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Ra Ya's baby - Part 20 on Page 63 (Page 7)

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Sorry...just now saw the FF...i blasted myself for not seeing this post early...

so sweet...You are too good...



continue soon...

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kaviya10

Sorry...just now saw the FF...i blasted myself for not seeing this post early...

so sweet...You are too good...



continue soon...
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I shall continue soon...happy that you loved my story...no need to say sorry...you are like my sister...Smile

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 10:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SWEETETIKA

Sorry for late comments bhaiya.
Both the updates were really sweet and good.
Continue soon. :-)
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Thanks sister...

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged
Sorry Bhai i know m lateOuch
but just read both ur pasts
i thought u were "shy"...bt after reading it doesn't really seem likeWinkLOL
seriously i just loved them, choo cute and adorableEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
please continue soon, me waitingTongue

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 6:38am | IP Logged
Thanks to all your motivation and encouragement...whatever little I am able to write, I owe it to all of you those who have loved my works...I am happy in presenting you the third part in my Ra Ya's baby ...hope you all enjoy it...
Ram and Priya realise the beauty of parenthood with their Son Rohan...

One Morning,

Ram: Good Morning Priya and Rohan...have a nice day...Aaj office mein ek important meeting hai Priya...I have to leave early...main Washroom pehle use kar raha hoon...

Priya: Teek hai...

Ram: Priya tum keh rahi thi ki Rohan ko doctor ke paas le jaana hai...kya isko koi problem hai ya phir is it a regular check -up?

Priya: Arey koi pareshaani nahi hai...its only  a regular visit...aap office mein concentrate kijiye...main hoon na iska khayal rakhne ke liye...

Ram: Teek hai...appointment le liya hai na?...I don't want you to face any trouble or inconvenience anywhere

Priya: Haan Ram...le liya...aap chinta mat kijiye...

Ram: I feel guilty not able to come with you to the doctor Priya...mujhe maaf kar do...

Priya lovingly caresses Ram's hair and kisses his forehead...

Priya: Arey isme guilty feel karne ki kya baat ho gayi?...aap ko zaroori kaam hai, isliye aap aa nahi paa rahe hai...its ok...mujhe pata hai ki aap hamare Rohan ko kitna pyaar karte hain aur uske liye kitna care karte hain...

Ram: Thanks for being so understanding...tumhare support ke bina zindagi struggle ban jaati meri...

Priya: Arey aap phir se shuru ho gaye?...jaake taiyaar ho jaayiye main Bansi Kaka ko hamare kamre mein nashta laane ke liye kehti hoon...

Ram gets ready, has his breakfast and prepares to leave...Priya stops him

Priya: Ek min rukiye...

Ram: Kya baat hai?...

Priya: Aap kuch bhool rahe hain...hamare bacche ko goodbye nahi bola aap ne...

Ram: Oh sorry, I should not have forgot him...

Priya ( smiling -pointing to the baby ): Sorry mujhe nahi, isko boliye...

Ram goes to the baby and kisses its forehead...the baby gets excited on receiving the kiss and laughs with a chuckling sound...

Ram( to the baby ): Sorry Rohan ji... mujhe aap ko bhulna nahi chahiye tha...papa office jaake aata hoon, aap maa ke saath ek acche bacche ki tarah doctor ke paas jaayenge - Ok ..raat ko bahut masti karenge aur maa ko bahut satayenge...

Priya ( smiling ): Ab aap chaliye...aap ko dher ho rahi hogi

Ram leaves for office bidding goodbye to Priya...

Priya feeds the baby

Priya ( to the baby ): Chaliye aapko pehle dadi ke paas chod aati hoon...aap unke saath kheliye aur main ready ho jaati hoon...

Priya leaves Rohan with dadi, gets ready and goes downstairs

Dadi: Priya puttar, kuch khaya kya tumne ?

Priya: Nahi dadi, maine bacche ko doodh pilaya aur mujhe usse doctor ke paas le jaana hai...mujhe dher ho rahi hai...main wahan se aake kuch kha lungi...aap mere chinta mat kijiye...

Dadi: Teek hai puttar...tumhe jo karna hai karo...lekin tum bhuke mat rehna...

Priya: Ji dadi

Priya takes the baby  to the doctor and gets him checked...all is fine with him, but the doctor prescribes some medicines as the baby is too much prone to cold and informs about the various vaccins that the baby had to take at various ages...Priya listens attentively to all the facts and after that both of them reach home

It becomes a little late in the  night, Priya is reading a book sitting on the bed  and the baby is playing by her side...Ram reaches home and enters their room in a very happy, upbeat mood...

Priya ( surprisingly ) : Ram kya hua? aap itna khush...?

Ram: Baat hi kuch aisi hai Priya...my meeting has been successful...

Priya hugs him tightly and showers him with kisses...

Ram: Arey Priya, aaj tum bhi itna khush?...baat kya hai?

Priya: My visit to the doctor's place was successful...though maine aap se kaha ki regular check up hai - I was doubtful ki  hamare bacche ko kuch hai...kyonki he was prone to cold...lekin doctor ne mere saare doubts clear  kar di...kuch medicines di hai aur vaccines ke baare mein kuch information bhi...

Ram: Thank God Priya...I am so happy for all the three of us...

Priya: Aap change karke aayiye...main aap ke liye dinner laga deti hoon...tab tak aap Rohan ke saath kheliye

Ram: Teek hai...

Ram has his dinner and both of them get ready to sleep...in their happiness, they forget about Rohan...they get so close to each other...Rohan starts crying..

Ram: Arey yeh Rohan ko kya hua?

Priya: Thodi dher pehle hi isko feed kiya maine...lagta hai pareshaani ki wajah kuch aur hi hai

Priya takes Rohan in her arms and kisses him. and tries to place him back in his cradle and the crying starts again...

Priya: Pareshaani ki wajah yeh hai ki Rohan bhi hamare saath bed mein sona chahta hai...

Ram ( Anxiously ): Arey...agar yeh beech mein soyega to phir?

Priya: To phir kya?

Ram's idea of making love with Priya gets spoiled and he curses himself for having forgot about Rohan...then Priya's words come to his mind that it is the duty of both of them to take care the needs of their child...

Ram : Kuch nahi...isse beech mein sula do... 

Priya: Teek hai...

Rohan sleeps between them...but something had been attracting him right from the beginning .he gets up and starts playing looking at that...Priya finds Rohan moving and then wakes up to find a very strange thing happening in front of her eyes - she finds that the reflection of their night lamp that appeared on the wall of their room was attracting her son and she was surprised to see him play at that... then she  wakes up Ram to show it...Ram gets amazed at this sight and he realizes that though his son was born in a rich family, how does he manage to get happiness from small things?...then the fact that Priya too inherited the quality came to his mind...that thought brought a smile to his face...




















Edited by TVserialfreak - 15 April 2012 at 7:06am

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Kishore Bhaiya nice post please continue soon.

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jakther

Kishore Bhaiya nice post please continue soon.
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I have finished writing it sister...it is complete, you can read it now...

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Arey Bhai, tum kahan ke sharmile ho? Itna achha itna sweet aur romantic thoughts likh sakte ho. Wow

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