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Aur Bas Pyaar Ho Gaya...NOTE...PG 41 (Page 35)

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Posted: 08 May 2012 at 4:08am | IP Logged
Lovely Update
Thanks For Pm 

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Posted: 08 May 2012 at 6:14am | IP Logged
awsom blossom update...finally kria said it.and gud to know dat rey is still comfortable and likes kria as a frnd...hope the tables turn soon for both couplesBig smile

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Posted: 08 May 2012 at 8:23am | IP Logged
gud one,,,,,,,,,,,luv it

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 5:53am | IP Logged
amazing update...loved it

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 8:22am | IP Logged
it was gud n pls pm me for the nxt tym
n update soon

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 10:53am | IP Logged

CHAPTER 5

 

Hey guys m back wid chptr 5…

 

(4 months l8r…)

Yes u r ryt is story me choti si leap ho gayi…LOL

n in 4 months me bht kch hua hai…jb sahi wqt ayega…I'l reveal it…til den w8….Embarrassed

so  here it is…

 

sw:(cals up sharon..)hey sharon wassup…

sh:hi…gtng rdy 4 d col…

sw:ab tak rdy nai hui….

Sh:ho gayi almst…kyu..y u askng ds…

Sw:coz me tumhare ghr k bhr khada hun…n I wnt u out ryt nw…

Sh:(goes 2 hr window…)oh god yaha kya kr rhe ho…

Sw:kch baat krni thi…mje milo abhi…

Sh:ohk…lift ke yaha aao...il cum…

(she goes dwn…)

Sh:kya hua…u ok na…

Sw:2 mnths 3din pehle around 9pm…tumne mje kch kaha tha…u remmbr…

Sh:no…clear bolo na…mene bht kaha tumhe…n aise xact yaad rkhna tumhe ata hai mje nai…

Sw:ohk…so I luv u too..i noe l8 realize kiya…bt yea I luv u…vl u b my gf…(went dwn on hs knees..)

Sh:bt u sd ki…

Sw:yea I noe…mje aise hi lag atha tb…bt I ws wrong (got up…)pls temme na…mje aaj bhi lyk krti ho kya…

Sh:yea I do…I luv u….(n dey hug….bt der wsnt d xpcted happines on sharonz face…swayam din notice as he ws too xcited n sharon pretnded 2 b happy..)

Sw:me abhi rey ko batata hun…

Sh:tum sbko pls mt batao itne jldi…I mean badme bata te hai na…

Sw:ohk I dnt mind bt rey ko to bol skta hun na….wo actly..iske baare me nai pata th ause…n I shre evrythng wid hm…

Sh:yea rey vl do..me bhi kria ko bataungi…bt no1 else…

Sw:ohk swthrt…so chale..

Sh:no actly dad ne kaha ki he'l drop n aise mauke u noe na…kam ate hai…so u go me clg me frst tumhe hi milungi…

Sw:acha fyn chalega…no issues…cya..(n he hugs her…)

Sh:bye…

(sharon went back home..)

Sharonz dad:beta m free 2day u wnt me 2 drop u 2 col???

Sh:no dad itz fyn…il go…cya..(n she leaves widout even w8ng 4 deir rply..leavng both of dem cnfused…)

Sh:(goes 2 d paking lot…n in d flashback…)(nw al ds sharon soch rhi hai….)

2 month 3 days ago at 9 pm…

Sh:hi swayam…mje na tumse kuch kehna hai…bt pls bura mat mannna…

Sw:u noe u sound lyk tum mje propose krne wali ho…

Sh:nt xctly bt sumwt aise hi kch hai…

Sw:hey kya bol rhi ho..

Sh:swayam I lyk u…mtlb srsly…u noe dat luv wala lyk…I hope u gt ot na..

Sw:sharon…(lyk hesitatng a lil)u jokin ryt…

Sh:(got a lil serious…)no m nt…tum pls aise…lstn jst tel wt evr u wnt 2…

Sw:sharon..c..i dnt noe..bt me shayad ab bhi kriya…aaa….tum smj rhi hon…

Sh:yea..

Sw:sharon m sry 4 hrtng u..bt shayad hi I'l b able 2 gt ovr kriya…

Sh:yea I totally do..n vaise…mene bas kaha u c dat I lyk u…nai kr skti kya…u r handsome…..n me tumhe mje d8 krne nai bol rhi…u noe ds has hapned 4 d frst tym…so mene bata diya tumhe..

Sw:oh yea ofcrse thnx 4 d complimnt…

Sh:acha theekey den cya..

Sw:cya..

(dey both knew dat it wsnt jst ds way…sharon ws serious…bt dey ignred as dey both wrnt in d state 2 hndle it…)

A drop of tear rolled dwn sharonz cheek…(n flash back ovr…)

Sh:(2 hrslf…)kya sachme mjse pyaar krta hai wo…bt hw..itne jldi kaise badal gaye uske feelings…nai kya ho rha hai yeh…kaise ho skta hai…(she gts a cal…)

Sh:hello…

Sw:kaha ho…m w8n…

Sh:haan I'l b der in some tym…

(sharon rches col…stil thnkin lost in hr past memories…kriya sees her..)

K:heeelllooo…

Sh:hi…

K:kya hua…

Sh:u noe wat me n swayam d8n ech oder…

K:wat r u serious…

Sh:yea…

K:ye toh bht achi baat hai…(she hugs sharon in xcitemnt…bt den she realises smethng…bt so dat sharon shudnt feel awkward she keeps hr calm n asks nrmaly..)toh dindhora peet diya hoga na swayam ne ab tak…

Sh:nai mene mana kiya…bt usne rey ko bataya hai…

(swayam cums der n hugs sharon 4rm behind…)

Sw:I noe 100 yrs jeeunga…mere hi baare me baat kr rhe the na…

Sh&K:yea…

K:so me nikalti…u hav u r priv8 tym…(n she leaves…)

(she goes in d flashback…)

K:rey kya hua apne mje ind me kyu bulaya itne urgntly…

R:kriya tum meri achi dost ho gayi ho..in dese 2 or 2 b specific in dis 2 n mnths so tumhe ek secrt batana hai apna jo kisi ko nai bataya mene…

K:yea temme…I promis kisi ko nai bolungi…

R:I lyk sharon…4rm a vry long tym…

K:(hrtbrokn…bt stil asks rey calmly…)so u wnt my hlp 2 propose hr..

R:no no…mene bas aise hi kaha tumhe..wnted 2 shre…bt tum pls aise kch mat krna lyk setting n al pls…

K:ohk I promise…

(flashback ovr…)

K:ab tak toh rey ko pata chal gaya hoga…

(widout thnkin much she goes 2 d fire exit……rey is sitin der…hs back is facing kriya…she closes d door…)

R:kyu ayi ho yaha…ye dekhne ki tumhara plan sucessful hua ya nai..or iz it coz kch aur krna baaki hai..

K:wt r u telin rey…m nt getng u…

R:(he nw gts up…)pls itni bholi nai ho tum…kitne smrtly sharon n swayam ki sting laga di…so dat sharon rasten se hatt jaye….n tum mje paa sako…

K:rey pls…ye kya…

R:kriya…dnt say nythng mje tumhari koi baat nai sunni…I nvr thot tum itni despo typ ho….huh…4gt it…(n he leavs….)

K:(vry shocked…)hw cn u…(she sits dwn….n strts crying…)

R:(in d lokr rum…frst8ed mood…swayam cums…rey calms hmslf dwn…)hi…

Sw:u noe me bht kush hun yaar…

R:yea vaise manna padega na kriya ne kya madat ki na teri…I mean sharon jaisi ldki ko kisi pe crush…kya baat hai na…

Sw:kriya ne kya kiya use toh pata bhi nai tha…I mean use bhi aaj hi sharon ne bataya…

R:swayam chil mje batayega toh kch ho nai jayega…sharon wali baat bhi tune pehle nai batyi,,,

Sw:rey yaar sry 4 dat lekin sachme kriya ka koi haath nai hai isme..

R:srsly..

Sw:yea

R:oh god….me tjse mlta hun thodey tym me…(he runs 2 d fire exit…hes happy 2 c kriya is der bt nw shez facing hm her back…wen he goes in frnt of her hez shocked 2 c kriyaz cnditn…she ws crying btrly…hr eyes hd turned red…)kriya…

(she jst stood up…)

R:c m sry me gusse me tha so kch bhi bol diya..i thot ki tumne kiya yeh sb c m sry…me pata nai yaar u noe na sb kch…isiliye me ovr react…yaar kch bolona..pls…

K:u noe rey…me pagal thi jo ye smjti rhi ki aap mje apna dost smjte ho…bt…

R:arey kya pagal thi…I cnsidr u my frnd…

K:acha…toh zara yaad krke batayiye…ktne baar aapne mjse aake poocha ki kriya wts wrng aaj upst lag rhi ho…ya phr…kriya koi prblm hai tumhe u cn shre…kitne baar humne baitkr meri problms discus ki….kbhi nai…nevr…it ws always u…tumhari problm..tumhari baatein…jst abt u…alwayz…

R:nai kriya me sach me…

K:enuf rey…(she shouts…)apke liye me srf ek prblm solvng machine hun…datz it…jb problms hoti hai tb aa jate ho mere paas…coz u noe it vry wel ki kch bhi ho jaye..me tumhari madat hmesha karungi…bevakuf thi…tum toh mje bas despo cnsidr krte  ho….bt nt nw….ab aap apne liye kisi aur machine ko doond lijiye……(n she leavs……)

 

 

So here it is….i noe mje marne ka mann kr rha hoga bt…yeh sb 1 or 2 epi tk hoga uske baad nyc scenes 4 sure….

So pls cmnt n lyk dil khol kr…n hit d lyk buttons 4 pms…Smile

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Great update
Aww kriyansh had a fight noo
Hope dey get together soon
Thnx 4 da pm

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
aww because of swaron kriyansh had a fight how noraml it is always their fault really and thanks for the pm loved it well hated the kriyansh fight but ur wrirting is amazing

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