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Ra Ya's baby - Part 20 on Page 63 (Page 23)

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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 10:33am | IP Logged

first of all am sorry to give my comment and secondly this post is going great superb, awesome and well done...its simply fab, nice concept and thoughts...gud going, please continue with this

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supab.lovely,,,.keep posting more.

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thanks for such a lovely post bhai @ romantic post from u was unxpected sorry for late commentsClap

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Great job, do continue soon… :) 

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Happy to present you Part 9 of my story...hope u enjoy it...

Even after becoming Parents, Ram and Priya saw to it that they got some time to spare for each other and the love between them never decreased one bit...with kids, their life became complete...
One night...Ram is relaxing on his bed

Ram: Rashi...idhar aao na beta

Rashi: Kya hai papa?

Ram: Tumhe kuch dena hai...

Ram opens the gift box which contained lots of color markers, pencils and crayons...that he purchased for Rashi on his latest overseas trip

Rashi: Yeh kya hai papa?

Ram: Tumhe sketching mein bahut interest hai na...

Rashi: Haan papa...

Ram: Yeh sab tumhare liye hai beta...ab tum jab chaho apna mann chaha sketch bana sakti ho...

Rashi: Thank you so much Papa...

Rashi puts her arms around Ram's neck and kisses him on the cheeks...

Ram: Aaj se tum har hafte papa ke liye skteches it ok?

Rashi : Kyun nahi?...zaroor banaungi...

Rashi goes downstairs to show her gift to Rishabh...

Priya enters the room...

Priya: Kya baat hai...aaj bahut khush nazar aa rahe hain aap...

Ram: Main bahut khush hoon kyunki aaj meri Rashi bahut khush hai apni gift ko leke jo maine usse dhi thi...

Rohan enters...

Rohan: Papa aap ne Rashi ko kya gift di thi?

Ram: Ek gift box jisme bahut saare color markers, pencils aur crayons hai...Rashi ko sketching mein interest hai na...isliye...

Priya: Rohan ke liye kuch nahi laye kya?

Ram: Zaroor laya hoon...kyun nahi launga?...

Ram opens another bag with a box which contained a Sony PS4 console in it and hands it over to Rohan...

Ram: Yeh tumhare liye hai Rohan...tere acchi marks ke liye...lekin yaad rakhna ki yeh sirf ke entertainment hai...don't use it at the cost of your studies...

Rohan: Zaroor papa...main isse aisa hi use karunga...thanks a lot for this gift...

Rohan hugs Ram and leaves the room happy with his gift...

Priya was watching all this...

Priya: Mere liye kuch nahi hai kya?

Ram: Kyun nahi?...tere liye bhi kuch laya hoon...

Priya: Kya hai?

Ram opens a small box from his pocket  which contained a ring and puts it on Priya's fingers...

Priya ( smiling ): Kuch yaad aaya aapko?

Ram: Kya?

Priya: Hamare engagement ke din...jab maine aapki ungli pe ring fix karne ki koshish ki aur woh ring thoda tight tha aapke liye...I can never forget your expression at that time...

Ram ( smiles ): din ko kaise bhool sakta hoon...I really got nervous jab Neha ne hum dono ki photo ek saath  kheenche ne ke liye tumko mujhpe push kiya...and that is the first time you touched me...

Priya ( smiles ): Shaadi se pehle bahut baar hum dono ke beech taqraar hui thi lekin phir bhi I admired u a little because of your innocence and the way you feared me after marriage really stole my heart..  and even when u used to sweat on seeing me I used to think of wiping it but something stopped me from doing it...

Ram: Sach mein?

Priya: Haan...lekin yeh sab batane ka mauka hi nahi mila...aapke saath pyaar hone ke baad bhi yeh sab baatein mere dimag mein nahi aayi...yeh ring ki wajah se yeh sab baatein bahar aa rahi hai...

Ram: Maine tumko aur bacchon ko gift di thi...ab mujhe bhi kuch chahiye tumse...

Priya: Kya?

Ram: Tum Jaanti ho ki main tumse kya expect karta hoon...

Priya: Teek hai...lekin pehle bacchon ko sone dete hain...phir yeh sab hoga...

After a little while, the kids fall asleep...Priya who was sleeping beside Ram comes close to him, pulls their blanket over their faces, holds Ram's face close to her's and kisses him all over and Ram returns each one of them and kisses her hands too...Priya's chain gets entangled with Ram's kurta button...she slowly removes it from there and pulls Ram's cheeks lovingly...then both of them go off to sleep...

In this way, another beautiful night of their's passes peacefully...

Edited by TVserialfreak - 25 April 2012 at 8:00pm

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i want next update soon... thanks 4 the pm !!!

Edited by salsaly - 25 April 2012 at 8:19pm

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