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VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 (Page 50)

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Krazzy4u786

Superb update!!
Loved it!!
Virat is really sweet!!
Hope manvi realises her feelings 4 virat soon!!
Waiting 4 the next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
  Thnk u so much, Maanvi will definitely realize her feelings soon...ur most wc, n will b updating soon,,thnks once again..Smile

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 1:21am | IP Logged
hey u r updating 2dy??

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by LuvVirManNiShal

-totally fidaa over this update i mean it was so touching and very beautifully written and portrayed each emotion and feeling of virman fantastically especially when virat helped manvi get outta her lehenga and manvi's uncontrollable heartbeats and virat's yearn and love for her was jus superbb totally virmanillicious with nok jhok and romance and love the ending with manvi's curiosity hope she gets her answer soon and virat completes his half spoken line hint hint# no words jus terrific
update soon and pm me please
thank yu so so much<'3
  Aww Thnk u..glad u lykd it..she will definitely..thnks once again n ur most wc..will continue soon n pm u..Smile

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 1:22am | IP Logged
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amazing update...hope manvi realize her love soon. .
  Thnk u..she will soon realize...Smile
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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sreshta90

hey u r updating 2dy??
  Hey sreshta, sorry i didn't c ur comment yesterday...m updating 2day..Smile
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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
aarti amazing wrting fab story jst love it ...am ur fan nw :-)

pls update soon nd do pm me pls :-)

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
Hello lovely people...m back...n wow 50 pgs already,,thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks guyz...I really hope u lyk dis update as well...NjOy..Smile

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 16...


~Recap~


Maanvi: Thank You Viraat, meri zindagi mein aane ke liye.


She didn't know why she said that, she just felt like saying that to him. She got up, walked towards the bed, looked at Viraat one last time and smiled. She pulled the duvet over her body and lied down, waiting for the sleep to engulf her.


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~VirIka's Room~


Viren was sitting on the bed, with some files in his hands, while Jeevika was standing in front of the mirror, getting ready.

Jeevika: (placing her dupatta around her neck) Viren ji, yeh fileon ke saath kya kar rahe hain aap? Aaj toh aapko office bhi nahi jaana hai.

Viren: (gaze fixed on the files) Nahi, woh main bas kuch check kar raha tha.

Jeevika: Yeh sab chodhiye aur jaa kar naaha lijiye, hume neeche puja ke liye jaana hai.

Viren:  Haan, bas yeh padhlun, fir main jaata hun.

Jeevika walked towards Viren and snatched the file away.

Jeevika: Bilkul nahi, (pulling him, by his hand) uthiye, chaliye jaiye. Main abhi jaa kar Maanvi ko uthati hun, woh abhi bhi so rahi hogi. Aur jab main wapas aaun, toh aap mujhe taiyaar dikhne chahiye, (pushing him towards the bathroom) chaliye jaaiye.
Viren: (turns towards her) Haan, jaa raha hun baba, apne towel toh le lun.

Viren walked towards the bathroom after grabbing his towel, while Jeevika looked at herself once more in the mirror and walked out of the room towards VirMan's room. She reached at the door of their room and knocked once. Inside the room, Maanvi, on the bed, and Viraat on the sofa, sleeping peacefully. Maanvi opened her eyes when she heard someone knocking on the door.

Maanvi: (looking at the clock with half opened eyes) Abhi toh sirf che(6) baje hain, itni subha koi uthta hai kya?

Maanvi, ignoring the person who was knocking, covered her head with a pillow and closed her eyes.

Jeevika: (from the other side of the door/knocking) Mannu...

Maanvi: (sat up on the bed) Di?
Jeevika: Mannu, uth jaa, aarti karni hai.

Maanvi: (hands on her head) Hey Bhagwaan, kahan phas gayi main.

Maanvi got off the bed and starts walking towards the door, when her gaze went towards Viraat. His body was way too bigger for the couch, she actually felt bad seeing him sleeping like that, right leg and hand falling out of the sofa, on the floor.

Jeevika: (knocking the door) Mannu?

Maanvi: (shouts) Haan,,,haan Di, aayi.

Maanvi went towards the door and was about to open it, when she turned around, towards Viraat. She hurriedly went towards him.

Maanvi: (shaking him by his shoulder/whisperes) Viraat?

Viraat: (sleepy tone) Sone do na.

Maanvi: Viraat utho, Di bahar hi hai.

Viraat: (cuddling his blanket) Thodi der sone do.

Maanvi: Uff...Kumbhkarna ki aulaad (hits on his arm) utha jaa.

Viraat: (sat up on the sofa) Kya hai? Subhaye subhaye maar kyun rahi ho?

Maanvi: Di bahar hai.

Viraat: Toh main kya karun, (rubbing his eyes) tum jaa kar dawaza khol do.

Maanvi: (sarcastically) Arey haan, main bhi kitni pagal hun, mujhe jaa kar darwaza khol dena chahiye, (shouting at him, but not too loud) taki Di andar aaye aur tumhe yahan sote huye dekh le. (hits on his head) Buddhu, agar main darwaza khol dungi, aur Di andar aa kar tumhe yahan sote huye dekhegi toh unhe shak nahi hoga kya?
Viraat: (rubbing his head) Arey Haan, main toh bhul hi gaya tha.

Maanvi: Ab yaad aa gaya na, chalo, bed par jao.
Viraat: (smiles mischeviously) Tum bhi aaogi kya?
Maanvi: Chep, mazak ka waqt nahi hai. Chalo jao.

Jeevika: (knocking the door) Mannu, darwaza khol na, kya kar rahi hai?

Maanvi pulled Viraat off of the sofa and pushed him towards the bed. She turned back towards the couch, picked up the blanket and the pillow and placed it on the bed, beside Viraat. He smiled looking at his Wife's worried face, after comfortably lying on the bed, hugging a pillow close to him. Maanvi looked around the room one last time and walked towards the door to open it.

Jeevika: Mannu...Kya kar rahi thi itni der se.

Maanvi: (thinking of an excuse) Woh, Di, main...woh...

Jeevika: (smiles/teasingly) Oh,,,koi baat nahi Devrani ji, main samjh gayi. (looking at Viraat, over Maanvi's shoulder) Waise Devar ji abhi bhi so rahe hai kya?

Maanvi: Nahi Di woh...
Viraat: (got off the bed, and walked towards JeeMan) Good Morning Bhabhi.

Jeevika: (teasingly) Arey wah Devar ji, aap toh jaag rahe hai, woh bhi itni jaldi, kya baat hai. Itni jaldi Devrani ji ka asaar shuru ho gaya huh.
Viraat: (blushingly) Um, nahi Bhabhi woh..
Jeevika: Koi baat nahi Devarji, aapki Bhabhi sab samjh sakhti hai. (looking at Maanvi) Aur Devraniji, aap taiyaar ho jaiye aarti ke liye. (looking at them both) Main aap dono ka neech intezaar kar rahi hun.
Viraat: (smiles) Ok Bhabhi.
Jeevika: Aur haan Mannu, saree pehna, tujhe aaj pak pheron ke liye Rishkesh bhi jaana hai.

Maanvi: (smiles) Ok Di.
Jeevika: Chalo, main chalti hun, jaldi aana tum dono.

Jeevika walked away, leaving VirMan alone in the room. Viraat walked towards the bed and jumped on it, going back to sleep.

Maanvi: (hands on her hips) Viraat, tum kya kar rahe ho?

Viraat: Pehle tum nahane jaogi, toh main thodi der so leta hun.

Maanvi: (sarcastically) Haan haan so jao.

Maanvi went towards the bathroom with her towel and clothes, leaving Viraat, who was hugging a pillow back to sleep.

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~Kitchen~


Vanshika Maa: Jeevika, Maanvi uth gayi Beta?

Jeevika: Haan Maa, woh bas thodi der mein neeche aa jayegi.

Vanshika Maa: Aur Viraat?
Jeevika: (smiling) Haan Maa, woh toh bahut fresh lag raha tha aaj.

Vanshika Maa: (happily/smiles) Wah mera Beta badal gaya.

Both laughed.

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~VirIka's Room~


Jeevika walked inside her room and saw Viren, sitting on the bed, again engrossed in files.

Jeevika: (hands on her hips/giving him a unbelievable look) Viren ji, aap taiyaar ho gaye?

Viren: (looking up at her/smiles) Haan Jeevika, main taiyaar hun.

Jeevika: (hands acrossed her chest) Aap aur taiyaar? Aap ke baal toh waise hi hai.

Viren: (touching his hair) Haan woh, bas baal hi toh banane hai, do mintue mein ho jayega.

Jeevika: Uff..aap ka kya hoga Viren ji.

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~VirMan's Room~


Viraat who came out of the bathroom, after taking his shower, saw his Wife struggling with her saree. Her saree was looking like a mess, half was around her shoulder and she was holding the other half. He walked towards the mirror and started making his hair, still looking at Maanvi with a confused look.

Viraat: (to himself) Yeh kar kya rahi hai? (to Maanvi) Maanvi, Tum itni der se kya kar rahi ho?

Maanvi: (cutely/sweetly/innocently/saddly) Viraat, mujhe saree pahenni nahi aati.

Viraat: (starts laughting) Tumhe saree paheni nahi aati? Tum Bhabhi ki bahen hi ho na?

Maanvi was just standing there with a sad face, which actually mealted Viraat and he stopped laughing. He walked towards her, while she was still looking down at her saree.

Viraat: (holding Maanvi's shoulder/sweetly) Toh yeh baat tum Bhabhi ko pehle nahi bata sakhti thi Bandariya?

Maanvi: (sweetly/saddly) Main tab bhul gayi thi, aur ab main kaise jaa kar Di ko bulaun.

Viraat: Main bulakar laun?
Maanvi: (smiles) Tum? Haan jao na, yahan kyun khade ho?

Viraat smiled at her amusedly and walked out of the room.

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Viraat entered the kitchen and saw no one there, besides Tarun.

Viraat: Tarun, Bhabhi ko kahin dekha hai kya tumne?

Tarun: Ji Viraat Bhaiya, woh Vanshikaji, Swamini Bua, aur Kadambariji ke saath Mandir gayi huyi hai.

Viraat: Oh ok, (smiles) thanks.


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Maanvi stood up from the bed when she saw Viraat entering the door.

Maanvi: Viraat? (looking behind him) Di kahan hai?

Viraat: Woh, Bhabhi Mandir gayi hui hai, Maa, Bua, aur Chachi ke saath.

Maanvi: (saddly) Kya? Ab mera kya hoga? Mujhe saree kaun pehnaye ga.

Viraat: Um..Chalo main tumhari madad karta hun.

Maanvi: (surprised, more than shocked) Tum? Tumhe saree paheni aati hai?

Viraat: Nahi, pahenani aati hai. (smiles)

Viraat took half part of the saree from her hands and tucked the plain part around Maanvi's waist, which made her loose her balance a little.

Viraat: Maanvi, apna haath mere shoulder par rakh lo, tab tum balanced rahogi, aur mujhe bhi aasani hogi.

Maanvi hesitated, but then she place her hands on his shoulder. Viraat smiled and continued tucking the saree around her waist. She was blushing and her heart was beating at the highest rate, she could feel his cold hands on her bare waist. Then Viraat moved back and starts making the pleats, Maanvi was just staring at him. When Viraat made the pleats, he puts one hand behind Maanvi's back and the other tucked in the pleats into her waist, sending shivers down her spine. Maanvi loved the closeness that was between her and Viraat, still unknown to her feelings, they both looked up into each other's eyes.

Viraat: (thinking) Kash meri har subha, aise hi shuru ho. Tumhe dekh kar, tumhe apne itne paas paa kar.

Maanvi: (thinking) Tumhe apne itne paas paa kar, mujhe itna acha kyun lag raha hai Viraat..?

Viraat was trying very hard to control himself, it was getting more difficult for him to control his feeling for her after their marriage. After a little while, Viraat distance himself from her and took the end of the saree from her shoulder, while she looked down, feeling embarrassed. He turned the end of the saree competely around her from right to left, then he pined the drape of her saree. Maanvi looked up at his eyes, and was lost in his eyes, she didn't want this to end, but unfortunatly it had to end.

Viraat: Ho gaya.

Maanvi: (back to her sense/frowns/whisperes) Ho gaya? Itni jaldi?

Viraat: (smiles) Haan, main tumhari tarah ghante nahi lagta taiyaar hone ya (winks) karne mein.

Maanvi: (looking everywhere but him) Thanks.

She walked towards the mirror and saw her saree, which was perfectly wrapped around her body.  She looked up in the mirror and saw Viraat standing behind her, smiling at her.

Maanvi's Saree: http://www.shrisarees.com/buttery-cream-net-saree-with-blouse-p-6212.html

Maanvi: Aise kyun dekh rahe ho? Agar tum taiyaar ho toh neeche chale, sab aa gaye honge, hume aarti bhi karni hai.

Viraat: Main toh taiyaar hun, tum?

Maanvi: Main bhi taiyaar hun, (turns towards him) chale?

Viraat: (looking at her from head to toe) Tum taiyaar ho? Mujhe toh nahi lagta.

Maanvi: Kyun? (turns towards the mirror) Main toh taiyaar hi lag rahi hun.

Viraat: (hands acrossed his chest) Tumhe nahi lagta ki tum kuch bhul rahi ho?

Maanvi: (looking at him through the mirror) Main? Nahi toh.

Viraat: (walking towards her) Tumhe pakka yakeen hai ki tum kuch nahi bhul rahi?

Maanvi: Nahi, (turns to walk out of the room) ab chalo.

Viraat held her wrist and pulled her back.

Viraat: MRS. MAANVI VIRAAT SINGH VADHERA (emphasising on her name), aap kuch nahi bhul rahi?

Maanvi immediately turned towards the mirror, her eyes went up to her forehead.

Maanvi: Uff, main kaise bhul gayi.

Maanvi grabbed her sindoor box and opened it. Viraat held her hand as she was about to take the sindoor between her fingers.

Viraat: (looking at her lovingly) Main laga dun?

Maanvi, without looking away, nodded her head positively. Viraat smiled and took the box away from her hand, she was still looking at his face admiringly. He took pinch of vermillion powder in between his fingers and raised his hand towards her forehead. They both looked at each others eyes for a while, living the moment. Viraat appiled the sindoor on her forehead as she closed her eyes. They both turned their face towards the door when they heard someone clearing their throat.

VirIka: Ahem Ahem...

Viren: (teasingly) Kya ho raha hai yahan?

Jeevika: (smirking) Viren ji, don't disturb na.

Viren: Oh haan, continue please.

Viraat: (blushingly) Bhai please.

Maanvi: (walking towards VirIka, along with Viraat) Um, DI, main kaisi lag rahi hun?

Jeevika: (smiling) Tu bahut hi pyaari lag rahi hai Mannu. Sorry main bhul gayi thi ki tujhe saree pehni nahi aati, aur main mandir chali gayi. Par tune yeh kaise pehna?
Maanvi: (stammers/blushingly) Woh, Di..woh..Vi..Viraat ne..

After hearing Viraat's name, Viren burst out laughing, while Viraat was embarrassed, Maanvi blushing and Jeevika controlling her laughter.

Viren: Tere andar yeh kala(talent) bhi chupa hai. Bada chupa rustam hai tu Viraat.

Jeevika: (controlling her laughter) Viren ji, aap na chaliye neeche. Mannu Viraat, tum dono bhi chalo, aarti karne ka samaye ho gaya hai.

All left towards the Puja room, Maanvi and Viraat did the aarti together, while others were standing behind them, looking at the newly wedded couple.

Vanshika Maa: Maanvi Beta, aaj tumhe Rishkesh jaana hai toh aaj hum tumse pehli rasoi(first cooking) nahi karwayein ge, par kal tumhe yeh rasam zarur nibhani hogi, ok Beta.
Maanvi: (smiles) Ji Maa.

Dadaji: Maanvi Beta, chalo hum sab nasta karte hai, uske baad Viren tumhe Rishikesh chodh aayega.

Viraat: (worriedly/confused) Chodh aayega matlab, Maanvi aaj wapas nahi aayegi?

Swamini Bua: Nahi Viraat, Maanvi ko shaam tak tumhe jaa kar laana hoga.
Viren: (smirks) Agar tumhe pick karne se problem hai Viraat toh Maanvi wahi ruk jayegi, sabke saath.
Viraat: Nahi Bhai, infact mujhe lagta hai ki main bhi Maanvi ke saath jaata hun, aur fir saath mein hum wapas bhi aa jaiyein ge.

Viren: (hand on Viraat's shoulder) Nahi nahi Viraat, rehne de, tujhe bhi bahut kaam hoga.

Viraat: (smile sarcastically at his Bhai) Mujhe koi kaam nahi hai Bhai,,,Dadaji please kya main Maanvi ke saath jaa sakhta hun?
Dadaji: (laughingly) Acha, theek hai chale jana, pehle nasta toh karlo.


Vadhera's had their breakfast with their new Choti Bahu, Maanvi Viraat Vadhera. After having their breakfast, VirMan left towards Rishkesh, for Maanvi's Pak Phere's rasam.



Dat's it 4 2day, I knw its not dat of an exciting update, but still m asking u 2 lyk n comment, plzzz...I will surely try 2 add more fun in da nxt update,,Till den, tc...Thnk u..Luv Aartii..

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