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Aur Bas Pyaar Ho Gaya...NOTE...PG 41 (Page 25)

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 12:42am | IP Logged

CHAPTER 3(prt 2)

 

Hey guys m back…so herez chp3 prt 2

 

(rey n swayam dne wid deir convrsatn..n nw dey enter d rehrsal hall…)

Ri:chalo na guys warm up strt krte hai…

Bh:are hum rehrsal krne thodi na aye hai…

Ri:toh kb krenge rehrsal…

Si:tab hi jb nrmly krte hai…

Sh:guyz saare prtners toh decide ho chuke hai bt stil lemme mke it clr 1ce again..

Neha vicky

Simmi nil..

Rinni amar..

Vishaka bharat

Me swayam

Kriya rey..

Al cool…

(hearng ds kriya bcums vry xcited…bt rey n swayam lut at ech oder..)

R:(2 hmslf..)vaise to mje swayam sharon ki prtnrshp todni thi..bt nw I guess zarurat nai pdegi…(2 swayam..)sunn mje kriya ka prtnr bana rehne de…dat vl hlp me find out hr feelins..

Sw:ohk…bt dekh ha dbt nai hona chahiye use…

(meanwyl oder hav sme rndom cnvrsatn..)

Ni:so guyz cls chlte hai..den v'l cum 4 d rhrsals..

Evry1:yea chalo…

R:(2 swayam…)tu sharon ke saath jaa…(n den he goes 2 kria..)hey tumhe koi problm nai hai na meri prtnr banne me…

K:nai toh mje kya problm..

R:haan nai wo me bs aise hi pooch rha tha…acha so chalo batao mje…koi ldka psnd aya tumhe…lyk koi bhi ho toh bata do me secrt hi rkhunga…

K:(2 hrslf..)univrseji…ye wahi ho rha hai jo me smj rhi hun…kya rey mje sgnl de rhe hai..(2 rey..)nai koi nai psnd aya…

R:sachchi..acha chalo..mje batao swayam ke baare me kya khyal hai..

K:wt???

R:arey I mean…tumhe kya lgta hai ki ldkiya marr skti hai kya us pr..

K:(2 krslf..)chal kria dikha de apna k efct..(2 rey..)wel haan I mean cute hai wo…carng bhi hai…

R:ohk…so wt if agr…lyk jst imagine…agr tumhe prpose kiya usne…so kya bologi tum…

K:ab pata nai I mean depnd krta hai na…shayad haan bol skti hun…agar koi aur psnd na ho toh…

R:ohk…acha me ata hun…(n he goes 2 swayam…)

K:wow..i dnt beliv it…rey jal gaye…hehehehe….

(sharon joins kriya…dey entr d cls…reyam sit baju baju me…)

R:dude teri story ful lyn pr hai…me bolta hu aaj hi pooch le use..

Sw:kya mtlb…kya poocha tune use..n kya bola usne…

R:(he nrated 2 swayam d whle cnvo..)dekh me itne drctly nai poochne wala tha bt usse baat krke laga dat ds wud nly b fyn…

Sw:usne sach me aise bola…I mea sahi hai yaar…so u thnk me pooch lun use..aaj hi..

R:haan poochna…dekh rndmly bula use…tjse milne..baat kr aise hi..bol crsh hai c hw she reactes…n den bol de..

Sw:ohk cool so aaj shaam ko…sunna tu bula na use..

R:arey the propose krna hai..me kyu beech me padu..

Sw:pls yaar atlst b around der…pls…tu sport systm hai mera…

R:ohk fyn…bt use bata na mt…

Sw:yea…ohk…

(den guyz phr lec bhi hua…rehrsal bhi…bt me seedhe end of d rehrsl me jaa rhi hun…)

Sh:nyc acha dance kr lete ho…

Sw:wel bchpan se..

Sh:ohh pls chane ke jhaad pr jaake mt baito…me toh bas khush krne ke liye bol rhi thi…

Sw:rehne do …sach bolne me kya sharam..

Sh:sht up…me saath me thi na…isiliye ache lg rhe the…

Sw:wel wo toh hai…ab sharon d diva saath me hogi toh acha toh lgna hi hai na…

Sh:(blushed unknwingly..)yea..

Sw:so u drping me 2day also na…

Sh:yea ofcrse…chalo…

Sw:haan tum chalo..il c u in d car prking…mje kch kaam hai..il cum soon..

Sh:ohk…

R:kria neha tum dono chalo…mje swayam se kch kaam hai so me usse baat krke ata hun…

Ne:ohk bhai…chalo kriya..

K:(2 hrslf)zaroor mjse related baat krni hogi…zara dekhu toh kya hai..(2 neha..)neha tum chalo…me lokr rum me kch bhool gayi…so wo lekr ati hun…

(kriya wnt 2 c wer dese 2 wer…meanwhyl..reyam tlkin..outsyd d fire exit…)

R:so tu kah abulane wala hai use…n abhi tune baat kyu nai kiya usse..

Sw:yaar wo ajeeb lg rha tha thoda…bt pakka shaam ko ful cnfidnce se bolunga…

R:ohk…so bol na…kaha bulane ka plan hai…

(nw kria entrs…dese 2 dnt noe dat kria iz der…abhi wale cnvrsatn kriya sunegi…)

Sw:clg me hi…bsktbal court..datl b d bst…

R:u sure wo ayegi…n ds plce vl b bst 2 cal hr…

Sw:haan c na clg hi hai so ane me zyada odd bhi nai feel kregi wo…me txt…nai cal krta hun use…il tel hr 2 cum der by 7.30

Bt tu 7 ko hi aa jaa ohk…

R:yea cool…bt use pata nai chlna chahiye dat m also der…k..

Sw:yea dne…

(kriya realizes dey r dne wid deir tlk…so she runs 4rm der..rey n swayam cum wlkin aram se…so kriya rches cr prkng b4 den..neha n sharon alrdy stndng der..)

K:(breathng heavily…mtlb thkne ke baad kai se breath krte hai vaise..)hi guyz…sry l8 ho gayi..

N:bhaag kr ayi kya tum…

K:haan I thot sb alrdy aa gaye honge…isiliye…

Sh:kaha aye…abhi ata hun bolkr pata nai kaha reh gaya ye swyam…

N:der aye gaye wo dono…

R&SW:sry sry….chalo chlte hai…

(dey al leav…kriya behaves nrmal …wen she rches hme…she thnks…)

K:wow…kya aaj rey mje propose krne wale hai…ya shayad nai…pata nai..wrna aise kyu bulayenge mje…univrseji…kch toh acha hi hona chahiye…no w8…unhone toh naam hi nai liya mera…I hpe mere hi baare me baat kr rhe ho…

(she gts swayams cal…)

K:hi swayam…

Sw:hey kriya…acha suno na..aaj eveng me free ho..

K:haa kyu…

Sw:mje milne bb crt aaogi clg me…pls..kch kaam hai…

K:ohk….aur kaun kaun hai…

Sw:koi nai ..tumhe akele nai ana kya…

K:arey nai nai…il cum...7.30 shrp…

Sw:wt???mene tym kah abataya..tumhe…

K:(realizes wt blundr she did..)arey tumhi ne bola wrna mje kaise smjta…

Sw:(2 hmslf…)bola hoga…me vaise bhi isse baat krte wqt lost ho jata hun…(2 kriya.)acha haan theekey dnt b l8…

K:yea chal den cya..

Sw:yea bye…

(meanwhyl…sharonz plce..)

Sh:kya crack hai ye swayam…bt jo bhi bola maza ata hai iske saath..ful on timepass…n she goes in flsh bck…

 

(kriya rey n swayam shaam ki tayyari kr rhe hai…)

K:yeh pehnti hun…m sure rey vl lyk it…

Sw:yeh acha rhega na rey…

R:no wear ds…ds 1 iz btr…

(finly itz 7.15reyam w8 4 kriya…7.25..n a rikhshaw stop…rey goes n hides…)

Sw:hi 5 mins pehle hi…

K:yea tym ki pakki hun me…(her eyes keep searchng 4 rey…)

Sw:so achi lg rhi ho…

K:thnx…(she dsnt cmplmnt hm back…as she is lost in srchng 4 rey..)

Sw:so mje kch kehna tha tumse…

K:(nw she cncentrtes at swayam as he sounded serious..)ohk…bolo…

Sw:dekho pls..awkwrd feel mt karo…bt I lyk u mtlb crsh hai…tum cute ho…

K:(cnfused as she ws xpctng ds 4rm rey…nw shez nt undrstnding if al ds iz a drama or is it reality…)tum serious ho ya prank hai ye koi…

Sw:nai sach bol rha hun…

K:lstn pls mje aise mazak nai psnd…n I noe rey bhi yaha hai…n dnt temme nai hai n al…mene tumdono ki baatein sunn li thi…

Sw:kab suni…

K:obviously jb baat kr rhe the..pls pehle use bhr bulao swayam…pls…mje clr krna hai yeh sb…

R:heya…

K:rey yeh sb kya hai I noe swayam ye sb prnk plan nai krega…sb aapki hi planin hai na…

R:nai planin nai sach me lyk krta hai wo tumhe…

K:yea as if m gonna beliv u al…

Sw:kriya sach me..mje tum achi lgti ho…I jst wnted 2 ask if v cud d8 ech odr…

K:(frst luks at rey…rly sad dat derz no sign of jelousy…)no swayam …me aise nai feel krti tumhare baare me…m sry 4 ds…bt u r jst a frnd 4 me…

R:kriya yeh kya bol rhi ho…u nly sd na ki…

K:stp it rey…jst dnt intrfere…(in a serious tone…she ws almst abt 2 cry…reyam noticed dat..)

Sw:kriya m sry…mene tumhe hurt nai krna chaha…c if u dnt lyk al ds…I promis…me kbhi aise kch nai bolunga….kisi ko bhi nai bataunga…

(kriya tried hidinding dose tears behind hr smile…bt she cudnt as soon as rey spoke…)

R:kriya sry yaar…sachme I thot..ki tum…

K:enuf rey bolana dnt intrfere…(she almst shouted…n den a drop of tear roled dwn hr cheeks…)

R:kriya roh kyu rhi hon…n y u shoutng at me…

K:bcoz I wnt 2 tum pgal ho kya dnt u undrstnd nythng….

R:wt did I nt undrstnd…

(swyam ws gtin an idea as 2 wtz gonna hpn…bt he prayed dat it shudnt…)

K:shit…rey I dnt beliv it…tumhe koi frk nai pad awt evr hpned..(she cried…)I mean me jaise tumhare saath behav kr rhi thi usse kch nai smjha tumhe…

R:y r u ovr reactng….

K:becoz I luv u….yaha ayi thi yeh soch kr ki tum propose kroge mje…n u tum swayam ka saath de rhe ho…hw cn u nt undrstand…or shayad…me hi pagal thi…fool idiot…4gt it…(n she jst goes away cryin…)

(reyam shocked…

Swayam hrtbrokn…bt cntrols hs feelins in frnt of rey so dat he dsnt feel guilty..rey din noe wt 2 say…hw 2 react…)

Sw:(wid a fke smile..)kya lal hua na…acha chod tu jake baat kr usse..v guys cn acpt ds..bt grls pata hai na emotnal typ…

R:(he knew swayam ws prtnding…bt he din noe hw 2 cntrol hm if he brks dwnn..as he hmslf wsnt in a gud state…so he also sd..)yea il cal hr l8r…chal il drop u hme…

Sw:yea chal..

(stupid tlk zabrdsti dikhava wala btw reyam..in d car…den dono ghr pochte hai…kria also rches hme…inside her rum..)

K:shit me pagal jaise kch bhi sochti rahi…n sb bol diya rey ko…kya soch rha hoga wo…n swayam I dint even cnsole hm…wo bhi toh mere jaise feel kr rha hoga na…

R:mene soch nai tha ki kriya lyk kregi mje…mere vajahse mere do sbse ache dost hrt ho gaye…god…wt shud I do nw..

Sw:crying…mene smjha kyu nai kriya ke feelins…ab wo kitna awkwrd feel kregi mere aur rey ke saamne…

Sh:chalo il cal swayam…(bt he dsnt reciv r cal…)arey ise kya hua…

 

 

Precap…sharon cnsolng swyam…rey cals kriya…

 

Hit d lyk button 4 pm…

N nxt upd8 nxt week...Smile

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 12:52am | IP Logged
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The update was amazing...
awww sharon blushing unknowingly n kriya heard reyam convo
poor kriya she's expecting rey to propose her...n its a bit difficult to imagine swayam n kriya dating n acha hua kriya told her feelings to rey
eagerly waiting for the next part

Edited by lovely7010 - 03 May 2012 at 1:15am
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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 1:11am | IP Logged
awesome part...
loved it very much
waooo what the straight forward scenes i means so non dramatic scenes...loved it very much
you are too good mishtika
loved the way story is moving 

waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Awesome part misthika.
it was lovely update.
thanks meow for the pm.
kriyaaansh ko jaldi couple banao.
Beaurifuly written.
Update soon

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 1:15am | IP Logged
nice updateSmile
excited to know what rey will tell kriya when he will call her..Confused

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 1:20am | IP Logged
nice part liked it and thanks for d pmBig smile

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Wow amazing update... Reyam convo was nyc... Lekin mujhe vo niche ke bloopers bilkul samaj nahi aye...lolz... Thnkz fr d pm meow...

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 1:41am | IP Logged

Cool updt..

Love d way its going..

Kriya in her ways to check out rey's feelings..

Esp. wen she thought he became jealous abt Swayam..

Ye Rey bhi na..he wanted to fix kriya n swayam...

Rey supporting Swayam to propose n support was really gud..in positive way.

Poor Kriya, she wanted Rey to tell all dat Swayam told.

Finally, Kriya told her love for Rey n swayam feeling bad he dint realise her feelings.

Sharon caling Swayam n he isnt lifting d cal.

Superb Precap..

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