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Aur Bas Pyaar Ho Gaya...NOTE...PG 41 (Page 31)

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Posted: 04 May 2012 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Amazing updt...
Luv d it...
Rey helping swayam 2 bring kriyam close...
Krie is thinking rey is jealous of swayam...
Kria wanted 2 knw rey's feeling...
She wanted him 2 tell what swayam told...
She confessed 2 rey...
Swayam feeling bd nd nt lifting up Sharon's call
Precap was awesum...

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Posted: 05 May 2012 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
just one wword WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 6:31am | IP Logged

CHAPTER 4

 

Hey guys m back wid chptr 4…

 

Sharon pissed off as swayam is nt ansrng hr cals…

Sh:4gt it pata nai kaha hai yeh..nw let hm cal il nt rply nly…n notes hi hai na me kriya se leti hun…(she cald kriya..kriya sees its sharonz cal n stops crying…she smehw mages 2 tlk in hr nrmal tone..)

K:hey sharon…

Sh:hey kriya..u nt wel kya..???

K:arey no m ohk…bas thoda sir dard kr rha hai..

Sh:ohh but y achanak se!!colg se nikalne tak toh u wer fyn..

K:yeah wo actly I din sleep wel na ystrday so isiliye…aaj jldi soo jaungi toh il b fyn…

Sh:ih datz nyc…acha lstn na mje wo dixit sir ke notes chahiye the…u noe mene theek se nai likha…so cn I cum 2 ur place nw 2 tke it..nywayz bs 20 mins ki doori pr hi hai na..

K:(kriya din wnt sharon 2 noe dat she cried…)sharon abhi nai cum aftr 1 hr..pls..wo mom ke kch frnds aye hai so acha nai lagega na…hpe u undrstand..

Sh:yea totly…so il leave aftr hlf n hour…

(aftr hlf n hour…)

Sh:schalo niklti  hun…wrna kal tk notes kaise padungi…n ds swayam ab tak rply nai kiya isne…idiot…

(sharon rches kriyaz place..n cals hr up..)

Sh:hey kriya neechey aa jao na..

K:arey u cum up na isi bahane mera ghar bhi dekh logi…

Sh:acha ohk…

(door bel rngs..kriya opens d door…)

Sh:hie…

K:hey…yeh rhe notes..cum in..mom nai hai ghr pr..so v can tlk tlk n tlk…

Sh:kriya c don't lie..tum royi ho kya!!

K:nai toh …arey mene kaha tha na ki head ache hai isiliye ankhey sooji hai…

Sh:don't lie kriya mje trust kr skti ho tum…luk at u abhi bhi rone jaise hui ho…

K:(wid grt difficlty kriya hd cntroled hr tears bt aftr hearng sharonz wrds she cudnt cntrol dem nymre…she broke dwn…)sharon c I trst u isiliye bol rhi hun..dnt sprd ds pls…

Sh:yea bolo na..

K:(n she narated d whle story..)

Sh:hey kriya don't u wry…rey na thoda tubelyt hai…use der se baatein smjti hai…

K:no sharon pls mje jhoota dilasa mat do…nywayz…mje bura toh ye lag rha hai ki swayam se theek se baat bhi nai ki mene…lstn na..vl u tlk 2 hm…I mean me ab usse baat krne k cnditn me nai hun.. il tlk 2 hm..bt nt nw…pls..ul do ds 4 me…

Sh:yea sure…n rey se bhi…

K:nai pls…rey se kch baat mat karo use pata bhi nai chlna chahiye ki mene tumhe bataya yeh sab…ohk…

Sh:fyn as u wsh..i hpe rey realizes soon…

K:yea lets c…

(sharon leaves n cals up swayam….)

Sh:wow so phne uthaya tumne…

Sw:sry wo me busy tha…

Sh:mje milna hai tumse abhi…

Sw:no I cnt..

Sh:fyn m cumin 2 ur place…

Sw:hav u lost it…itni raat ko..

Sh:chil ghr pr bol kr aaungi…n dad ko prblm nai hoga….he trusts me n I trust u…so cya in sum tym…

Sw:sharon lstn…(n she dsconcts…)god ab iske saamne bhi pretnd krna padega…

(she rches swyams home…)

Sh:hi..

Sw:sh:yaar tum itni ziddhi kyu…1st tym u r cumin 2 my plce n me tumhe prprly treat bhi nai kr paunga…m nt wel..

Sh:me yaha koi prty krne nai ayi hun…n dnt lie…kriya ne sb bataya mje..cumon swayam u cn trust me…lt ur slf out..

Sw:yaar wt shud I do nw…bht guilty feel kr rha hun…

Sh:arey guilty kyu..koi paap nai kiya hai tumne…

Sw:nt lyk dat yaar..bt m feelin rly bad…

Sh:acha ohk temme kis baat ka bura lag rha hai…is it coz kriya dsnt feel 4 u…or is it coz u feel tumhare vajah se rey n kriya me prblms honge…

Sw:I don't noe…samaj nai a rha…

Sh:u r d nly 1 who knwz…c khud ko poocho zara…giv ur slf sme tym…

Sw:may b itz coz mene kriya ko hurt kiya…u noe I dnt mind if shez nt myn…bt wo upset nai honi chahiye…

Sh:datz nyc…c il tel u…kriya is wqt thodi hurt hai bt nt coz of u…itz rey….n me koi apni story nai bana rhi…m telin wt she told me…n rha sawal rey ka…toh wo kriya ko kbhi guilty feel nai kavayega…

(reyz place…)

R:rey bas cal kr ab kriya ko…theekey na…crush hi toh hai…usme kya hai…shez ur frnd n usse baat krni chahiye tje (he cals kriya..)

K:rey…univrseji kya karu…pata nai kya bolna hai ise…(she pick up d cal…)hello…

R:hey kriya…

K:hi…

R:ahh lstn I noe tumhe bht awkward lg rha hoga na…bt c…yeh galat nai tha yaar…crush toh hota hai…nd its normal…tum pls mere saath ajeeb mat feel krna…

K:nai me kaha..

R:c kriya…mje na tum achi lgti ho…bt d thng is c ki mene kbhi tumhare baare me aise nai socha…c I jst wanna say tum meri bht achi dost ho…n I don't wanna lose u..

K:rey m glad ki aap ..i mean tum is sb ke baad bhi mere saath normal behave kr rhe ho…n I promis..me tumhe kbhi bhi…uncmfortble feel nai krvaungi…pakka..

R:I noe kriya..chalo acha hua…sb sot out ho gaya…so mere paas na zyada balnce nai hai…chat krte hai na..msg balnce fulon hai mere paas…

K:yea chalega…bt thode tym ke baad mje swyam se baat krni hai..i mean wo hurt hoga na..

R:yea k…tum baat krlo den me baat krta hun…phr hum chat krenge…cool..

K:Yea fyn…cya den…

R:yea cya…(keeps d phne…)I promis tum in sbse bhr nikalne me poori madat krunga…

K:pata nai rey ke liye jaise feel kr rhi hun wo chnge hoga bhi ya nai…4gt it il cal swayam…

(mean whyl at swayamz place…)

Sh:chil abhi c…sb kch hmare hisaab se hua toh lyf intrstng kaise hogi na..

Sw:yea wo tho hai…

Sh:so me chlti hun…notes bhi cmplete krna hai mje….n kbhi  bhi low feel karoge na toh cal krna il b awake…notes cmplete krna hai na…

Sw:yea ab toh tumhe pareshaan krke chodoonga…u noe…tum bht achi ho…thnx yaar…

Sh:nytym…..chal bye…

Sw:bye…

(wen sharon leavs jst dt tym kriya cals….)

Sw:hi kriya…n chil m fyn..

K:kya…mene toh kch nai poocha..

Sw:yahi poochne k liye cal kiya I noe…sharon ayi thi ghr pr..

K;so u ohk na…

Sw:ekdum fyn…acha suno mje rey ka cal aa rha hai ttyl…

K:ohk bye..

Sw:haan bol..

R:kriya se baat kr rha tha kya..

Sw:haan the kaise pata…

R:mera baat hua tha usse…

Sw:yeh acha kiya tune….

R:yaar bhai tu mujse gussa nai hai na…

Sw:nai yaar…senti mt ho ab…n vaise bhi kch hoga na to the pakka bataunga me…

R:acha fyn…theekey phr kal milte hai…cya…

Sw:cya gn…

(kriyasha hav a gud chat guys…bt wo sb xplain nai kr rhi me…)

 

 

So here ends my chp 4…hpe u lyked it…

N nxt upd8 jldi nai hoga…coz nw m writng another ff as wel so pls thoda sabar karo…

 

Hit d lyk button 4 pms….n do comnt… Smile

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 6:33am | IP Logged

*Res*


I wil unres later..Wink

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 6:46am | IP Logged

Nice update dear.

Chalo acha hua sab kuch sort out hogaya un logon ke beech mein. 

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 6:46am | IP Logged
good one ...nice update

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 6:46am | IP Logged
nice update and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3

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it was awesome i loved it  

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