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Aur Bas Pyaar Ho Gaya...NOTE...PG 41 (Page 17)

mishtika_diva Senior Member
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aishasully

woow awsomme yar but i want kriya and rey 2 be 2geder will dey be 2geder i cn imagine kriya face off loll
ofcrse dey vl kriyansh r mde 4 ech oder...Embarrassed
bt thoda w8 krna hoga..u c...jb tk wo dono tdpenge nai toh pyaar gehra kaise hoga na...Tongue

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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 11:32am | IP Logged
amazing update thanks for the pm and really long 

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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 11:40am | IP Logged
arrey nhi i was just asking aise hi...

but sharon like swayam na
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyansh24

arrey nhi i was just asking aise hi...

but sharon like swayam na
she vl lyk swayam bt abhi dey r jst frnds...Smile
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Amazing update!!!!!!!!!!
rey ko pata chal gaya dat kriya was acting dat her leg has sprained
n hehehehehehe swayam waiting for rey aur wait karte karte sharon ka moblile ka bal. khatam kar diya
luved kriyansh n swaron phone convo...eagerly waiting for the next part

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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Hey loved the update.. For bloopers..
One cud b dat wen swayam frst called rey frm sharon's cell her balance finished bt den she called rey with her phne in the canteen scene rite?
Nd also it cud be k how did rey, swayam nd sharon have kriya's numbr n vice versa... I mean they just met few minutes ago nd nw they r so gud friends... Same with amar abhi the dazzlers didnt know he existed nd dey r so close..
May be another cud be that kriya's haye rama wala dress had blue also nd so it matched swayam dress color.. Still he was dissappointd.. I know its silly bt its just a try to get update :p
p.s. Update soon

Edited by star94 - 30 April 2012 at 1:44pm

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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
awesome update...loved it very much
it was too long and i was completely droned in the story
enjoyed it very much, it was too good
specially the part where swayam was becoming impatient for meeting rey and kria and sharon getting irritated by that was superb...loved it very much

loved it very much
and about bloopers: finding them is very difficult job
you have written so well, thats its very hard to find the mistakes

waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon

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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Luvd d update...awesome...n true kriya ko koi nai hara skta...!!!awesome part...

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