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FF: Peer pressure: Chapter 10 page 22 (Page 10)

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
very good one update soon

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
wow!! loved it. u really know how to take a story forward thru amazing twists n turnsClap one moment khushi was nervous, the nxt she was angry n the nxt she is ready.loved her characterization.great going. waitin for ur nxt update.do it soonEmbarrassed thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Woah!!! This is a majorly different story!! Love how you've set the pace, it's not just flashbacks, it's them talking about their past encounters.

Brilliantly superb and engaging writing and dialogue! Looking forward to more! Very intriguing (I just read all the parts in one go!)Clap

It's kinda like Arnav and Khushi, confused with what the other wants, you take us to the edge, close to an explanation, something to reveal why what is happening, is happening, but then you pull back. Great work!


Wooow your kind words are truly humbling!!
I am super pleased that you like it. I can't ask for more, getting feed back is the true award

Nice to hear that you like my writing style, really what can
I say more then it kind of made my day

I'll pm you when I update

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 207shikha

awww man..!! the last quote by arnav really took my breath away..!! why he has to be damm sexy that only his simple 2 line statement makes me feel tinkle all over my body..! loved the way u deliverd the dialouges from ur characters..! but i do have a doubt in ma mind.u know the way u have written it seems like arnav is a guy to whom gals genuinely throw themselves away.so he must be really overconfident with that fact na..? then he must be behaving arrogantly with khushi but the way he's behaving with khushi it seems like he's really fallen for her..is that so.? will be curiously waiting for our next update.!<div></div>


Aaw thank you dear!!

It's not me, Arnav has his own magic ;)

It us true that Arnav is behaving differently towards khushi, and maybe or maybe not you will get to know why Wink

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatima2603

I think she's been pressured but not him. However, she seems to want to do it anyway...but what puzzles me is that if she has been pressured then surely anjali wouldn't point her in arnavs direction...



Don't be too sure, as I said earlier Anjali is an enigma, who knows why and what she does

Thanks for the comment

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by poojasidd123

wow!! loved it. u really know how to take a story forward thru amazing twists n turnsClap one moment khushi was nervous, the nxt she was angry n the nxt she is ready.loved her characterization.great going. waitin for ur nxt update.do it soonEmbarrassed thanks for the pm


Aaw you have really pin pointed the characterization I was going for. My khushi is all over the place, just the way I love her. So happy that my story is conveying what I have set out for.

Thank you for the kind words ;)

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
Very Interesting read. Love your story telling style! Great writing!! Can't wait to read more!

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
wow!! magical!!
this is one unique story!! but i feel so bad for Khushi!! she is so sweet and innocent!! and the arnav u have in this is such a sweetheart!!
i am not even sure if the deed will happen or if he'll stop if he realizes she was peer pressured in to it! he is that nice in this!!

pls PM me when u update plss!!:D

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