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VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 (Page 41)

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samu_khamkar

Awesome updt...virman shadi is over...i m sure manvi will win the anguthi rasam...waiting for there suhagraat...pls cont soon
  Thnk u so much..will c who won in da nxt update...Smile

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preetipc

Loved the update.Loved their cute conversations.Love their cute fights. They two are awesome.Love them.Thanks for the pmSmile

  Thnk u soo much...dey r truly awesome...n u r most wc...Smile

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 12:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aenna

Waooo reallyyy amazinggg update...
I just luvedd it
update asap
  Thnk u so much...Smile
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Hello guyz,,,m bck...thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments...n lyks...I hope u'll lyk dis update as well...EnJoY..

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 14...

~Recap~


Both dipped their hand into the bowl and started searching for the ring, while pushing each other once again. Everyone laughed at the scene before them. Finally the ring was found..


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Maanvi: (starts jumping/excitedly) Main jeet gayi, main jeet gayi, main jeet gayi..

Viraat smiled at Maanvi, who was jumping up and down like a little kid.

Jeevika: (laughing at her little Sis) Mannu, relax.

Maanvi stopped jumping, she looked around and found everyone laughing at her.

Viren: Aise kaise relax, hum jeet gaye hai, main bhi jump karunga. (jumping while clapping his hands) Hum jeet gaye, hum jeet gaye.

Viren stops jumping and hugs Maanvi sideways.

Maanvi: (to Viraat/proudly) Dekha hum jeet gaye.

Viraat: (smiles/looking at her lovingly/to himself) Agar mere harne se tumhare chahere pe khushi aati hai toh main hamesha harne ke liye taiyaar hun Maanvi.

Maanvi: Aise kya dekh rahe ho, kuch bolo bhi. Haar sahen nahi hoti kya?

Kadambari Chachi: Haye ni Maanvi, sahi kaha...waise pehli baar mere top hope kisi se haara hai.
Viren: (smirks) Chachi, woh toh kabse haar gaya hai aapko ab dekh raha hai.

Viraat blushed, running his fingers through his hair.

Shlok: (pouts) Kya Viraat Bhaiya, haara diya hume. Agar pehle bata dete toh main Maanvi Di ke team mein hota na.
Viraat: Shlok ke Bacche...pehli baat mere encyclopedia, khel mein haar jeet hoti rehti hai, aur mujhe kya pata tha ki main haar jaunga. Aur dusri baat, woh tumhari Di nahi Bhabhi hai samjha?
Shlok: Ohh..main bhul hi gaya tha, sorry Maanvi Bhabhi.

Maanvi: (smiles) Koi baat nahi Shlok, tum mujhe Di bhi bula sakhte ho.

Viraat: Arey aise kaise? Bhabhi ho tum uski, aur koi rishta jodhne ki zarurat nahi hai.

Maanvi: Bhabhi banne se pehle main uski Di hun, samjhe?

Everyone looked at each other, thinking..."In dono ka kuch nahi ho sakhta..."

Viraat: Woh pehle tha, shadi ke baad rishta badal jaata hai.

Maanvi: Haan, badalta hai toh badalne do na. Par usse mujhe jo bulana hai woh khud decide karega, tumhe isme padhne ki zarurat nahi hai.

Viraat: Kyun nahi hai? Woh mera Bhai hai, tumhara kya lagta hai?

Maanvi: (hands on her hips) Woh mera Devar hai Viraat.
Viraat: (smiles) Exactly.
Maanvi: i meant..
Viraat: (smirks) Rehne do Maanvi, isme tum haar gayi ho, so just accept it.

Maanvi: Main..main nahi haari...
Viraat: Yaa, right...
Jeevika: Chodh na Mannu, ab chal...
Dadaji: Hum bhi bahut thak gaye hai, hum sab sone chalte hain. Good Night.
Swamini Bua: Haan, Good Night Everyone.
Vanshika: Main bhi chalti hun. Good Night.
Shlok: Main bhi, Good Night.

Dadaji, Swamini Bua, Vanshika Maa, and Shlok walked away, towards their bedroom.

Inder Chachu: (clearing his throat) Ahem...Um..Chal Viraat, hum chalte hai.
Viraat: Kahan?
Viren: (dragging Viraat towards his room, along with Inder Chachu) Arey chal na.
Maanvi: (looking at Viraat/Viren/Inder Chachu leaving) DI, yeh Chachu aur Jiju Viraat ko aise kaha le kar gaye hain?
Jeevika: Woh..
Kadambari Chachi: Haye ni Maanvi, chodhna unhe, chalo tum apne naye kamre mein...(dragging her towards Viraat's room, actually VirMan's room) Chalo chalo..

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~VirIka's Room~

Viraat sitting on the bed, between Viren and Inder Chachu, who were smiling at him weirdly.

Viraat: (looking from Viren-Chachu) Aap dono aise muskura kyun rahe ho?

Viren: (smiles widely) Viraat...Aaj Kya Hai?
Inder Chachu: (smiles widely) Haan Viraat Kya Hai?
Viraat: Aap dono bhul gaye ho kya? Aaj hi meri shadi huyi hai.
Inder Chachu: Arey hum nahi bhule hai, yaad hai hume. Par yeh bata, aaj raat, Kya Hai?
Viraat: (irritatedly) Kyun bore kar rahe ho Chachu. Kaise sawal hai yeh, aaj kya hai, aaj kya hai? Aaj Maanvi ka humare ghar mein pehla din hai as Vadhera Khandan ki Bahu.
Viren: Exactly Viraat. (hand around Viraat's shoulder) Toh bata, kya kya plan hai aaj ka?
Viraat: Karna kya hai? Chup chap jaa kar so jaunga.
Inder Chachu: Le, (hits on Viraat's head slightly) bore khud hai aur mujhe kehta hai.
Viren: Oye, teri Suhaag raat hai, aur tu bas jaa kar so jaye ga?
Viraat: (didn't actually realized what Viren said) Suhaag raat...isme kaun si badi baat hai Bhai?

Inder Chachu and Viren exchanged a shocked glance.

Viraat: (stands up/shocked/worriedly/shouts) Kya? Suhaag raat?

Inder Chachu & Viren: (stands up) Oye, chila mat.
Viraat: (pacing back and forth) Haye, ab kya hoga?
Inder Chachu: (to Viren/whisperes) Isse kya hua? Itna ghabra kyun raha hai yeh?


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~VirMan's Room~


Kadambari Chachi: Oye teri Jeevika, Suhaag Raat teri nahi Maanvi ki hai, tum kyun aise ghabra rahi hai?

Jeevika as pacing around the room, worriedly, while Maanvi and Kadambari Chachi sat on the bed, looking at her.

Jeevika: (stops pacing) Arey haan, main kyun itna ghabra rahi hun.
Kadambari Chachi: Wahi toh main keh rahi hun, chal aajaa, baith.
Jeevika: Haan...(sits down, beside Maanvi) Mannu, tu nervous toh nahi hai na?
Maanvi: Main kyun nervous hone lagi Di, (smiles) main bilkul thik hun.
Jeevika: (in a low voice) Haan, tu kyun nervouse hogi, tu toh Viraat se pyaar karti hai. Usse achi tarah se janti hai.
Kadambari Chachi: Tu chodh usse Maanvi, teri Bhabhi pagal ho gayi hai. (excitedly) Tu yeh bata, aaj kya karne wali hai?
Maanvi: Chachi, main kya karne wali hun, bas so jaungi.
Kadambari Chachi: Kya? So jayegi? Ainvayi?
Maanvi: Chachi, soungi nahi toh kya uth kar raat ko dance karungi? Aap bhi na.
Jeevika: Par Mannu, aaj teri Suhaag raat hai.
Maanvi: Haan toh isme kya hai, Suhaag raat hi toh hai, aur kuc..(shouts in shock) Kya?

Kadambari Chachi: Oye, Kya Kya?
Maanvi: (worriedly) Suhaag Raat?
Jeevika: Haan Mannu, Suhaag Raat.

Maanvi looking down worriedly.

Kadambari Chachi: Haye ni Maanvi, ki hoya?
Maanvi: Kuch nahi Chachi. (to herself) Hey Bhagwaan, main kaise bhul gayi, Suhaag Raat? Tu dar kyun rahi hai Maanvi, Viraat ko pata hai, tune usse shadi kyun ki, m sure woh aisa waise kuch nahi karega.
Jeevika: Mannu? Kahan kho gayi?
Maanvi: Kahin nahi Di.
Kadmabri Chachi: Fikar mat karo Maanvi, pehli baar aisa hi hota hai.

Jeevika: Haan, tu na bas apna ghunghat mat uthana apne chahre se.

Maanvi: Kyun?
Kadambari Chachi: Rasam hai, Dulhan ka ghunghat, Dulha hi uthata hai.

Maanvi: (nervous/worriedly) Nahi, main aisa kuch nahi karne wali.

Jeevika: Karna padega Mannu. Aur humare jaane ke baad apna ghunghat bilkul bhi mat uthana samjhi?

Kadambari Chachi: Chalo Jeevika, warna Viraat hume sau gaaliyaan shaliyaan dega.

Jeevika: Haan Chachi, chaliye.

Jeevika made Maanvi sit in the middle of the bed and covered her face with her dupatta.

Maanvi: Par Di...

Jeevika: Ghunghat mat uthana Mannu, jab tak Viraat nahi uthata, tujhe meri kasam hai. Chaliye Chachi.

Kadambari Chachi and Jeevika walked out of the room.

Maanvi: Di..? Uff...kahan phas gayi.


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Viren: Hota hai Chachu, pehli baar hai na.

Inder Chachu: Hmm...Chal Viraat ab tu jaa, Maanvi tera intezaar kar rahi hogi.

Viraat: (under his breath) Haan kar toh rahi hogi, mujh par hamla karne ke liye.

Viren: Kuch kaha tune?

Viraat: Haan, woh...Nahi kuch nahi..

Viren: Ok then, jao.
Viraat: Bhai, woh..
Inder Chachu: Jaa na yaar, wait karwana acha lagta hai kya apni Biwi ko, chal jaa.

Viraat, slowly started walking towards his room. He turned around as Viren called him.

Viren: Arey Viraat, sun na.

Viraat: (happily) Thank God Bhai, aapne bula liya, chalo hum aaj andar baith kar baatein karte hai.
Viren: Kya kya kya? Tu apni Suhaag Raat ke din, mere saath baith kar baatein karna chahta hai?

Viraat: Haan, kyun?

Viren: Tujhe pata hai, tu iss duniya ka pehla Dulha hoga, jo apni Biwi se pyaar karta hai, par Suhaag Raat ke din usse dur rehna chahta hai. Arey agar teri jagha aur koi hota toh abhi tak kamre ke andar hota apni Biwi ke saath aur tu hai ki usse dur bhage jaa raha hai.
Viraat: Bhai, shadi agar sidhi sadhi ladki se huyi hoti, toh aisa zarur hota, par meri koi abla naari se shadi nahi huyi hai, ek Bhuki Sherni se huyi hai. (worriedly/nervous) Pata nahi aaj mera kya haal karegi.
Viren: Arey tu dar mat, I'm sure, ab tak toh uska gussa shant ho gaya hoga. Tu bas jaa.
Viraat: Pakka?
Viren: Um..pata nahi, tu jaa kar dekh na.
Viraat: Ok..Good Night.
Viren: Haan haan, Good Night.

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Viraat, nervously, entered his room...actually Their room. He saw Maanvi, sitting on the middle of the bed, which was decorated with flowers and rose petals, her beautiful face covered with her dupatta. His lips curved into a cute smile, looking at his Wife, sitting on their bed, waiting for him. He turned around and locked the door behind him, nervously. Maanvi turned her face towards the door and saw Viraat, standing there, looking nervous.

Maanvi: (to herself) Yeh aise wahan kyun khada hai? Meri yahan garmi se jaan nikli jaa rahi hai aur woh Chep wahin khada hai. Di bhi na, aisi kasam koi deta hai kisi ko. (to Viraat/calm tone) Wahan kyun khade ho Viraat, paas aao na.

Viraat looked up at Maanvi, shocked, surprised, confused, and what not.

Viraat: Kya?
Maanvi: (sweetly) Sunai nahi deta aapko Pati Dev Ji? Maine kaha paas aaiye na.

Viraat: (under his breath) Yeh isse ho kya gaya hai, itni mithi mithi baatein kabse karne lag gayi, woh bhi mere saath?
Maanvi: Aao na Viraat.
Viraat: Maanvi? You ok na?

Maanvi: (to herself/angerily) Iss Chep ki toh main...agar Di ne kasam nahi di hoti na, toh isse kabhi apne paas nahi bulati. (exhales) Chill kar na Mannu, agar gussa karegi toh yeh ghunghat nahi uthaye ga, aur agar ghunghat nahi uthaya toh garmi ke maare sach mein mar jaye gi. (to Viraat/calm voice) Haan Viraat, mujhe kya hona hai? Tum aao na mere paas, itni dur kyun khade ho?
Viraat: Ok...(to himself) Iss huya kya hai? Mujhe toh laga tha, Sherni bann kar shikaar ke liye tut padegi, par yeh toh itni pyaar se baatein kar rahi hai.

Viraat walked towards the bed, and stood there, looking at Maanvi.

Maanvi: Baith jao na Viraat.

Viraat sits in front of her, look at her face, which was still covered with her dupatta.

Maanvi: Ab, ghunghat uthao.
Viraat: (shocked/surprised) KYA?
Maanvi: Kya nahi, Ghunghat uthao.
Viraat: (stammers) Ky,,,Kyun?

Maanvi holds Viraat hands, which leaves him in shock.

Maanvi: Uthao na Viraat.
Viraat: Ok...

Viraat slowly lifted her ghunghat and was lost in her beauty, she was looking damn gorgeous. Maanvi looked at Viraat, who was looking at her lovingly, and was lost in his eyes. She closed her eyes as Viraat touched her cheek with his fingers. A smile crept on his lips, while admiring her. Her heartbeat increased at his touch, as if it was burning her skin, she tightly clutched her lehenga in her fist. Viraat came back to his sense as he heard Maanvi saying his name.

Maanvi: (lost in his touch/eyes closed) Viraat...

Viraat: (pulled his hand back/looking everywhere, but her) Um...woh, main...
Maanvi: (opened her eyes/back to her sense) Woh...
Viraat: Um...tumhara ghunghat,..maine utha diya hai.
Maanvi: (looked up at him) Huh..? Oh, thanks.

Both were feeling very uncomfortable in front of each other. They just sat their without saying a single word, it was a pin drop silence.


                                     ~...To Be Continue...~


Okk so,,hwz it?...plz leave ur comments...will continue soon..tc thnk u...luv Aarti..

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 1:40am | IP Logged
lovely.

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Nice update!:) continue soon!:D

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lovely. cont soon and thanks for the pmSmile

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hey Aarti
lovely chapter
from starting to end i was laughing
both are shocked on the word suhaag raat very funny
loved it dear but u end it in wrong place
thanx 4 d pm
waiting 4 ur next part... update soon

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