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Aur Bas Pyaar Ho Gaya...NOTE...PG 41 (Page 4)

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Intresting concept dear... I've sent u a buddy request... Plz accept it and do pm me whn u update...

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
Hey dear ...nyc concept...sounds interesting...quite diffrnt frm real d3 stry...plz cntinue n do pm me...sent u a buddy request ...
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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deetha

hi yaar u gave me a shock!!!!!!! rey crush on sharon and swayam on kriya!!!!!!! woo.!!!!!!! i   think this will be smthing hatke,...wow nice cncept...and rey neha...bro sis...i love them lyk dat!!!!!!! and kriya crush on rey!!!!!!! this is the biggest jerk...our strong headed girl hvng crush.?????? kk.. waiting eagerly 4r the update...and sry yaar late cmnt keliye...classtest tha...hope u understand...any way awesome cncept...Clap
thnx deetha...
n ya re ofcourse i undrstand...der wsnt ny need 2 tel sry!!! Smile
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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
thnx a lot guys!!!Big smile
 
feels rly nyc 2 knw dat u al wnt me 2 cntinue!!!Smile
 
wel i'l strt writin it nw...so vl post it in n 1-2 hrs!!!

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 1:50am | IP Logged

CHARACTER SKETCH

 
KRIYA GHAI:
vry bubbly grl..is knwn as dancing diva in dehradun..shifted 2 mumbai as her mom got trnsferd here n so shes hs taken admisn in st louis 4 hr fybcom..she is detrmined 2 create d sme imge here as wel as she hd in dehradun..vl strt feelin 4 rey 4rm d frst day of col..
 
REYANSH SINGHANIA:
Dude of d col..shows 2 d wrld dat d female a10tn dat he gts dsnt rly bothr hm..bt d truth is dat he luvs being given sch imprtnce..luvs dancing n runs a dncing institute nmed INDIAN DAZZLERS(IND)..wshes to open brnchs of IND al ovr d wrld..neha is hs adopted sis n he luvs hr a lot...hs a crsh on sharon bt keeps it a scrt as he fears she myt brk d frnshp..vry kindhrted n evr rdy 2 hlp ny1 in need..
 
SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT:
U.S. return bt still vry simple..never shows off..vry happy-go-lucky..n mkes sure dat ppl around hm r happy..vl hav a crsh on kriya 4rm d 1st day of col..n vl find a grt frnd in rey..sweet n loving datz hw he iz..
 
SHARON RAIPRKASH:
Vry cool grl..lives lyf on hr own terms n cnditns..belivs dat gtin in2  rlatnshp so soon is nt a gud idea..as she feels its nt possible 2 decide so soon wid whom 2 spnd d whle lyf..sweet n caring by nature..vry cncerned at simmi..n vl find a gt frnd in kriya..
 
SIMMI:
vry hypractiv..hs hd lots of brkups..bt nt found a prfct mtch 4 hrslf yet..
 
NILESH:
hs a huge crsh on simmi bt avoids tellin hr as he knws hr hookup n brkup speed...
 
NEHA,VICKY,AMAR,RINNI,VISHAKA BHARAT..SME AS DEY R IN D3..
CHNGES WID NEHA'S CHRCTER ALRDY MNTNED..
REY,NEHA,VICKY,SHARON,SIMMI,NIL,RINNI,VISHAKA,BHARAT..R HEAD INSTRUCTERS IN IND.. 

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 3:51am | IP Logged
 
CHAPTER 1(prt1)
 
KYA KR RHE HO BHAI...JALDI KARO NA...MERA BABU KISI BHI WQT ATA HOGA!!!(yes u guesed it ryt datz neha calin out rey...)

 

NEHA: "Pata hai nrmly bhai apne behno ke room ke bhr aise khde rehte hai..bt hmare ghr me toh...ufff...bht ho gaya bhai...ab kch zyada hi ho rha hai...atlst rply toh karo...pechle 20 mins se bake jaa rhi hun..." bt still der ws no rply..."hadh hai bhai...me ab aur nai rukhne wali...m goin...wo bhi apki fav car lekr..aap aa jana kaise bhi...mjhe kya..jb aapko meri koi kadr nai hai toh me kyu sochu aapke baare me..huh..n she lft...bt as even aftr dat der ws no rply she got a lil worried...she wnt 2 d door..n asked in a cncrned tone..."bhai kya hua...aap theek toh ho na??"bt as rey dint answer she went ahead 2 knock d door n realized dat d oor ws alrdy open...she ws a lil scred as she thot dat smethng ws wrng wid rey...bt wen she opened d door she fumed with anger...coz d scene ws lyk...rey had headphnes on...n ws dancing...neha wlked up 2 him angrily removed hs headphnes...

 

REY: wt the...

N: yeh kya baat hui..koi aise hdphnes kaano me thoos ke naachta hai kya!!!hai na music systm ghr me..use nai baja skte...aur agr hdphnes se hi sunna hai toh low vol nai rkh skte...me pagalon ki tarah lst 20 mins se chillaye jaa rhi hun n aap yaha aise...i mean dimag fridge me rakha hai kya!!!(rey tried 2 giv n xplainatn bt hs darng sis din let hm do dat)

aur yeh kya ab tak tayar nai hue aap...tym dekha hai..."(saying ds she luked at d wtch n stped as it ws 1 hr behind..)lo bolo...l8 nai karoge toh aur kya...1 ghante peeche hai ye...ghr ke naukron ne dekha kaise nai...sb aapki sngat me bigad rhe hai bhai...(she wnt towards d wal n raised her hand to remove d clock...bt rey caught her hand stoping hr 4rm doin dat...)

REY:theek krna hi hai toh apne room ka clock theek karo...coz yeh peechenai wo age hai ek ghante n nt jst dat tumhare saare wtches ka yahi haal kiya hai mene...(sayin ds he freed nehaz hnd...n den wlked 2wrds d wdrope..2 selct a shrt 4 hmslf...no guys hez nt shrtles so dnt imagine hm lyk dat..Tongue)
N:bchpan me bhi aisa nai kiya aapne..toh ab kya msti chadi???
R:are msti nai re...wo kya hai na mjhe laga ki aaj 1st day hai col ka so tu tayyar hone ke liye bht tym lagaegi..lyk to imprs vicky..luk btr dan oder grls..etc..etc..bt tu toh jldi tayyar ho gayi...
(he den kept hs hand around hr sholdr n dircted hr 2wrd d door...)
N:bhai...1stly mjhe vicky ko imprs krne ki koi zarurat nai hai..wo alrdy imprsed hai..n scndly mere babu ko mere alava koi aur nai dikhta toh mje baki ldkiyon ka koi dr nai...n yeh aap mje room se bhr kyu le jaa rhe ho??
R:wo isliye meri pyaari behna...ki me colg aise stinky clothes me toh nai aa skta na...so agr aapki prmisn ho to me chnge kru??
N:(neha moved reyz hnd away..n sd..)jo krna hai karo..mjhe kya...bin mtlb mjse jldi jldi me sbkch karvaya...(she wlked dwn d stairs)ab pls zyada tym mt lagana..vaise bhi ladkiya apke hr luk pr mrti hai..n phr mjhe preshaan krti hai..rey kitne baje uthta hai...fav colour kya hai uska...merebareme baat krta hai kya!!...(n she kpt blaberng...rey thot 2 hmslf..pagal kahiki..shuru hojati hai to khtm hone ka naam hi nai leti..n he clsed d door..)
 
(Neha stndin near d dinin tble..txtin vicky...he cumz 4rm behind n hugs hr...)
V:kaisa hai mera kagu...miss kiya mjhe...
N:hi...babu...bht miss kiya...aur kaha the tum..kitni der laga di..
V:are wo...
REY:hey vicky...wassup!!
V:hey rey!!!
R:tu akele kai..nil bhi saath ane wala tha na????kaha hai wo??
NIL:yaha hu...is idiot ko apne kagu ko milne ki itni jldi thi ki car bhi theek se park nai kia...mjhe krna pada...
N:ha babu...tum mjse milne ke liye itne utavle the...!!!
V:me toh tumse milne keliye hmesha utavla hota hu...kagu...
R:tum dono pagal ho gaye ho kya...baat toh aise kr rhe ho jaise saalo baad mil rhe ho..lemme tel u kal raat hum sab saath hi the..n yeh kya kagu babu laga rkha hai..itne ache naam hai neha n vicky...kyu badalne pe tule ho...
V:are rey tu nai smjhega...neha naam tumlogone rkha hai pyaar se..n kagu mene rkha hai..pyaar se...(n dey hugged ech odr...rey ws abt 2 tel smthng...bt nil stoped hm..)
N:chod yaar rey...tu agr in dono ko smjhane jayega na to tjhe bhi apne jaisa banadenge...n kya pata tera bhi phrse naam kran kr de...
R:i guess u r ryt...chal chlte hai...yeh dono aa jayenge vicky ke car me...
Nil:oh babu maharaj...apki gadi ki chabhi yaha rkhdi hai...apni maharani ko lekr poch jaiye clg...bye...
R:bye guyz...chal nil...
N&V:bye...
 
hey guyz ds is jst prt 1 m writin prt 2 nw..m sry i knw bht tym laga rhi hu...bt wt 2 do..1st tym na..so..
 
PLS DO COMNT N LEMME KNW HW IZ IT..N AL DOSE WHO WNT PM..PLS LYK DS POST..IT'L BCUM EASY 4 ME..Smile

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 3:58am | IP Logged
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wah !wah kya likha hai tune!!!!!!!!!1 its awesome dude...and u know i liked rey and neha's relation a lot...it was mindblowing...and and and vicky...wah kya naam hai babu maharaj!!!!!!!!!! i was lykROFL...too gud yaar ...1st part itna bang on tha ...toh waiting 4r second part...nice workClap...


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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 4:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deetha

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hahahaha...u'l hav 2 w8   4 dem...LOL

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