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Ra Ya's baby - Part 20 on Page 63 (Page 26)

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SWEETETIKA

Love u bhaiya.
Kya update diya hai apne.
Too good... :-)
continue soon
 Thanks Etika baby...will surely continue it...Embarrassed

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 7:10am | IP Logged
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Awww..this is really really sweet KishoreDay Dreaming..i loved itClap Clap

thanx a lot Mona...EmbarrassedSmile

u r most welcomeHug..do continue soon..

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 7:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by monamie111

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Awww..this is really really sweet KishoreDay Dreaming..i loved itClap Clap

thanx a lot Mona...EmbarrassedSmile

u r most welcomeHug..do continue soon..

Will update in the weekend....WinkHug

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 8:57am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by -varun-

Hey bro thanks for the pm ! I think i missed all your parts except the first one that had i read..will do so soon..:) but can i request something..? In the introductory post, could you insert a small index mentioning the part numbers alongwith the page numbers? It will be easier for those and myself tooTongue who happen to read your FF first time as it will save time from screening thru all the pages. :) thanks. :)


I have added the index Varun...now you can read it easily...
awww...thanks bro...youve made it so easier now...Hug

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pinky.Raya

Priya ke laal ka naam kya hai ?

hahaha...priya k laal ka naam...pyarelaal rakh dete hain...hws thatWink

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
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Priya ke laal ka naam kya hai ?

hahaha...priya k laal ka naam...pyarelaal rakh dete hain...hws thatWink
Nice idea Veena didi...Big smileClap

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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Happy to present you part 10 of Ra Ya's baby story...thanks to all those who have motivated me, loved my writings in the earlier parts...I dedicate it to all of them...

Years pass by...Ram realizes the value of motherly love and often remembers his real mother Krishna Kapoor...this change gradually took over him as he himself saw how caring a mother would be seeing Priya's attachment to her kids...and he realizes that his mother had to leave his father due to the unfavorable situation and bad circumstance that prevailed at that time...after so much of thinking, he decides that it was time he accepted his real mother and make her stay with him permanently...but on the other hand, he was pained at the thought that his step family had misused him to ruin his life...he was not bothered about money or property...but it was his trust that they betrayed...he was sitting in the corner of his bed...tears welled up in his eyes thinking of all these things but he wipes them off seeing Priya at a distance...Priya enters the room and notices him...she had not seen him this silent or in deep thought before...slowly places her hand over his shoulder nearing him...

Priya: Kya hua?...

Ram: Kuch nahi...tum batao kya baat hai?

Priya: Aap mujhse kuch chupa rahe hai...hai na?

Ram: Main tumse koi baat kyun chupaunga Priya?

Priya: please...main do din se dekh rahi hoon ki aap bahut disturbed rehte ho...mujhse teek se baat bhi nahe karte ...bacchon ke saath bhi khush nahi rehte...

Ram: Aisi koi baat nahi hai Priya...

Priya: Kuch baat hai...please share kijiye na...aap mujhe apna dost maante hai na?

Ram: Main soch raha hoon ki maa ko Australia se wapas hamare ghar le aaoon...

Priya: Sach mein?

Ram: Haan Priya...main samajh chuka hoon ki maa nirdosh hai...aur iski wajah bhi tum ho...

Priya: Woh kaise?

Ram: Jo mamta jo tumne hamare  bacchon ko itne saalon mein diya hai...it really changed my mind and now I long to see my mother...saying thus, tears drop from his eyes...

Priya wipes his tears with her hands and kisses him on his forehead...

Priya: Aap chinta mat kijiye dear...mein aapke saath hoon maa ko wapas laane me,,,,

Just then, Rohan and Rashi enter the room and sit beside Ram and Priya on their bed...

Rashi: Kal hamare last exam hai school mein...uske baad do mahine holidays hai...hume is vacation pe kahi le jao na...

Rohan: Haan papa...Rashi teek keh rahi hai...we are bored of this place...hume change ki zarurat hai...

Ram and Priya think for a minute and an idea flashes through Ram's mind...

Ram: Teek hai...hum log is saal  vacation ke liye Australia jayenge...

Rohan and Rashi look at each other in disbelief...

Priya: Yeh aap ek doosre ko aisa kyun dekh rahe ho?

Rohan: Do din se papa ne humse baat tak nahi ki...I was feeling so bad about it aur aaj yeh surprise de rahe hain...isliye hum log ek doosre ko aisa dekh rahe the...

Rashi: Haan...Rohan bhaiya teek kehte hain...

Priya caresses Rashi's hair lovingly...

Priya: Aisi koi baat nahi hai beti...papa ko office ki tension thi do din se...isliye unhone aisa behave kiya tha...aap ki koi galati nahi thi usme...

Rohan: Thanks maa

Ram kisses Rohan's forehead...

Ram: Main tum dono se naraaz kaise ho sakta hoon?...tum dono meri jaan ho...

Priya: Hum trip zaroor jayenge...par ek shart hai...

Rohan and Rashi together : Kya hai?

Priya: Both of you will have to be well behaved until then...mujhe pata hai aap dono bahut acche bacche ho lekin kabhi kabhi shaitani nazar aa rahi hai...aap dono ne Bansi kaka ko pareshaan ki thi na...usi ki baat kar rahi hoon...

Rohan and Rashi smile mischievously at each other

Ram: Bansi kaka is ghar ke member hai bacchon...aur papa ke kareeb bhi hai...agar aap dono unhe pareshaan karenge to mujhe bahut dukh hoga...aur unhe BP ka problem bhi hai...tum dono ko unhe pareshaan nahi karna chahiye tha...

Rohan: Sorry papa...we were just making fun...agar aisi baat hai to aaj se hum dono unhe pareshaan nahi karenge...

Priya: That's like my good children...

Next day...

Ram consults a travel agent close to him  and books four tickets for Australia...its evening...returns home from office and goes straight upto his room calling Priya...

Ram: Priya,  Priya...tum kahan ho?

Priya who was in the washroom answers back...

Priya: Haan,...aa rahi hoon...

Priya sees a very happy Ram standing in front of her...

Priya: Kya baat hai?...bahut khush nazar aa rahe hain?

Ram: Successfully booked our trip to Australia...

Priya: Is khushi mein ek hug to banta hai na ji?

Ram comes close and hugs Priya...

Priya: Ab aap bilkul ek bacche ki tarah nazar aa rahe hain...in fact aap hi to mere pehle bacche hain...Rohan aur Rashi to baad mein...

Ram: Thanks

Priya releases herself from him...

Ram: Tum jaake apne aur bacchon ki packing karna shuru kar do...we will be leaving in 3 days time...

Priya: Teek hai...

Ram and Priya leave to Australia with their kids to bring back Krishna Kapoor and Apeksha home...












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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
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aawww what a sweet ending!
Ram gonna reunite with his mom, kids are gna have a proper dadi! Niharika out of the picture.. What a perfect ending!! Loved it!! 
you just made my night hahaha. ClapClapEmbarrassed


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