Originally posted by: YPNHK_kiFANno.1Woah!!! This is a majorly different story!! Love how you've set the pace, it's not just flashbacks, it's them talking about their past encounters.
Brilliantly superb and engaging writing and dialogue! Looking forward to more! Very intriguing (I just read all the parts in one go!)👏It's kinda like Arnav and Khushi, confused with what the other wants, you take us to the edge, close to an explanation, something to reveal why what is happening, is happening, but then you pull back. Great work!
Originally posted by: 207shikhaawww man..!! the last quote by arnav really took my breath away..!! why he has to be damm sexy that only his simple 2 line statement makes me feel tinkle all over my body..! loved the way u deliverd the dialouges from ur characters..! but i do have a doubt in ma mind.u know the way u have written it seems like arnav is a guy to whom gals genuinely throw themselves away.so he must be really overconfident with that fact na..? then he must be behaving arrogantly with khushi but the way he's behaving with khushi it seems like he's really fallen for her..is that so.? will be curiously waiting for our next update.!<div></div>
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