friend is lover and enemy(surprise)part 4 added

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This is my 1st os. there will be lot of grammatically mistakes.so don't care abt that.plz enjoy and comment.if u don't like plz comment it.

 

 Lady:Surprise! A lady who wears salwari and comes infront of raizada mansion.

Anjali:omg lavanya.after a long time,come,come,nani,chote ,mami ,payal our lav had come

Lav:greetings nani.i remembered all of u every second in London.i can't live without u for just a second.so that the reason why I come.

Anj:u've lot of change.u wear salwaris,all traditional things,why are u changed lot?

Lav:bcz I want asr.i still lv him.i don't care if he lv me or no?but I'll take care of him as a gd wife.i know u all admire my idea.

(all of raizada mansion are shocked)

Lav: why all are sad mood.i'm gd girl for asr.afterall where is asr?

(kushi playing wt laxmi,and come towards.lav.and very happy to see her)

Kkg:lavji,hw are u after a long long time.

Lav:chamkili,nice to meet u too.(they hug,suddenly something stuck wth la's salwaar)

Kushi!are u married?wt a surprise.who is that lucky husband?so tell me yaar

Kushi shocked.anj enter to the talk

Anj:actually kushi married to chote.(lav is shocked.her all dreams of asr is destroying.she is very angry at kushi but closes that feeling)

Lav: my congrats kushi,I know u're best choice 4 asr.

Kushi:actually lavji, I never think to hurt u

Anj:oh! It's ok .come lav let's go to ur room

Lav and anj goes to lav's room.payal consoles kushi.

Pa:kushi I know that thruth is bitter,but oneday lav will be know the thruth

Kushi: it's good that lavji knew thruth 2day.so I can enjoy wih lavji peacefully jiji.

After a few hours later.

Lav:kushi,I want meet ur husband.don't misunderstand me so u come with me

Kushi:no lavji never.let's go to our room and meet him

They went to arhi room.

This is is the end of part 1 I know that is boring but I want to describe la's presence.2day I'll

update part 2 soon.😊

part 3 on pg 2

part 2 pag 1

part 4 on page 3πŸ‘

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RNArnav93 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Can't wait for the meeting ;)
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part 2

asr talk with client.suddenly he see la,but doesn't notice kushi.

Asr:la,when did u come?why don't u inform that u're coming

La forgot everything while asr seeing.she go and tightly hug asr.arnav then sees kushi.kushi notices that la is hugging asr.in kushi's eyes tears about 2 fell.arnav notices that.

Asr: (he can't bear kushi's tears,so he tells kushi 2 that)

Don't u know manners?plz get out of here.i have private talk wth la.la comes to real world and leave asr.

La:sorry,I forgot about that  my congrats asr.

Kushi leaves room sadly,asr notices that.he can't do anything bcz of la.

La:asr I don't think that u will marry chamkili,but it is the reality,so hw this suddenly happens?

Asr: I don't know la.leave it.

La:asr if u don't mind I have something 2 tell u last time bcz I'm leaving 2mrw.

Asr:2mrw?hw do u do that?plz stay here at least month

La: I know asr bcz of me u and kushi will disturb,I don't want 2 disturb u.i want only one thing 2 tell u for my last seeing of u

Asr:so tellme?

La:asr,I love u very much,and you're my 1st and last lv.i can't forget u asr.when I came from London,I don't know u're married.so I am use 2 propose u.but when I came 2 know abt ur marriage I hide it,but nw it is time 2 tell u abt that.but I know u love kushi

Asr:wt the hell are u talking la?this is not reality.i don't love u or kushi.i only love di.stop dream la.La:I'm not talking fake.u have to enter to the life.

Asr:stop talking that subject.there is no lv between me and kushi.u have 2 come common sense.

La:ok,I bought u gift from London,here it is.(wallet)

Asr:thanks.i know my best friend have right choice.

La:thanks asr,omg ur room was so changed.

Asr:this is bcz of kushi and her crazy things.

La:I think u're got married 2 mad woman(la laughs)

Asr:stop joking.let's go to down stairs.

La nd asr 's conversation was heard by shyam.shyam thinks 2 himself"nw the battle will begin"

He also goes to downstair

After enjoying everyone in raizada mansion.they go to their rooms.

In la room
la notices something in the dressing table.she wonders what is it?it is the part of some paper.something has written on that
"lavanya,I know u want asr,so I can help u 2 get asr,come and meet me in the raizada terrace.we will meet 2mmorrw"

La wonders who had write that.but she decides to go and see who is that mysterious person.

 

 

I don't use lv of arhi bcz every writers use lv 2 their os.i want 2 change the style.i try my best 2 add part 3 it'll be more mysterios confuse etc.plz enjoy and comment yaar.

Usma55 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Please continue
Hope La doesn't listen to the person she is gonna meet
Want Arnav and Khushi together
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope Lavanya Doesn't Shake Hands With Shyam :( 
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 3

One morning is looked 4 raizada mansion

La hurry 2wards to the terrace and look 4 the mysterious person.that person looks in backside and la cannot identify his face.

La:hey,who are u?come on face 2 me

Person turns and face with la.it is shyam

La:shyam,u?

Shy:ya me.i am the person who keeps chits on ur table

La:why?why do u want destroy arhi's life?

Shy:bcz I love kushiji.i can't live without her.i know u can't live wihout asr.

La:no way! I don't want 2 destroy arhi's life

Shy:I know u're tell lies.why don't u come back to real life

La:I'm in real life.u stop dream.ya.i lved asr and will lv asr.but I can't give chance to ruin arhi's life.if u force me 2 do that I will tell everything abt 2 eveyone

Shy:just shut up lavanya,u can't tell anything 2 anyonebcz u want asr.just listen 2 my story

La:stop talk nonsenses I don't want 2 hear u story

Shy:for a once plz listen.

La:ok for the 1 st and last time tell ur story

Shyam narrates every corner of his story

Shy:will u help me to get kushiji,I'll help u to get asr

La:I'm not ready 2 help u.

Shy:I know u want 2 get the asr.i overhear you and arnav's conversation yesterday,that why I ask u from help

La:I can't help u,I can't break asr trust leaves shyam shockingly

Shy:I know u will support me laji.i'm sure

Arhi room:

Arnav buzy in talk with his clients.kushi is playing wth laxmi in poolside.suddenly kush's finger is cut down because of the sharp of laxmi's bell.kushi yells loudly.asr cannot work bcz of the voice of kushi and goes 2 poolside.

Asr:what the hell are u doing kushi kumari gupta

Kushi:singh raizada. My finger was cut down.asr sees kushi's blood and goes near to the kushi.

Asr:did u hurt?stand let's go to the bed

Kushi:no need.i'll manage it by myself.

Asr:shut up kushi,give ur finger 2 look.kushi gvs her finger

Asr:why don't u care about yourself.alltime playing with that goat laxmi.are u a kid?wait I put medicines.asr puts medicines and rabba ve is playing.

Ok kushi,don't go kitchen.everything  will be here kushi.if u want anything plz call  op .suddenly anjali appears 2 arhi room.

Anj:what happened kushiji?

Kushi:it is just cut down di

Asr:di look .she doesn't know hw 2 take care her self.

Anj:chote,it is just finger cut

Asr:wt the,anyway kushi doesn't goes 2 anywhere.

Anj:as u wish chote

Asr leaves the room and second takes the look for kushi

Kushi:di it is just…….

Anj:this is not my order this is chote order.u don't feel lonely bcz of laji

Anjali leaves room,kushi is think that hw kind asr treat 2 her and hav a flash back of their memory,suddenly kushi thinks that why asr married 2 him,why ,she will going 2 find out it any how.

 

In la room

La remembers terrace scene.la thinks abt shyam's words.

La 2 herself:why do I feel 2 asr 2 get mine,support shyam get kushi,why?ya,I lv asr and can't forget him.i,m human .i can't hide my emotions.i 'll help shyam.any how I will get asr and soon he will be only mine.

La calls shyam and tells that she is ready 2 help him

Shy:I know laji u'll help me.from 2day we start our plan.

La:ok it'll be successful,I'll hangup the phone

precap:lavanya and shyam plan sucessfull.asr hates kushi more.

 

 

so guys wt are ur ideas abt new part

Usma55 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hate La and Shyam
I hope in the end Khushi and Arnva become one
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great part ;)
Hope arhi will overcome the evil plan !
Can't wait :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Khushi; How Much Will She Suffer ?! && Lavanya Is BADDD πŸ˜³
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 4
La wit the evil face and goes 2 arhi room
La:gd morning kushi
Kushi:gd morning
La:I'm buzy wth some work.di goes 2 check up in da morning.di told me to clean her room bcz hp is not there.so,I have som important wrk.can u tidy her room?
Kushi:of course .i'll clean it.i like it.
La:wth a smile and calls shy
Now ur work has done
In anj room
Kushi cleans her room suddenly someone put hand on kushi's shoulder.
Kushi:u
Shy:ya me.are u surprised?
Ku:leave me alone
Shy:no.i will not give chance u 2 escape from me
Ku:I'll shout if u come near 2 me
Shy:as u can kushi.bcz no one is there
Kus:why don't u leave peacefully,why?
Shy:bcz I lv u kushi.asr doesn't lv u.this is deal marriage
Kus:hw d u know?
Shy:I know everything kushi.i don't lv Anjali and won't.i don't lv my baby.i only lv u
Shyam tightly hug kushi
Kushi:leave me.u can't do this
Shy:no,I can
Kus:leave anj and her innocent baby
Shy:ya I leave them and gets u.asr marry u bcz of me.he heard our conversation on payash wedding.bt I lv u kushi
Asr look that shayam and kushi's hug.and heard the last sentence that shyam said.asr was super duper angry and leaves room.shayam looked that and leaves kushi freely.
Ku:I will tell everything 2 every one
Shy:hw u wii tell
Shyam has evil smile andla appears to shyam
Shy:u did g8 thing by make asr to come my room otherwise he won't see our hug
La in flashback
La calls asr.
La:asr where are u?
Asr:I'm on da way why?
la:i kept my important file in anj room by mistake.but now it is locked.there is no one is home and plz cm and help me
asr:ok la .don't mind.i'll help
la hang up da phone wt a evil smile
asr comes 2 home
la:it's gd that u come.let's go
asr:ok.they are in way 2 anj room.la stops and gets shy message that says ok.
la:asr i think u go and check da room .i'll be in 2 minutes.la walks backwt smile
then asr goes 2 anj room and sees shyam and kushi's hug
return of flashback
asr now hates kushi more .i will go 2 look their new fight.
shy:ok la.hv a look and enjoy

 


precap:lavanya is get caught by kushi and kushi is ready 2 fight get asr as make he only kushi

 

 

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