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Ra Ya's baby - Part 20 on Page 63 (Page 20)

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Thanks to all who have loved my story and motivated me - I shall surely update my next part soon...

Edited by TVserialfreak - 21 April 2012 at 9:51am

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 10:51am | IP Logged
superb update bhai  luved it waiting 4 next 
continue soonClap

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very sorry Bhai just saw it...stuck with my exams...





pls continue asap...


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Thanks a lot Kaviya for liking my story...Big smile

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Arre wah Kishore. KM mein to bachhon ki line lagadi aap ne. Aur wo bhi itni jaldi? Aage ki story mein LEAP mat le lena.. hahah

Good scene Bro. I want to see more dialogues between Ram n Priya though. (request)

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by IndYa4u

Arre wah Kishore. KM mein to bachhon ki line lagadi aap ne. Aur wo bhi itni jaldi? Aage ki story mein LEAP mat le lena.. hahah

Good scene Bro. I want to see more dialogues between Ram n Priya though. (request)

I always respect ur views didi...I wrote this part in a bit of a hurry...u shall surely get to see more romance between Ram and Priya in the coming parts...don't request didi...Its my pleasure to write for all of u...

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Happy to present you Part 8 on Ra Ya's baby story...hope all of you will enjoy it...

 Years passed by, Ram and Priya live happily with their kids...Rohan loved his sister a lot and was very protective towards her like Ram was towards Natasha...Rohan was 10 and Rashi was 6 years old...one day in their room...

Ram: Priya bacche kahan hai?

Priya: Rohan ko maine Rishabh ke saath bahar bheja hai

Ram: Kyun?..

Priya: Rishabh ko bahar jaane ke liye  taiyaar hote hue dekh liya Rohan ne aur uske saath chalne ki zid laga rakha tha...

Ram: Teek hai...aur Rashi kahan hai?

Priya: Maine usse Mummy Papa ke paas choda hai...woh dono Rashi ke saath waqt bitana chahte the...isliye...

Ram: To sirf hum aur tum hai yahan pe?

Priya: Haan...

Ram naughtily nears her and holds her hands...

Priya: Yeh kya kar rahe hain aap?...chodiye na...

Ram: Bahut din ke baat aisa mauka mila hai...usse haath se kaise jaane doon?

Priya: Matlab?...

Ram: Baaton mein rakha kya hai Priya?...

Priya: Aap aisa nahi kar sakte...main jaa rahi hoon...mujhe kuch kaam hai

Ram: Tum kahin nahi jaogi...main bahut dino se intezaar kartha tha aisa mauka ke liye...

Priya(smiling): Bhool gaye ki aap do bacchon ke baap hai?

Ram: Tum bhi to do bacchon ki maa ho...lekin tumhe dekh ke aisa nahi lagta...meri nazron tum waise hi lagti ho jaise shaadi ke din lagi thi...wahi khoobsurti hai tujh me...ek pratishat bhi kam nahi hui hai woh...

Priya: Sach mein?

Ram: Tumse Jhoot bolke kya karunga Priya?

Saying this...both of them come close to each other...Priya takes Ram to a corner holding his hands...and closes the door as she realises someone was coming upstairs...
It was Rohan who was coming...but Rishabh stops him and asks him to accompany his room as he wanted him to help him keep some items in proper place in his room...

In their bedroom,

Ram: Tum mujhe room ke kone mein kyu le ja rahi ho?

Priya: Chup...aap kuch mat boliye...sirf yahan baithiye...

Ram: Yeh sab karne ki kya zarurat hai?

Priya: Lagta hai koi upar aa raha hai...agar yeh sab hamare bacche ya phir koi aur dekhenge to accha nahi rahega...

Ram sits in the corner...Priya covers his face with her Pallu so that no one is able to see what is happening from outside  and on the other side of the Pallu,   takes Ram's face with both hands,  holds it close to her's and kisses his lips...Ram too holds her by the shoulder and kisses her neck...both of them go into another world...Ram leans on Priya's chest and forgets himself...she softly caressess his hair and kisses it...her touch makes him forget about everything happening around...then Priya tightens her grip over Ram, opens his kurta button and kisses his chest...both of them let out the pent up passion inside them which was dormant for so many years...

Rohan knocks the door...Ram realizes it

Ram: Priya lagta hai koi darwaze pe hai...tum jaake dekho na...

Priya: Teek hai...

Priya opens the door to Rohan 

Ram: Itni jaldi kyun aa gaye Rohan?

Rohan: Kuch nahi Papa...chachu ka kaam khatam ho gaya aur mujhe bhi ghar aane ka mann kar raha tha isliye hum dono aa gaye...

Priya: Tum jaake fresh ho ja beta phir main tumhe chai pilati hoon...

Rohan goes to the washroom

Ram: Thanks Priya...it was an unforgettable moment for me...

Priya (smiling): Isme thanks beech mein kahan se aa gayi?...aap ko khush karna meri pehli farz hai...

Ram holds Priya's hands and kisses it...

Priya frees herself from Ram and goes to attend to Rohan...

Priya: Rohan jaldi se apna homework khatam kar lena beta...phir hum log Rashi ko lene nana nani ke ghar jayenge 

Rohan: Teek hai maa...

 Then at night, Ram, Priya and Rohan drive to Sharma house to pick up Rashi...










Edited by TVserialfreak - 22 April 2012 at 12:39am

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this is really an awesome FF... thanks 4 changing the name... Big smile... i really love it... bhai , aapke dimaag me bhi kaise kaise ideas aate hai.Embarrassed.. ideas r superb... Clap


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