her mouth. Geet thought she definitely dreaming, She knew it's a dream , a sweet dream which she never get to experience in her life. She fully surrenders herself to this dream. Her hands reached maan's neck circling his shoulders .maan pushed her to a wall with such force that he felt geet winched with pain. He bitted her lower lips and licking the salty liquid marking her lips forever his. Maan left her mouth to breath when he thought she is struggling for air. Maan saw geet who is still standing like a log with closed eyes cherishing the  kiss. Maan Patted her cheeks "Mishty Open your eyes baby, it isn't any dream "'Then Geet fully awake from the trance and stared at maan in utter disbelief. Geet tried to put her thoughts into words "Maan..I ..We'this'no 'no "..Closing her face Geet started to cry. Maan pulled her into a bear hug before she collapse on floor. Maan "Shush'" rubbing her shoulders maan comforted her. And then she heard someone banging on door. Maan signaled her to open the door, when geet opened the door, a little one clung to her waist calling her mishty mumma. Making her to sit down Showrya showered kisses all over her face and said sweet nothings. Geet really couldn't understand what's going on here. Is this a kind of dream? ..yes she heard right that boy called her mumma. Geet saw daadi who was standing with pinky with tears in her eyes. Daadi spread her arms to geet for a hug, immediately geet ran into a older women's arm without any hesitation. Right now her mind is mess couldn't put anything into places. Then Daadi told her what actually happened that day when she left them. Dev and Meera decided to get married so they came to me. I was worried ki maan is elder to Dev how come can I agree to this, I had an idea of you both but you two never behaved like puppies in love. I asked help to Dev and meera to play along with me. So I decided to play a game to bring you both together and to make you realize that you and maan are made for each other. Daadi " Uss din dev aur meera ki shaadi thi, maan ne finally apne feelings to aapko bataney wale thy'Appko laga Maan ki shaadi horahi hain'Jab takk hamey hey pata chala sab kuch gad bad hogaya tha. Shaadi ke baad maan aapko propose karney waley they..hamari shararath thodi jaada hi hogaya tha'.hamey maaf kardeejye geet ..i know asking sorry won't change anything, I can't erase your miserable lonely days'believe me Geet, Maan har rose mar marker jeeraha hain'.abb tho usski guilt feel se mukt kardo"'Geet stood like log with half mouth open staring at daadi. Then her eyes shifted to Showrya, daadi understood and said "Showrya Dev aur meera ki beta hain'.."  "Wo dono 4 saal pehale ek plan crash main chall basse"'tabbse aaj takk maan ussko apney bte ki tarha paalraha hian aur aapko apni maa samach tha hain"'Showrya "Mishty mumma 'mujhe apli goodi main udalo.."..Geet " ale mele baccha 'Aja"..Geet scooped him in her both arms and gave a cheeky kisses to him. Maan stared at Geet who was laughing with showrya. Geet is trying her best to avoid encounter with maan.         This really takes some will power to control her feelings and maan is making it worse. Later Geet hugged pinky saying her thanks for the nth time and said she will give her a visit soon. Showrya clung to geet never letting her go when daadi asked him politely to come with her, he refused saying "No Mishty mumma pilse gayab hojayegi..main nahi cholunga "'hugged her neck tightly. Geet assured daadi that its fine if showrya insists. Daadi left in one car with driver and in another car maan, geet and showrya. Throughout the drive maan din't say anything, Geet waited for him say something. Showrya slept on her chest with thumb in his mouth. Geet brushed his hairs gave him a kiss on head. Maan wanted some lonely place to talk with geet. He put the car aside.

The car was parked near bank f the river, The sun is getting ready to rest, Maan is the first one to come out from the car. Without saying anything he stood near the rear keeping his both hands in pocket. Geet bit her lower lips to suppress her annexations. She put sleeping showrya  in back seat comfortably, a smile crept over her lips when she saw showrya latching his thumb in his sleep; kissed his temple last one more time before closing the back door.

Geet mustered some courage to walk into maan, slowly she reached his back. Her palms are sweating, her throat is getting dry. What she will tell him? How she will face his side of story, Correction painful story? . Don't know how long she stood there staring at his hard outlined body. Her trance were broken my Maan. Maan "You know Geet this is the place where I come to meet my Partner, My soul of life.." Geet raised her eyebrow, for a moment she thought maan is refereeing to someone might be special. But maan didn't let her to assume, Maan "Meri tanhaahi ..meri akelapan ". Turning to her he stared straight into her eyes, her only spoke love for him. He couldn't hold that captivate for long. He is feeling guilty for keeping her in misconception that he was in love with someone else in past. Maan overwhelmed tone "Geet..Main'" Geet knew he is so hurt in deep to see her hurt, if she wouldn't know him better than anyone never could understand his unsaid words which is meant unimportant than his eyes which is speaking volume.  Why she failed to see the warmth in his eyes, why she failed to recognize his love for her, Her one step changed their life and caused so much remorse in maan's heart to himself.  Geet didn't let him complete grabbed his shirt and covered the distance between them sealing his lips into a promising kiss. A kiss which is hope to their budding relationship, A kiss never letting him go away, A kiss how much she what him in her life, A kiss to assure  he can never be wrong. Maan felt Geet's tongue enter his mouth, he squeezed her waist and pressed himself to her possessing more to explore . He bit her lips to  let him explore her mouth. His hands moved over her spine up and down . Geet dug her nails in his scalp to suppress the moan from her mouth. Maan parted her lips to grab some air in, again he captured her lips this time very tenderly, licking corner of her lips. His fingers entitled in her silky curls. Geet's chest is tight due to the pleasure developing in her body with a mere kiss. Her hardness pressing maan's chest, screaming him to possess them.  Geet could feel his length pressed to her abdomen and blushed  for the new knowledge what she can do to him. Panting maan cupped her face in his both hands with his still closed eyes.  His hot breath fanning her nose and lips sending her tremors through her body. Finally maan asked her "Tujhe kabhi meri yaad nahi aaya Geet"..Geet  caressing his stubbles "Nahi" Maan saw her eyes. Geet "ussko yaad kiya jaata hain, jissko hum bhool jaathey hian maan"'Maan Hugged her tightly "Oh! God Geet..I'm so sorry 'I'm so'" Geet "Shhh! , Maan Aap tho mere aathma ho, Meri Shareer  iss*pointing to him* aatma key baghair kaise jeepati hain.."..Geet hugged him back "Sorry to mujhe kehni hain..main hi aapki ankhon main pyaar nahi dekhpahi, aappe barosa nahi kiya..Main'" Maan silenced her with finger  on her lips. Maan "Geet..Will you become a mother of my child? " Geet shoot her head up to see him, "Of course maan, I'll Love showrya as my own child.  How couldn't I ? He is a part of you and you belong to me and --"'Geet saw still smirking  old self maan with mischievous  smile .  Geet took few seconds to grasp his inner meaning of his last sentence. She blushed furiously before hiding her flushed face in his chest. Geet "Maan'" Maan "What geet? I am directly proposing you, People takes very long way to express their love and I already have done that mistake waiting for perfect time. And I'm bit forward, Without using fancy words like "I LOVE YOU " ' "WILL YOU MARRY ME?"  I proposed you just by asking "will you bear Child"'Now I know perfect moments are made by us .." Geet stood silent listening to him, Maan "Answer me Mishty , Will you ?"..Geet hugged him tight and said  " Maan Take me home "..Maan grinned widely for her way telling "yes "to him. Maan scooped her one last time before placing her on passenger seat. Maan Kissed her tip of nose and then saw back where showrya sat up rubbing his eyes who is in edge of crying for not finding his mishty mumma. Geet quickly scooped him to her lap telling him she is here and will never ever leave him alone keeping his head near to her heart. At that time maan inserted his key to start the car, He felt relieved seeing his sweet hearts lost in each other. He is the happiest man in this world. Two weeks later  Maan and Geet were happily married and Showrya again started throw tantrums for not letting him sleep with Geet on their First night. Daadi literally blushing when she made him understand telling that his Dadshi and Mishty mumma will give him little brother or sister to play with him if he agree to let his mishty mumma go now. Showrya's face lit up to the idea having someone little ones to play along with him. Showrya  to maan "Dadshi I want tolo(two) blothel or tolo(two) sislestel .."  Geet gulped and saw maan who was smirking Maan scooped him up and said " Okay showrya, Why two? I'll get you Three .." Winking at Geet  "What say Mishty ?"'

 

~THE END~

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 A/N : Okay i really have no idea how it has come, I tried my best to justify with the theme of he song. Please Ignore the mistakes coz i never re-read the updates, I'm too lazy to edit it either. Please shower your love and concern in the form of comments.



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o dr its really awesome

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