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VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 (Page 84)

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 11:30am | IP Logged
when r u gng to update

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Originally posted by imsid

when r u gng to update
Sorry 4 da delay..m updating nw...hope u lyk it..Smile
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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
Hello guyz...m bck, sorry 4 da delay...hope u'll lykd dis update as well...Thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks...really appreciate it, I actually thought It wasn't dat gud, but thnks a lot 4 lyking it...Juz wanna let u knw dat m not goin 2 add ne bald track,,I dn't think I can portray it da way dey did in da actual show, so sorry bout dat...nw here we go, EnJoY...Sorry 4 da delay...

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 21...

~Recap~


Everyone looked up in shock as they heard a voice..it was low, but very clear.

Maanvi: Vi..Vir..aat...

A shocked Viraat, pulled Maanvi away from his embrace, and looked at her face. Her eyes were slightly open, and her lips had a little smile.


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Viraat: (shocked/surprised/with teary eyes) Maanvi...

Jeevika: (walking towards her, with teary eyes, yet smiling) Mannu...

Everyone was just to shock to say anything. Jeevika hugged Maanvi as Viraat moved away, he was just looking at Maanvi, surprisingly.

Jeevika: (pulls away from the hug) Mannu? Tu thik hai na? (hand on her cheek) Tujhe pata hai main kitna dar gayi thi..

Maanvi was still looking weak, her condition was still not stable.

Dr. Bakshi: (walking towards JeeMan) Dekhiye aap sab bahar jaaiye, hume inhe operate karne dijiye.

Jeevika: (looking at him, worriedly) Par Dr. meri Mannu...

Dr. Bakshi: (smiles)Don't worry, Maanvi ko kuch nahi hoga. Please aap bahar jaiye. (turns towards the nurse) Sister...

Nurse: (to the Vadhera's) Please aap sab bahar jaiye, paticent ko treat karna hai, please.

Viren took Jeevika with him, while Vanshika Maa and Kadambari Chachi followed. Viraat was still standing there, looking at Maanvi, who looked back at him with a weak smile.

Nurse: (looking at Viraat) Aap please bahar jaiye.

Viraat looked at the nurse and nodded positively. He looked at Maanvi one last time and went out of the room.

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It has been more than an hour, Doctors were still busy operating Maanvi. Jeevika was sitting on the chair, with Kadambari Chachi and Vanshika Maa. Viren was talking on the phone, while Viraat was just pacing back and forth. Viren came back where everyone was.

Viren: Maa, maine ghar par Dadaji se baat karli hai, sab bahut pareshan hai. Rishikesh se bhi sab aa rahe hai Chandigarh.

Vanshika Maa: Acha kiya Viren jo sabko bata diya.

Viren: Woh sab yahan aana chahte the par maine mana kar diya, itni raat ko woh yahan aa kar kya karte. Maine Dadaji se kaha hai ki woh kal sab ko le kar aa jaiye.

Kadambari Chachi: Thik kiya tune Viren, abhi sab aajate toh aur pareshan ho jaate woh.

Just then, Dr. Bakshi came out of the room, Viraat immediately ran towards him. Everyone else stood up and walked towards him.

Viraat: (worried) Dr. Maanvi thik toh hai na? Usse kuch hua toh nahi hai na?

Dr. Bakshi: Mr. Vadhera, abhi ke liye woh thik hai, par kab kuch ho jaye koi nahi keh sakhta.

Jeevika: (teary eyes) Kya? Par apne kaha tha ki meri Mannu ko kuch nahi hoga.

Dr. Bakshi: Dekhiye Mrs. Vadhera, Maanvi ko cancer hai, iss bemari mein usse kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakhta hai.

Viren: Iska koi ilaaj toh hoga na Dr. Kya Maanvi thik nahi ho sakhti?

Dr. Bakshi: Thik ho sakhti hai, agar hum unka bone marrow transplant kare toh.

Viraat: Toh kijiye na, (hands folded) please kuch bhi kar ke usse bacha lijiye.

Dr. Bakshi: Uske liye hume Maanvi ke liye ek bone marrow donor dhundhna hoga.

Viraat: Dhundh ne ki kya zarurat hai? Main usse apna bone marrow dene ke liye taiyaar hun.
Dr. Bakshi: Uske liye hume kuch blood test karne honge jisse pata chalega ki aapka bone marrow Maanvi ke bone marrow se match hota hai ya nahi. So I would suggest app sab apna test karwa lijiye, warna hume bahar kisi donor ko dhundhna hoga.

Jeevika: Thik hai Dr.

Dr. Bakshi: Maine ek cancer specialist se baat ki hai, Dr. Rahul Mehra, woh do hi din pehle aaye hai US se, maine unse Maanvi ki baat ki hai aur woh kisi bhi waqt aa jaiyein ge. So it'll be better agar aap sab apna blood test aaj hi karwa le, agar kisi aur ko bhi jante ho toh unhe bhi bata de.
Viren: Ok Dr.

Dr. Bakshi: Ok, now excuse me. (left)

Vanshika Maa: Viren, tum baki sab ko phone kardo, aur jaldi se yahan bula lo, tab tak hum sab apna test kar lete hain.

Viren: Thik hai Maa.

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~3 Hours Later...12.30am~


Vadhera's and Chaudhary's were standing or sitting outside of Maanvi's room, after giving their blood test. They were waiting for the result as the nurse said that it will be ready in an hour. Dr. Bakshi was coming towards them with some other person beside him. Everyone got up and walked towards them.

Dr. Bakshi: Mr. Vadhera, yeh hai Dr. Rahul Mehra, jo abhi Maanvi ko treat kareinge. Aur Dr. Rahul yeh hai Maanvi ke family members.

Viraat: (hand extended in front of him) Nice to meet you Dr. Mehra.

Dr. Mehra: (shaking his hand) Same here. Aap sab mere saath mere cabin mein aa jaiye, aap sabke result aa gaye hain.

Dadaji: Ji.

Everyone followed Dr. Mehra towards his cabin, with Dr. Bakshi. They all sat down, except for Viraat, Jeevika, Viren, Dabbu, and Shlok.

Dr. Mehra: Ok so, maine aap sabki reports pehle hi dekh li hai, aur aap mein se koi bhi Maanvi ke liye perfect match nahi ho...


Everyone disheartedly looked around at each other.

Dr. Mehra: Sivaye (looking at Jeevika) aapke Mrs. Vadhera.

Jeevika smiled with tears, while everyone looked at each other smilingly.

Dr. Mehra: Par aap Maanvi ko apna bone marrow nahi de sakhti hain.

Their smile vanished away from their faces.

Viren: Kyun Dr.?

Dr. Mehra: Kyun ki Mrs. Vadhera pregnant hai, agar usne Maanvi ko apna bone marrow donate ki toh uska asar uske bacche par padh sakhta hai. Aur agar aap chahti hai ki aap apna bone marrow Maanvi ko de, toh uske liye aap ko abortion karna hoga.

Everyone looked at Dr. Mehra with shock expression, where as Jeevika stood there, without moving an inch.

Dr. Mehra: Par aapko aisa nahi karna hoga...

Everyone looked at Dr. Mehra confusedly.

Viraat: (confused) matlab?

Dr. Mehra: (smiles) Kyun ki humne ek matching donor dhundh liya hai. Humne uske saare test bhi kar liye hai, aur woh Maanvi ke liye ek perfect match hai.

They smiled at each other yet again and hugged.

Viraat: Kaun hai woh Dr.?

Dr. Mehra: Uska naam Rajat Ajmera hai, woh Dehli se yahan aa gaya hai. Hum usse pura din observation mein rakhein ge, aur fir kal raat ko uska bone marrow hum Maanvi ke body mein transplant kar deinge, uske saath hume Maanvi ka chemo bhi karna hoga.

Viren: Thik hai Dr. Lekin kya hum Rajat se mil sakhte hai?

Dr. Bakshi: Aap sab usse transplant ke baad hi mil sakhte hai, hume usse under observation rakhna hai, aur woh hum jitna jaldi kare toh acha hoga.

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(Sorry guyz, m juz cutting parts/rushing her cancer track, as I dn't knw much about dis transplant thing)


Doctors were inside the room, transplanting Rajat's bone marrow in Maanvi's body, while everyone else were sitting out of the OT, or pacing back and forth worriedly. Finally Doctors came out, in their green gown and mask, covering their nose and mouth. Everyone hurriedly went towards them.

Dadaji: Kya hua Dr. Maanvi thik toh hai na?

Dr. Bakshi: (disappointedly) Humne puri koshish ki hai apni taraf se...

Everyone was just looking at Dr. Bakshi and dr. Mehra worriedly and impaticently.

Dr. Mehra: (smiles) Aur humari koshish rang laayi. Operation successful raha.

Everyone just hugged each other happily.

Viraat: (smiles with tears) Thank you so much Dr.

Dr. Bakshi: Don't thank us Mr. Vadhera. Aapke pyaar mein itni taqat hai ki usne aapki Biwi ko maut ke muh se bhi wapas le aayi. Maanvi is very lucky.

Dr. Mehra: Exactly, yeh sab aapki duaon aur pyaar ka asar hai.

Jeevika: Thank You Dr. Kya hum Maanvi se mil sakhte hai?

Dr. Mehra: Haan zarur, hum bas usse room mein shift kar deinge.

Viren: (smiles) Thank You Dr.

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Everyone entered the room, where Maanvi was, lying on the bed, wide awake. She got up as she saw everyone walking towards her, except Viraat. Jeevika sat beside Maanvi with tear filled eyes.

Maanvi: (teary eyes/smiles) Di...

Jeevika: (pulls her in a tight hug/crying) Mannu...

Maanvi: Di ab aap kyun ro rahi ho? Main toh thik ho gayi hun na?

Jeevika: (pulls apart) Kyun ki main tab ro nahi paayi jab tu apni zindagi ke liye ladh rahi thi. Tab ro nahi paayi jab tu har din har raat ro rahi thi.

Maanvi: I'm sorry Di..

Jeevika: Kyun Mannu? Kyun? Kyun nahi bataya mujhe? Ghar mein sabko pata tha sivaye mere, kya main itni parayi ho gayi hun tere liye ki tune itna bada sach mujhse chupaya? Kyun Mannu?

Maanvi: (crying) Di, please mujhe maaf kar do..main aapko taklif mein nahi dekh sakhti thi...

Jeevika: Tu janti hai Mannu, mujhe tab itni taklif nahi hoti, jitni taklif mujhe aaj ho rahi hai, agar tu mujhe pehle bata deti..
Maanvi: Main janti hun Di maine aapko bahut hurt kiya hai, par main aur kya karti...main aapka...main Chutku ki zindagi dav par nahi laga sakhti thi Di.

Jeevika: (hands on her cheeks) Mere liye tujhse badhkar is duniya mein aur koi nahi hai Mannu...aur koi nahi.

Maanvi: (hugs her) Di...I'm sorry...main promise karti hun aaj ke baad main aapse kuch nahi chupaungi.

Jeevika hugged her back tightly, while crying. Beeji walked towards JeeMan and placed her hand on Maanvi's head.

Beeji: Maanvi..

Jeevika and Maanvi broke the hug and looked up at Beeji. Jeevika moved away, letting Beeji sit beside Maanvi.

Maanvi: Beeji (hugs her) Beeji, main thik ho gayi..main thik ho gayi Beeji.

Beeji: (hugs her back/smiling with teary eyes) Haan mere bacche, tu bilkul thik ho gayi.

Everyone, one by one met Maanvi and left the room, giving the newly wedded couple some privacy. Viraat was still standing beside the door, unable to move or look up at Maanvi. On the other hand, Maanvi was looking down, waiting for him to say something. She was actually feeling nervous in front of him. Viraat looked up at Maanvi once and walked out of the room, leaving Maanvi shocked and confused.

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Dr. Mehra: Rajat inse milo, yeh hai Maanvi ke husband and uske family members. Aur Viraat, inse milo yeh hai Rajat, Maanvi ka donor.

Dr. Mehra was introducing Rajat Ajmera, Maanvi's donor, to everyone.

Rajat: (smiles/hand extendend) Hi.

Viraat: (shaking his hand with his) Hi..Thank you so much Rajat, aapne meri zindagi ko bachaya.

Rajat: (smiles) Don't be Viraat, shayad bhagwaan ne mujhe tumhari zindagi ko bachane ke liye hi neeche bheja tha.

Jeevika: Haan Rajat ji, Bhagwaan ne sach mein aapko yahan ek farishte ke roop mein bheja tha, meri Mannu ko bachane ke liye. Hum aapko jitna bhi shukriya kahe kam hoga.

Rajat: Dekhiye, aapko mujhe thanks kehne ki koi zarurat nahi hai, main hamesha se chahta tha ki main kabhi kisi ke liye donor banun. (saddly) Meri Maa mujhse dur chali gayi thi kyun ki use cancer tha, aur main unke liye matching donor nahi dhundh paya. (smiles) Par aaj mujhe bahut khushi ho rahi hai, aaj main kisi ke kaam aa saka.
Beeji: (hand on Rajat's head) Jeete raho Beta, Bhagwaan tumhari har iccha puri kare.

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~3 Days Later~


Maanvi was back at home, with her family, fit-n-fine. Everyone was happy to see Maanvi healthy again, but Viraat and Maanvi haven't spoken a word after her operation. He took care of her without saying a word to her. Maanvi was confused with his behavior towards her, she tried talking to him in past three days, but he always walks away from her. She thought that he's still mad at her because of the party incident and whatever happened after that. It was 10:30 pm, she was sitting on the bed, lost in her thoughts as Viraat came in their bedroom. He looked at Maanvi for a second and then looked away. Maanvi looked at him confusedly and saw him walking towards the bed. Viraat grabbed his pillow and a blacket and turned around to walk away, towards the couch.

Maanvi: Viraat...

Viraat smiled  a little after hearing his name from her mouth after four days.

Viraat: (without turning around) Kuch chahiye tumhe?

Maanvi's heart skipped a beat as she heard his voice, after so many days.

Maanvi: Woh...tum..

Viraat turned around to face her, he looked at her questioningly.

Maanvi: Woh..tumhe ab sofe par...(unable to meet his gaze) I mean tum ab yahan bed par so sakhte ho.

Viraat: Uski zarurat nahi hai, main sofe par thik hun.

Maanvi: (looking at him) Viraat main keh rahi hun na bed par so jao. Maine pehle tumhe sofe par sone ko kaha tha kyunki main tumse naraz thi, ab main tumse naraz nahi hun. Tum bed par so jao.

Viraat: Toh kya tum bathroom mein so gi?

Maanvi: (confused) Bathroom? Kyun?

Viraat: Jab main bed par sounga toh tum kahan jaogi?

Maanvi: Main...main...kahin nahi. Hum dono ek hi bed par...I mean, itna bada bed hai, (looking everywhere but him)  hum dono araam se fit ho jaiyein ge.

Viraat: Maanvi tum so jao, main sofe par thik hun.

Viraat turned around, he was happy that Maanvi started accepting their relationship, their marriage, but still he was mad at her.

Maanvi: Viraat main keh rahi hun na, tum aa kar yahan bed par so jao, main tumhe kha nahi jaungi, chup chap aa kar yahan so jao.

Viraat turned around with straight face and walked to the other side of the bed. He placed his pillow down, sat on the bed, pulled the duvet over his body and laid down.

Viraat: Lo so gaya main, ab please light off kar do, mujhe sona hai.

Maanvi just kept on looking at him disbelievingly. She thought that he might come and talk to her, but no, her Kumbhkaran Pati Devi just slept beside her, without saying anything besides 'turn off the lights.'

Viraat: Maanvi light off kar do, mujhe light mein neend nahi aati.

Maanvi: Huh..haan..

She turned of the light and laid beside him. She looked at her Husband, who's back was facing her, disappointedly.

Maanvi: (to herself) Dur sone ke liye thodi na paas bulaya tha...akhir ho kya gaya hai isse, kahin woh party wali baat se toh naraaz nahi hai? Ab kaise bataun tumhe main Viraat, ki main tumse pyaar karne lagi hun. Nahi, pyaar karne nahi lagi hun, (blushingly) pyaar karti hun...be intehaan pyaar karti hun.


Ok dats it...sorry 4 stopping at a wrong place, will explain hw she realized her feelings in the next update..m sorry if u found dis update a total non-sense, I juz wanted 2 cure her asap, so I cud end dis SS soon...dn't knw much bout dis transplant thingy...4give me 4 ne mistakes I made..plz leave ur comments, gud or bad, wateva I need em..thnks...tc..Luv Aartii...Smile



Edited by Artii159 - 06 March 2013 at 12:29am

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by imsid

when r u gng to update
<font color="#00CCC"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Sorry 4 da delay..m updating nw...hope u lyk it..Smile
</font></font>

u mean now??
Wow
great news.. Bt i want kuch is tarah ka update also plz
i love it so much dat i read it again and again whenvr i get tym

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Originally posted by imsid

Originally posted by Artii159

Originally posted by imsid

when r u gng to update
<font color="#00CCC"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Sorry 4 da delay..m updating nw...hope u lyk it..Smile
</font></font>

u mean now??
Wow
great news.. Bt i want kuch is tarah ka update also plz
i love it so much dat i read it again and again whenvr i get tym
  I always update em 2gether sweety..n thnks a lot 4 lyking my FF..SmileWink

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
read ur update
it was awsum..
Thanx fr wrapping translan part in 1 update evn i dnt lyk it to b dragged
loved d ending
finaly manvi realised
hope they cofess soon yar
love u arti... Muaaah
ab jaldi jaldi mera favourite update kro

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by imsid

read ur update
it was awsum..
Thanx fr wrapping translan part in 1 update evn i dnt lyk it to b dragged
loved d ending
finaly manvi realised
hope they cofess soon yar
love u arti... Muaaah
ab jaldi jaldi mera favourite update kro
Thnk u so much...dey'll confess soon..n m updating Kush Iss Tarah in 10 min..Smile
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aww loved da update, finally manvi's cancer is cured, hope virman sort out der differences soon Smile

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